广东省基础写作句子整合

1、a1基础写作基础写作句子整合句子整合一、同位语手段一、同位语手段三、运用并列句三、运用并列句二、运用短语二、运用短语四、运用复合句四、运用复合句combine the sentences 简单句其实也可以不简单简单句其实也可以不简单,若将简单若将简单句与同位语、介词短语、形容词短语、句与同位语、介词短语、形容词短语、非谓语动词短语、并列句，复合句等巧非谓语动词短语、并列句，复合句等巧妙地合并在一起妙地合并在一起,不但可以表达更丰富的不但可以表达更丰富的内容内容,而且也使句子变得更精彩而且也使句子变得更精彩,充分显示充分显示你在英语表达上的实力你在英语表达上的实力,这也是高考基础这也是高考基础写

2、作的重要要求。写作的重要要求。a4此方法多用于介绍此方法多用于介绍或或等。等。例例1 (介绍人物）：介绍人物）：姓名：孙杨姓名：孙杨职业：著名游泳运动员职业：著名游泳运动员出生日期：出生日期：1991年年12月月1日日出生地点：浙江杭州出生地点：浙江杭州Sun Yang, _, was born on December 1st, 1991 in Hangzhou, Zhejiang Provincea famous swimmer【例例2】 (介绍地点）：介绍地点）： 地点：上海地点：上海 地理位置：位于中国东部，是中国最大的城市地理位置：位于中国东部，是中国最大的城市 Shanghai, _

3、, is located in the east of China.the biggest city in China 【例例3】（介绍书名介绍书名）：（）：（2011） 书名：书名：Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother 作者：作者：Amy Chua，美籍华人，耶鲁大学教，美籍华人，耶鲁大学教授授 中文版：中文版： 2011年初开始在中国销售年初开始在中国销售 A book, Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother, written by Amy Chua, an American-Chinese, has been sold in China

4、 since the beginning of 2011. 1. 李敏是个女孩子，今年李敏是个女孩子，今年18岁，她在光岁，她在光华中学学习，她是我的邻居也是我最好的华中学学习，她是我的邻居也是我最好的朋友。朋友。 Li Min, _, is studying in Guanghua Middle School. 2. 离离2010年还有一个月时间，但年还有一个月时间，但孤星指孤星指南南（the Lonely Planet）等不及宣布来）等不及宣布来年十大旅游城市排行榜，年十大旅游城市排行榜，孤星指南孤星指南是是世界最畅销旅游指南世界最畅销旅游指南( )杂志之杂志之一。一。 There is

5、still more than one month to go before 2012. But the Lonely Planet, _ _, cant wait to announce its top 10 cities to travel to in the coming year. a9 3. 姓名：姓名：Steve Jobs 别名：苹果教父（别名：苹果教父（godfather） 出生地：美国加州三藩市出生地：美国加州三藩市 出生日期：出生日期：1955年年2月月24日日 逝世日期：逝世日期：2011年年10月月5日日 Steve Jobs, _, was born in San Fr

6、ancisco, California, the USA on February 24th, 1955 and passed away on October 5th, 2011.4.【原句原句】(1) Zhong Nanshan was born in Guangzhou in 1941.(2) Zhong Nanshan is one of the greatest doctors in China【合并合并】 Zhong Nanshan, _ _, was born in Guangzhou in 1941.one of the greatest doctorsin China5.【原句原

7、句】(1)Zhang Hai is male. (2)He is 23 years old. (3)He graduated from Hunan Normal University (师范大学师范大学) last year.【合并合并】 Zhang Hai, _ graduated from Hunan Normal University last year.形容词短语形容词短语例例1： 我们学生应当通过努力学习而不是考试作弊我们学生应当通过努力学习而不是考试作弊来获得好成绩。来获得好成绩。We students should try to get good results by study

8、ing hard instead of cheating in the examinations. 介词短语介词短语例例2：他鼓励我们独立思考：他鼓励我们独立思考, 而不是马上告诉我们而不是马上告诉我们答案。答案。Instead of giving us answers immediately, he encourages us to think by ourselves. 1.【原句原句】(1)I was surprise. (2)Everything went on very well. 【合并合并】_, everything went on well.2.【原句原句】(1)Waste w

9、ater is making the river worse and worse.(2)The waste water is from a factory.【合并合并】_ 3.【原句原句】(1) Xiaxi Town is not big but beautiful. (2) It has an area of about 8 square kilometers. 【合并合并】 Xiaxi Town, _ _, is not big but beautiful. 4. 【原句原句】(1) We started early. (2) We wanted to enjoy the sunrise

10、on the top of the tower. 【合并合并】We started early _ the sunrise on the top of the tower.with an area of about8 square kilometers(in order/ so as) toenjoy /with the purpose of enjoying 5. 【原句原句】(1) A professor gave us a talk this morning. He came from Beijing University. (2) He talked about how to lear

11、n English well. 【合并合并】A professor_ gave us a talk _ how to learn English well this morning. from Beijing Universityabout/on 6. 【原句原句】(1) He told us of his own interesting experiences of learning English. (2) We laughed a lot.【合并合并】 _his own interesting experiences of learning English, we laughed a l

12、ot.7【原句原句】(1) His talk lasted an hour. (2) He asked us some questions. 【合并合并】_, he asked us some questions. On hearingDuring the one-hour talk形容词短语形容词短语例例1：出生于美国的托马斯：出生于美国的托马斯爱迪生是一个伟大爱迪生是一个伟大的科学家和发明家。的科学家和发明家。Born in American, Thomas Edison was a great scientist and inventor.例例2：因急于作出一个快速决定，主席要求投票表：

13、因急于作出一个快速决定，主席要求投票表决。决。 Anxious for a quick decision, our leader called for a vote. 1【原句原句】 (1) He came back. (2) He was tired but happy.【合并合并】 He came back , _.2【原句原句】 (1) Mr Green was angry at the girls oversleeping . (2) Mr Green went down to wake her up. 【合并合并】 _, Mr Green went down to wake her

14、up. tired but happy Angry at the girls oversleeping 3.【原句原句】 (1) Mary stared at the footprint. (2) she was full of fear . 【合并合并】 Mary stared at the footprint, _full of feara221. V-ing2. V-pp3. to do(作状、定语：表主动，进行作状、定语：表主动，进行)(作状、定语：表被动，完成作状、定语：表被动，完成)(动作发生在谓语动词之后动作发生在谓语动词之后)现在分词短语现在分词短语 例例1：李华在公共汽车站等

15、：李华在公共汽车站等601公车上去学。公车上去学。 Li Hua was at the bus stop, waiting for Bus No. 601 to go to school.例例2：在这幅图中：在这幅图中, 一个鸟妈妈呆在一棵大树的鸟一个鸟妈妈呆在一棵大树的鸟巢里巢里, 观看她的鸟仔飞走。观看她的鸟仔飞走。In this picture, a mother bird stays in her nest in a big tree, _ _. babies flying awaywatching her1.【原句原句】(1)The man is singing a song. (2

16、)He is my brother.【合并合并】 The man _ is my brother.现在分词作后置定语现在分词作后置定语2.【原句原句】 (1)(1) Tian Li and Duan Kai were riding bikes side by side on the way home after school. (2) They were talking and laughing loudly. 【合并合并】 Tian Li and Duan Kai were riding bikes side by side on the way home after school, _.t

17、alking and laughing loudly现在分词作状语现在分词作状语3.【原句原句】(1) He is ill. (2) He didnt go to school.【合并合并】_, he didnt go to school.4.【原句原句】(1) Suddenly I saw an ant. (2) She was trying hard to move another ant who was dead.【合并合并】Suddenly I saw an ant _.5.【原句原句】(1) I dont know his name. (2) I call him Good Man.

18、 【合并合并】 _, I call him Good Man. 6. 【原句原句】 (1) After she listened to me for a while.(2) She gave me a big smile and said she liked my voice very much. 【合并合并】 _, she gave me a big smile and said she liked my voice very much.过去分词短语过去分词短语例例1： 北京动物园北京动物园, 建于建于1906年年, 有有100多年多年的历史了。的历史了。The Beijing Zoo, b

19、uilt in 1906, has a history of more than 100 years. 例例2：与信件和公用电话相比：与信件和公用电话相比, 手机和网络更手机和网络更快也更方便。快也更方便。 Compared with letters and public phones, mobile phones and the Internet are faster and much more convenient. 1.【原句原句】(1)The stories are written in simple English. (2)They are popular with English

20、beginners. 【合并合并】 _, the stories are popular with English beginners.2.【原句原句】(1) He had finished his homework. (2)He went out to play football.【合并合并】_, he went out to play football.3【原句原句】(1) I was moved by his words. (2)I decided to lend him a hand. 【合并合并】 _, I decided to lend him a hand. Having fin

21、ished his homeworkMoved by his words不定式短语不定式短语例例1：为了学习好：为了学习好, 我们需要做体育运动。我们需要做体育运动。 In order to study well, we need to do sports. 例例2：为了按时到达，你现在必须走了。：为了按时到达，你现在必须走了。 To arrive there on time, you must leave now.1.【原句原句】 (1)He looked up. (2) He saw a bird in the tree.【合并合并】 He looked up _.to see a bir

22、d in the tree2.【原句原句】(1)Im writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest.(2) It will be held on June 5.【合并合并】 Im writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest _.并列句并列句 平行并列连词平行并列连词: 转折并列连词：转折并列连词： 因果并列连词因果并列连词: 选择并列连词选择并列连词:and, bothand, not onlybut also,neith

23、er norbut, however, while, yet, for, so, therefore, thus,or, eitheror, 例例1：【原句原句】 Our outdoor activity will last three hours. （2）Well be back at about 11 oclock【合并合并】 Our outdoor activity will last three hours _ well be back at about 11 oclock.例例2：【原句原句】 (1)He was tired. (2)He went to bed.【合并合并】 He

24、was tired, _he went to bed.andso1.【原句原句】 You must hurry. Youll miss the plane. 【合并合并】 You must hurry _ youll miss the plane. 2.【原句原句】 Honey is sweet. The bee stings蜇人蜇人 . 【合并合并】Honey is sweet _ the bee stings. orbut3.【原句原句】 (1)He doesnt like music. (2)He doesnt like sports, either.【合并合并】He likes _ m

25、usic _sports.4【原句原句】(1)I dont like him. (2)He is selfish.【合并合并】 I dont like him, _ he is selfish.5.【原句原句】(1) We high school students do have some growing pains. We can get rid of them correctly and wisely. 【合并合并】 We high school students do have some growing pains, _ we can get rid of them correctly

26、and wisely. but6. 【原句原句】 Students can improve their writing ability in this way. They can strengthen their self-confidence. 【合并合并】 _ _Not only can students improve their writing ability in this way, but also they can increase their self-confidence. 复合句是在简单句的基础上，通过从属连词将复合句是在简单句的基础上，通过从属连词将两个或两个以上简单句连

27、接在一起而构成。两个或两个以上简单句连接在一起而构成。 从属连词所引导的句子因在主句中充当主语、从属连词所引导的句子因在主句中充当主语、宾语、表语、定语、状语等成分（相当于起名词、宾语、表语、定语、状语等成分（相当于起名词、形容词、副词等的作用），就分别被称之为：形容词、副词等的作用），就分别被称之为： 1. 主语从句主语从句 2. 宾语从句宾语从句 3. 表语从句表语从句 4. 定语从句定语从句 5. 状语从句状语从句 6. 同位语从句同位语从句 英文写作中最常使用的从句英文写作中最常使用的从句 宾语从句宾语从句 状语从句状语从句 1. 定语从句定语从句 1.【原句原句】（1）Waste w

28、ater is directly let into the river. （2）The river is seriously polluted. 【合并合并】The river is seriously polluted _waste water is directly let into it. 2.【原句原句】(1) I walked along. （2） At that time，it was raining 【合并合并】_ I walked along,it was raining 3.【原句原句】(1) You turn to the right. （2） You can see th

29、e hotel 【合并合并】_ you turn to the right，you can see the hotel WhenIf4.【原句原句】 （1） We must study hard. （2） Knowledge is power.【合并合并】 We must study hard _ knowledge is power. because 1.【原句原句】 （1） How did he achieve this success？ （2） That is unknown to me 【合并合并】 _ _ 2.【原句原句】 （1） He has arrived . （2） I kno

30、w it 【合并合并】 _How he achieved this successis unknown to me I know that he has arrived 1.【原句原句】 （1） Who is that man？ （2） I saw that man yesterday 【合并合并】 _ 2.【原句原句】（1） The boy was caught by the police . （2） The boy stole my Pekinese dog 【合并合并】 _ _Who is the man I saw yesterday？The boy who stole my Peki

31、nesedog was caught by the police 3.【原句原句】 I saw some trees. The leaves of the trees were black with disease. 【合并合并】 _ _I saw some trees whose leaves were black with disease.4【原句原句】 The person is my good friend. I spoke to the person just now.【合并合并】 _ _ _ _The person that / who I spoke to just now is

32、 my good friend. The person I spoke just now is my good friend. 5.【原句原句】 The knife is very sharp. We cut the bread with the knife. 【合并合并】 _ _The knife with which we cut the bread is very sharp.6.【原句原句】 The time was a very difficult period of my life. I first met Nelson Mandela during the time.【合并合并】

33、 _ _ _ The time during which（when) I first met Nelson Mandela was a very difficult period of my life. 7.【原句原句】 He lived in London for 3 months. He picked up some English during those 3 months. 【合并合并】 _ _ He lived in London for 3 months he picked up some English.8.【原句原句】 He was generous with his time

34、. I was grateful for that. 【合并合并】 _ _He was generous with his time, for which I was grateful.9.【原句原句】 The other day we had an English speech contest. I won the first prize in the contest. 【合并合并】_The other day we had an English speech contest in which I won the first prize.10.【原句原句】 We will organize

35、all kinds of activities in our English club. We can not only practise but also learn more English in the activities.【合并合并】_ _ _ We will organize all kinds of activities in our English club in which we can not only practise but also learn more English. (1) Im Li Hua. (2) Im a student in Sichuan. (同位语

36、同位语)Im Li Hua _.2. (1) MrJohnson will leave our school (2) He is a teacher of history (同位语同位语) MrJohnson，_，will leave our school a student in Sichuana teacher of history课后练习课后练习3.(1)The day we met for the first time was Monday. (2)It was the first day after the school began. (同位语同位语) The day we met

37、for the first time was Monday,_ _.the first day after the schoolbegan 4. (1)Guangzhou is the capital of Guangdong Province. (2)It is located in the middle of Guangdong Province. (3)It is the culture and economy center of Guangdong Province. (同位语同位语) Guangzhou, _, _ is located in the middle of Guangd

38、ong. 5.(1) My old grandfather fell asleep in the sofa. (2) He had a book on his knees. （用介词短语）（用介词短语）My old grandfather fell asleep in the sofa _.6.(1) She poisoned herself(2) She had a quarrel with her husband.（用介词短语） She poisoned herself _.with a book on his kneesbecause of having aquarrel with he

39、r husband_, Mr. Moore pays more attention to his way of teaching. 7.(1)Mr. Moore is compared with other teachers.(2) Mr. Moore pays more attention to his way of teaching(用过去分词合并用过去分词合并)8. (1) The temple is visited by thousands of people every year.(2) It was built 1, 000 years ago. (用过去分词合用过去分词合并并)T

40、he temple, _, is visited by thousands of people.Compared with other teachersbuilt 1, 000 years ago9 The moon travels round the earth once every month. The moon is a natural satellite of the earth.(现在分词短语现在分词短语)The moon, _, is a natural satellite of the earth. traveling round the earth onceevery mont

41、h10. (1) I dont like the man. (2) The man is wearing a pair of dark glasses. (用现在分词合并用现在分词合并)11.(1) He is willing to sacrifice himself (2) He wishes to please her(用不定式）用不定式） He is willing to sacrifice himself_I dont like the man _.wearing a pair of darkglassesto please her12、He is a teacher _ I am a

42、 doctor. 13. Hurry up, _ you will be late. 14. _ you are mad _ he is.15. _is he an actor_ he is a director. 16. _are they farmers _ they are workers. 17. I was doing housework _ he was playing chess.并列句合并并列句合并butorwhileNot onlybut alsoNeithernorEitheror18.(1) China is the third largest country in th

43、e world. (2) Everyone knows it.(用定语从句合并用定语从句合并)_, China is the third largest country in the world.19.(1) I still remember the day . (2) I first came to Beijing on that day. (用定用定语从句合并语从句合并)_I still remember the day when I first came to Beijing.As everyone knows 20. (1) Currently China has about 350

44、million smokers. (2) Among these smokers 75% are men and 25% are women. (用定语从句合并用定语从句合并)_Currently China has about 350 million smokers,among 75% are men and 25% are women.21. (1) We are now living in an information age. (2) TV, cells and the Web are widely used in this age. (用定语用定语从句合并从句合并)_We are n

45、ow living in an information age, in TV, cells and the Web are widely used.22. (1) It was raining hard. (2) We kept on working.(用状语从句合并用状语从句合并)_ it was raining hard, we kept on working.23.(1) I walked along (2) At that time，it was raining(用状语从句合并用状语从句合并)_ I walked along，it was rainingAlthoughWhen24(1

46、) He suffered from cancer (2) He had smoked too much(用状语从句合用状语从句合并并)He suffered from cancer，_ he had smoked too muchbecause用一句话合并句子：用一句话合并句子：1. He was well known for his expert advice. He was able to help a great number of people with their personal affairs.(过去过去分词短语分词短语)Well known for his expert ad

47、vice, he was able to help a great number of people with their personal affairs. 2. It was early in the morning. Mr. Smith was in his garden. He was watering flowers. Early in the morning , Mr. Smith was watering flowers in his garden.3. A satellite is an object. A satellite travels in an orbit round

48、 another object in space. A satellite is either natural or man-made. A satellite is an object, either natural or man-made, which travels in an orbit round another object in space. a714. Not everyone is good at learning English. Children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the s

49、ame time. This will affect their Chinese study. That children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time will affect their Chinese study because not everyone is good at learning English. 5. Kate is a new student. She comes from a northern province. She speaks a dialect.

50、(4) We find it hard to understand her dialect. Kate, a new student from a northern province, speaks a dialect which we find it hard to understand.6. There was once a famous detective. He was named Sherlock Holmes. He lived in London. The time was at the end of the nineteenth century. There was once

51、a famous detective named Sherlock who lived in London at the end of the nineteenth century. 你来试试你来试试现象现象 学生作文中出现很多错别字学生作文中出现很多错别字原因原因1.上网聊天时经常使用网络语言。上网聊天时经常使用网络语言。2.每天有很多作业做，没有记住生字。每天有很多作业做，没有记住生字。参考词汇：参考词汇：错别字错别字: wrongly-written characters网络语言：网络语言：web language要求：要求：1. 1. 用用两句话两句话表达表格内容表达表格内容 2. 2

52、. 两句话要有两句话要有连贯性连贯性1. They have so much homework to do every day that they fail to memorize the new characters.第二句第二句:1. 1. 每天有很多作业做每天有很多作业做 2. 2. 没有记住生字。没有记住生字。 They have much homework to do every day.2. With so much homework to do every day, they fail to memorize the new characters.3. Because they have so much homew