漫画作文-拓展和结论

1、拓展段：模板一（矛盾对立型） From the cartoon, we can conclude that the painter wants to convey such a message: + 主题句 On the one hand, +观点一（正面）：+支撑句一（因果）。 On the other hand, +观点二（对立面）：+支撑句二（举例、对比）。拓展段： From the cartoon, we can conclude that the painter wants to convey such a message: a good many popular places ar

2、e flooded with tourists, who spoil the beauty of nature by creating and leaving behind plenty of trash. On the one hand, tourism, as a multibillion-dollar business, is booming everywhere. Some people, seeing tourism as a means of economic growth, seem to ignore its negative effects on the environmen

3、t. On the other hand, tourism has exerted great pressure on the environment we are living in. We can see that the water is polluted, the ecological system is disturbed, and natural resources have been excessively used.结论段：模板一（矛盾对立型） Undoubtedly, （产业） could not be banned as/because . The significant

4、point is that + （的无序发展可能导致或带来的问题）. It is high time that we + （改进措施）.结论段 Undoubtedly，tourism could not be banned in any country as it does help enhance the economy in places where few sources of income are offered. The significant point is that the unchecked growth of tourist industry may lead to uns

5、ustainable development of the economy. It is high time that we raised the publics awareness of the environmental protection and maintained a cleaner and more beautiful world in the near future.拓展段：模板二 Obviously, the painter of the cartoon is trying to criticize some phenomenon in our society in whic

6、h + 主题句 定义法。 因果法：However, (原因一) . Besides, (原因二).拓展段：模板二 Obviously, the painter of the cartoon is trying to criticize some phenomenon in our society in which having a college diploma is an indispensable pass to employment and promotion. 定义法: Normally, a diploma is nothing but a certificate issued by

7、 a school or college, indicating graduation or conferring a degree.拓展段：模板二 因果法(原因一) ：However, some employers overstress educational backgrounds of the candidates and overlook their practical capability before admission, only to find some of the employees are incompetent for the posts. (原因二): Besides

8、, the current pay system and the way of evaluation of professional titles in Chinas state enterprises and public institutions also contribute to the diploma abuse.结论段：模板二 （问题）has aroused much concern from the public. It not only encourages / causes / leads to, but also It is urgent that effective me

9、asure should be taken to handle this sticky situation. For example, 结论段：模板二 Diploma abuse has aroused much concern from the public. It not only encourages / causes / leads to cheating, bribery and corruption, but also devalues diplomas and provides the soil for crime. It is urgent that effective mea

10、sure should be taken to handle this sticky situation. For example, the police should strengthen its fight against this evil trend.拓展段：模板三 The cartoon actually reveals a current social problem, that is, in todays society + 主题句. Though the cartoon is a little bit exaggerated, it is not uncommon for us

11、 to find + 主题句中提到的社会现象（换种说法或进一步阐述）. If we let this situation of continue, it will not only harm/hurt/damage, but also .拓展段：模板三 The cartoon actually reveals a current social problem, that is, in todays society some companies make ridiculous requirements when recruiting new members. Though the cartoon

12、 is a little bit exaggerated, it is not uncommon for us to find in some job advertisements discrimination of age, gender, educational background, and sometimes even height and appearance. If we let this situation of physical traits outweighing the actual ability continue, it will not only harm/hurt/

13、damage many job hunters confidence and impede their career path, but also prevent organizations from discovering potential talents.结论段：模板三 Therefore, we urgently call for a . On the one hand, On the other hand, 结论段：模板三 Therefore, we urgently call for a healthy job market that encourages fair competition. On the one hand, employers and their human resource managers need to realize that a fair h