上海高考英语-作文写作思路与方法(教师版)

1、学科老师辅导讲义学员编号：年级：高三课时数:学员姓名：辅导科目：英语学科教师:授课主题作文写作思路教学目标不冋文体作文的写作技巧授课日期及时段教学内容课前回顾：1. 上节课作业批改；错题讲解2. 上节课知识点回顾3. 高频词汇默写知识梳理知识点1作文1、思维导图形式先呈现整体框架I：絳高考写竹:焚劇:十題段梓址合*诂叢單，络昔卞麗翳册2-3-7t佥理巾-姑吊址站合写第H的，选异合谊进怵礼劇毎咲収倍Atj险由殳判水，追哇絢，卜報述血购，内駅述怛讲三黑平藏.脂甸尤他韩卜.常卜語功止-丄E段池打用合雄報逛航序垃绪雄麻咼姑合I谢，II简斑特忖井叮1左和学升华的涉忙毎東丄审首撕数曲瓷圧iftutnjia

2、注倉简帖.描1：$件审对比.做向注叢範比19姑合阁溟士百”社感痴贞论述及内容戈挣SubtopicfI：駆段專祁舟恰出少两于花用览讦刃口-忤足呻应，冉抚强址喊申霖点/r苜我注百就1卅曲導观性慶和龙怦怖卅曲咚用.爆田世刘内徉丰用義思面单/卞思段瑶应沱意曲与甚反应tt党现亀时络音，逹竝寂逑卑辑性!驱邯鸥必參朋曲题的拖施再畑化2、重难点1高级词汇及短语的恰当应用:表达内容的清晰与条例性；句型的丰富性与多样性；3、不同体裁考点解读（注意相关模板句子、连接词和高级句型、词汇）ExerciseOne议论类现在高中学生申请出国的现象非常普遍。人们对此看法不一。请谈谈你对此事的看法。参考范文：Nowadays,

3、itisverycommonforhighschoolstudentstoapplytoforeignuniversitiesforadmission.Thephenomenonhasarousedheateddiscussionamongstudentsandopinionsonitvaryfromindividualtoindividual.Somepeopleareinfavorofthepractice,sayingithelpsbroadentheirhorizons,whileothersarestronglyopposedtoit.Theyarguethatitispurelya

4、wasteofmoney.Asforme,therearebothmeritsanddemeritslyinginthedebatableproblem.Ononehand,theexpenseoflearningabroadisbeyondwhatanaveragefamilycanafford.Manyparentswillprobablybeoverburdenedcoveralltheexpense.Worsestill,manystudentscannotdisciplinethemselveswithouttheirparentsaround.Chancesarethatfaced

5、withtemptations,theymaypickupsomebadhabitsandreturneventuallyfruitless.Ontheotherhand,wecannotdenythefactthatlearningabroadhelpstocultivatechildrensspiritofindependenceandenablesthemtobemoresociable.Inaddition,beingexposedtoatotallydifference,environmentwilldefinitelyenrichtheirexperience,whichhasaf

6、ar-reachingeffectontheirfuturedevelopment.Asasayinggoes,eachcoinhastwosides.Therefore,thereisnoneedtobelostintheargument.Whatweshouldbearinmindisthatwhereverwelearn,weshouldmakefulluseofalltheresourcesavailableandbecomearesponsiblelearner.ExerciseTwo图片类下面的一幅漫画描写了当前社会的教育状况，请结合自己的感受谈谈你对这种状况的看法。你的作文必须包

7、括： 漫画所反映的社会教育状况。 你对这种现状的观点和看法。参考范文：Inthepicture,aboywhoisboundbyalotofafter-schoollessonslooksveryupset.Thisimageindicatesacommonphenomenoninafunnywaythatstudentstodayareforcedtotaketoomanylessonsafterschool.AsfarasIamconcerned,takingoneortwolessonsafterschoolisacceptableandwillimproveourability.But

8、overtakingextralessonsreallydoesnogoodtostudents.Firstofall,afterstudyinghardonweekdays,moststudentsarequiteexhaustedandneedabreakatweekends.However,manyofthemarerobbedofthechancetorelaxthemselves.Long-termworkingmaycausethemtohavedifficultyconcentratingontheirstudiesandmayevenaffecttheirdailylife.O

9、ntheotherhand,arethosestudentsinterestedintheafter-schoollessonsorjustforcedbytheirparents?Iftheyarenotwillingtolearn,theywonttrytheirbesttoobtaintheknowledgeandskills.Itsawasteoftime,andmoney.Lastbutnotleast,sometutorialcentersarenotasqualifiedasexpected.Theyjustcareaboutmakingmoneybutpaylittleatte

10、ntiontoteaching.Imafraidthatstudentswhoenrollinthecourseswontlearnwhattheywanttolearn.Tosumup,takinglessonsafterschoolisawaytohelpstudentsstudybetter,butitshouldntbeaburden.Whatreallyworksisnotthoselessonsbutyourownefforts.(235words)ExerciseThree图表类Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositioninI20-150wordsa

11、ccordingtotheinstructions.下列图表中数据反映的是某高中学校对全体学生英语学习动机的调查结果，请就此调查结果写一篇作文。内容包括：1. 描述图表2. 根据图表得出的结论3. 谈谈你的看法2%参考范文：Aswecanseeinthechart,therearevarietiesofreasonswhystudentsstudyEnglish.65%ofstudentsaimistopasstheexams.Aquarterofthemarewillingtomeettheirparentsandsocietysdemands.Only8%ofthemstudyEnglis

12、hbasedontheirinterests.Accordingtothechart,wemayeasilydrawaconclusionthatmostofthestudentsareforcedtolearnEnglishbydifferentkindsofpressure.Englishistreatedasatooltoaccordwiththecondition.IbelievethatsuchpeoplehavebeensufferingfromstudyingEnglishforalongtime.Nowadays,Englishisthemostwidely-usedlangu

13、ageallovertheworld.ThereisnodoubtthatstudentslearnEnglishfortheexamsandtheirparentsrequirementatschool.ButsuchpassivityoflearningEnglishisnotdefinitelygoodfortheirperformanceinthefuture,regardlessoftheircareersorpersonallife.HavingagoodcommandofEnglishdoesnotonlyhelpyoupassexamsormakeotherssatisfied

14、withyou,butalsogiveyouachancetounderstandacultureandenablesyoutocommunicatewithforeignerswithoutanydifficulties.Frommyperspective,nothingcanbecomparedwiththehappinessoflearningEnglish.ExerciseFour应用类某高中校方在全校征求学生建议。李佳给校长写了封信，建议学校培养学生学习能力，以提高他们在这个信息爆炸的世界上的竞争力。同时建议学校组建学生俱乐部，学生得以展露才华，培养兴趣，获得更多的生存能力。参考范文

15、DearHeadmaster,Iammostpleasedtolearnthatourschoolisseekingstudentssuggestionsonhowtomakeourschoollifebetter.Iamwritingthislettertosharewithyoumysuggestions.Firstofall.ourschoolshouldlaymoreemphasisoncultivatingstudentslearningmethods.Asthesayinggoes,teachersshouldnotonlypassonknowledgetostudentsbuta

16、lsoteachthemhowtostudy.Inaworldofinformationexplosion,ifstudentscanheequippedwithindependentlearningskills,nodoubttheycanhaveanadvantageinthisincreasinglycompetitiveworld.Inaddition,studentsafterschoollifecanneverbeoverlooked.Ourschoolshouldsetupmoreclubswherestudentscandisplaytheirtalentsandacquire

17、somesurvivalskillssuchashowtogetalongwithothersandhowtobeateamplayer.Allowingformoreleisuretimemeansthatstudentscandevotemoretimepursuingtheirinterestsandhobbies,whichmaywellturnouttobeawelcomesupplementtotheirbeautifullifelater.ThankyouforspendingyourprecioustimereadingmyletterandIhopemysuggestions

18、canbeofsomehelp.Bestwishes,LiJia一、段落比较Ithink，foruschildren,weshouldoftengohomeandstaytogetherwithourparentsthoughwearebusy.Oursocietyshouldorganizeallkindsofactivitiesfortheseniorstohelpthemlivehappily.Wecanbuildaharmonioussocietyonlywhenallofuscarefortheaged.AsfarasIamconcerned,foruschildren,weshou

19、ldoftengohomeandstaytogetherwithourparentshoweverbusyweare.Whatsmore,oursocietyshouldorganizeallkindsofactivitiesfortheseniorstohelpthemliveahappylife.Onlywhenallofuscarefortheagedcanwebuildaharmonioussociety.二、高级词汇要强调“高级、复杂”四项基本原则：141.词组优先原则2地道原则3避免重复原则4后高长原则1.词组优先原则:1.Anewrailwayisbeingbuiltinmyho

20、metown.Anewrailwayisunderconstructioninmyhometown.2.Moreandmorestudentshaverealizedtheimportanceofsavingwater.Anincreasingnumberofstudentshavebeenconsciousoftheimportanceofsavingwater.2.地道原则:1.Throughtravelling,Ilearnedalotofknowledge.Throughtravelling,Igained/obtainedalotofknowledge.2.LiNasreaching

21、finalsatFrenchOpenmakesourbloodboil.LiNasreachingfinalsatFrenchOpenmakesusexcited.3.避免重复原则:喜欢：carefor.befondof.becrazyabout.bemadabout.bekeenon.beaddictedto.behookedon.haveapassionfor.haveagreatenthusiasmfor很：very.terribly.pretty.most.greatly.highly.quite.extremely.perfectly.认为：Ithink.frommypointofv

22、iew.asIseeit.asfarasImconcerned.4.后高长原则-后学到、较高级、较长词汇原词替换词harddiligentlybreakviolate/disobeypayattentiontoattachimportancetohappymoreandmoreanincreasingnumberofdelighted/enjoyable三、强化语法、修辞四个“不如”：1肯定不如双否好2陈述不如倒装妙3主动不如被动巧4从句不如分词傲1. 肯定不如双否好修辞的使用在书面表达中算是很大的亮点，在高中阶段很少有学生会注重修辞的应用。双重否定也是种修辞。1. Thepostmancom

23、esontimeeveryday.Thepostmanneverfailstocomeontime.2. Hecamehereat5p.m.yesterday.Hedidnotcomehereuntil5p.m.yesterday.2. 陈述不如倒装妙倒装是一种最简单易行的使句子呈现亮点的方法。我们只需掌握倒装的四种形式，足以应对书面表达，如何应用倒装，有很多方法和技巧。1. ThoughImweak,Illmaketheeffort.WeakasIam,Illmaketheeffort.2. HehadnosoonercomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroa

24、d.NosoonerhadhecomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.3. 主动不如被动巧英语是一门客观的语言，而汉语是主观的语言，具体体现在英语常用被动语态，汉语常用主动语态。使用被动语态符合英语的习惯。Peoplebelievethatheisanhonestboy.Itisbelievedthatheisanhonestboy.4. 从句不如分词傲几乎所有的状语从句都可以变成独立主格或分词结构，像时间状语从句，原因状语从句，条件状语从句等。口诀：一去，二看，三改一去：去连词；二看：看主语；三改：改分词Becausethemonitorisill,we

25、dbetterputthemeetingoff.Themonitorbeingill,wedbetterputthemeetingoff.英语写作中常用过渡词1. 第一，首先，最重要：first,firstly,firstandforemost,tobegin/startwith,mostimportantly,最后，终于：last,lastly,eventually,atlength,lastbutnottheleast,finally2. 递进：aswellas,then,moreover,furthermore,inaddition,additionally,besides,whatsm

26、ore,notonly.butalso,meanwhile3. 举例：forexampleforinstance,namely,suchas,like4. 转折、对比：incontrast,ontheotherhand,onthecontrary,despitethis,inspiteof,otherwise,nevertheless,although,but,however,instead5. 原因：because,becauseof,owingto,onaccountof,thanksto,dueto,for,since,as6. 己见：personally,inmyopinion,asf

27、araslmconcerned,astome,frommyperspective7. 结果：asaresult,forthisreason,accordingly,consequently,eventually,therefore,hence,thus,then8总结：asIhavesaid,ascanbeseen,asshownabove,asnoted,asstated,inconclusion,onthewhole,insummary,inbrief,inaword,allinall,tosumup,overall高考作文经典句型范例1. Accordingtoarecentsurvey

28、,fourmillionpeopledieeachyearfromdiseaseslinkedtosmoking.依照最近的一项调查，每年有4,000,000人死于与吸烟有关的疾病。2. Thelatestsurveysshowthatquiteafewchildrenhaveunpleasantassociationswithhomework.最近的调查显示相当多的孩子对家庭作业没什么好感。3. NoinventionhasreceivedmorepraiseandabusethanInternet.没有一项发明像互联网一样同时受到如此多的赞扬和批评。4. Peopleseemtofailt

29、otakeintoaccountthefactthateducationdoesnotendwithgraduation.人们似乎忽视了教育不应该随着毕业而结束这一事实。5. Anincreasingnumberofpeoplearebeginningtorealizethateducationisnotcompletewithgraduation.越来越多的人开始意识到教育不能随着毕业而结束。6. Whenitcomestoeducation,themajorityofpeoplebelievethateducationisalifetimestudy.说到教育，大部分人认为其是一个终生的学

30、习。7. Manyexpertspointoutthatphysicalexercisecontributesdirectlytoapersonsphysicalfitness.许多专家指出体育锻炼直接有助于身体健康。8. Propermeasuresmustbetakentolimitthenumberofforeigntouristsandthegreateffortsshouldbemadetoprotectlocalenvironmentandhistoryfromtheharmfuleffectsofinternationaltourism.应该采取适当的措施限制外国旅游者的数量，努

31、力保护当地环境和历史不受国际旅游业的不利影响。9. Anincreasingnumberofexpertsbelievethatmigrantswillexertpositiveeffectsonconstructionofcity.However,thisopinionisnowbeingquestionedbymoreandmorecityresidents,whocomplainthatthemigrantshavebroughtmanyseriousproblemslikecrimeandprostitution.越来越多的专家相信移民对城市的建设起到积极作用。然而，越来越多的城市居民

32、却怀疑这种说法，他们抱怨民工给城市带来了许多严重的问题，像犯罪和卖淫。10. Manycityresidentscomplainthatitissofewbusesintheircitythattheyhavetospendmuchmoretimewaitingforabus,whichisusuallycrowdedwithalargenumberofpassengers.许多市民抱怨城市的公交车太少，以至于他们要花很长时间等一辆公交车，而车上可能已满载乘客。11. Thereisnodenyingthefactthatairpollutionisanextremelyseriousprob

33、lem:thecityauthoritiesshouldtakestrongmeasurestodealwithit.无可否认，空气污染是一个极其严重的问题：城市当局应该采取有力措施来解决它。12. Aninvestigationshowsthatfemaleworkerstendtohaveafavorableattitudetowardretirement.一项调查显示妇女欢迎退休。13. Aproperpart-timejobdoesnotoccupystudentstoomuchtime.Infact,itisunhealthyforthemtospendalloftimeonthei

34、rstudy.Asanoldsayinggoes:AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.一份适当的业余工作并不会占用学生太多的时间，事实上，把全部的时间都用到学习上并不健康，正如那句老话：只工作，不玩耍，聪明的孩子会变傻。14. Anygovernment,whichisblindtothispoint,maypayaheavyprice.任何政府忽视这一点都将付出巨大的代价。15. Nowadays,manystudentsalwaysgointorapturesatthemerementionofthecominglifeofhighschoolorcolle

35、getheywillbegin.Unfortunately,formostyoungpeople,itisnotpleasantexperienceontheirfirstdayoncampus.当前，一提到即将开始的学校生活，许多学生都会兴高采烈。然而，对多数年轻人来说，校园刚开始的日子并不是什么愉快的经历。16. Inviewoftheseriousnessofthisproblem,effectivemeasuresshouldbetakenbeforethingsgetworse.考虑到问题的严重性，在事态进一步恶化之前，必须采取有效的措施。17. Themajorityofstude

36、ntsbelievethatpart-timejobwillprovidethemwithmoreopportunitiestodeveloptheirinterpersonalskills,whichmayputtheminafavorablepositioninthefuturejobmarkets.大部分学生相信业余工作会使他们有更多机会发展人际交往能力，而这对他们未来找工作是非常有好处的。18. Itisindisputablethattherearemillionsofpeoplewhostillhaveamiserablelifeandhavetofacethedangersofs

37、tarvationandexposure.无可争辩，现在有成千上万的人仍过着挨饿受冻的痛苦生活。19. Althoughthisviewiswildlyheld,thisislittleevidencethateducationcanbeobtainedatanyageandatanyplace.尽管这一观点被广泛接受，很少有证据表明教育能够在任何地点、任何年龄进行。20. Noonecandenythefactthatapersonseducationisthemostimportantaspectofhislife.没有人能否认：教育是人生最重要的一方面。21. Peopleequates

38、uccessinlifewiththeabilityofoperatingcomputer.人们把会使用计算机与人生成功相提并论。22. Inthelastdecades,advancesinmedicaltechnologyhavemadeitpossibleforpeopletolivelongerthaninthepast.在过去的几十年，先进的医疗技术已经使得人们比过去活的时间更长成为可能。23. Infact,wehavetoadmitthefactthatthequalityoflifeisasimportantaslifeitself.事实上，我们必须承认生命的质量和生命本身一样

39、重要。24. Weshouldsparenoefforttobeautifyourenvironment.我们应该不遗余力地美化我们的环境。25. Peoplebelievethatcomputerskillswillenhancetheirjobopportunitiesorpromotionopportunities.人们相信拥有计算机技术可以获得更多工作或提升的机会。26. TheinformationIvecollectedoverlastfewyearsleadsmetobelievethatthisknowledgemaybelessusefulthanmostpeoplethin

40、k.从这几年我搜集的信息来看，这些知识并没有人们想象的那么有用。27. Now,itisgenerallyacceptedthatnocollegeoruniversitycaneducateitsstudentsbythetimetheygraduation.现在，人们普遍认为没有一所大学能够在毕业时候教给学生所有的知识。28. Thisisamatteroflifeanddeath-amatternocountrycanaffordtoignore.这是一个关系到生死的问题，任何国家都不能忽视。29. Formypart,Iagreewiththelatteropinionforthefo

41、llowingreasons:我同意后者，有如下理由：30. Beforegivingmyopinion,Ithinkitisimportanttolookattheargumentsonbothsides.在给出我的观点之前，我想看看双方的观点是重要的。课堂小结1.翻译2作文课后复习一、错题整理二、课后作业I.Writing现如今，远程教学越发流行。越来越多的人通过网络、视频或电视进行学习，并认为传统的教学方式终将被取代。但有一部人认为无论科技如何发展，任何一种形式都无法和亲身去课堂中学习所媲美。对这一现象，请阐述你的观点，并请给予理由。参考范文：WiththeadventofInterne

42、t,oneofthechangesthathavetakenplaceinourlifeisthatagrowingnumberofpeoplearenowconsideringdistanceeducation,whichallowsthemtostudyasubjectattheirownpace.Eventhoughtheprevalenceofdistancelearninghasgivensomepeopleanillusionthatthedisappearanceoftraditionallearningisonlyamatteroftime,Istillbelievethetraditionaleducationisirreplaceable.OnethingthatIcannotdenyisthat,incontrastwithconventionaleducation,distancelearningisflexible,therebymak