高考英语写作中词汇与句型表达多样PPT课件

1、高考英语写作中词汇 与句型表达的多样第1页/共16页高考作文 第2页/共16页1 One day my parents went to work in the fields and my little sister and Ar Fu followed. While my parents were working, my sister walked to the river and Ar Fu followed her. She saw a beautiful flower on the bank of the river, she wanted to pick it. She fell in

2、to the river. When Ar Fu saw that, it barked and jumped into the river quickly.One day, followed by my little sister and Ar Fu, my parents went to work in the fields. While my parents were working, my sister , with nothing to do, walked to the riverside nearby with Ar Fu. At the sight of a beautiful

3、 flower on the river bank, she wanted to pick it. However, she fell into the river. Seeing that Ar Fu barked and jumped into the water as soon as possible.2_第3页/共16页书面表达评分标准：书面表达评分标准： 北京卷2005年考试说明中的评分标准 情景作文 一、评分原则： 本题总分为20分，按5个档次给分。 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言质量初步确定其档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。 评分时应考虑：内容要点，上下

4、文的连贯，词汇和句式的多样性及语言的准确性。 拼写、标点符号或书写影响内容表达时，应视其影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。 词数少于60，从总分中减去1分。词汇和句式的多样性第4页/共16页(因为)_ his help, I finished the work at last.Thanks toAs a result ofOwing to Due to 因为Because of /with/for第5页/共16页p我花了50块钱买这本字典。Spend on/inIt costs/takes to Pay forCharge sb forI was charged $50 for

5、the dictionary.第6页/共16页p我会尽我所能去帮助他。 do/try my best do everything I can do all that I can do what/whatever I can I willto help him.I ll help him as much as possible.第7页/共16页高考经典句型结构:1. Its years since I worked in Beijing.2. It wont be long before you get well.3.It was not until you told me that I rea

6、lized my mistake.4.Not until you told me did I realize my mistake.5.It is said that a fire broke out last night.6.There always exist big gaps between dreams and realities. 7.She was so excited that she burst into tears.8.Work hard, and you are sure to win.第8页/共16页p He sat there, _（手里拿着书手里拿着书）。）。 _ （

7、eyes/closed） 。 _（背着书包）（背着书包） 。 _ （ nothing/to do)。 第9页/共16页1. There is a girl. She is sitting between us. 2. This is a book. The book was bought yesterday. There is a girl who is sitting between us.This is a book which was bought yesterday.Rewrite following sentences第10页/共16页3. . 走在大街上，他遇见了一个老朋友. .

8、While he was walking in the street, he met an old friend.4. _, the city looks beautiful.Walking in the street从天空中看，When it is seen from the sky, the city looks beautiful.Seen from the sky第11页/共16页由于不知道他的电话，他无法与Tom取得联系。Not knowing his telephone number, he cant get in touch with Tom.第12页/共16页Rewrite t

9、he following passage：pThey went for a walk on the street. They saw the old man. He was knocked down by a car. The car was passing by.第13页/共16页readingsleepingshoesbarkingcatdumbfounded（adj.目瞪口呆）请你根据以下四幅图(总分20)写一篇100词左右的短文。 参考词语: slippers (拖鞋) 要点：1老人穿着拖鞋读报, 狗在边上睡觉。2 老人想出门，叫狗 拿鞋。3 狗闭着眼睛，一动 不动，汪汪直叫， 老人很

10、纳闷。4猫嘴里叼着鞋走进 来，老人目瞪口呆。第14页/共16页 An old man was sitting in an armchair at home, reading his newspaper. Beside him lay a dog sleeping soundly. Suddenly the old man decided to leave home for a while, but he couldnt go out with his slippers on. So he woke up the dog to get the shoes for him. Out of his

11、expectation, the dog just barked with two eyes closed again. The old man was completely puzzled. As he was wondering what was happening, he saw the cat coming towards him with the pair of shoes in its mouth. Seeing this, he was totally dumbfounded. An old man was sitting in an armchair at home, read

12、ing his newspaper. Beside him lay a dog sleeping soundly. Suddenly the old man decided to leave home for a while, but he couldnt go out with his slippers on. So he woke up the dog to get the shoes for him. Out of his expectation, the dog just barked with two eyes closed again. The old man was complet