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1、讲座内容四六级写作的根本要求历年考试真题命题趋势分析句子写作与错误分析常用承接用语常用句型段落写作文章的组织构造十句作文法写作根本战略四六级写作练习题讲评四级作文考试要求CET4级考试大纲对作文的要求是：考生在30分钟内写出一篇120个单词的短文。试卷上能够给出标题，或规定情景，或要求看图作文，或给出段首句要求续写，或给出关键词要求写成短文。要求考生能正确表达思想，意义衔接，无艰苦语法错误。写作的内容包括日常生活和普通常识。六级作文考试要求CET6级考试大纲对作文的要求是：考生在30分钟内写出一篇120150个单词的短文。试卷上能够给出标题，或要求看图作文，或根据文章写出摘要或大意。要求切题，

2、能正确表达思想，意义衔接，文理照射，无艰苦语法错误。写作的内容包括科技、社会、文化等方面的普通常识。 Women in the Modern WorldRange finders Women are playing an increased important part in society today. With the changes in their social role, womens position in the family has been improved as well. In spite of these changes, the liberation of women

3、 has not been completely realized.评语：根本切题。但表达思想不清楚，衔接性差。有较多的严重言语错误。(注：这是老版本，总分值为15分) Women are playing an increasingly important part Women are playing an increasingly important part in society today. In today, many women have a work. in society today. In today, many women have a work. They worked a

4、s well as men playing an important part They worked as well as men playing an important part in factories. There are many women in government also. in factories. There are many women in government also. They lead other people country, and make out plans. They lead other people country, and make out

5、plans. There are many scientist slso. They event new things There are many scientist slso. They event new things to improve our life.to improve our life.With the changes in their social role, womens With the changes in their social role, womens position in the family has been improved as well. In po

6、sition in the family has been improved as well. In ancient, womens position in family is pity. They had ancient, womens position in family is pity. They had to looks after their children, did every how husband to looks after their children, did every how husband ordered her to do. But now it is chan

7、ged. They are ordered her to do. But now it is changed. They are equal to her husband. They have the right of speaking equal to her husband. They have the right of speaking of idea, discussion thing with her husband, do what of idea, discussion thing with her husband, do what she wants to do.she wan

8、ts to do. In spite of these changes, the liberation of In spite of these changes, the liberation of women has not been completely realized. We also should women has not been completely realized. We also should realize, women likerty are limited. For example, realize, women likerty are limited. For e

9、xample, many factories want men become its workers but the many factories want men become its workers but the chance of women is less than men. Everyone should do chance of women is less than men. Everyone should do their best to change this condition. Im sure, the their best to change this conditio

10、n. Im sure, the liberation of women would be increased. liberation of women would be increased. 5评语：切题。论证充分，有压服力，论证手段丰富举例、正反表达思想清楚，言语流畅，词汇丰富，衔接性好。用词准确，仅有个别小错误。总分值15分 Women are playing an increasingly important Women are playing an increasingly important part in society today. In Many countries, more

11、 and part in society today. In Many countries, more and more women are acting as workers, farmers, more women are acting as workers, farmers, scientists and even leaders. We can say that almost scientists and even leaders. We can say that almost all jobs which men can do are done perfectly by all jo

12、bs which men can do are done perfectly by women. Women are no longer looked down upon by women. Women are no longer looked down upon by society.society. With the changes in their social role, womens With the changes in their social role, womens position in the family has been improved as well. posit

13、ion in the family has been improved as well. Husband and wife are now equal in the family. They Husband and wife are now equal in the family. They cope with problems of daily life together, and cope with problems of daily life together, and share happiness with each ther. Also, you can share happine

14、ss with each ther. Also, you can hardly find out that in todays families, women hardly find out that in todays families, women are being busy with dinners, whereas men are being busy with dinners, whereas men comfortably sitting in armchairs, reading comfortably sitting in armchairs, reading newspap

15、ers.newspapers. In spite of these changes, the liberation of In spite of these changes, the liberation of women has not been completely realized. A number of women has not been completely realized. A number of men still jealously guard their rights, and regard men still jealously guard their rights,

16、 and regard women as incapable creature. Few women are allowed women as incapable creature. Few women are allowed to attend important international meetings to attend important international meetings dominated by men. Thats really the problems we dominated by men. Thats really the problems we should

17、 solve immediately. should solve immediately. 14常见错误分析1. There is an old sentence says “Practice makes perfect.2. There are many people agree to have a spoken English test.3. Someone consider that boys always performance better than girls. But many people think not.4. Some persons go into prison bec

18、ause of money.5. We are in Grade Two. And the new words in the text become more and more.6. The news made us feel afraid.Reference books let us be able to more conveniently study English.8. At the age of ten, my grandfather died. 9. To do well in college, good grades are essential. 10. We all know t

19、hat fail is the mother of succeed. 11. The question of population was serious in modern times.12. We had to plant more trees to make our cities greener nowadays.13. What you are doing can be successful or not, this depends on information. 14. My father does most housework such as cooking and washing

20、, Because my mother is extremely busy.15. So the saying that information is ones eyes and ears are very correct.16. Some people think that some numbers can bring good luck. Such as “six, eight, eighteen and so on. How can we study English well? If you want to be successful in the future, it must be

21、paid attention to. A mans determination is also important. It is often neglected. Someone only depends on good luck.If you want to be successful in your future, you should attach importance to the study of English. But how can you do well in your English studies? Among other things, determination is

22、 an important factor in learning English. However, some people tend to neglect this and only hope that luck will help/favor them. 母语干扰性错误构造变态构造变态 (1)Make our cities greener is (1)Make our cities greener is important. Plant tress and flowers important. Plant tress and flowers is the best measure to o

23、btain the is the best measure to obtain the goal.goal.(2)Our earth is difficult to support (2)Our earth is difficult to support so large population.so large population.(3)People can through the Internet (3)People can through the Internet to get information.to get information.(4) Another advantage of

24、 the bicycle (4) Another advantage of the bicycle is take up little space to park than is take up little space to park than the car.the car.(5)As we all know that China which (5)As we all know that China which is a poor country has the biggest is a poor country has the biggest population.population.

25、词义扭曲词义扭曲 (1) The town has only 30 thousand (1) The town has only 30 thousand population but its economy has been on population but its economy has been on the rise in recent years.the rise in recent years.(2) In my opinion, a college student (2) In my opinion, a college student should learn at least

26、 five or six should learn at least five or six thousand English vocabulary.thousand English vocabulary.(3) I can hardly find a common point with (3) I can hardly find a common point with my desk-mate.my desk-mate.(4) Information is unavoidable in our (4) Information is unavoidable in our times, name

27、ly, we cannot keep away from times, namely, we cannot keep away from it.it.(1) My English base is still very poor. My English level is low. His health is bad.(2) The model of bikes are various and their quality is better.(3) Everyone has his shortcomings. No one is a one percent full man without fau

28、lt.文章的过渡手段 To many foreigners, the American word “family is confusing. Foreigners often hear an American say My family is coming to visit. In this sentence, family means grandparents and perhaps other relatives. However, at other times, the same American might say, Im going to stay home with my fami

29、ly this weekend. In this case, he is talking about his wife and children. This is a much narrower meaning than the first one. Using family in this way makes a foreigner wonder which term really describes an American family. The answer, of course, is that there are two meanings for the word family in

30、 the United States - a narrow one and a broad one. And there is another term - immediate family - to describe something in between. 过渡词语的分类过渡词语的分类 顺序和接续顺序和接续first(ly), second(ly), third(ly) in the first(ly), second(ly), third(ly) in the first place, in the second place; next, then, first place, in t

31、he second place; next, then, finally, last(ly), to start with, then.finally, last(ly), to start with, then.递进递进 also, besides, furthermore, moreover, above also, besides, furthermore, moreover, above all, in addition, what is more all, in addition, what is more 转机转机 however, instead, nevertheless, s

32、till, yet however, instead, nevertheless, still, yet 退让退让 anyhow, anyway, though, at any rate, in anyhow, anyway, though, at any rate, in spite of that, all the same, after all, all the spite of that, all the same, after all, all the same, despite, even so, for all, for all that, same, despite, even

33、 so, for all, for all that, however, in any case.however, in any case.结果结果 consequently, hence, therefore, thus, as a consequently, hence, therefore, thus, as a result, accordingly, as it turned out, at all result, accordingly, as it turned out, at all events, but for, eventually, finally, in any ev

34、ent, events, but for, eventually, finally, in any event, in the event, so, somehow, thanks to.in the event, so, somehow, thanks to.推论推论 else, otherwise, then, in that case, in other else, otherwise, then, in that case, in other words, perhaps, presumably, probably.words, perhaps, presumably, probabl

35、y.对照对照 conversely, on the contrary, (on the one conversely, on the contrary, (on the one hand) on the other hand, similarly, or rather.hand) on the other hand, similarly, or rather.评价评价certainly, evidently, naturally, normally, certainly, evidently, naturally, normally, obviously, personally, really

36、, surely obviously, personally, really, surely 同位同位 for example/instance, I mean, in other words, for example/instance, I mean, in other words, namely, or rather, so to speak, that is, that is to namely, or rather, so to speak, that is, that is to saysay证明证明 actually, apparently, as a matter of fact

37、, as a actually, apparently, as a matter of fact, as a rule, indeed, in effect, in fact, of courserule, indeed, in effect, in fact, of course总结总结 all in all, briefly, in all, in brief, in all in all, briefly, in all, in brief, in conclusion, in general, in short, in summary, so, conclusion, in gener

38、al, in short, in summary, so, summing up, to sum upsumming up, to sum up起过渡作用的代词、同义词、衔接词和词的反复 1. 起过渡作用的代词起过渡作用的代词He asked what that meant.We watched the hikers. They climbed slowly.2. 起过渡作用的同义词起过渡作用的同义词Community colleges are like the two-year colleges called junior colleges, or j.c.s. Both schools p

39、repare students for four-year colleges. J.c.s offer all the courses most four-year colleges ask their freshmen and sophomores to take. Community colleges also give such required courses. But community colleges are also like other institutions called trade schools. Both schools offer technical traini

40、ng. Trade schools give courses in such areas as carpentry, nursing, television repairing, or photography. Community colleges have complete technical courses for students who do not plan to go on to a university. 3 反复词起过渡作用反复词起过渡作用 Gulls, as they soar, are not always Gulls, as they soar, are not alwa

41、ys searching for food but merely having fun on searching for food but merely having fun on the wing. A gull flying along the shore is the wing. A gull flying along the shore is taking advantages of wind current formed taking advantages of wind current formed when the sea air strikes the warm land an

42、d when the sea air strikes the warm land and rises. Gulls also love the lower, weaker air rises. Gulls also love the lower, weaker air currents that form about three feet above currents that form about three feet above the waves. They ride them for hours, tipping the waves. They ride them for hours,

43、 tipping from one current to the next. Most people from one current to the next. Most people think that gulls ride behind boats for the think that gulls ride behind boats for the food. But garbage is only a small part of food. But garbage is only a small part of what they eat. Clams and fish make up

44、 most what they eat. Clams and fish make up most of their diet. The sea gulls follow boats of their diet. The sea gulls follow boats for the tide on the thermal currents the for the tide on the thermal currents the ships create at sea.ships create at sea.4.平行构造起承上启下的作用平行构造起承上启下的作用 My mother has pass

45、ed along to me certain rules for getting along with others. Dont argue with parents; they will think you dont love them. Dont argue with children; they will think themselves victimized. Dont argue with spouses; they will think you are a tiresome mate. Dont argue with strangers; they will think you a

46、re not friendly. My mothers rules, in fact, can be summed up in two words. Dont argue. 常用句型H:writing写作句型.doc段落写作起首段的写作主体段的写作结尾段的写作起首段的写作1指出某一景象。 Nowadays, _ has become the talk of town. Wherever you go, you can hear it talked about by people from all works of life. Actually you can hardly avoid expo

47、sing yourself to a discussion about it even if you turn a deaf ear to it, because it has entered every hole and corner of our daily life.2)简要阐明某种事物的重要性 _ is quite common in our everyday life, and thus its importance is usually ignored by many of us. Its value, however, cannot be underestimated, alth

48、ough we cannot measure its importance in the same way we estimate the value of water, air, rice and other things.3)简要阐明图表内容l From the table/graph/chart/illustration above, it can be seen that the _ has undergone a gradual but steady increase in the past few decades. The number of _ in 1983,1999 was

49、_,_ respectively, showing a tendency of _s accelerated development.主体段落1)某一景象的缘由 There are many causes for_. There causes can be reduced to two major kinds: internal and external. Internally speaking,Externally speaking,We know that external causes become operative though internal causes .So the roo

50、t causes are on the part of _.2) 举出不同的人对同一事物的不同看法l Options are widely divided about _. Some argue that Others believe that Still others hold that The list goes on and on .3) 分析某一事物l There is no denying the fact that _has a lot of advantages. It not only but also At the same time, So, it is not too m

51、uch to say that without _, out life would be unimaginable.l l With all its advantages/ Advantageous as it is, _ also has some obvious disadvantages. To begin with, Besides, Furthermore, In a word, the limitations of _ can not be denied.4) 批驳某一错误观念 This argument seems to be reasonable at first glance

52、, but on second thoughts, you can find that it does not hold water at all, because it is far away from the actualities of our present society, in which结尾段落1)表达本人不同的看法 All the above-mentioned opinions are reasonable to a certain degree. Strictly speaking, none if them are well-grounded, because they

53、are neither rather extreme or too conservative. Different from theirs, my point of view is that2)他所以为的处理问题的途径 In my opinion, to find a proper solution to the above-mentioned problem, we should make a careful study of the present situation, taking into account both its favorable and unfavorable aspec

54、ts. The key to the problem lies in 3)对某一论述做小结 Much has been said about _. The rights and wrongs of the problem have, so far, become quite clear. There may be a lot of other similar phenomena in our society today. As long as we keep sharp-sighted, we will always be with the truth.4)对某一新惹事物的看法 _ is on

55、e of the newly emerging things in China today. It must be admitted that there is much room for improvement. However, we can not demand perfect of it at the present time, because nothing is born perfect. So long as we give support to its development, it will benefit us greatly. 段落的写作in two words: Don

56、t argue. 主题句1.关键词: He can fix a bicycle himself. 2.中心思想:修正:1.He fix a bicycle himself in several simple steps. 2.There are several reasons why he can fix a bicycle himself. There are two ways. The first is the property right you establish by paying for it, just as you have made it a part of yourself

57、 and best way to make yourself of it is by writing in it. There are two ways in which you own a book. The first is the property right you establish by paying for it. The second is that you have made it a part of yourself by writing in it.推展句和次要推展句atmosphere. (主题句)I dont teach because teaching is eas

58、y for me. (主要推展句1)Teaching is the most difficult of the various ways I have attempted to earn my living: mechanic, carpenter, writer. (主要推展句2)For me, teaching is a red-eye, sweaty-palm, sinking-stomach profession. (次要推展句1)Red-eye, because I never feel ready to teach no matter how late I stay up prep

59、aring. (次要推展句2)Sweaty-palm, because Im always nervous before I enter the classroom, sure that I will be found out for the fool that I am. (次要推展句3)Sinking-stomach, because I leave the classroom an hour later convinced that I was even more boring than usual. 段落开展的手段段落开展的手段 1. 1. 列举法列举法(details) (detai

60、ls) 2. 2. 举例法举例法(example) (example) 3. 3. 表达法表达法(narration) (narration) 4. 4. 对比法或比较法对比法或比较法(comparison & contrast) (comparison & contrast) 5. 5. 分类法分类法(classification) (classification) 6. 6. 因果分析法因果分析法(cause and effect ) (cause and effect ) 7. 7. 定义法定义法(definition) (definition) 8. 8. 反复法反复法(repetit