1819 Unit 1 Section Ⅴ　Writing——建议信

1、Section Writing建议信写作技法指导eq avs4al(文体指导)建议信大多要求我们根据所给的材料给出有针对性的解决办法或者提出合理建议。一、基本结构建议信一般采取“三段式结构”。首段：表明写作意图，陈述事由，简单介绍自己的观点，注意语气。主体段落：根据具体情况提出有针对性的建议或忠告。结尾段：对提出的建议进行总结，要注意表达方式，使对方容易接受。二、注意事项1注意结构。通常以“三段式”结构行文。2客观地提出建议，针对对方的问题，给出你的观点。3语言要委婉、精炼，同时要简洁，表达清楚。eq avs4al(亮点句式)1建议信首段常用句式I am writing to express

2、my views about/concerning.You have asked me for my advice on.，and I will try to make some suggestions.It is my pleasure to offer you some advice on.2建议信中段常用句式I would like to suggest/recommend that.In my opinion，it would be wise to take the following actions.I think it would be more beneficial if you

3、 could.As to.I suggest that you should.As far as I am concerned./In my opinion.For one thing.for another.To begin with.Besides.Last but not least.3建议信尾段常用句式In the end，I will be very glad if you find my suggestions useful.I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful.Shoul

4、d you have any more problems，please feel free to contact me at any time.满分佳作构建eq avs4al(写作任务)假定你是李华，你的朋友张柯发email给你，就买什么样的英语词典想听听你的建议。请根据下列提示，用英语给他回一封100词左右的email，推荐他买电子词典。1方便、快捷2内置多部词典、能发音3能储存资料4其他参考词汇：RAM 内存eq avs4al(审题谋篇)体裁建议信时态以一般现在时为主主题选购电子词典人称以第二人称为主结构第一段：表明写作意图，简单介绍自己的观点第二段：给出具体切合实际的建议并说明理由第三段

5、：表达期盼eq avs4al(遣词造句).对接单元词汇1superb adj.卓越的；极好的2possess vt. 拥有3evident adj. 明显的4adopt vt. 采用；采纳5a great deal 大量6figure out 弄明白7on (the) one hand.on the other hand. 一方面另一方面.巧用单元句式、语法(一) 完成句子1在上一次的电子邮件中你提出了这个问题。You put forward the problem in your last email.2我认为你拥有一本电子词典是一个很好的选择。I think it is a superb

6、choice for you to possess an electronic dictionary3无论你走到哪里，你随身携带着它都很方便。It is convenient for you to carry it wherever you go. 【导学号：98892009】4很明显，你可以尽快地在电子词典中弄明白你想要的东西。It is evident that you can figure out what you want in the electronic dictionary as soon as possible.5查阅这种字典真是小菜一碟。Consulting this kin

7、d of dictionary is really a piece of cake.6当你遇到有用的材料时，你可以把它尽可能多地储存起来。When you meet with the useful material，you can store it as a great deal as possible7电子词典里面有很多内存。There is much RAM in the electronic dictionary.(二) 句式升级8用as for和定语从句合并句子1、2As for the problem you put forward in your last email，I thin

8、k it is a superb choice for you to possess an electronic dictionary.9用on the one hand. on the other hand.和连词for合并句子3、4、5On the one hand，it is convenient for you to carry it wherever you go; on the other hand，it is evident that you can figure out what you want in the electronic dictionary as soon as

9、possible，for consulting this kind of dictionary is really a piece of cake.10先用when分词改写句子6，然后再用because合并句子6、7When meeting with the useful material，you can store it as a great deal as possible because there is much RAM in the electronic dictionary.eq avs4al(妙笔成篇)【参考范文】Dear Zhang Ke，As for the problem

10、you put forward in your last email，I think it is a superb choice for you to possess an electronic dictionary.On the one hand，it is convenient for you to carry it wherever you go; on the other hand，it is evident that you can figure out what you want in the electronic dictionary as soon as possible，for consulting this kind of dictionary is really a piece of cake.When meeting with the useful material，you can store it as a great deal as possible because there is much RAM in the electronic dictionary.