【课件】读后续写专题Continuation Writing 课件-2022届高三英语写作专项

1、Continuation WritingStory Continuation WritingLead in: A Guessing GameThe first letter of this word is “a”There are five letters in this wordThe second-to-last letter is “p”CluesLead in: A Guessing GameRationality 合理性Consistency 连贯性 Tortuous Plots 曲折性Step 1: Basic ElementsWhoWhereWhenWhatDiane Ray w

2、as completely self-centred and very spoilt(宠坏的). Her parents gave her everything that she wanted, knowing that she would throw a tantrum(耍脾气) if they did not satisfy her desire. She would scream(尖叫) and lie on the floor drumming her heels. Finally her parents always gave in. That was why she was alo

3、ne on the beach, wearing an expensive swimsuit. It had taken a big tantrum to get her parents to buy it for her. They were back at the beach house, recovering from the tantrum she had thrown when they told her that it was too dangerous to go diving alone. Dangerous? she had said.“You just dont want

4、me to have fun. Im going and if you try to stop me, Ill scream. “What are you doing?” a voice asked. Diane jumped and looked around. She did not know that the man was there until he spoke. “Im going to dive, she answered coldly. “You shouldnt swim today, the man advised.“There is a storm(暴风雨)coming

5、up. “You should mind your own business!” Diane replied and walked into the gentle waves.“If you go out there youll be sorry, the man called after her. But she did not want to reply. Diane slipped into the water and dived happily until white waves began rolling in and it became harder to swim against

6、 the current(水流). Sea water hit against her face, making it difficult to breathe. Oh,why did I not listen to the advice? Diane regretted.Step 1: Basic ElementsWhoWhereWhenWhaton a beachin the seaDiane Ray, Dianes parents, a manDiane went to dive alone.When recovering from the tantrumStep 2: Read for

7、 the Main IdeaPlotsDianes feelings Beginning DevelopmentClimaxEndDiane Ray was completely self-centred and very spoilt(宠坏的). Her parents gave her everything that she wanted, knowing that she would throw a tantrum(耍脾气) if they did not satisfy her desire. She would scream(尖叫) and lie on the floor drum

8、ming her heels. Finally her parents always gave in. That was why she was alone on the beach, wearing an expensive swimsuit. It had taken a big tantrum to get her parents to buy it for her. They were back at the beach house, recovering from the tantrum she had thrown when they told her that it was to

9、o dangerous to go diving alone. Dangerous? she had said.“You just dont want me to have fun. Im going and if you try to stop me, Ill scream. “What are you doing?” a voice asked. Diane jumped and looked around. She did not know that the man was there until he spoke. “Im going to dive, she answered col

10、dly. “You shouldnt swim today, the man advised.“There is a storm(暴风雨)coming up. “You should mind your own business!” Diane replied and walked into the gentle waves.“If you go out there youll be sorry, the man called after her. But she did not want to reply. Diane slipped into the water and dived hap

11、pily until white waves began rolling in and it became harder to swim against the current(水流). Sea water hit against her face, making it difficult to breathe. Oh,why did I not listen to the advice? Diane regretted.PlotsDianes feelingsBeginningShe was alone on the beach with an expensive swimsuitinsis

12、tent(固执的) and coldHer parents and a man warned her, but in vainDevelopmentShe slipped into the water and dived happilyhappyThe white waves began rolling in and it became difficule for her to swimscaredSea water hit against her face, making it difficult for her to breathregretfulClimaxFrightened, she

13、 began to screamfrightened.EndAfter Diane closed her bedrooms door, she was lost in thought.Step 3: Predict by QuestioningStep 3: Predict by QuestioningPair WorkWork in pairs, try to talk aboutthese questions with your partnersStep 4: Add Some Details 情感变化：动作描写：语言描写：Diane：frightenedgratefulashamed父母

14、：worriedbreathe a sigh of reliefrelieved, comfortingDiane溺水时的动作？得救后的行为？回家后的动作？父母的表现？周围旁观者的表现？Diane与父母之间的对话，与施救者之间的对话。Note:Pay attention to the change of places.After Diane closed her bedrooms door, she was lost in thought. _V Write your story!Frightened, she began to scream. _direct speech“” she sai

15、d.+ indirect speechshe said that Simple PastHow did she feel at that time?Who saved her？How did she deal with the problem?What did she think about?Step 4: Add Some Details 她感到羞愧，出去然后走向她母亲。She_ _, went out and walked to her mother.你和爸爸很关心我，并给了我无私的爱。You and Dad have cared about me a lot, and given you

16、r_ _ to me.felt ashamedselfless loveStep 4: Add Some Details 她感到羞愧，出去然后走向她母亲。(现在分词作伴随状语), she went out and walked to her mother.你和爸爸很关心我，并给了我无私的爱。（who引导的定语从句）You and Dad Feeling ashamedwho have given your selfless love to me have cared about me a lot.Step 4: Add Some Details fear flooded over sb 某人心理充满恐惧sbs face was dead with fright 他吓得面无人色Step 4: Add Some Details Step 4: Add Some Details 哭眼含泪水 tears spring to ones eyes眼泪滚下脸颊 tears roll down ones cheeks大哭；啜泣 weep ones eyes out泪水模糊了视线 tears blur ones eyes/vision