人教版高中必修一Section-Ⅶ-Reading-for-Writing-有关身心健康的比较说明

1、Section Reading for Writing有关身心健康的比较说明文 本单元的写作任务是读一篇关于健康的文章后，写一篇有关身心健康的比较说明文。.Pre-writing()Learning to write after the modelGOING POSITIVEI always wanted to look like the slim girls on TV even though I knew that it was impossible.I worried about my weight and tried every new diet I read about online

2、.I tried no-fat，low-fat，5：2，only bananas，no bananasI almost went bananas，too. Then I read an article that said instead of asking “Am I fat？” I should be asking “Am I fit？” I had no idea a letter could make such a difference! Once I started thinking about fitness rather than weight，things began to ch

3、ange.Instead of saying “I want to lose three kilos”，I would say “I want to run two kilometres in eight minutes” or “I want to be able to do 30 push-ups”.Rather than cutting out the foods I enjoyed，I added healthy foods to my meals.I could still have a burger now and then，but I would add a salad or a

4、n apple.Finally，I stopped comparing myself with actresses and models and looking for things that were wrong with my face or body.Instead，I made a list of the things I liked about myself.By being positive about myself and my body，I became both happier and healthier.()Preparation for writingWords and

5、phrases _ adj.健康的_ adj. 不健康的_ 绿色食品_ 健康饮食_ 不健康的饮食习惯 healthy/fitunhealthy/unfitgreen foodhealthy food/diet unhealthy eating habit _ 良好的生活习惯_ adj. 肥胖的_ 强身健体_ 充足的睡眠_ 进行运动_ 减肥_ 对有益处_ 节食_ 养成一个的饮食习惯 _ 身体健康/不健康_ 对某人的健康/视力有益/害 good living habits overweight/fatbuild up ones body enough sleeptake exerciselose

6、weightbe good for/do good to go on a dietform a.eating habitbe in good/poor healthbe good/bad for ones health/eyes .While-writing写一篇100词左右的短文，介绍你自己是如何平衡学习和休息的。内容包括：1.以前无法平衡学习和休息；2.现在已经做到二者平衡；3.你的做法。Step 1List the outline of the passage.Paragraph 1：_Paragraph 2：_Paragraph 3：_ I couldnt balance rest a

7、nd study before. How to balance rest and study.I can balance rest and study now.Step 2List the words，phrases and sentences.1.Words and phrases_ adj. 劳累的_ v. 认识到；意识到_ 平衡休息和学习_ 忙于 _ 休息一下_ 结果_ 生病_ 一直_ 打篮球_ 落后 tiredrealizebalance rest and studybe busy withhave a restas a resultfall illall the timeplay b

8、asketballfall behind2.Sentences我经常忙于学习，因此没有时间休息。(so)_不是整天学习，而是我开始抽时间休息。(rather than)_我不是整天做作业，而是一天打一个小时篮球。(instead of)_I was often busy with my study，so I had no time to have a rest.Rather than studying all the time，I began to spare some time to have a rest.Instead of doing my homework all the day，I

9、 went to play basketball for an hour a day. Two years ago，I couldnt balance rest and study.I was often busy with my study，so I had no time to have a rest.As a result，I often felt tired and stressed.At last I fell ill and had to stay in hospital for 3 weeks.After I recovered from illness，I began to t

10、hink about my problems.I got to realize the importance of balancing rest and study.Rather than studying all the time，I began to spare some time to have a rest.Instead of doing my homework all the day，I went to play basketball for an hour a day.Finally，I got to balance rest and study.I became quite h

11、ealthy.I didnt fall behind; instead，I studied better than before. .Post-writingpolishing the passageExchange your passage with your partner，and pay attention to the following points.1.Does the writer explain why he/she changed/wanted to change?2.Does the writer tell how the changes have improved or

12、will improve his/her life?3.Is the text well-organised?4.Does the writer use words and expressions to show similarities and differences?5.Are there any grammar or spelling errors?6.Does the writer use correct punctuation? 写作要点The past：I worried about my weight and tried every new diet.The changes：I

13、focused on fitness rather than diet and weight.The present：I became positive and I became both happier and healthier.常用词汇like，so，too，still，similarly，similar to，the same(.as.)，in common(with)，both.and.，instead，than，however/but/though，different from，rather than，instead of，the difference is.亮点表达1.Takin

14、g exercise is closely related to health.运动与健康息息相关。2.We should get into the habit of keeping good hours.我们应该养成早睡早起的习惯。3.Smoking has a great influence on our health.抽烟对我们的健康有很大的影响。4.According to a recent survey，four million people die each year from diseases linked to smoking.依照最近的一项调查，每年有4 000 000人死于

15、与吸烟有关的疾病。 5.Unless you keep a balanced diet，you will put on weight.除非你保持均衡的饮食，否则将会增加体重。6.Early to bed and early to rise，makes a man healthy，wealthy and wise.早睡早起会使人健康、富有和聪明。7.The wall depends on the foundation，and the body depends on exercise.墙靠基础坚，身强靠锻炼。8.An apple a day keeps the doctor away.每天一个苹果

16、，医生远离我。(谚语) 写作技巧词汇没有所谓高低级之分，只有准确不准确之别。高考的满分范文和高分作文都在使用那些大部分中国学生高中就知道的词汇。千万不要一厢情愿地把一个本来平实准确的词，换成你觉得所谓的高级词 (就像说到“离开家乡到大城市发展”中的“离开”就该用“leave”，而不用貌似更高级但其实毫无准确性可言的“abandon”)。切记：最符合语境的才是最准确的，最准确的才是最给力的。 以下资料为赠送学习目标1、复述故事，深入理解文章内容，初步把握人物形象。2、学会利用文中关键词句分析人物形象。3、体会文章所揭示的深刻道理。故事发生的时间、地点、人物、事件的起因、经过和结果要复述清楚。看图

17、复述课文内容自学指导(一)1、作者运用哪几种方法去刻画人物的形象？从文中找出具体句子进行分析。并说说你是如何看待这两个人物的。2、从这个故事中你懂得了什么道理？自学指导(二)陈尧咨（善射）卖油翁（善酌）动作神态语言睨之无他，但手熟尔以我酌油知之我亦无他，惟手熟尔汝亦知射乎吾射不亦精乎尔安敢轻吾射释担而立 但微颔之取 置 覆 酌 沥性格:自矜（骄傲）谦虚对比道理:熟能生巧,即使有什么长处也不必骄傲自满。忿然 笑而遣之笑而遣之1、联系生活、学习，说说熟能生巧的事例。 2、你认为一个人应该如何看待自己的长处？又如何看待他人的长处？课外延伸1、课文主要写了 和 两个场面。3、从神态描写写卖油翁看待陈尧

18、咨射技的句子是 ， ，表现了他对陈尧咨的射技的 的态度；从语言上描写卖油翁看待陈尧咨的射技的句子是 ， 这句话所包含的道理是 。2、陈尧咨看待自己射技的句子是 、 、 这些句子表现了陈尧咨 的态度。4、这个故事也告诉我们要虚心地看待自己和别人的长处的道理，这让你想起哪些相关的名言警句？课堂练习：射箭酌油公亦以此自矜吾射不亦精乎尔安敢轻吾射 自矜（或骄傲）睨之但微颔之轻视（或轻蔑）无他但手熟尔熟能生巧人外有人，天外有天。取人之长，补己之短。自满人十事九空，虚心人万事可成。谦受益，满招损。三人行，必有我师焉。择其善者而从之，其不善者而改之。骄傲自满是我们的一座可怕的陷阱；而且，这个陷阱是我们自己亲

19、手挖掘的。老舍 尺有所短；寸有所长。物有所不足；智有所不明。屈原 1、正视自己的长处，扬长避短，2、正视自己的缺点，知错能改，3谦虚使人进步，4、人应有一技之长，5、自信是走向成功的第一步，6强中更有强中手，一山还比一山高，7艺无止境 8、宝剑锋从磨砺出，梅花香自苦寒来，刻苦训练才能有所收获，取得成效。9、骄傲自大、不可一世者往往遭人轻视；10、智者超然物外 卖油翁下课了，听个小故事吧！学习目标1、复述故事，深入理解文章内容，初步把握人物形象。2、学会利用文中关键词句分析人物形象。3、体会文章所揭示的深刻道理。故事发生的时间、地点、人物、事件的起因、经过和结果要复述清楚。看图复述课文内容自学指导(一)1、作者运用哪几种方法去刻画人物的形象？从文中找出具体句子进行分析。并说说你是如何看待这两个人物的。2、从这个故事中你懂得了什么道理？自学指导(二)陈尧咨（善射）卖油翁（善酌）动作神态语言睨之无他，但手熟尔以我酌油知之我亦无他，惟手熟尔汝亦