雅思英语写作技巧教学课件(50张)

1、雅思英语 写作篇PPT 编写：胡宇斌CMA Training Centre 图表题 写作WSkills RITING温故知新图表5种类型表格 Table线图(直线/曲线) Line graph柱状图(条形图) Bar chart饼图 Pie chart流程图 Process diagram Learn the new while reviewing the old 线图 写作WSkills RITING第 三 讲线图主体段写作要点 理解主题,比较差异; 看清趋势,找出极点; 若有交叉,点出说明。 P226 例题12 注： （可写的地方。） 图表中最高点和最低点都要单独说明。 曲线的连续变化需要

2、说明。 对图表中多条曲线的交叉点进行对比。 考题多为双曲线和三曲线（ The graph compares） 对单曲线的准确描写是基础（The graph shows） 复习WSkills riting1、主体段表示时间推移的短语有哪些？问题： 表示时间推移的短语（熟记）：At first, (=initially)Then,After that,From this point onwards,Finally (=eventually)（不要老是使用 at 6 oclock, at 8 oclock来开始一个句子。)复习WSkills riting2、主体段表示趋势的动词有哪些？ 上升-下降-

3、不变-波动(见 P215, P218 趋势图）问题： 表示趋势的短语-动词（熟记）：数字趋势动词1.上升趋势: rise, go up, 2.下降趋势: fall, sink, drop, dip, reduce, go down3.保持不变: remain steady, show no/little change4.波动: fluctuate趋势动词替换1.上升趋势: increase, grow, climb, ascend ( jump, surge, soar, shoot up ) 2.下降趋势: decline, decrease, descend ( plunge, slump

4、)3.保持不变: level off/out at, hover at, stabilize at, reach a plateau at复习WSkills riting3、主体段表示趋势的形容词/副词有哪些？ 速度快-速度慢-幅度大-幅度小问题： 表示趋势的短语-形容词（熟记）：1.速度快: sharp, rapid, dramatic, drastic2.速度慢: gradual, slow, steady, gentle3.幅度大: significant, substantial, marked4.幅度小: slight, modest, moderate注意: 以上加 ly 均为副词

5、。 表示分别的副词是 respectively。复习WSkills riting4、主体段表示趋势的其他动词有哪些？最高点-最低点-达到多少-占多少-预测多少 -问题： 表示趋势的短语-其它（熟记）：1.最高点: peak at, reach the highest point at, 2.最低点: bottom out at, reach the bottom at, the lowest point at3.达到多少（量）: reach, arrive at, amount to, hit, stand at4.预测（会有）多少: predict, expect, forecast 句型为

6、： A is predicted/ expected/forecasted to reach线图主体段写作 认真阅读P226主体段范文。 总结表示升降、平稳、波动以及最高点和最低点的句型。 注意数据的表达，放置的位置。回顾使用过的句型描述上升 The period between 10 oclock and 12 oclock saw a slight growth in the number of people in the station, with the number reaching 280 at midday. The next two hours experiences/ wit

7、nesses/ saw a sharp rise again, with 6 pm arriving at 380 people. ( 在哪段时间。）回顾使用过的句型描述下降 From this point onwards, the number plunges to only 100 from 2 pm to 4 pm. After 6 pm, the number falls again, reaching the lowest point of 130 at 8 pm. ( 从哪儿/何时起。）回顾使用过的句型描述不变 At first at 6 am the number of peop

8、le at the station stands at only 100. Numbers in the following two hours level off at just under 300 people. 站上哪点。 在哪个时间段保持不变。回顾使用过的句型描述波动 As we can see from the line graph, the number of people using this station fluctuates over these 16 hours. The period from 8 pm to 10 pm sees a slight rise, but

9、finally the number of people declines again from 180 at 9 pm to 135 at 10 pm.回顾使用过的句型描述最高点 Then, the number shoots up over the next two hours, peaking at 400 at 8 am. The next two hours experiences a sharp rise again, with 6 pm arriving at 380 people.回顾使用过的句型描述最低点 After that, the number declines rap

10、idly for two hours, bottoming out at 180 at 10 am. From this point onwards, the number plunges to only 100 from 2 pm to 4 pm. After 6 pm, the number falls again, reaching the lowest point of 130 at 8 pm.line chart/curve diagram 主体段模版:The line chart compares the rate of _. It can be clearly seen that

11、 _. Male smokers . In contrast, female smokers . To conclude, we can see that_. A comparison of shows that while . A comparative study of shows that while .引用数据方法WSkills RITING句子写作巩固你知道吗？WSkills riting图表主体段写作，第一句话是主题句，支持句介绍数据时要详尽。请看例句： 图表引用数据句型：1. The number picked up in June, rocketing by almost 50

12、0% .2. There was a marked improvement in July with the number of visitors surging 400% .3. The period between May and September saw a steady growth in the number of visitors from 70,000 to 140,000 .4. The gradual rise in visitor numbers from 30,000 to approximately 45,000 in the first four months wa

13、s followed by a sharper increase in May.如何统计数据WSkills ritingThere 表达-1：从早上6点到8点看电视的人数有个小小的增长,由3%到7%。如何统计数据WSkills ritingThere was a slight rise in the number of TV audiences from about 3% at 6:00 am to about 7% at 8 am.表达-1：从早上6点到8点看电视的人数有个小小的增长,由3%到7%。统计数据句型WSkills ritingThe percentage 表达-2：百分率一直大幅

14、下滑，到早上8点最低降到约45%。统计数据句型WSkills ritingThe percentage declined substantially until 8:00 am, bottoming out at about 45%.表达-2：百分率一直大幅下滑，到早上8点最低降到约45%。统计数据句型WSkills ritingThe next .表达-3：接下来的两个小时，数字又巨幅攀升，中午时分最高达到280。统计数据句型WSkills ritingThe next two hours witnessed a dramatic rise in the number again, with

15、 the number reaching 280 at midday.表达-3：接下来的两个小时，数字又巨幅攀升，中午时分最高达到280。统计数据句型WSkills ritingHowever, .表达-4：然而在一天其他的时间，听收音机的百分比要比看电视的百分比低很多。统计数据句型WSkills ritingHowever, for the rest of the day, the percentage of radio was much lower than that of TV.表达-4：然而在一天其他的时间，听收音机的百分比要比看电视的百分比低很多。统计数据句型WSkills riti

16、ngThe price .表达-5：价格在1994年急剧下挫，不过很快恢复到了原来水平，最后冲上新的高点。统计数据句型WSkills ritingThe price plunged dramatically in 1994, but then it regained its previous level, before soaring to a new peak.表达-5：价格在1994年急剧下挫，不过很快恢复到了原来水平，最后冲上新的高点。统计数据句型WSkills ritingIn spite of .表达-6：尽管价格波动很大，但趋势明显向上。统计数据句型WSkills ritingIn

17、 spite of the sharp fluctuations in the price, the trend was obviously upwards.表达-6：尽管价格波动很大，但趋势明显向上。 线图主体段练习P222 例题9 图一 怎样改写首段?The graph shows how the amount of water used world wide changed between 1900 to 2000.本题如果是一个图：主体段可以写三段（一个元素写一段），也可写两段（类似的合起来写）。如有两个图，本图就只写一段，如下： 参考范文： Throughout the centur

18、y, the largest quantity of water was used for agricultural purposes, and this increased dramatically from about 500 km3 to around 3,000 km3 in the year 2000.（介绍农业用水情况-最高值）Water used in the industrial and domestic sectors also increased, but consumption was minimal until mid-century. （工业和家庭用水情况-相似值）

19、From 1950 onwards, industrial use grew steadily to just over 1,000 km3, while domestic use rose more slowly to only 800 km3, both far below the levels of consumption by agriculture. （工业和家庭,与农业相比较） 线图主体段课后练习P221 例题8 怎样改写首段? （见 P221) ( 先口头用汉语描述。） 1、写几段？ 2、怎么写？原文-开首段WSkills riting【修改】The three curves g

20、iven in the line graph show us the percentage of the aged people 65 and above in Japan, Sweden and USA from 1940 to 2040. These curves indicate us the percentage of the people above 65 in some countries during the period from 1940 to 2040. We can draw some conclusions from certain evident patterns.原

21、文 主体段-1WSkills ritingThe proportion of population aged above 65 in USA were increasing slowly from 1940 to 1962(from 9% to 10%), after which there is a sudden rise to 15% in 1980s. After that, the percentage began to fall gradually until 2020, the number at that time is estimately 14%. The next seve

22、ral years will see a increase to about 17%, and then rocket to 23% in the last 10 years.修改 主体段-1WSkills ritingThe proportion of aged population in USA increased slowly from 1940 to 1960 (from 9% to 10%). Then there was a sudden rise to 15% in 1980. After that, the percentage began to fall gradually

23、until 2020（14%）. The next 20 years can be seen a drastic increase, rocketing to 23% in the year 2040.原文 主体段-2WSkills ritingThe trend in Sweden is similar to that of USA, it (代什么？串句。) began at 7% in 1940, a bit less than that of USA, and increased to 9% until 1962. Then, just like the change of USA,

24、the proportion climbed more fast and plateaued at 15% in 1980s. Yes theres a little difference from the States that the curve sores after a short period gradual decline until 2010 and reach 20%,(有吗？看错图啦！) which is much higher than the USA at same time. (不准确) In the last 10 years, elder Swedes increa

25、sed rapidly after a 10 year decline, (看错图啦！)and will (主语是啥？)peak at 26%.修改 主体段-2WSkills ritingThe trend of Sweden，at first，is similar to that of USA. With its starting percentage at 7% in 1940, a bit less than that of USA, it increased to 14% in 1980. Then, unlike the downward trend of USA, the Swed

26、en proportion continued to climb, until it reached 15% in 2000 and 17% in 2020. Afterwards, the Sweden curve soared, peaking at 24% in 2040.原文 主体段-3WSkills ritingJapanese saw a consistant（坚实的；可靠的) decrease form 5% in 1940 to 3% in 1960, and kept this level for 25 years. (如何算的？) Then began to rise gr

27、adually to 10% until 2030 (不确切) prospectively (adv.可能；潜在；预期). A dramatically rising will be seen in the next 2 years (？) which will lead the percentage to 25%. Finally, the proportion of Japanese will end at (？) 27% in 2040. (画不出图来。)修改 主体段-3WSkills ritingJapan curve saw a slight decrease form 5% in

28、1940 to 3% in 1960, and remained stable until 1980. Then, the proportion began to pick up, reaching 5% in 2000, and 8% in 2020. After that, there is a dramatic rise in the next 20 years, leading the percentage to 27% in 2040. ( 能出画图。)参考： This chart illustrates the percentage of elder people aged 65

29、and more in three countries, namely Japan, Sweden and USA from a period of 100 years (1940- 2040). It indicates that by 2040, the senior will reach to approximately 20-28% in all these three countries.In 1940, the percentage of the senior people aged 65 or more stood at 5% in Japan,7% in Sweden and

30、9% in USA, respectively. Both the proportion of the aged population in the western countries increased (Sweden from 6% to 14%, and USA from 9% to15%) after 40 years, while that in Japan decreased ( from 5% to 3% ). However, the USA proportion, unlike that of Sweden, which kept consistent upward clim

31、b to 24%, showed a downward trend afterwards, and remained this trend until 2020 before it surged to 21% in 2040. As for Japan, it had a slight increase, regaining its 5% in 2000, and jumping to 8% in 2020, and finally rocketing to 28% in 2040.Its predicted that the percentage of population aged 65

32、and over in all these three countries will ascend dramatically after the year 2020, especially in 2030 and 2040. And the proportion of Japan will climb straightly from 8% to 25% in 20 years between 2020 and 2040.参考： These curves indicate us the percentage of the people above 65 in some countries dur

33、ing the period from 1940 to 2040. We can draw some conclusions from certain evident patterns.The proportion of population aged above 65 in USA were increasing slowly from 1940 to 1962(from 9% to 10%), after which there is a sudden rise to 15% in 1980s. After that, the percentage began to fall gradua

34、lly until 2020, the number at that time is estimately 14%. The next several years will see a increase to about 17%, and then rocket to 23% in the last 10 years.The trend in Sweden is similar to that of USA, it began at 7% in 1940, a bit less than that of USA, and increased to 9% until 1962. Then, ju

35、st like the change of USA, the proportion climbed more fast and plateaued at 15% in 1980s. Yes theres a little difference from the States that the curve sores after a short period gradual decline until 2010 and reach 20%, which is much higher than the USA at same time. In the last 10 years, elder Sw

36、edes increased rapidly after a 10 year decline, and will peak at 26%.Japanese saw a consistant decrease form 5% in 1940 to 3% in 1960, and kept this level for 25 years. Then began to rise gradually to 10% until 2030 prospectively. A dramatically rising will be seen in the next 2 years which will lea

37、d the percentage to 25%. Finally, the proportion of Japanese will end at 27% in 2040.To a sum, all the 3 countries keep the up rising trend ganerally. But the proportion of Japanese will take the lead finally, though it began with a very low level. After all, these These curves indicate us the perce

38、ntage of the people above 65 in some countries during the period from 1940 to 2040. We can draw some conclusions from certain evident patterns.The proportion of population aged above 65 in USA were increasing slowly from 1940 to 1962(from 9% to 10%), after which there is a sudden rise to 15% in 1980

39、s. After that, the percentage began to fall gradually until 2020, the number at that time is estimately 14%. The next several years will see a increase to about 17%, and then rocket to 23% in the last 10 years.The trend in Sweden is similar to that of USA, it began at 7% in 1940, a bit less than tha

40、t of USA, and increased to 9% until 1962. Then, just like the change of USA, the proportion climbed more fast and plateaued at 15% in 1980s. Yes theres a little difference from the States that the curve sores after a short period gradual decline until 2010 and reach 20%, which is much higher than th

41、e USA at same time. In the last 10 years, elder Swedes increased rapidly after a 10 year decline, and will peak at 26%.Japanese saw a consistant decrease form 5% in 1940 to 3% in 1960, and kept this level for 25 years. Then began to rise gradually to 10% until 2030 prospectively. A dramatically rising will be seen in the next 2 years which will lead the percentage to 25%. Finally, the proportion of Japanese will end at 27% in 2040.To a sum, all the 3 countries keep the up rising trend ganerally. But the proportion of Japanese will take the lead finally, though