英语写训练记叙文课件

1、 读写任务写作指导记叙文 Narration Everyone has an experience they would rather forget. Some are embarrassing, some are moving, and some teach us a lesson. Here is a story of mine. Last Sunday I went fishing. After setting up my fishing rod（钓鱼竿） with bait（鱼饵）, I sat down on the bank of the lake. But two hours l

2、ater, I didnt catch any fish. I got very angry and began to pack up my stuff（收拾东西）, preparing to go back home. Just then, I saw an old man sitting near me. To my surprise, his basket was full of fish, so I went over to him, wanting to know why. “Excuse me, but how long have you sat here?” I asked. “

3、About four hours,” he answered. “Four hours?” I couldnt believe my ears. “Yes. Its very important to be patient,” the old man said. “ Dont consider fishing a tiring sport. Just enjoy it.”阅读下面的短文，然后按要求写一篇约150字的短文。 Suddenly, I understand what he said. I must learn to be patient. Then I sat there and w

4、aited for fish patiently. I felt a fish touch the bait, but I didnt move and waited for the right moment to reel it in（卷收钓鱼线）. At last, I caught it. This made me very happy. In the following six hours, I caught over 10 fish. On my way home, I thought what had happened on the bank. I gradually realiz

5、ed that the secret of success was patience. 写作内容1) 以约30个词概括短文的要点；2) 然后以约120个词写一篇记叙文，描写你认识到耐心的重要性的一次经历，并包括以下要点：a) 叙述你认识到耐心的重要性的一次真实或虚构的经历；（一定要有结果）b)你是如何认识到耐心的重要性的； c) 耐心对你的生活、学习有什么影响。写作要求(1) 可以参照阅读材料的篇章结构，组织故事，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；(2) 标题自定。读A narrative(记叙文).写A narrative(记叙文). 写作模板四部曲叙事类文章的写作模板：1.Title (题目）1

6、分 有时不一定要求写标题2. Summary (概要 约30-40个词) 5分3. Body (正文) 19分 1) A transitional sentence (过渡句引出例子) 2) An example and so on (举一个相同主题的例子,再按题目要求谈感受或 发表看法等)4. Ending (结尾点题)What should we pay attention to when writing a title?第一步. TitleSuggestions:What should we pay attention to when writing a title?We should

7、use a noun phrase or a sentence as a title.2.The first letter of every word in a title should be written in a capital(大写) letter except articles(冠词), prepositions(介词) and conjunctions(连词).3. The number of a title had better not be more than 10 words.写作内容1) 以约30个词概括短文的要点；2) 然后以约120个词写一篇记叙文，描写你认识到耐心的重

8、要性的一次经历，并包括以下要点：a) 叙述你认识到耐心的重要性的一次真实或虚构的经历；（一定要有结果）b)你是如何认识到耐心的重要性的； c) 耐心对你的生活、学习有什么影响。写作要求(1) 可以参照阅读材料的篇章结构，组织故事，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；(2) 标题自定。 Whats the title that we should use?1.Patience Is Important.2 The Important of Patience.3 How Importance Patience Is.4 Patience Is the Secret of Success.5 The Key

9、 to Success Patience summary?WritingHow to write a 第二步 summary速读文章，找出要素：When (时间)： Where (地点)：Who (人物)：What (事件)How (发展经过）Result (结果)：What to learn (如篇末有点题语句，或升华主题，或点明给人们的启示，或经念教训）skills Everyone has an experience they would rather forget. Some are embarrassing, some are moving, and some teach us a

10、lesson. Here is a story of mine. Last Sunday I went fishing. After setting up my fishing rod（钓鱼竿） with bait（鱼饵）, I sat down on the bank of the lake. But two hours later, I didnt catch any fish. I got very angry and began to pack up my stuff（收拾东西）, preparing to go back home. Just then, I saw an old m

11、an sitting near me. To my surprise, his basket was full of fish, so I went over to him, wanting to know why. “Excuse me, but how long have you sat here?” I asked. “About four hours,” he answered. “Four hours?” I couldnt believe my ears. “Yes. Its very important to be patient,” the old man said. “ Do

12、nt consider fishing a tiring sport. Just enjoy it.”阅读下面的短文，然后按要求写一篇约150字的短文。 Everyone has an experience they would rather forget. Some are embarrassing, some are moving, and some teach us a lesson. Here is a story of mine. Last Sunday I went fishing. After setting up my fishing rod（钓鱼竿） with bait（鱼饵

13、）, I sat down on the bank of the lake. But two hours later, I didnt catch any fish. I got very angry and began to pack up my stuff（收拾东西）, preparing to go back home. Just then, I saw an old man sitting near me. To my surprise, his basket was full of fish, so I went over to him, wanting to know why. “

14、Excuse me, but how long have you sat here?” I asked. “About four hours,” he answered. “Four hours?” I couldnt believe my ears. “Yes. Its very important to be patient,” the old man said. “ Dont consider fishing a tiring sport. Just enjoy it.”阅读下面的短文，然后按要求写一篇约150字的短文。 Everyone has an experience they w

15、ould rather forget. Some are embarrassing, some are moving, and some teach us a lesson. Here is a story of mine. Last Sunday I went fishing. After setting up my fishing rod（钓鱼竿） with bait（鱼饵）, I sat down on the bank of the lake. But two hours later, I didnt catch any fish. I got very angry and began

16、 to pack up my stuff（收拾东西）, preparing to go back home. Just then, I saw an old man sitting near me. To my surprise, his basket was full of fish, so I went over to him, wanting to know why. “Excuse me, but how long have you sat here?” I asked. “About four hours,” he answered. “Four hours?” I couldnt

17、believe my ears. “Yes. Its very important to be patient,” the old man said. “ Dont consider fishing a tiring sport. Just enjoy it.”阅读下面的短文，然后按要求写一篇约150字的短文。 Everyone has an experience they would rather forget. Some are embarrassing, some are moving, and some teach us a lesson. Here is a story of min

18、e. Last Sunday I went fishing. After setting up my fishing rod（钓鱼竿） with bait（鱼饵）, I sat down on the bank of the lake. But two hours later, I didnt catch any fish. I got very angry and began to pack up my stuff（收拾东西）, preparing to go back home. Just then, I saw an old man sitting near me. To my surp

19、rise, his basket was full of fish, so I went over to him, wanting to know why. “Excuse me, but how long have you sat here?” I asked. “About four hours,” he answered. “Four hours?” I couldnt believe my ears. “Yes. Its very important to be patient,” the old man said. “ Dont consider fishing a tiring s

20、port. Just enjoy it.”阅读下面的短文，然后按要求写一篇约150字的短文。 Everyone has an experience they would rather forget. Some are embarrassing, some are moving, and some teach us a lesson. Here is a story of mine. Last Sunday I went fishing. After setting up my fishing rod（钓鱼竿） with bait（鱼饵）, I sat down on the bank of t

21、he lake. But two hours later, I didnt catch any fish. I got very angry and began to pack up my stuff（收拾东西）, preparing to go back home. Just then, I saw an old man sitting near me. To my surprise, his basket was full of fish, so I went over to him, wanting to know why. “Excuse me, but how long have y

22、ou sat here?” I asked. “About four hours,” he answered. “Four hours?” I couldnt believe my ears. “Yes. Its very important to be patient,” the old man said. “ Dont consider fishing a tiring sport. Just enjoy it.”阅读下面的短文，然后按要求写一篇约150字的短文。 Everyone has an experience they would rather forget. Some are e

23、mbarrassing, some are moving, and some teach us a lesson. Here is a story of mine. Last Sunday I went fishing. After setting up my fishing rod（钓鱼竿） with bait（鱼饵）, I sat down on the bank of the lake. But two hours later, I didnt catch any fish. I got very angry and began to pack up my stuff（收拾东西）, pr

24、eparing to go back home. Just then, I saw an old man sitting near me. To my surprise, his basket was full of fish, so I went over to him, wanting to know why. “Excuse me, but how long have you sat here?” I asked. “About four hours,” he answered. “Four hours?” I couldnt believe my ears. “Yes. Its ver

25、y important to be patient,” the old man said. “ Dont consider fishing a tiring sport. Just enjoy it.”阅读下面的短文，然后按要求写一篇约150字的短文。 Everyone has an experience they would rather forget. Some are embarrassing, some are moving, and some teach us a lesson. Here is a story of mine. Last Sunday I went fishing.

26、 After setting up my fishing rod（钓鱼竿） with bait（鱼饵）, I sat down on the bank of the lake. But two hours later, I didnt catch any fish. I got very angry and began to pack up my stuff（收拾东西）, preparing to go back home. Just then, I saw an old man sitting near me. To my surprise, his basket was full of f

27、ish, so I went over to him, wanting to know why. “Excuse me, but how long have you sat here?” I asked. “About four hours,” he answered. “Four hours?” I couldnt believe my ears. “Yes. Its very important to be patient,” the old man said. “ Dont consider fishing a tiring sport. Just enjoy it.”阅读下面的短文，然

28、后按要求写一篇约150字的短文。 Everyone has an experience they would rather forget. Some are embarrassing, some are moving, and some teach us a lesson. Here is a story of mine. Last Sunday I went fishing. After setting up my fishing rod（钓鱼竿） with bait（鱼饵）, I sat down on the bank of the lake. But two hours later,

29、I didnt catch any fish. I got very angry and began to pack up my stuff（收拾东西）, preparing to go back home. Just then, I saw an old man sitting near me. To my surprise, his basket was full of fish, so I went over to him, wanting to know why. “Excuse me, but how long have you sat here?” I asked. “About

30、four hours,” he answered. “Four hours?” I couldnt believe my ears. “Yes. Its very important to be patient,” the old man said. “ Dont consider fishing a tiring sport. Just enjoy it.”阅读下面的短文，然后按要求写一篇约150字的短文。 Suddenly, I understand what he said. I must learn to be patient. Then I sat there and waited

31、for fish patiently. I felt a fish touch the bait, but I didnt move and waited for the right moment to reel it in（卷收钓鱼线）. At last, I caught it. This made me very happy. In the following six hours, I caught over 10 fish. On my way home, I thought what had happened on the bank. I gradually realized tha

32、t the secret of success was patience. Suddenly, I understand what he said. I must learn to be patient. Then I sat there and waited for fish patiently. I felt a fish touch the bait, but I didnt move and waited for the right moment to reel it in（卷收钓鱼线）. At last, I caught it. This made me very happy. I

33、n the following six hours, I caught over 10 fish. On my way home, I thought what had happened on the bank. I gradually realized that the secret of success was patience. Suddenly, I understand what he said. I must learn to be patient. Then I sat there and waited for fish patiently. I felt a fish touc

34、h the bait, but I didnt move and waited for the right moment to reel it in（卷收钓鱼线）. At last, I caught it. This made me very happy. In the following six hours, I caught over 10 fish. On my way home, I thought what had happened on the bank. I gradually realized that the secret of success was patience.

35、Summary 1. Focus on main ideas and omit(省去) examples, details.(注重大意，省去详细的例子、细节) 2. Do not include your own opinion, but be sure to use your own words. .(不能添加自己的见 解，但是要用自己的语言概括） 3. Write it in the third person . （第三人称） 4.Control the number of words about 30.(25- 40个字之内不会造成扣分) 5. How to check the summ

36、ary:看要点看人称看时态看语法看结构2. How to summarize a story:Skill: Combination of five elements要素串联法 WhatWhoWhenWhereResult What to learn(主题) was taught a lesson by an old manthe writer and an old manwhen going fishing last Sundayon the bank of the lakePatience is important.Patience is the secret of success. cau

37、ght some fish套用语句记叙文的摘要开头语:1The passage mainly tells us the writers experience of 2.The writer tells us his experience of 3 The story/passage is about4 The writer/author tells us about.5 The story mainly tells us that主题句 + 支撑句 故事的写作目的/ 主题（一句）+故事大意（两三句） In this passage, the writer mainly tells us his

38、 experience of fishing and was taught an unforgettable lesson by an old man. He knew the importance of patience and finally got some fish.(33 words）my version for the summary过渡句 + 经历 + 观点观点：教育意义、故事告诉我们什么道理，务必要和材料的一致。第三步 正文叙述类似经历过渡句1.This story reminds me of a similar experience of mine.2.I had a sim

39、ilar experience. 3.I once had a similar experience.4. I also had the same experience as the writer. 5.This made me think of my own experience.+引出个人经历的标志性句子：.Once ,I .One day,.On a Sunday morning last summer, . Last year , 第四步 Ending （总结句，呼应主题）总结句开头语：1 To sum up/In short/In conclusion/All in all 总之2.From the above two stories, we can see that+(主题）3.Now, whenever I ，Ill think of + 4 From then on, I All in all, patience is very important.（点题） Everyone should have patience to do everything. My version本文写作框架： The passage mainly tells us the experience of This story reminds m