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1、优秀资料欢迎下载、Conclusion:结论段、建议措施段三至四句(50-55词)：1+2+1总分总1.Concludingsentence:结论句，1句引出重复论点（总结归纳中心句）2.Suggestions：2句两点建议或两句评论3.包装结尾，展望未来/趋势，1句1.Concludingsentence:结论句（1句2.1）总之，我们很有必要从这些发人深省的图画中获得积极的含义。/采取有效措施扭转这些图画中所反映的负面趋势。3.Accordingly,itisimperative/vitalforusto(1)derivepositiveimplicationsfromthesethoug

2、ht-provokingdrawing./4.(2)totakeeffectiveandefficientmeasurestoreversethedisturbingtrendillustratedinthepictures.2）2006：因此，偶像崇拜这一发人深省的社会现象，是能够对年轻人成长产生深远影响的一柄双刃剑。Hence/Therefore,idolworship,thethought-provokingsocialphenomenon,isadouble-edgedswordwhichcanexertprofoundinfluenceonthegrowthofyoungpeople

3、suggestions两点建议或两句评论（2经常提到的几个方面：A.authorities(专家参与）;B.education（增强意识）;C.public;D.media（社会和媒体关注）E.self-effortTobeginwith,relevantlawsandregulationsshouldbemadetoseverelypunishthosewhoplagiarizeothersworks.(法律)Inaddition,weshouldenlighten/educatetheawarenessoftheyoungthatacademichonestyisextremelyvita

4、ltous.(教育2）(2008)Itis,therefore,necessarythateffectivestepsbemadetoadvocatespiritofsupportingeachother.Tobeginwith,thegovernmentshouldmakelawstoencouragepeopletounite.Inaddition,peopleshouldenhancetheawarenessofcaringeachotherespeciallywhentheyareintrouble.包装结尾，展望未来（1）倒装句2）强调句3）虚拟语气(1)2002：只有这样我们才能积

5、极发展民族文化，并使我们的世界丰富多元、多姿多彩、充满活力。Onlyinthiswaycanwepromoteculturaldevelopmentpositivelyandmakeourworld优秀资料欢迎下载dimensional,colorfulandvigorous(2)2003:只有在逆境中经历更多的挑战和磨练，他们才能培养出坚强的个性和优秀的能力OnlybyundergoingmorechallengesandtoilsinadversitycanyoungpeoplecultivatestrongpersonalityandabilityOnlywhenoureyeshaveb

6、eenwashedbytearscanwehaveabroaderfieldofvision.强调句总而言之，只有长期学习才有助于你掌握大量词汇inconclusion,itispersistentworkthatisconduciveto(对。有利）yourgraspingaconsiderablevocabulary。虚拟语气Itishightimethatweplacedgreatemphasisonthisphenomenon.008积极寓义Accordingly,itisimperativeforustotakesomemeasurestoenhancethesenseofteamw

7、orkinoursociety.Weshouldbearinmindthatteamworkisofgreatsignificancetobothoursocietyandourselves.Everyoneshouldhavetheabilityofteamwork.Onlyinthiswaycanweachievesuccessandonlyinthiswaycanoursocietybecomemoreharmonioustolivein.(05年)(中心句)Therefore,itisimperativeforustotakedrasticmeasures.(两个建议)Tobeginw

8、ith,relevantlawsandregulationsshouldbemadetoseverelypunishthosewhoshuntheresponsibilitiesofcaringtheirparents.Inaddition,wehavetocultivatetheawarenessoftheyoungthatrespectingtheoldhasalwaysbeenthetraditionalvirtueofChineseculture.(结论句)Onlyinthiswaycanwecurbthecurrentevilphenomenonrevealedinthepictur

9、e.08年）(结论中心句)Onthebasisoftheanalysisabove,wemaydrawaconclusionthatcooperationandteamworkreallycountinthiscompetitivesociety.(两个建议)Hence,weshouldassociateourselvesharmoniouslywithourcompanionsineveryattempttowardsourgoals.Inaddition,itisindispensabletotrainourkidsfrequentlytointeractsmoothlywithother

10、sinateam.(结论句)Astheproverbgoes,unityisstrength.1.总共写十七个句子.第一段四个句子,第一句宏观描述图画,并谈图画看似可笑但发人深思.第二句写出图画最强烈的视觉效果,第三句是主题句,谈用二十个单词的爆发力句型谈该现象对个人的发展和进步有破坏性,并引发思考,第四句是用贬义词批判这个现象是强烈的指责。(1)Asisvividlydepictedinthepicture,，whichseemstobehumorousandridiculousbutthought-provokingonsecondthoughts.(2)Themoststrikingfe

11、aturethatimpressesmedeeplyisthatunbelievably,，(3)Recentfewyearshaswitnessedaphenomenonof主题whichseemstobedisastroustoindividualsurvivalandprosperity.(4)Thisphenomenonof主题shouldbecondemnedseverelyormadeillegal.(5)Thereisnodoubtthatitssymbolicmeaningsubtlyconveyedshouldbegivendeepconsideration.中间段落从两方面

12、论证问题的危害，并举例论证，预测危害的趋势优秀资料欢迎下载第二段七个句子,首先第一句从宏观上谈这种现象的总的有两到三个点危害或者原因,第二句谈这个现象的第一个危害,用“notonly,butalso”的五星级句子,通常是谈对个人身心健康的危害性,第三个句子谈第二个危害,通常是用一个豪华级的比较级的句子,让老师耳目一新,通常是谈这个现象对社会的危害.第四个句子谈对家庭或学校的危害.第五个句子谈一个代替“forexample”的十五个单词的好句子,意思是说没有更好的例子来证明正如下文.第六个句子是例子群体的出现,谈根据一项调查表明,80%以上的人只要从事经历过这个消极的现象一定会对个人在精神和生活

13、上有危害.最后一句话是预测趋势的二十五个单词的钻石级的句子,谈以下预测趋势,表明这种现象再这样下去,就会导致恶劣的结果出现,甚至是毁灭性的后果。(1)Toaccountfortheabove-mentionedphenomenon,severalseriouseffectshavebeenputforward.(2)Tobeginwith,主题notonlyresultsdoesharmtoourphysicalandmentalhealthbutalsoresultsinafrustratingandhumiliatinglife.(3)Inaddition,nothingismorehar

14、mfulthan主题tocontradictwithaharmonioussociety.(4)Lastbutnottheleast,noissueisasharmfulas主题toincreasefamilyburdens,whichisathreateningsituationweareunwillingtosee.(5)Nobetterillustrationofthisideacanbethoughtthantheexamplementionedbelow.(6)AccordingtoasurveymadebyChinaDaily,63.93%ofyoungpeoplewhohavee

15、verexperienced主题willliveadulllifeorevenfeellossofhopeaboutthefuture.(7)Ifwecannottakeusefulmeans,wemaynotcontrolthistrend,andsomeundesirableresultsmaycomeoutunexpectedly,wewillseethegloomyfutureofsomething.最后一段要强调解决问题，谈的两点建议通常是提高人们的意识，加强执法第三段六个句子,第一个句子是下个结论,谈解决问题的必要性.第二个句子是第一个建议谈的是加强立法惩治这个现象,第三个句子谈提

16、高人们的觉悟关于着这个现象能提高人们对这个现象的觉悟.第四个句子谈个谚语,谈一下实践我的建议的重要性.五个句子谈解决的任重道远.第六个句子是解决问题之后的美好的未来。(1)Fromwhathavebeendiscussedabove,itistherefore,necessarythatsomeeffectivemeasuresaretakentoprevent主题.(2)Ontheonehand,weshouldbesensibletostrengthentheenforcementofthelawstoprotectsomething.(3)Ontheotherhand,itisdeman

17、dingforustokeeppeopleawareoftheimportanceofsavingsomebodyoutoftheevilhandsofdestruction.(4)However,itiseasiersaidthandone.(5)Althoughthefightagainstitislong-standingandtremendousone,oureffortswilleventuallypayoff.(6)Onlywhenyouattentiontoitcanyouseeacolorfulandharmoniousfuturebettersoonerorlater.2.积

18、极有利型的文章文章以团队精神为例子第一段谈的是三个句子,第一,二个句子都是在描述图画,第三句子这个现象对社会发展的积极的现象,第四个句子是图画简单,寓意深刻.(1)Asisvividlydepictedinthepicture,(描述图画).(2)Themoststrikingfeatureis(图画重点信息).(3)Thereisnodoubtthatitssymbolicmeaningsubtlyconveyedshouldbegivendeepconsideration.第二个段子,第一个句子谈一个十二个单词的爆发力的主题句,第二个句子谈这个现象的永恒的社会含义,用一个三十五个单词的钻石

19、级的排比句子,谈只要有这个现象就可以让我们不优秀资料欢迎下载断有意义的事情,征服挑战和竞争,并最后走向成功.第三个可以从反面谈如果没有这个积极现象,人们生活就忧闷,有挫折感,无前进动力,前途渺茫.第四个句子谈有两个大的好处.第五个句子谈第一个好处,通常是让生活丰富,有效率.再谈第二个好处通常是谈一些个人发展或社会进步的好处.第五个句子是代替forexample的五星级的句子.第六个是具体的举例子,谈根据一项调查表明,80%的人只要利用这个积极的现象就容易改变人生,提高素质.也可以单独举个性例子,第七个句子是倒装句子谈只有这个现象才能让我们成为社会的成功者(1)Asissymbolicallyr

20、evealedinthesetofdrawings,thefactthat(重复上面的图画信息)profoundlyindicatesthatteamworkismomentous(重要的)andfundamentaltoanyonewhoundertakesgreatdeeds.(2)Undoubtedly,itisteamworkthatkeepsuscontinuallydoingsomethingvaluableandadmirableinspiteofdifficulty,thatmakesusstillfullofenergytofacethecomingchallengesand

21、competitionandthatoffersusthefoundationforthecomingsuccess.(3)Ifwedonnotcooperatesincerely,wewillliveadullanddepressinglifeandfeelfrustratedandhumiliatedorfeellossofhopeaboutthefuture.(4)AsfarasIamconcerned,thereareseveraladvantagesthatcanbegivenasbelow.Tobeginwith,nothingismorebeneficialthanteamwor

22、ktoovercomeourdefectsandimproveourefficiency.(5)Secondly,noissueisasgoodasteamworktomakeourlifemorecolorfulandenergetic.(6)Nobetterillustrationofthisideacanbethoughtthantheexamplementionedbelow.(7)Apersonwhoisassignedvariousjobsalongtheproductionlineswillmakeamessjustbecausenoonecanbeproficientinallthethings.(8)Onlybycooperatingwithotherpeoplecanyouputyourcapacitiesintofullplayandcanyoub