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1、认准自己的优势Be proud of what you can do!12015-3-9装X犯!2015-3-9装X犯!2015-3-9装X犯!2015-3-9装X犯!博物馆的功能he past, the majority ofmuseums weresolemn plafor visitors to gain deeperunderstanding of the history, culture,technology and so on. Nowadays, museumsare not quite the same. They areingmore enjoyable and entert

2、aining, which hassparked controversy over the purmuseums.e of2015-3-9装X犯!发展中国家如何变富有结尾段:y opinion, despite thecompanies, I strongly besible risks of inviting foreignving foreign investmentveis a better method to get rid of poverty for a develocountry. What theernment should consider is to limit thenu

3、mber of foreign companies and the quality of theirinvestment projects.62015-3-9装X犯!主语多样化1. 人称具体名词与中文相通;2. 动名词作为主语一定要出现;3. It is 形容词 to do.别让初中老师骂你;4. 抽象名词有可能一辈子都学不会!72015-3-9装X犯!1). Advocate-支持者 和 Opponent-者Advocates of gun control legislation arguet gun control laws reducethe incidence of violent c

4、rimes by reducing the prevalence of firearms.Opponents of any kind of gun restrictions arguet they are meaningless,since criminals by definition dont follow the law, and therefore wont allow gun laws to hamstring their criminal behavior.2). Enthusiast-热爱者, Participant-参与者, Fan-粉丝, Fancier-者Enthusias

5、ts of extreme sports are able to experience unique and unusualexcitementt can never be provided by so-called safe sports.Young participants of community serviare more likely to beindependenthinking and acting.82015-3-9装X犯!3). Consumer-消费者, Customer-顾客, User-使用者, Subscriber-用户(电话/订阅), Reader-读者, Buy者

6、urchaser-4). Viewer-观众, Specor-(现观众场), Moviegoer-去看的人,Museum goer-博物馆参观者5). Tourist-游客, Visitor-参观者, Traveler-旅行者, Trekker-远途旅行者, Hiker-徒步旅行者, Backpacker-背包旅行者6). educationalist-教育学家, educator-老师, sociologist-社会学家, zoologist-动物学家, environmentalist- 环保economist-92015-3-9装X犯!7). Resident-居民, Dweller-居

7、住者, Citizen-城市/国家公民, Inhabitant-常住居民8). Worker-工作者, Employee-雇员, Profes Job-hopper-跳槽的人, Superior-al-专业, Job-seeker-求职者,9). Student-学生, Pupil-年纪偏小的学生, Learner-学习者, Graduate-毕业生,Undergraduate-大学在读,在读e flexibletgraduate-Learning a foreign language allows learners to grow variable in expressing.hinking

8、 and10). Donator-捐赠者, Giver-给予者, Recipient-接受者,11). Optimist-乐观者, Pessimist-悲观主义者, Activist-积极分子, Skeptic-怀疑者,者Challenger-102015-3-9装X犯!动名词主语1). Smoking is harmful to peoples health. 初中生2). Studying abroad opens doors to a totally different culture.-高中生3). Working at home allows people to spend time

9、 better fitting their individual conditions.4). Employingelligent robot workers brings down cost of production.5). Living a low carbon life meanst people have to sacrifice theconvenience and comfortheir daily life.112015-3-9装X犯!6). Allowing employees to have longer vacations is benefi maain a close

10、family bond.l for them to7). Allowing children the freedom to make decis is helpful to fe an parents and children. 话唠good relationship bet8). Employing the same proportion of men and women seems to be an effective method to diminish gender discrimination. 避免重复9). Educating children to understand the

11、 importance of obeying ruleshe home. 只能意会always begins10). Being able to support your reasons and ideas with details is helpful to. 必须学会leave a good impres122015-3-9装X犯!It is 形容词1). 基本入门结构:It is 形容词 to do .It is common for young adults to live withtheir parents.It is notelectronic devimon to see peo

12、ple use theirall day long.2015-3-9装X犯!2). 复杂一点:It is 形容词/名词t 句子It is common knowledgeto harmful consequent drug abuse leads.Young children are full of curiosity, so it is notsurprisingt their parents make many rulesto restrict their behavior.142015-3-9装X犯!3). 再复杂一点:It is 过去分词t 句子It is sometimes argu

13、edt foreign touristsshould be charged more when visiting historicand cultural attractions.It is frequently suggestednot be given any money.t children should152015-3-9装X犯!抽象名词主语popular - popularitypoor poverty happy happiness similar similarity different difference difficult difficulty various a vari

14、ety of illiterate illiteracy unable inability162015-3-9装X犯!进化过程A: More and more people choose to readonline.B: Reading online ispopular.ing increasinglyC: The popularity of reading online has beenincreasing.172015-3-9装X犯!练习:越来越少的人写传统书信。A:字面翻译B:There be句型C:用popularD:用popularityE:用there be结合popularity

15、2015-3-9装X犯!A:Fewer and feweople write traditional letters.B:There are fewer and few letters.eople who write traditionalC:Writing traditional letters is popular.ing less and lessD:The popularity of writing traditional letters has been declining.E:There has been a decline letters.he popularity of tra

16、ditional2015-3-9装X犯!第二大类: What do you think are the causes? What solutions do you suggest?t should be responsible1. I thinkfor this.t is/are to blame.2. I thinkt should take major3. I thinkresponsibility.202015-3-9装X犯!结构分析1. 第一段只需要将原题给出的现象进行改写即可,千万不要瞎扯自己一知半解的背景,更不要一上来就把话题和中国绑在一起。第一段的t should be resp

17、onsible for this. 空格里的内最后一句:I think容认真准确填充。-3040词注意:如果不能熟练使用这句话,那就开始背句子吧 这篇文章将会分析可能的原因并且一些解决方案会被提出。2. 第二段自然是把前面已经总结好的原因逐步打开。一般给出两个原因,按照从简单到复杂的顺序:On a simplistic level, Furthermore 这两个短语分别放在两个原因的最前面,形成清晰的递进逻辑。切记:讲解原因的过程也是陈述事实的过程,千万不要让抽象的概念占了主要成分。-100150词212015-3-9装X犯!第三段的任务是提出切实可行的解决方案。重点在于要根据前面给出的原因

18、来解决问题,否则会被判为逻辑断裂。第三段的第一句话很重要,需要写出承上启下的出色过渡句。-80100词第四段的任务是总结整篇文章的内容,因此不需要在这一段展开新的3040词。-222015-3-9装X犯!2015-3-9犯2015-3-9装X犯!参考范文1). Poor student behavior seems to be an increasingly widespreadproblem and I think this.t modern lifestyles are probably responsible for2).any countries, the birth rate is

19、decreasing sot famis aresmaller with fewer children. These children are often spoilt, notermsof love and attention because working parents do nove the time forthis, butore material ways. They are allowed to have whatever theywant, regardless of price, and to behave as they please. This meanstthe chi

20、ldren grow up withoonsideration for others and without anyunderstanding of where their standard of living comes from. When they get to school age they have not learnt any self-control or discipline. Theyhave less respect for their teachers and refuse to obey school ruleshewayt their parents did.2520

21、15-3-9装X犯!3). Teachers continually complain about this problem andmeasures should be taken to combat the situation. But I thinkthe solution to the problems with the famis, who needto be more aware of the future consequenof spoiling theirchildren. If they could raise them to be more considerate ofoth

22、ers and to be sol, responsible individuals, the wholecommunity would benefit.4). Perhaps parenting classes are needed to help them to do this, and high quality nursery schools should be establishedt would support famis moreerms of raising the nextgeneration. Theernment should fund this kind of paren

23、talsupport, because this is no longer a problem for individualfamis, but for society as a whole.262015-3-9装X犯!学生作品参考Lack of acquaance with neighbors is now beved as a common solphenomenon and I thinkt modern technologies and stressful workingconditions should be probably responsible for this.High De

24、finitioneviwith diversified programs and high speednetwork connection to theernet consume a great deal of spare timerathern talk to people living next doors. TV Series, talk shows, andtalent competition program distracts people from sol activities.Immersing in online games or mobile applications, on

25、 the other hand, has been changing the focus on surroundings to screens. Due to the popularity of the sol media, it is far more convenient to communicatethrough high-tech devin face-to-faceeraction. Swingers are instead of sharing this goodlikely tot their new car photos onnews to their neighbors.27

26、2015-3-9装X犯!Despite these electronic factors, the high prere working competitioncauses employees toe conscious of the demand for saving theiritions, which is thon why overtime working are more commonandal time has been shortened . Espelly, the increasing numberof two-career couples indicatest feweop

27、le are at home during thedaytime, which leaves them less time to meet their neighbors.The absence of communication anderaction betn neighbors is aworrying trend, so measures should be taken to combat the situation.Community events among neighbors, such as a competition of the best decorated houses f

28、or Christmas, or a small gardener skills and information exchange could be held to help people to know each other. It is also theernments responsibilities to reduce the unemployment rate and support compulsory paid leaves, in order to rise the staying home time.282015-3-9装X犯!In, although the shift f

29、rom atraditional way of living to a modern lifestyleis unstoppable, I still bevet people livinghe same neighborhood should get to knoweach other as much as before. This is important not only to individuals but the society as a whole.292015-3-9装X犯!第一段:痛快改写原题+准确回答问题1). 原题:The average weight of general

30、population has been increasing.改:any countries, there has been a risehe average weight of a considerableproportion of people. I thinkt exsiveconsumption of unhealthy food and sedentarylifestyle are to blame.302015-3-9装X犯!2). 原题:The importance of environmentalprotection has been widely realized, but

31、very few people are making contribution to this goal.改:Although it is known by the majority of peoplet saving the earth is critically important, only a tiny proportion of them are taking real actions tomake the world better. I thinkare responsible for this.t modern lifestyles312015-3-9装X犯!3). 原题:any

32、 countries schools havesevere problems with student behavior.改: Poor student behavior seems to be anincreasingly widespreroblem and I thinkt modern lifestyles are probablyresponsible for this.322015-3-9装X犯!4). 原题:There are some activitiest are harmfulto peoples health, but they are still popular wit

33、hmany people. What do you think are the causes? What solutions do you suggest?改:It is common senset activities like smokingcigarettes or staying up late result in healthproblems. Unfortunay, a considerable proportionof people are still obsessed with them.y opinion,modern lifestyles should be respons

34、ible for this.2015-3-9装X犯!5). 原题:More and more young people are notwilling to work as a teacher.What do you think arethe causes? What solutions do you suggest?改:The willingness/desire to take a teaching jobhas been declining among young adults.yopinion, modern education should be responsible forthis

35、.2015-3-9装X犯!哪些东西可以为此负责?1. modern lifestyles2. technological progress3. sedentary lifestyle4. perere5. media influence6. the pursuit of a quality life7. exsive consumption of unhealthy food8. inability to resist various tempions9. unwillingness to sacrifice their cozy lives2015-3-9装X犯!原因分析句型参考1). On

36、e of the reasons why people do not go to museums is t 2). The other reason why people rarely visit a museum ist .3). The increase/decrease in obesity is due to the lack of exercise.4). A leading reason behind the widening wealth gap ist 5). Sedentary lifestyle of modern people has contributed a lot

37、to the declining level of health.6). Living a low-carbon life meanst people have to sacrifice most of thecomfort and convenienceheir everyday life, which is the reason whymost of people are unwilling to take earth-saving actions.362015-3-9装X犯!Idea+supportThe other reason why people do not know about

38、 theirneighbours ist communication through high technologydevifaceis far more convenient anderestingn face-to-eraction with theliving next door. For exle,instant communication apps connect people across the worldtogether sot they can talk about some hot topics or sharetheir photos taken recently whe

39、never they want. If you cando all the communication in your bedroom, why would you bother to leave the house and knock at your neighbors door?2015-3-9装X犯!解决方案段过渡句1). The absence of communication anderaction betnneighbors is a worrying trend, so measures should be taken tocombat this situation.2). Me

40、rely limiting the population of big cities cannot be the solution to this problem, because peoples pursuit to live a quality life will not just disappear. Instead, every effort shouldbe made by theernment toward narrowing the gapbetn rural and urban regions.3). The rise iage weight of teral populati

41、on isusually followed by a series of problems, such as adding tofinanl burden of theernment administration. Therefore,measures should be taken to combat this situation.382015-3-9装X犯!解决问题句型1). One of the solutions to this problems with theparents who must be more aware of the importance to spare some

42、 time for their children.2). An effective strategy to deal with this problem ist theernment should encourage young adultsto start their own businesses after leaving school.3). Also, byanizing entertaining and appealingactivities, residents are highly likely to get involved.For exle, 4). Besides, wha

43、t young adults shoulds to lowertheir career expecions onto a reasonable level sot their employability can be grey increased.392015-3-9装X犯!合理的结尾段1). In, although the shift from a traditional way ofliving to a modern lifestyle is unstoppable, I still bevetpeople livinghe same neighborhood should get t

44、o knoweach other as much as before.2). Inimmedia, measures proed above should be takeny to minimize the adverse effects of increasingjuvenile delinquency. This is no longer a problem forindividual fami3). Ins, but the society as a whole., the sooner human beings bego takeactions, the fewer species w

45、ill disappear from the earth.Therefore, measures proed above should be takenimmediay to minimize the adverse effects of massiveextinction of living creatures.402015-3-9装X犯!练习题目-自选Today, many people know little about their neighbors.1.2.The importance of environmental protection has beenwidely realiz

46、ed, but very few people are making contribution to this goal.3.The average weight of general population has beenincreasing.4. The number of species of living creatures has beendecreasing ralyhe last century.2015-3-9装X犯!第三类题目:好处多还是坏处多?Do you think it is adevelopment?或者itive or negativeDo you think th

47、e advantages outweigh thedisadvantages?中国学生最善长的题目,所以一定要拿分!422015-3-9装X犯!结构分析:貌似2:2,其实有偏向(可以在结尾偏向,也可以在中心段体现偏向)1). 改写原题或者描述和题目相符的事实,然后给出自己的观点 (可以偏向/也可以既有好也有坏)4050词2). 一方面,好处的描述。一般两个论据。-90100词3). 另一方面坏处的描述。一般两个论据。-90100词4). 强调自己的偏向。-多少词都行432015-3-9装X犯!范文1). Traditionally, children have begun studying f

48、oreign languages atsecondary school, butroducing them earr ismended by someeducationalists. This policy has been adopted by some educationalauthorities or individual schools, with both es.itive and negative2). The obvious argument in its favour ist young children pick uplanguages muore easilyn teena

49、gers. Their brains are stillprogrammed to acquire their mother tongue, which facilies learning another language, and unlike adolescents, they are not inhibited by self- consciousness. The greater flexibility of the primary timetable allows formore frequent, shorter sess and for a play-centred approa

50、ch, thusmaaining learners enthusiasm and progress. Theird of thelanguage in later life will benefit from this early exure, while learningother languagebsequently will be easier for them. They may also gaina better understanding of other cultures.442015-3-9装X犯!3). There are, however, some disadvantag

51、es. Primary school teachers aregeneralists, and may nove the nesary language skills themselves. Ifspelists have to be broughtiver these sess, the flexibilityreferred to above is diminished. If primary language teaching is notstandardized, secondary schools could be faced wigreat variety oflevels in

52、different languages withheirake, resulting in a classroomexperience whicdoes the earr gains. There is no advantage ifenthusiastic primary pupilse demotivated as soon as they changeschools. However, these i policy adopted.es can be addressed strategically withhe4). Anything which encourages language

53、learning benefits societyculturally and economically, and early exure to language learningcontributes to this. Young childrens innate abilities should be harnessed to make these benefits more achievable.452015-3-9装X犯!第一段:改写笼统回答原题:Some people thinkt visiting amuseum should be free of charge. Do youth

54、ink the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?462015-3-9装X犯!改写1:There areing views onwhether museums should charge admisfees or not.have bothy opinion, this policy woulditive and negativees.t museumsy改写2:It is frequently arguedshould charge no admisfees.opinion, this policy would have bothitiveand n

55、egativees.472015-3-9装X犯!改写3:he UK, it is free of charge to visitthe Great British Museum and the NaturalHistory Museum. Also,any othercountries, some museums charge noadmisfees.y opinion, this policyitive and negativewould have bothes.482015-3-9装X犯!好坏句型1). One obvious argument against/in favor of hosting the Olympic Gamesist People against/in favor of giving children money arg

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