高中英语 外研版-B3U6-第6课时-writing-Disaster and hope Writing 课件

1、2021年春季深圳市线上课程高一英语深圳市教育科学研究院教学教材：外研版高中英语新教材必修第三册教学内容：Unit 6 Disaster and Hope第六课时：Writing Safety Guidelines执教人：黄文琪/深圳市沙井中学Feb 23, 2021Learning Obejectives In the end of this class, you will be able to:1. learn about the purpose and language features of writing safety guidelines.2. pay attention to a

2、nd master the structure and useful expressions of safety guidelines.3. write a flood safety guidelines by using the structure, language features and useful expressions. Recall how dangerous Hurricane Katrina is. Lead-inRetell the story I was sitting in the room with my cat 1. the hurricane hit. All

3、of 2. sudden, our roof flew off and I was so 3. (frighten) that I just 4. (freeze). Without a roof, 5. (stay) inside was dangerous, so we came to the open air. Mom told us to keep positive 6. happens. She kept on reminding us that we were all together and safe, 7. is the most important. We lay under

4、 the sky looking up at the stars, and the 8. (amaze) stars at night gave us hope for the future. 9. (thank), we were rescued a few days later. Now we have rebuilt our homes and lives, and the 10. (beautiful) of the stars still inspires us to move on.Lead-inwhenafrightenedfrozewhichamazingThankfullyb

5、eautywhatever stayingHurricanes can be deadly and cost billions of dollars. Its important to review hurricane safety tips early and often during the hurricane season. Pre-writing1 What is the purpose of safety guidelines?To increase readers chances of surviving a natural disaster.2 What type of lang

6、uage is used in safety guidelines?The language is concise and simple, with many imperative sentences as tips.Language features:Pre-writingUse the present tense. Safety guidelines mainly express the precautions(注意事项) in daily work, study and life.Use imperative sentences. Safety guidelines are mainly

7、 used for requirements or precautions for event participants.Use simple sentences. The sentences used must be concise and clear, mainly short and single sentences, which can help the reader understand better. Narrative characteristics:Pre-writingDescribe the precautions hierarchically (分层) by catego

8、ry .Each item is expressed in one or more sentences, so that the level is clear. When listing the information points, arrange them in order of detailed, category, and time to determine what to write first and what to write next. When expressing in words, it must be clear.Title 开头(beginning)分析遇到的危险主体

9、1(body1)介绍危险来临前的各种准备主体2(body2)危险中的各种应对措施主体3(body3)写出危险中不应该做的Useful expressions1. Organize personnel protection. 组织人员防护2. Move to a safe place. 转移到安全地带3. Avoid walking on banks and bridges 避免在岸边和桥上行走4. Pay attention when walking in water. 在积水中行走要注意观察。5. Get off the high hill. 从高山上下来6. Dont climb the

10、trees when there is lightning.闪电时不要爬树。7. Cover your mouth and nose with wet clothes or towel. 用湿的衣物或毛巾捂住口鼻8. Hold your head quickly. 迅速抱住头部9. Send the poisoned or burned person to hospital. 将中毒或烧伤人员送医院救治Pre-writingBeginning1. If you are trapped in the flood what will you do to help yourself?如果你被困在洪水

11、中，你该怎么做来自救？2.If you find somewhere around you is on fire, how will you escape safely?如果你发现周围的某个地方着火了，你怎么安全逃生？3. When there is an earthquake, you must obey the following rules to keep yourself safe.如果发生地震，你必须遵循以下规则来保证自己的安全。Pre-writingBody1. Attention should be paid to prevent smoke poisoning, prevent

12、 suffocation. 要注意防止烟雾中毒，预防窒息。2. When opening a room door, touch the door with the back of your hand first， see whether it is hot. 开房间门时，先用手背接触房门，看是否发热。3. When you cant escape, dont hide in the attic or closet. 当无路可逃时，不要藏在顶楼或者壁橱等地方。4. Learn more self-rescue common sense in advance. 提前学会更多的自救常识。Pre-wr

13、itingConclusion1. Helping those who are in need is making a great difference. 帮助需要帮助的人让这个世界大不同。2. Keep in mind that you should keep calm and dont panic. 要记住保持冷静不要慌乱。Pre-writingTransition wordsto begin with, firstly, first of all, above all, at first, in the first place.secondly, in addition, then, b

14、esides, moreover, whats more, furthermore, later on, soon, afterwards, soon after that, in particular. finally, at last, in the end, last but not leastPre-writing Flood is one of the most dangerous natural disasters. It may come suddenly and sweep away everything. It is important to learn some safet

15、y guidelines and get prepared for a flood, especially for those living near a river. Here are some tips on flood safety. While-writing Flood safety guidelines1. Think what we should do before the flood, what to do and not to do during the flood.2. Make notes for the safety guidelines.While-writing N

16、ow write your safety guidelines. (15 minutes)Use the expressions in the box to help you.While-writing Writing Criterion:Correct tense -present tense Proper format (structure, language)Rich expressions (various, proper)Beautiful handwritingContent Criterion: Things to do before the disaster Things to

17、 do during the disaster Things not to do during the disasterSelf-revising according to following criterion: Post-writing The first thing to do is listen to the weather warnings. Move to a safe place immediately if there is an order.Prepare enough food and clean water. Remember to prepare a safeguard

18、 and a first aid kit.Try to move to a place high enough to keep clear of floodwater, like the top floor, the roof,etc.Hold to a tree or a wood block if you are in water.keep clear of kip kl(r) v v. 不接触 Keep away from electricity.Do not drink floodwater as it is dangerous.Do not take too many persona

19、l belongings with you .Never give up hope.Flood is one of the most dangerous natural disasters. It may come suddenly and sweep away everything. It is important to learn some safety guidelines and get prepared for a flood, especially for those living near a river. Here are some tips on flood safety.

20、Things to do before a flood: The first thing to do is listen to the weather warnings. Move to a safe place immediately if there is an order. Prepare enough food and clean water. Remember to prepare a safeguard and a first aid kit. Things to do during a flood: Try to move a place high enough to keep clear of floodwarter, such as the top floor of a building, the roof, etc. Hold to a tree or a wood block if you are in water. It is important