英语中考英语书面表达技巧和方法及练习题

1、（英语）中考英语书面表达技巧和方法完整版及练习题一、英语书面表达1 .近日，某中学“iPa进课堂”的消息引起了学生和家长们的讨论。你们学校的EnglishNewsletter正在以iPads, coming into the classrooms为题举行征文活动，请根据右侧表格提 示的内容，用英语写一篇征文。学生们认为.不需要背沉重的书包去上学.很新鲜，学习更感兴趣.家长们认为.影响孩子视力.增加家庭负担你的观点1.2.注意:1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；2）所写内容必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，观点可作适当发挥;3）词数：90词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；4）不得使用真实姓名、校

2、名和地名等。iPads, coming into the classroomsCan you use an iPad in the classroom? The answer is yes! Recently, students and parents are arguing about the new teaching method.【答案】iPads, coming into the classroomsCan you use an iPad in the classroom? The answer is yes! Recently, students and parents are ar

3、guing about the new teaching method.The students don t think they have to carry heavy bags any more. It s cool to have lessons oveiPads. It s Werysting to study like that. They believe that they will learn more and better.However,parents think using ipads for too long will influence children s eyesi

4、ght. And some pfamilies can t afford to buy iPads.I think in some ways iPads are good for us. We can search for information on the Internet at any time. It s easy for us to chat with our classmates and teachers about our lessons.【解析】根据题目要求，需要书写一篇议论文，探讨iPad进课堂这一现象，以及人们对此的不同观点和态度。文章需要使用一般现在时态，第三人称。结合观

5、点式议论文的段落格 式，首先在第一段提出问题现象，第二段表达支持这种行为做法的原因和好处，第三段描述反对人的观点及原因，最后一段表达自己的观点。注意多使用固定短语，固定句型，使 文章增色。点睛：对立观点式第一段：提出现象。第二段： Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X.They point out the fact that 支持 X 的第个原因。 They also argue that 支持 X 的另个原因。第三段： However, other people stand on a different ground.They con

6、sider it harmful to do X.They firmly point out that 反X 的第个理由。 An example can give the details of this argument: 一个例子。第四段： There is some truth in both arguments.But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages.In addition to the abovementioned negative effects it might bring about, X also

7、may X 的有个 坏处。.书面表达在本周班会课上，同学们对初中生什么时候放学比较合适？”这一问题进行了热烈的讨论。大部分同学认为初中生应该在5点左右放学，下表所列里大家的发言记录。请你写篇短文介绍大家的想法并阐述你的观点。Time to leave schoolActivities to do after schoolat 5 o clock at 4:45at 5 o clock .exercise to keep healthy and read books do what we want, such as listening to music take a part-time job.

8、注意：(1)短文必须包括表格中所有要点，并适当发挥；(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；(3)词数：80-100;(4)短文开头仅供参考，不计入总词数。Thisaweek w“This week we have held a短文开头：“What time should junior high school students leave school?held a class meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion.【答案】What time should junior high school students

9、 leave school?class meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion.Most students think that students should leave school at about 5 o clock. They can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after school.Some think that students should leave school at 4:45, because th

10、ey can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to music.A few think 5 o clock is the best time to finish school. After school, they can do part-time jobs, such as collecting discarded plastic bottles to sell for money.I am in favor of leaving school at five oclock. Besides havin

11、g time to play tennis, I can also draw some pictures I like.【解析】 【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如 hold a class meeting , talk about , the result of , keep healthy , after school , have more time to do , want to do , such as, listen to music , in favor of, clean the room , play tennis 等。而复杂并歹U结构They c

12、anexercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after school. 和 Most students think that students should leave school at about 5 o clock./ Some think that students should leave school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to music.等复杂从句结构的运

13、用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化；同时 Most students think/ Some think / A few thfek述条理，层次分明，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总 结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有 条理。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理 后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要 尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得 到较高的分数。.书面表达假如你是九年级学生李华，你的美国笔友Billy发来邮件询问你平时

14、锻炼的情况。请你根据以下信息，给Billy回封电子邮件，并建议他每周都要花些时间锻炼身体。写作要点：.你最近正忙于为即将到来的体育测试( physical test)做准备。.介绍你平时锻炼的情况：(1)每天锻炼的时间：不到一个半小时。(2)偶尔不锻炼的原因：作业多，没时间。(3)擅长的体育运动：球类运动。.谈谈锻炼给你带来了哪些好处。 写作要求：.不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。.可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。.字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清晰。.至少80词。Dear Billy,It s my great pleasure to receive yourreail.Best wi

15、shes!Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Billy,It s my great pleasure to receive yourreail. You wanted to know about my usual exercise. I ll tellit to you.I am busy preparing for the coming physical test. So I take exercise less than an hour every day.Sometimes I don t do exercise, because I have so much homework

16、that I have no time to do it. I do well in playing balls.Doing exercise can help me keep a strong body, and it is good for my health. Besides, I think it can make me relaxed by doing exercise. So I advise you to spend more time doing exercise every week.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，给 Bi

17、lly回封电子邮件，介绍自己平时的锻炼情况，并建议他每周都 要花些时间锻炼身体。【详解】结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I ambusy ； because I have Doing exercise can help , So I advise you to等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关 系。【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头表示很高兴收到Billy的来信，接下来介绍我平时的锻炼情况，最后指出锻炼给我带来的好处以及我建

18、议Billy要多锻炼。此处be busy doing sth,prepare for, do well in, be good for, advise sb to do sth 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。4.（题文）书面表达在中学生机器人大赛上，出现了一种专门照顾老人的新型家用智能机器人，它的主要功能 有：.定时做饭、洗衣服；2.陪老人聊天、下棋、做运动；3.处理紧急情况（如：拨打 120）假如你是该机器人的发明者，请你介绍这个产品，并谈谈你的未来设想。要求：1.意思连贯，语句通顺；.词数80词左右；短文的开头已给出（不计入总词数）.参考词汇：at a fixed time 定时eme

19、rgency 紧急情况 ccompany sb. 陪伴某人 Ladies and gentlemen,Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I to introduddiky new invention to all of you. 【答案】 Ladies and gentlemen,Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I d like to introduce my new invention to all of you.I invented the new robot mainly to

20、help the elderly at home. It can cook meals and do some washing at a fixed time. When old people feel alone, it can also accompany them by having a chat, playing chess or doing exercise. What s more, it can deal with some emergencies. For example, ifan old man falls ill suddenly, the robot will call

21、 doctors immediately for help.I m sure my new invention will be a great help to the elderly. I think in the future people will live a more comfortable life with the help of new robots.【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如thank you for doing , I d like to dointroduce sb. to , all of you , at ho

22、me , do some washing , at a fixed time , have a chat, play chess, do exercise, deal with , a great help , in the future 等。而 Thank you for attending our robot show./ I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. / I think in the future people will live a more comfortable life with the

23、help of new robots.等非谓语动词和复杂从句的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化，是本文的 最大凫点。点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容 经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要 点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构 以便得到较高的分数。.书面表达假如你是李华，你们学校正在进行课堂教学改革，经过一段时间的适应，同学们发现现在的课堂跟以前比较发生了一些变化，请你根据所给提示以“The Changes in Clas的题目，用英语写一篇100词左右的文章，谈谈

24、你的感受和想法，开头和结尾已给出（不计入总词 数）。要求：1.短文应行文连贯、条理清晰、段落分明、书写工整；.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名等信息；.文章必须包括所提供的全部主要信息，并作适当发挥。The Changes in ClassYour ideasYbur feelingsinteresting and livelyopen and freeget more knowledgeStudy and think bytell stories卧ourselvesplay gamesdiscuss in groupslisten to musicshow ourselves4The Cha

25、nges in ClassThanks for giving us students a chance to express ourselves about how we study in class.【答案】The Changes in ClassThanks for giving us students a chance to express ourselves about how we study in class. I like the class like this.I think it is very interesting and lively. We can tell stor

26、ies, play games and listen to music.I think it is open and free. We can study and think by ourselves .We can discuss in groups and show ourselves. We can get more knowledge in this class. The changes in Class are good for us.【解析】【详解】假如你是李华，你们学校正在进行课堂教学改革，经过一段时间的适应，同学们发现现在 的课堂跟以前比较发生了一些变化，请你根据所给提示以“T

27、he Changes in Clas的题目，用英语写一篇100词左右的文章，谈谈你的感受和想法，开头和结尾已给出（不计入总词数）。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为单数第一人称，注意主谓一致问 题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，写作中注意运用代词，注意多 种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练文中运用了一些好的句型：We can study and think by ourselves .Wecan discuss in groups and show ourselves. We can get more knowled

28、ge in this class.等这些词组 的运用也让文章增色不少。6.书面表达假设你将代表你校 2009届毕业生在学校毕业典礼上发言，请你用英语写一篇发言稿，发言稿的内容要点如下：回顾美丽的校园、生动有趣的教学、三年来的收获；感谢老师的培养、父母的支持、同 学的帮助；祝愿（考生自拟，至少两点）。注意：1.90词左右。发言稿的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；2.发言稿须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；发言稿不得 出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and f

29、ellow graduates. It is a great honour for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of 2009.Thank you for listening!【答案】 Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates. It is a great honour for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of 2009.It

30、has been three great years for us to study in this beautiful school. Our teachers always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. We have learned a lot over these years, but we could hardly succeed without our teachers efforts, our parents support and our classmates help. At this moment, I

31、would like to thank all of you for what you have done for us.I wish our school more beautiful and all of us a wonderful future!Goodbye, our beautiful school, our dear teachers and our friends.Thank you for listening!【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，根据所给提示用英语写一篇发言稿，内容包括回顾美丽的校园、生 动有趣的教学、三年来的收获；感谢老师的培养、父母的支持、同学的帮助；祝愿，在写

32、作中适当发挥，语句通顺，符合逻辑，符合发言稿的格式，没有出现自己的真实姓名。7.题目持之以恒，方得始。”坚持是一种可贵的品格。生活中想要做成任何一件事情，都需要持 之以恒的精神。某英文网站正在开展以坚持”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿。谈淡你在初中生活中坚持的一件事（爱好，习惯），你是怎样做的，以及你的感受。提示词语： keep, practice, difficult, give up, proud提示问题：1. What did you do?2. How do you feel?It s important for us to keep trying to ach

33、ieve our goals.【答案】Its important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals.I love running and I have kept running for three years.When I was in Grade 7, I was not good at sports and running was always my headache.I often failed in my running test.In order to catch up with my classmates , I began to

34、 practice running every day after school.Sometimes , I was so tired that I really wanted to give up.But I kept telling myself that I could make it.No matter what kind of difficulties I faced , I tried my best to keep running.Now I do much better in running and Im very proud of myself.I feel more con

35、fident and Im ready for any challenges in the future.【解析】【分析】本篇是材料作文，根据所给提示写一篇自己在初中生活中坚持做的事；文中写明自己是怎 么做的并谈谈自己的感受。【详解】.本篇要求根据所给材料，用第一人称写初中生活中自己坚持做的一件事，根据提示，描 写“What did you do?g一般过去时，描写How do you feel?用一般现在时。书写时要紧扣主题，文句通顺。.本例文开篇立即点明自己的坚持做的事是跑步”，正文部分详细地描写了自己起初跑步总是不及格，通过克服困难、不懈地努力，坚持跑步，到现在比以前会跑；结尾谈了这件

36、事对自己的影响；文章结构清晰，前后呼应。.本例文出彩之处在于用了很多的短语和重点句型。比如：固定搭配、固定句型Its +adj+for us +to do sth、love doing sth、keep doing、be good at、catch up with、be proud of; 不 定式 in order to ； try my best to ； 状语从句 so- that ;比较级 do much better in 、 feel more confident等；短语多彩、文句表达多样。.环境保护人人有责，如果我们每一个人都能珍爱美丽地球保护自然资源，相信我们的家园会越来越美好

37、。某英文网站正在开展以“Going Green为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈我们面临的主要环境问题是什么，为改善环境我们能做什么，以及你的期 望。提示词语：pollution, protect, save, recycle, take action提示问题： What are the main environmental problems we have? What can we do in our daily life? What wish?Now there are many environmentalproblems.【答案】例文Now there are

38、many environmental problems. Such as air pollution, water pollution and so on.I believe that there are many things we can do in our daily life, we can save energy by go to school by bike or on foot. We can use less water by turning off the tap while we brush our teeth, and taking shorter showers. Wh

39、en we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins.I hope everyone can take action. Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference. Let s wortotogeke a better place to live.【解析】【详解】题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，写作时要把我们面临的主要环境问题是什么，为改善 环境我们能做什么，以及

40、你的期望全部包括。例文点评：例文采用的是三段式；用第一人称来叙述为改善环境我们能做什么；时态采用 的是一般现在时，描述建议时，描写具体，条理清晰。高分亮点：短语：save energy； brush our teeth ； put it into different bins ; take action ； make a big difference。句型： When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins ;Although each one of us may only d

41、o a little, together we can make a big difference 。【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点 中可能要用至U的表达， 例如save energy； brush our teeth ； put it into different bins ； takeaction ； make a big difference o以及状语从句等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程 中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较 等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有

42、无单词拼写错误、标点 符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词 数是否符合要求等。.朋友是我们生活的组成部分，他们总是在我们最需要帮助的时候陪伴我们。你最好的朋友是谁？你是怎么看待你们的友谊的？请以 “My Best Friend为题，根据以下提示写一篇 英语短文。.简要介绍你最好的朋友的外貌和性格；.介绍和你朋友之间发生的一件令人难忘的事；.你是怎样看待你们之间的友谊的要求：.语句连贯通顺，文章衔接紧密.词数 80-100.文中不得出现真实校名及姓名Friends are very important in our life. They always h

43、elp us when we are in need.【答案】My best friendFriends are very important in our life. They always help us when we are in need. Everyone needs friends to talk with and get confidence from.My best friend is Jenny. She is a quiet girl. She is always friendly and helpful. She is a tall girl with long hai

44、r. She does well in all the subjects and gets on well with others at school.t help crying.I was weak in maths. One day, I failed in maths exam. I was so sad that I couldnJenny encouraged me a lot. From then on, she helped me with my maths, With her help, I got an A in the next maths exam. I was real

45、ly thankful to her.I think friendship is a necessary part of our lives. I want to keep our friendship forever.【解析】【详解】试题分析：这是一个提纲作文。题目给出了标题及写作要点。根据题目要求可知，人称以 第三人称为主。时态为一般现在时和一般过去时。我们要做的就是用正确的英语句子来组 织这些材料，在描写外貌和性格时，会用到系表结构，注意主谓一致关系。介绍发生的一 件难忘的事情，要用到一般过去时态。另外在写作时可以适当使用一些连词，使之上下连 贯，合乎逻辑。【点睛】人物介绍是记叙文中常见

46、的一种写作类型。内容可以是介绍自己也可以介绍他人，包括姓 名、年龄、外貌特征、兴趣爱好，有时也可以包括日常活动。时态为一般现在时态。在介 绍长相时用“be形容词”来描述人物的身高、体重、身材等；用 “have/has +(straight/curly ) hair / (big/small) eyes/nose/mouth 来描述头发或五官。用 “wear 球种 衣服”来介绍某人的穿戴。用 be good at doing sth.来介绍特长，用like sth./doing sth.best或“My/Hii/her favorite +名词+ is 来介绍某人的最爱。当主语是第三人称单数时，注意主谓 一致关系。10.书面表达假如你是英语俱乐部的Cathy,上周五你们收到了外教Angel为同学们网购的英文书籍。俱乐部的同学们很喜欢网购图书这种便捷的方式，并打算在本周五交流读书后的感受。请你根 据以下信息，给Angel写一封电子邮件，告诉她俱乐部的活动情况，并说说网购图书的好 处。写作要点：1表达收到图书后的喜悦与感激之情。2介绍活动的情况：(l)上周五，俱乐部成员们一起读英文书。(2)本周五的下午3点，大家将共同交流读书的体会。(3)同学们将在下个月网购其他的英文书。3说一说网上购书有什么好处。写作要求：1不得使用真实