详解雅思写作Task1常出现的两大问题

1、第 PAGE21 页 共 NUMPAGES21 页详解雅思写作Task1常出现的两大问题详解雅思写作Task1常出现的两大问题雅思写作Task1需要注意的主语问题通常我们在Task 1会遇到很多变化类的图表题，例如表格，柱状，饼状图等。常常需要描绘某数据的变化趋势，以及比照哪些不同，发表一下简单的预测等。我们可以看下面分析p ：WRITING TASK 1 (剑9 Test 4 Task 1)You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The graph below gives information from a 2022 report ab

2、out consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make parisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words.通过上述的图表可以得知，Petrol and Oil这条线是可以很轻易的看得出他的变化趋势即整体上升，虽然在一开场这个数据是存在波动的。于是大多数考生就会写出下面的语句：Petrol an

3、d oil increase from 1980 to 2030, despite initial fluctuations.当我们看到这样的语句时，通常喜欢选择正确的谓语动词以及相应的趋势名词来进展描绘其变化，但是关键问题是主语在描绘数据变化趋势时，广阔考生一定要擦亮眼睛，并不是所有的名词都可以作为变化趋势的主语，比方这道题目中上升或者波动的其实并不是汽油和石油，而是它们的消耗量。因此本句应该是这样的：The consumption of petrol and oil increases from 1980 to 2030, despite initial fluctuations.雅思写作

4、Task1需要注意的谓语动词正确性的问题因此我们在做雅思写作Task1的时候，除了要注意我们常规的语法问题，一定要切记我们的主语问题。这个是很关键的。对考题里面的时态没有进展详细理解，就直接开场使用时态。通常我们在描绘变化趋势或者数据的升降的时候，一定要注重谓语动词的正确性。要根据考题里面提供的时态根据作为标准。以下题为例：WRITING TASK 1 (剑9 Test 2 Task 1)You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in bil

5、lions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2022.Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make parisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words.在描绘local-fixed line的数据变化趋势时，一般的考生都可以看到该数据呈现先上升在下降的变化趋势，但是在详细书写时却往往容易无视图表上的时间是从1995年到202

6、2年，因此本来这里描绘趋势的语句应该选用一般过去时。因此，他们会写出下面的语句：The figure for local-fixed line increase from 1995 to 1999 before decreasing between 1999 and 2022.可以看到在雅思写作Task1的时候，在描写变化趋势时，主语用的是很恰当的，可以谓语局部“increase”就出错了。没有考虑到图表的时间是发生在过去应该用“increase”的一般过去时的形式“increased”。所以上面的句子应该改为：The figure for local-fixed line increased

7、 from 1995 to 1999 before decreasing between 1999 and 2022.小作文提分丨如何做好雅思图表作文题目审题雅思图表作文题目审题step 1：关注写作时态时态是一个简单易错的语法点，之所以放到审题的第一步，就是我们发如今大家的写作过程中，时态不出错的寥寥无几。小作文做为数据说明文，首先强调的就是准确度，时态对于数据描绘的准确性毋庸置疑，对于时态的处理要根据每个题目提供的时间信息灵敏处理。1)提供的时间为过去的时间，要用过去时2)没有给出明确的时间信息，可以使用一般如今时3)给出的时间有过去、如今、奖励啊，需要详细问题详细分析p 雅思图表作文题目

8、审题step 2：数据分类对数据合理分类是考察数据分析p 才能的一个重要方面。在数据类图表的分析p 中，一道题目可以从多个角度进展分类，但是合理的分类标准往往从数据特征出发，比方按照数据的变化趋势或数据的上下来分类，有时也会按照题目的既定分类来组织。雅思图表作文题目审题step 3：数据比照分析p 比照是数据类作文中最核心的描绘内容之一。下面简单给大家总结几点：1. 附属连词比照数值 35% of British people went abroad, while/whereas/although 28% of Australians spent holidays in a different

9、 country.2. 状语从句省略句式，不可写做paring 35% of British people went abroad, pared to/with 28% of Australians.3. 一句话排序句式Heating room accounts for the largest proportion of household energy use, followed by heating water (30%), and then other appliances (15%).4. 数值相等：The figures for America and China were simi

10、lar/equal at 100 tons in 1999.雅思图表作文题目审题step 4：描绘变化趋势对于变化趋势的描绘是数据类图表核心描绘之一，尤其是对于动态变化类的图表。描绘变化趋势的根本要求是准确性与多样性。首选是词汇层次。除了要准确的使用词汇来描绘上升与下降之外，变化的幅度(degree)也要描绘准确。其次是描绘变化趋势的句式。雅思图表作文题目审题step 5：点睛总结综述是数据类写作的点睛之笔，是考官在判断一篇文章能否拿到7分的重要衡量标准。在数据分析p 中，假如可以对于变化趋势以及比照明晰地综述(presents a clear overview of main trends,

11、 differences or stages)，就有时机在评分标准Task achievement任务回应方面拿到7分。综述的内容为对于数据信息进展概括，把最主要的变化趋势或数据比照总结为一句或两句话，所以不同类型的题目侧重点不同，要详细问题详细分析p 。补充一些在雅思图表作文写作中考生比拟容易犯错的表达：had a decrease/ increase：没有这样的表达，一般是saw a decrease/increaseIncreased, decreased, declined 这些上升和下降的词都没有被动语态当the number, the amount, the figure， the

12、 proportion做句子的主语的时候，不能用account forThe amount不能交换the numberremained 后面只能加形容词，也就是“remain constantly”是错的，只有“remain constant”在动态图里，一般是rose “数字”-fold，譬如说是”rose fivefold”而不是“rose five times”Doubled(增长一倍)不及物动词，没有被动“millions” 或者“thousands”在句子中出现时不能加复数，只有“数字+million or thousand”的说法动态图过分注重数据和小的波动，而无视趋势。趋势是一个

13、区间内最主要的一个变化静态图过分侧重读数据，没有将数据归类和归纳(具备类似特征的数据要放在一起)图表作文最好不要出现in addition, moreover这些连接词Followed by后面要写名词，而且这个名词要和主句的主语性质差不多Reach 读数据的时候不能加to或者at, 直接加数据就可以Ratio和rate一般不能替代proportion和percentagePicture 不能交换graph 或者chart不要用定语从句读数据，譬如说 the crime rate in the US was highest, which was 0.3%. 这里的which was 直接省略。

14、说人年龄的时候应该是aged，譬如说people aged from 15 to 24一般不会用过去进展时态，也就是was increasing/decreasing 是错的While, whereas一定要连接两个独立的句子，不可以单独存在副词slightly不能修饰名词，应该是slight increase, drop小作文一般用不到minimum这个词，minimal的意思不是“最小的”，而是“根本上可以忽略不计的”尽量不要用套句，假如用，要注意不要写错，it is worth noting that, it should be noted that图表作文一般用不到on the con

15、trary, 用in contrast, by contrast即可表示波动可以说fluctuated，不要写saw a fluctuationReduce和raise这两个词小作文用不到，因为是及物动词;arise也不能替代rise;“ascent/descent”不能用在小作文里。结尾段不能写数据小作文指南丨雅思图表作文范文汇总雅思图表作文之：线性图雅思图表作文主题：企业垃圾The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three panies over a period of 15 years.(本图来自于剑雅真题)雅思图表

16、作文范文The line graph pares three panies in terms of their waste output between the years 2000 and 2022.这条线图对三家公司的废物产出从2000年到2022年进展了比拟。It is clear that there were significant changes in the amounts of waste produced by all three panies shown on the graph. While panies A and B saw waste output fall ove

17、r the 15-year period, the amount of waste produced by pany C increased considerably.很明显，图表上显示的这三家公司消费的垃圾量发生了重大变化。虽然A公司和B公司在_年的时间里看到了废物的产量下降，但C公司消费的废物量却大幅增加。In 2000, pany A produced 12 tonnes of waste, while panies B and C produced around 8 tonnes and 4 tonnes of waste material respectively. Over the

18、 following 5 years, the waste output of panies B and C rose by around 2 tonnes, but the figure for pany A fell by approximately 1 tonne.2000年，A公司消费了12吨废物，而B公司和C公司分别消费了大约8吨和4吨废料。在接下来的5年里，公司B和C的废料产量增加了大约2吨，但是公司A的产量下降了大约1吨。From 2022 to 2022, pany A cut waste production by roughly 3 tonnes, and pany B r

19、educed its waste by around 7 tonnes. By contrast, pany C saw an increase in waste production of approximately 4 tonnes over the same 10-year period. By 2022, pany Cs waste output had risen to 10 tonnes, while the respective amounts of waste from panies A and B had dropped to 8 tonnes and only 3 tonn

20、es.(192 words, band 9)从2022年到2022年，公司将废物产量减少了大约3吨，公司B减少了大约7吨的垃圾。相比之下，C公司在同样的10年时间里，废物产量增加了大约4吨。到2022年，C公司的废物产量已升至10吨，而A和B公司的垃圾量已降至8吨，仅为3吨。雅思图表作文之饼图雅思图表作文主题：游客分析p The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in the year 1999.(本图来自于剑雅真

21、题)雅思图表作文范文The pie chart pares figures for visitors to four categories of tourist attraction and to five different theme parks in Britain in 1999.这个饼状图比拟了1999年英国的四类旅游景点和5个不同主题公园的游客人数。It is clear that theme parks and museums / galleries were the two most popular types of tourist attraction in that yea

22、r. Blackpool Pleasure Beach received by far the highest proportion of visitors in the theme park sector.很明显，主题公园和博物馆/画廊是那一年最受欢送的两种旅游景点。在主题公园中，黑潭快乐海滩获得的游客比例是最高的。Looking at the information in more detail, we can see that 38% of the surveyed visitors went to a theme park, and 37% of them went to a muse

23、um or gallery. By contrast, historic houses and monuments were visited by only 16% of the sle, while wildlife parks and zoos were the least popular of the four types of tourist attraction, with only 9% of visitors.更详细地看这些信息，我们可以看到，38%的受访游客去了一个主题公园，其中37%的人去了博物馆或美术馆。相比之下，只有16%的样本参观了历史建筑和纪念碑，而野生动物公园和动物

24、园那么是这四种旅游景点中最不受欢送的，只有9%的游客。In the theme park sector, almost half of the people surveyed (47%) had been to Blackpool Pleasure Beach. Alton Towers was the second most popular amusement park, with 17% of the sle, followed by Pleasureland in Southport, with 16%. Finally, Chessington World of Adventures

25、and Legoland Windsor had each weled 10% of the surveyed visitors.(181 words, band 9)在主题公园领域，几乎一半的被调查者(47%)曾经到过布莱克浦的快乐海滩。奥尔顿塔是第二大最受欢送的游乐园，有17%的样本，其次是在索斯波特的娱乐公园，占16%。最后，查辛顿冒险世界和乐高和温莎的游客都欢送10%的游客。雅思图表作文之饼图雅思图表作文主题：各地房价The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five diffe

26、rent cities between 1990 and 2022 pared with the average house prices in 1989.(本图来自于剑雅真题)雅思图表作文范文：The bar chart pares the cost of an average house in five major cities over a period of 13 years from 1989.柱状图比拟了从1989年开场的_年里，五个主要城市的平均房价。We can see that house prices fell overall between 1990 and 1995,

27、but most of the cities saw rising prices between 1996 and 2022. London experienced by far the greatest changes in house prices over the 13-year period.我们可以看到，在1990年至1995年期间，房价总体下跌，但大多数城市在1996年至2022年期间房价上涨。在过去的_年里，伦敦经历了房价的最大变化。Over the 5 years after 1989, the cost of average homes in Tokyo and London

28、 dropped by around 7%, while New York house prices went down by 5%. By contrast, prices rose by approximately 2% in both Madrid and Frankfurt.在1989年之后的5年里，东京和伦敦的平均房价下跌了7%，而纽约房价下跌了5个百分点。相比之下，马德里和法兰克福的房价都上涨了大约2个百分点。Between 1996 and 2022, London house prices jumped to around 12% above the 1989 average.

29、 Homebuyers in New York also had to pay significantly more, with prices rising to 5% above the 1989 average, but homes in Tokyo remained cheaper than they were in 1989. The cost of an average home in Madrid rose by a further 2%, while prices in Frankfurt remained stable.(165 words)从1996年到2022年，伦敦房价跳

30、涨到比1989年平均程度高出12个百分点。纽约的购房者也不得不支付更高的价格，房价比1989年的平均程度高出5%，但东京的房价仍然低于1989年的程度。在马德里，平均房价上涨了2%，而法兰克福的房价那么保持稳定。雅思图表作文之表格雅思图表作文主题：骑车上班The table below shows changes in the numbers of residents cycling to work in different areas of the UK between 2022 and 2022.(本图来自于剑雅真题)雅思图表作文范文The table pares the numbers

31、of people who cycled to work in twelve areas of the UK in the years 2022 and 2022.这张表格比拟了2022年和2022年在英国12个地区骑车上班的人的数量。Overall, the number of UK muters who travelled to work by bicycle rose considerably over the 10-year period. Inner London had by far the highest number of cycling muters in both year

32、s.总的来说，在过去的10年里，骑自行车上班的英国上班族的数量大幅增加。在这两年中，伦敦市中心的自行车上班族数量是最多的。In 2022, well over 43 thousand residents of inner London muted by bicycle, and this figure rose to more than 106 thousand in 2022, an increase of 144%. By contrast, although outer London had the second highest number of cycling muters in e

33、ach year, the percentage change, at only 45%, was the lowest of the twelve areas shown in the table.2022年，伦敦市中心有超过43万居民骑自行车上下班，2022年这个数字上升到超过106万，增长了144%。相比之下，尽管伦敦的自行车上班族每年的出行次数是第二高的，但这个百分比的变化，只有45%，是表中所显示的12个区域中最低的。Brighton and Hove saw the second biggest increase (109%) in the number of residents

34、cycling to work, but Bristol was the UKs second city in terms of total numbers of cycling muters, with 8,108 in 2022 and 15,768 in 2022. Figures for the other eight areas were below the 10 thousand mark in both years.(172 words, band 9)布莱顿和霍夫在骑车上班的人数中排名第二(109%)，但在自行车上班族的总数中，布里斯托尔是英国的第二大城市，2022年为8108

35、人，2022年为15768人。其他8个地区的数据在这两年内都低于10万。雅思图表作文之混合图雅思图表作文主题：水消耗The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.(本图来自于剑雅真题)雅思图表作文范文：The charts pare the amount of water used for agriculture, industry and homes around the world, and water use in Brazil and the Democratic Republic of Congo.这些图表比拟了世界各地的农业、工业和家庭用水的数量，以及巴西和刚果民主共和国的用水情况