2021届高考英语二轮复习强化专练考点11书面表达应用文含解析

1、2021届高考英语二轮复习强化专练考点11书面表达应用文含解析2021届高考英语二轮复习强化专练考点11书面表达应用文含解析2021届高考英语二轮复习强化专练考点11书面表达应用文含解析考点11 书面表达应用文Writing 1(2020河北高三月考）假定你是李华，你的好友Tony来信告诉你他因为数学成绩不好而烦恼，想停止学业去找工作。请根据以下提示给他回信:1对他的想法表示遗憾；2不同意他的想法并给出理由;3推荐提高成绩的方法.注意:1词数80左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【答案】Dear Tony，I am sorry to hear that you want to drop

2、 out and hunt for a job owing to your poor math。 I strongly oppose your idea， since you can hardly find a suitable job as a high school student。Here are some suggestions on how to improve your math. Listen carefully to the teacher in class and do timely revision after class. Do more math exercises t

3、han others and ask your classmates or teacher for help when encountering some problems.I do hope you think twice before making a final decision。Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给好友Tony写封信，对他因为数学成绩不好而烦恼，想停止学业去找工作的想法表示遗憾，不同意他的想法并给出理由以及给出提高成绩的方法。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。结构:总分法总分法指把

4、主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1对他的想法表示遗憾；2不同意他的想法并给出理由；3推荐提高成绩的方法。第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）drop out; hunt for； owing to； strongly oppose; suitable； suggestions on； carefully； do timely revision； ask sb。 for help; encounter; think twice第三步：连词成句1。 I am sorry to hear that you want to drop out and hunt for a jo

5、b owing to your poor math. 2。 I strongly oppose your idea， since you can hardly find a suitable job as a high school student.3. Here are some suggestions on how to improve your math。4. Listen carefully to the teacher in class and do timely revision after class.5. Do more math exercises than others a

6、nd ask your classmates or teacher for help when encountering some problems.6。 I do hope you think twice before making a final decision。根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1。表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second（供参考）2。表并列补充关系：What is more， Besides， Moreover， Furthermore（供参考）连句成文

7、，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。【点睛】高分句型1 I am sorry to hear that you want to drop out and hunt for a job owing to your poor math. （运用了that引导宾语从句)高分句型2 I strongly oppose your idea, since you can hardly find a suitable job as a high school student. （运用了since引导原因状语从句） Writing2（(2019南昌县莲塘第一中学高三月考)假定你是

8、李华，报名参加了“全国中学生英语能力竞赛”（NEPCS）。赛前，为更好地提高写作能力，请给外教Michael写封邮件，请他帮忙修改一篇作文并提出建议。注意(1）词数100字左右；(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。(3）句型：sentence pattern【答案】Dear Michael,I have signed up for the NEPCS。 In preparation for it, I think what I am in desperate need of is to improve my writing ability. Would you please do me a f

9、avor about it?Ive finished an essay， but still find it far from satisfactory. Im not sure of the proper expressions of some English words， which makes the essay lack naturalness。 Besides, there may also be some mistakes in grammar and sentence pattern。 So I wonder if you can help me with these probl

10、ems。I would appreciate it if you could give me some suggestions. Looking forward to your reply。Yours，Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Michael写封邮件,请他帮忙修改一篇作文并提出建议。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和现在完成时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：希望外教给予提高写作能力方面的建议第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）sign up;in preparation for

11、；in desperate need of；do me a favor;far from satisfactory； help sb。 with；look forward to第三步:连词成句1。I have signed up for the NEPCS。 In preparation for it， I think what I am in desperate need of is to improve my writing ability。 2。Would you please do me a favor about it?3.Ive finished an essay, but sti

12、ll find it far from satisfactory. 4。Im not sure of the proper expressions of some English words， which makes the essay lack naturalness. 5.Besides, there may also be some mistakes in grammar and sentence pattern. 6。So I wonder if you can help me with these problems。7.I would appreciate it if you cou

13、ld give me some suggestions。 Looking forward to your reply。根据提示及关键词（组)进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题.第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1。表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second And then, Finally, In the end, At last(供参考）2。表并列补充关系：Besides3。表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but， Although+clause(从句）, In spite of+n/doing,O

14、n the one hand,On the other hand Some,while others,as for， sothat（供参考）4.表因果关系：So连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,【点睛】高分句型1 In preparation for it， I think what I am in desperate need of is to improve my writing ability。 (what引导宾语从句)高分句型2 Im not sure of the proper expressions of some English words

15、， which makes the essay lack naturalness。 （which引导非限制性定语从句）Writing3（2020四川成都市北大附中成都为明学校高三月考)假定你是英语课代表李华。你们班每节英语课前都轮流由一位同学做“Warmingup Sharing，活动已坚持了两个月.现在,英语老师要求你作一个报告，总结此活动.内容包括：1。 活动情况；2. 对英语学习的帮助；3。 你的建议。注意:1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear class，_【答案】Dear class，Today, Id like to make a brief summa

16、ry about the “Warming-up Sharing。 During the past two months, each student has participated in it and brought us different fun. This activity not only improves our spoken English， but also lets us build up confidence in the process of making the speech, making us more and more interested in English.

17、 I hope this kind of activity can continue and I suggest that the time of the report should not be less than two minutes and the topics should be various， so as to help expand our knowledge。【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求考查作一个报告，总结“Warmingup Sharing”这个活动。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时。结构：总分法 总分法是指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为

18、分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1. 活动情况；2. 对英语学习的帮助；3。 你的建议。第二步：列提纲（重点词组）would like to do;make a brief summary；participate in；not onlybut also；let sb. do sth。； build up;in the process of;less than；expand ones knowledge.第三步：连词成句1。Today, Id like to make a brief summary about the “Warming-up Sharing”. 2。During the

19、past two months， each student has participated in it and brought us different fun. 3.This activity not only improves our spoken English, but also lets us build up confidence in the process of making the speech, making us more and more interested in English。 4.I hope this kind of activity can continu

20、e and I suggest that the time of the report should not be less than two minutes and the topics should be various, so as to help expand our knowledge.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态的问题。第四步:连句成篇（衔接词）（仅供参考）1.表文章结构顺序：First of all， Firstly/First, Secondly/Second And then， Finally， In the end, At last2.表并列补充关

21、系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not onlybut (also）, including，3。表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary， but， Although+clause（从句）, In spite of+n/doing，On the one hand,On the other hand Some，while others，as for, sothat4.表因果关系：Because， As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a res

22、ult连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。【点睛】高分句型1This activity not only improves our spoken English, but also lets us build up confidence in the process of making the speech， making us more and more interested in English。 （第二个making为现在分词作状语）高分句型2I hope this kind of activity can continue and I sugges

23、t that the time of the report should not be less than two minutes and the topics should be various, so as to help expand our knowledge.（that引导宾语从句）Writing 4（2020河北石家庄市石家庄二中高三期中)假定你是李华，你市博物馆将举办“苏轼主题书画特展”。请给你的英国交换生朋友Alice写一封邮件，邀请她参加，内容包括：1。 时间、地点;2。 展览主题；3。 期待回复。注意：词数为80左右。 提示:书法 calligraphy 书法家 calli

24、grapher【答案】Dear Alice,Im glad to tell you that there will be a special exhibition on Su Shis calligraphy and paintings this Saturday in the City Museum。 Su Shi， also called Su Dongpo， was one of Chinas greatest poets, as well as an accomplished calligrapher of the Song Dynasty. The exhibition will d

25、isplay his artistic attainments， which are of great value to our understanding of 11thcentury Chinese travel literature. I bet you will definitely find this exhibition fascinating.Looking forward to your reply。Yours，Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国交换生朋友Alice写一封邮件，邀请她参加市博物馆将要举办“苏轼主题书画特展。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文

26、时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般将来时.结构：总分法 总分法是指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容.要求：1. 介绍时间、地点；2. 说明展览主题;3. 期待回复.第二步：列提纲(重点词组）be glad to do sth.;one of;as well as;be of great value；look forward to第三步：连词成句1。Im glad to tell you that there will be a special exhibition on Su Shis calligraphy and paintings this Saturday in

27、 the City Museum。 2.Su Shi, also called Su Dongpo， was one of Chinas greatest poets， as well as an accomplished calligrapher of the Song Dynasty. 3。The exhibition will display his artistic attainments， which are of great value to our understanding of 11th-century Chinese travel literature. 4。I bet y

28、ou will definitely find this exhibition fascinating。5.Looking forward to your reply。根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态的问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（仅供参考）1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First， Secondly/Second And then， Finally， In the end, At last2。表并列补充关系：What is more， Besides， Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As we

29、ll as, not onlybut （also）， including,3。表转折对比关系：However， On the contrary， but, Although+clause（从句）, In spite of+n/doing，On the one hand，On the other hand Some，while others,as for, sothat4。表因果关系：Because， As， So， Thus, Therefore, As a result连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。【点睛】高分句型1Im glad to tell

30、you that there will be a special exhibition on Su Shis calligraphy and paintings this Saturday in the City Museum。(that引导宾语从句）高分句型2The exhibition will display his artistic attainments, which are of great value to our understanding of 11thcentury Chinese travel literature. （which引导非限制性定语从句）Writing5(2

31、020浙江杭州市学军中学高三月考)假如你是李华，你的外国朋友Jack对中国文化很感兴趣。你们原定本周日上午9点参观浙江省博物馆现博物馆因故闭馆一周，请给他写一封邮件，内容要点如下：1。告知闭馆消息；2。推荐其他活动：3。期待回复。注意：1. 词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯._【答案】Dear Jack，Im quite glad that you take great interest in traditional Chinese culture。 Now Im writing to tell you that we have to change our arrangemt

32、to visit the Zhejiang Museum at 9 oclock on Sunday, which is to be closed for a week. In order to make the day meaningful and enjoyable， I want to invite you to come to my home to make dumplings, a popular Chinese food, also called jiaozi. As we all know, jiaozi is one of the most typical foods duri

33、ng the Spring Festival and its regarded as a symbol of reunion. The way of making jiaozi is no less fantastic. Also, its easy to learn to make。 Would you like to join us? Looking forward to your early reply.Yours，Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给外国朋友Jack写一封邮件,告知你们原定本周日上午9点参观浙江省博物馆，现博物馆因故闭馆一周。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：

34、应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和现在完成时,少量现在完成进行时.结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求:1。告知闭馆消息；2。推荐其他活动：3。期待回复.第二步：列提纲 （重点词组)take great interest in， invite sb. to do, typical food, be regarded as, no less fantastic， in order to, look forward to第三步：连词成句1。Im quite glad that you take great interest in trad

35、tional Chinese culture.2。Now Im writing to tell you that we have to change our arrangemt to visit the Zhejiang Museum at 9 oclock on Sunday, which is to be closed for a week。3。In order to make the day meaningful and enjoyable， I want to invite you to come to my home to make dumuplings ，a popular Chi

36、nese food， also called jiaozi.4.As we all know, jiaozi is one of the most typical foods during the Spring Festival and its regarded as a symbol of reunion。5.The way of making jiaozi is no less fantastic。根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词)（供参考）1。表文章结构顺序：First of all， Firstly/First， Secondly/S

37、econd And then， Finally， In the end, At last2。表并列补充关系:What is more， Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not onlybut (also), including,3.表转折对比关系：However， On the contrary, but， Although+clause（从句）, In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand，On the other hand Some,while others，as for， soth

38、at 4.表因果关系：Because, As， So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。【点睛】高分句型1Now Im writing to tell you that we have to change our arrangemt to visit the Zhejiang Museum at 9 oclock on Sunday, which is to be closed for a week。(that后为宾语从句，which引导非限制性定语从句。)高分句型2As we all know

39、， jiaozi is one of the most typical foods during the Spring Festival and its regarded as a symbol of reunion。 (as引导的句子为非限制性定语从句，“its regarded as。.”使用了被动语态。）Writing 6（2020江苏南京市高三月考）假如你是李华，是某国际学校的学生会主席。你发现有些同学迫于同伴间的压力，在过生日时经常攀比谁买的生日礼物好。请你用英语写一封倡议信，发表在你校校园网上,呼吁同学们不要攀比。内容包括：1。 互相攀比的危害;2。 对生日礼物的建议;3。 向同学

40、们发出倡议。注意：1。 词数80词左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear students,_The Students Union【答案】Dear students，There is a disturbing trend in our school that some students are forced to spend lots of money buying expensive birthday gifts for their friends. This results from peer pressure。It is really a waste of time an

41、d money to compare whose gift is the most fashionable or expensive. In fact, teenagers have many ideas about creative but inexpensive birthday gifts. For example， we can take a cycling trip, which will be for sure a good memory in our life。Therefore, boys and girls， please save your money and use it

42、 properly when you are deciding to buy an expensive gift.The Students Union【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生一封倡议信,发表在你校校园网上,呼吁同学们不要攀比。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容.要求：1. 互相攀比的危害；2. 对生日礼物的建议;3. 向同学们发出倡议.第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）disturbing； spend lots of money doing sth.； p

43、eer pressure； a waste of； fashionable; take a cycling trip； memory; save money； properly; decide to第三步：连词成句1. There is a disturbing trend in our school that some students are forced to spend lots of money buying expensive birthday gifts for their friends. 2。 This results from peer pressure.3。 It is

44、really a waste of time and money to compare whose gift is the most fashionable or expensive.4。 In fact， teenagers have many ideas about creative but inexpensive birthday gifts.5. For example, we can take a cycling trip， which will be for sure a good memory in our life.6. Therefore， boys and girls， p

45、lease save your money and use it properly when you are deciding to buy an expensive gift.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步:连句成篇（衔接词）表因果关系：Therefore连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。【点睛】高分句型1 For example, we can take a cycling trip, which will be for sure a good memory in our life。 （运用了which引导非限制性

46、定语从句)高分句型2 Therefore， boys and girls, please save your money and use it properly when you are deciding to buy an expensive gift. （运用了when引导时间状语从句)Writing 7（2020屯昌县屯昌中学高三月考）假定你是高三学生李华。随着高考的临近，你感到学习压力越来越大。晚上经常失眠，上课精力不集中，学习效率低下，现在对备考复习很茫然.你写信给心理学家Dr. Bloom, 咨询解决问题的方法。内容包括：1。 写信目的； 2. 咨询内容; 3。 期待回复。Dear

47、 Dr. Bloom，_Yours Sincerely， Li Hua【答案】 Im Li Hua, a senior three student。 Im writing to ask you for some advice。 With the approach of the College Entrance Examination， Im under great pressure， which greatly affects my life and study. I cant fall asleep at night and I often wake up suddenly at midni

48、ght. As a result， I cant focus on what the teacher says in class and it disturbs me a lot. At a loss， I dont know how to prepare for the College Entrance Examination。 What should I do？ Knowing you are an expert in it, I sincerely hope you can give me some valuable advice on how to solve the problmes

49、。 Looking forward to your reply. 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给心理学家Dr。 Bloom写封邮件，请他就你现在面对的问题提出一些建议和方法。【详解】第一步:审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容.要求：1。 介绍写信的目的;2。 介绍咨询的内容；3。 期待对方的回复。第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）ask sb. for advice； with the approach of； under pressure； fall asleep; wake

50、 up； as a result; focus on； at a loss; prepare for; solve the problem； look forward to； an expert in第三步：连词成句1. Im writing to ask you for advice.2. Knowing you are an expert in it， I sincerely hope you can give me valuable advice on how to solve the problems。3。 As a result, I cant focus on what the t

51、eacher says in class.4. Looking forward to your reply.根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题.第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1。 表文章结构顺序:first of all, firstly/first, secondly/second and then， finally, in the end, at last(供参考）2。 表并列补充关系：what is more, besides， moreover, furthermore， in addition, as well as, not onlybut (also）, in

52、cluding(供参考)3. 表转折对比关系：however， on the contrary， but, in spite of+n/doing, on the one handon the other hand， some, while others， as for， so.。that(供参考） 4. 表因果关系：as a result 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，【点睛】高分句型1As a result, I cant focus on what the teacher says at class.（what引导宾语从句)高分句型2Knowi

53、ng you are an expert in it, I sincerely hope you can give me valuable advice on how to solve the problems。 （knowing you are an expert in it现在分词作状语，特殊疑问词how+动词不定式作宾语)高分句型3 Im under great pressure, which greatly affects my life and study.（which引导非限制性定语从句)Writing 8（2020江苏高三月考） 假定你是李华，你的英国好友 Jim在申请大学过程中

54、,就专业选择产生了困惑，写信向你求助。请根据以下要点提示，给Jim写一封回信:1.对 Jim的困感表示理解;2。给 Jim提出建议（至少两条)；3。表达祝福。注意：1。词数80左右;2.开头结尾已给出，不包含在字数内；3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.Dear Jim,_Yours，Li Hua【答案】Dear Jim，Knowing that you are faced with the dilemma of deciding on proper college major, I am writing to offer some advice。You must feel as if you

55、 were all at sea, which I can, definitely, relate to。 Calm down and clear your head. To begin with, list your possible choices and give priority to what you are really interested in. Furthermore， never should you ignore career prospects， which will affect your future employment。 Last but not least，s

56、eeking advice from your parents makes sense.I hope my advice will be of help and you will choose a desired major.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国好友 Jim写封邮件,对他在申请大学过程中,就专业选择产生的困惑提供建议。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和少量一般将来时.结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1.对 Jim的困感表示理解；2。给 Jim提出建议（至

57、少两条）;3.表达祝福第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）be faced with; offer some advice; calm down； to begin with； give priority to； are interested in; ignore career prospects； seek advice from; make sense； be of help 第三步：连词成句1.You must feel as if you were all at sea， which I can， definitely, relate to。 2。Calm down and clear you

58、r head。 3.To begin with， list your possible choices and give priority to what you are really interested in。4。Furthermore， never should you ignore career prospects， which will affect your future employment。 5.Last but not least，seeking advice from your parents makes sense.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问

59、题。第四步：连句成篇(衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second And then, Finally， In the end， At last（供参考）2.表并列补充关系：What is more， Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not onlybut （also)， including（供参考）3。表转折对比关系：However， On the contrary, but, Although+clause（从句)， In spite of

60、+n/doing，On the one hand,On the other hand Some,while others，as for, sothat （供参考)4。表因果关系：Because， As， So， Thus， Therefore， As a result （供参考)连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，【点睛】高分句型1Knowing that you are faced with the dilemma of deciding on d proper college major， I am writing to offer some advi