公开课高中英语写作

1、公开课高中英语写作课件第1页，共30页，2022年，5月20日，6点48分，星期一What makes a good essay?The essay第2页，共30页，2022年，5月20日，6点48分，星期一A good essay is usually made up ofa topic paragraph, some supporting paragraphs and a concluding paragraph.Topic paragraph Supporting Paragraph 1 Supporting Paragraph 2 Supporting Paragraph 3Concl

2、uding paragraph第3页，共30页，2022年，5月20日，6点48分，星期一To many students, school life is boring and tiring. However, I find my school life meaningful and colourful.general statementtopic statementTopic paragraph (Introduction paragraph) General statement Topic statement第4页，共30页，2022年，5月20日，6点48分，星期一Supporting

3、Paragraphs(Body) Paragraphs TSSSSSSSSSFirstly, .Secondly, .Moreover, .Finally, . . .However, .In addition, Furthermore, .第5页，共30页，2022年，5月20日，6点48分，星期一ConclusionPersonally, in conclusion, in brief, From what has been discussed above, we may draw the conclusion that . In summary, it is wiser . 第6页，共3

4、0页，2022年，5月20日，6点48分，星期一The paragraphWhat makes a good paragraph?第7页，共30页，2022年，5月20日，6点48分，星期一A good paragraph is one that consists ofa topic sentence and supporting sentences.There are different kinds of bee. Some live in large groups like the honey bee, and make their nests in trees or holes in t

5、he rocks. Other species make their nests in holes in the ground. There are also varieties that do not live in groups at alltopic sentence第8页，共30页，2022年，5月20日，6点48分，星期一Wherever you go in our school, you see green lawns and trees and beautiful flowers. Dotted among these trees and flowers are many bui

6、ldings of different styles. A stream runs through our school and you always see everything reflected in the water. Topic sentence:_just like a garden. Our school isjust like a garden. Our school isjust like a garden. Our school is第9页，共30页，2022年，5月20日，6点48分，星期一A good paragraph is one that contains pr

7、oper linking words.I believe English is more important than other foreign languages for many reasons. First of all, English is spoken by a large number of people, and these people are the most widely spread across the world in a great many countries. Secondly, English is the most widely used languag

8、e on the internet. It has become an on-line language. Thirdly, the 2008 Olympic Games will be held in our country and English will be very useful. Lastly, 第10页，共30页，2022年，5月20日，6点48分，星期一正确使用有关连接词 时间先后：first, then, later, in the end, eventually,since then, after a while 转折关系：but, however, on the cont

9、rary, nevertheless因果关系：because, since, as, thanks to, owing to, as a result of, for the reason that让步关系：though, although, even if, even though, in spite of the fact that递进关系：whats more, in addition, furthermoreon the one hand on the other hand, 条件关系：if, unless, as long as, on condition that 表 列 举：fo

10、r example / instance, takefor example, thats to say, in other words, as follows表 总 结：in short, in brief, in conclusion, in a word, on the whole, as has been stated第11页，共30页，2022年，5月20日，6点48分，星期一A good paragraph is one with varied sentence patterns.第12页，共30页，2022年，5月20日，6点48分，星期一丰富的句式：(常用到的句型结构） 利用不同

11、的句型来表达同一个意思， 能增加文章的文采。 e.g. What a kind boy he is! How disappointed he was ! 感叹句强调句e.g. It was this young boy that helped the old granny. I do hope you can come if possible.第13页，共30页，2022年，5月20日，6点48分，星期一 e.g. Only in this way can you solve this problem. There comes the police car. Hardly had they g

12、ot to the station when they met the young man.e.g. They read while walking or riding on a bus. Come to me if necessary.e.g. I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand.倒装句省略句with短语第14页，共30页，2022年，5月20日，6点48分，星期一 e.g. In my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place where w

13、e can find much useful information. Lets come to the main teaching building, at the back of which stands the school library.定语从句e.g. Thats what I should do.We should do a favour to whoever needs help at present.各种名词性从句第15页，共30页，2022年，5月20日，6点48分，星期一 e.g. Time passed quickly before we knew it. The mo

14、ment we reached the farm, we got down to harvesting. So long as we work harder at our lessons, well catch up sooner or later.各种状语从句第16页，共30页，2022年，5月20日，6点48分，星期一1. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词性从句）2. Though Im weak, Ill make the effort. (使用倒装句)3. He did not know what h

15、ad happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型) 4. I passed the physics exam because of your help.(用虚拟语气）What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.Practice 怎样使用较丰富的句式和高级词汇Weak as I am, Ill make the effort. It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper

16、that he knew what had happened. I couldnt have passed the physics exam but for your help. 第17页，共30页，2022年，5月20日，6点48分，星期一5. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (使用过去分词)6. They sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使用V-ing形式)7.I wont believe what he says. （no matter wha

17、t状语从句） 8.If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （祈使句+and）Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.Singing and laughing, they went back to school.No matter what he says, I wont believe. Study hard and youll make rapid progress.第18页，共30页，2022年，5月20日，6点48分，星期一9He had no sooner com

18、e back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒装句)10.We all think he is a great man. (think highly of)11.As a result the plan was a failure. (turn out)12. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited. (the morethe more)No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.We all think hi

19、ghly of him .The plan turned out to be a failure.The more he spoke, the more excited he felt.第19页，共30页，2022年，5月20日，6点48分，星期一Summary:A good essay is usually made up of a topic paragraph, some supporting paragraphs and a concluding paragraph.A good paragraph is one that consists of a topic sentence an

20、d supporting sentences.A good paragraph is one that contains proper linking words.A good paragraph is one with advanced vocabulary and varied sentence patterns.第20页，共30页，2022年，5月20日，6点48分，星期一ASSESSMENTstructureIs the essay divided into parts? Does each part have a topic sentence?contentAre all the d

21、etails stated?Is everything to the point(切题)? LanguageDoes the writer use any linking words? Are there any mistakes?Is there any advanced vocabulary（高级词汇）?Are there any good sentence patterns（句式）?Lets improve it:第21页，共30页，2022年，5月20日，6点48分，星期一Good afternoon, everyone! The topic of my speech today is

22、 “My Attitude to Pursuit of Fashion in School”. Now in our school there is a hot pursuit of fashion. Somestudents live a very expensive life _. _, they hope to look smart and special. _, they want to win others admiration and respect. In addition, it makes them feel cool . _, we students should hold

23、 the right sense of values. We should practice thrift in our daily life . _ , it is advisable for us to donate some pocket money to the Hope Project so that those poor children in rural areas can return to school._, it is the inner beauty rather than our appearance that makes us respectable. Thank y

24、ou for listening!the reasons why they do so are as follows B. firstly C. last but not least D. whats more E. as far as I am concerned F. SecondlyABCDEF第22页，共30页，2022年，5月20日，6点48分，星期一苏州市2009届高三教学调研测试 最近，国家教育部要求中小学生参加冬季长跑活动：建议小学生每天跑1000米，初中生1500米，高中生2000米。对此，有些人表示支持，有些人表示反对。请你根据以下材料，写一篇以“Should we giv

25、e more attention to students health or grades?”为题的短文，谈谈你的看法。 支持方的理由 反对方的理由 你的看法及理由 1可以促进对体育的重视；2可以增强学生的体魄；3更有利于提高学习效率。 1学生以学习为主，考试成绩决定个人前途；2过高的要求学生难以达到；3长跑可能引起感冒或伤害。(考生自行发挥23点) 注意：1词数150左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数； 2对所给要点，逐一陈述，设当发挥，不要简单翻译。第23页，共30页，2022年，5月20日，6点48分，星期一 1.A good beginning makes a good endi

26、ng. 2.Your composition should be divided into paragraphs. 3.Youd better use some linking words. 4.Handwriting is of great importance.Suggestions:第24页，共30页，2022年，5月20日，6点48分，星期一第一段：1.Some people agree to NO. One, because they usually think that .In the meantime , . In addition.2.Some people think tha

27、t A is right because .3.Some people suggest / say that . At the same time they point out the fact that.Whats more.4.Some people prefer NO. One. In their opinion A . In addition .第25页，共30页，2022年，5月20日，6点48分，星期一第二段：1.On the other hand, some people hold that B is right. They think .2.But many more peop

28、le dont agree with them. They prefer B. They say that.The reason is that.3.On the contrary, some people hold that .4.Some people think that B is better. It is clear that. Whats more, .Also. 在第一段和第二段中一定要用原因或列举等方式展开段落。第26页，共30页，2022年，5月20日，6点48分，星期一第三段：提出自己的见解并且加以论证1.In my opinion B is better than A.

29、There is no doubt that .2.I support A. The reason goes as follows.3.As far as I am concerned, I agree to the latter. First.Second. Finally.4.It is likely that people will go on arguing over these questions. I think that everything has both its positive and negative sides. We should keep an open mind

30、. 第27页，共30页，2022年，5月20日，6点48分，星期一 5.People will continue to argue over the questions, I think wed better keep an open mind because everything has two sides. It all relies on. 6.Of these two ways of .I prefer.First of all,. Second,.第28页，共30页，2022年，5月20日，6点48分，星期一Should we give more attention to stude

31、nts health or grades? The Ministry of Education of China has urged all the students to participate in the winter long-distance running activity. It is suggested that primary school students should run 1,000 meters a day, junior school students, 1,500 and senior school students, 2,000.Different people always o