托福独立写作高分作文技巧解析

1、第 PAGE8 页 共 NUMPAGES8 页托福独立写作高分作文技巧解析托福独立写作高分作文既要有合理构造也要有独特观点文章构造决定独立写作分数根本盘对于托福写作来说，合理且标准的文章布局还是必不可少的，甚至可以说是一篇高分作文的根底所在。标准化的开头加中间段3加结尾段的五段式文章构造一直都是最为经典且实用的构造，考生无需花费太多心思在文章布局构造上多动脑筋，这样的五段写法足以保证大家的托福独立写作主线脉络得到充分表达。然后详细说说中间段。中间段落的文章构造就是T过渡词ransitional words + 中心句topic sentence + 详细展开阐述development。假如考生

2、在平时能纯熟运用这样的文章构造来展开托福独立作文，那么考场上就会凭借这份思维套路来帮助自己保持住根本的得分。说到过渡词Transitional words，一般主要有以下三种类型，即表顺序：firstly, secondly, finally(last but not least 表并列：besides, in addition; 表比照：in contrast, in parison。这些过渡词会让文章看起来脉络明晰，组织严密，也就做到了评分标准中的“well-organized”一条。当然，有过渡词的文章读起来也会让人觉得更加通顺流畅，给考官更好的阅读体验。树立文章观点让文章有新意有吸引力

3、结合优质论据素材提升文章整体评分在托福写作过程中，想要完美充实的布局并表达出观点的独特新意都离不开例证内容的诠释。相信很多同学在备考托福写作的过程中，也会不断的累积各式各样的例证资料。但是，托福写作中对例子论证的要求并不在其新意，而是在于考生你如何用论据来解释观点，或者说你的例子论据需要能和观点想匹配才会具有说服力。另外，有些同学喜欢使用高分范文里面的例子论据，这种做法本身是没有任何问题的，但使用时假如直接整个照搬例子的话就有可能因为完全一样或者相似度太高的句式而引起被断定为雷同的风险，这是考生需要特别注意防止的，所以大家不妨学习一下改写语句中的内容的方法技巧，即便不会改写，也可以尝试换掉一些

4、【关键词】：p 来防止雷同问题。托福写作题目：Is it better to enjoy your money when you earn it or is it better to save your money for some time in the future? Use specific reasons and exles to support your opinion.参考分析p ：先讨论一下储蓄的必要性以及及时享乐的好处，然后可以采取it 范文：存钱比拟好：(1)存钱可以防范不时之需，如生病等等。(2)存钱可以买非常贵重的商品，如房子、汽车等等。(3)存钱放到将来花，可以更好的享

5、受生活，如去欧洲、美洲旅游等等。Some people say that it is better to enjoy your money as soon as you earn it while others prefer to save the money for later. Its a difficult choice faced by lots of people because of the different attitudes they hold towards money. As far as I am concerned, I vote for the former cho

6、ice, which is that it money as soon as possible is my preference because of three reasons as follows.First, we can observe easily in the modern society that the dominant philosophy nowadays is enjoy your life when you are still young. Most young adults like to work for a period of time and then go o

7、n for a trip to visit some places they have never been to. Those trips not only help them to keep in shape but also provide them different kinds of knowledge and new perspective in which helps them to relax and go back to work with enough energy.In the old days, it is said that people who save money

8、 in a bank understand the philosophy of thrift. Actually, economists say that in the modern world saving money in a bank is the quickest way to lose it. Moreover, none of the rich people became rich by getting interests from the bank. Living in a constantly changing world, we should adjust ourselves

9、 to accept the new ways of investing our money to different areas in order to get the most of it. That is probably the reason why most of the people nowadays put their money into business to get a better payback.them is that it is part of the contribution for the economic growth in our country. If n

10、obody has the needs to buy stuff from others and the market, nobody will think about how to produce useful products and sell them to make the most profits. Some countries continue to lower the interests in order to force people them.well as people around us. Its also important for kids to know how t

11、o save money our lives enjoyable and worthwhile.托福写作解析:Change about your school托福写作题目：change would you make? Use reasons and specific exles to support your answer.参考分析p ：改变学校的计算机交流(1)进步效率(2)促进学生学习(3)更好的教师和学生的交流参考范文：Change about your schoolTalking of making an important change in my school, Id like t

12、o suggest that our education system put more emphasis on the development of learning skills and applications of theories into practice instead of simply learning knowledge from books. The proposal is based on the reasons as follows.For one thing, overemphasis on academic learning poses a threat beca

13、use of confusing the purpose of learning. As school credit is usually considered the major criteria of academic learning, in a credit-driven school, one may try hard blindly cram their brains with numerous texts and formulas while do not have a clear idea of what they really want to learn, why they

14、need to learn, not to mention how the things they are learning are useful to the reality. An exle reciting grammar rules, but can hardly utter an English word in front of a foreigner.Another reason that causes me to make the suggestion is the requirement of todays ever-changing knowledge economy tim

15、e. With the increasingly accelerated that he or she has learned at school. Mastering learning skills and knowing how to apply the skills into practice are being indispensable than ever before. A recent survey conducted by educators shows that most students in our country lack the ability of using tools and solving problems pared with their counterparts in the United States. This informs us to take a serious look at our b