高考作文之2023年江西高考英语作文名师评析

1、2023年江西高考英语作文名师评析【篇一：2023年高考英语江西卷总分值作文】 丝路教育 2023年高考英语江西卷总分值作文 夏继超 第二节 书面表达 假定你是星光中学的高中毕业生李华，母校将为高一新生举办主题为“what to learn in senior high school?的英语沙龙活动，特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会。请根据以下提示准备一份英语发言稿。 1.学会学习：方法，习惯等； 2.学会做人：真诚，友善； 3.学会其他：考生自拟。 注意：1.词数120左右； 2.发言稿开头和结尾已给出，不须抄在答题卡上，不计入总次数。 good morning, everyone! it

2、 is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school. generally speaking, the first and the most important thing for us is study. learning how to learn and developing the good habit of learning are the two vital parts in the process of study. for instance, we

3、are suppose to preview before class, pay close attention to what our teacher are saying, and review the knowledge we have gained from time to time. only in this way, can we form the good habit of learning. moreover, how to be a man is the second required. we had better grow up to learn to be honest

4、and kind. it is suggested that we should spend more time in helping others and cooperating with others. in that way, we can learn how to get along well with others and know who we are, what we should do and what wed better not do. besides, we are advisable to learn how to live and how to deal with t

5、he difficulties in daily life. learn to wash our own clothes, clean rooms, cook, etc. thats what i d like to share with you. how about your opinions?【篇二：2004年高考英语总分值作文及名师评析】 2004年高考英语总分值作文及名师评析 2004高考英语总分值作文 【全国卷i】 【试题回放】 假设你是李华，你在报上看到北京电视台今年七月将举办外国人学中文，唱中文歌才艺大赛。你的美国朋友peter正在北京一所大学学中文，你觉得他应去试一试。请按以下

6、要点给他写信告知此事，并表示可以提供帮助。 比赛时间：7 月18日 。报名时间：截止到6月30日。报名地点：北京电视台 注意：1.词数：100左右 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 3.参考词汇：才艺大赛talent show dear peter, i read in a newspaper today that a learn chinese, sing chinese songs foreigners talent show will be held in beijing television station on july 18. i know you like singing, an

7、d you are in beijing during that period. i think this is a good chance for you to show your singing talent, and how well youve learned chinese. if you would like to try, you u have to go to the tv station to sign up before the end of june. if there is anything i can do for you, i would be more than

8、glad to help.yours, li hua 名师点评 从整体上说，本文书写得简洁明快。语言简单平实，要点囊括齐全，结构完整。本文的主要特点是让步状语从句的使用，最后两句话，采用了if引导的让步状语从句，结合将来时使用。 【全国卷ii】 【试题回放】 假设你是李华，加拿大一所学校将于今年暑假组织学生来你校访问。其间，andy smith将借住你家。请你代表全家写信给andy，欢送他的到来，并告知有关事宜。信的要点如下：1. 上午：学校活动2.下午：游览市区3. 晚上：看电视，玩游戏，聊天注意：1. 词数：100左右2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯3. 参考词汇：安排arrange d

9、ear andy, im so glad that youll be here with me and my family for the summer holiday. im writing to express our warm welcome and introduce the activities during your stay here. in the morning ,some activities at school will be arranged. youll visit our classrooms, reading rooms, labs, and so on. wel

10、l take this opportunity to exchange our views, talking about school life, and so on.in the afternoon, you can tour around the city. and ill act as your tour guide. our city has changed a lot and takes on a new look. you can see what is our city like with your own eyes. at night , we can watch tv, pl

11、ay games and talk about what were interested in. im sure youll enjoy yourself. im looking forward to your coming. yours sincerely, li hua 名师点评 本文行文自然流畅，文章要点齐全，意思表达真切。详略得当，重点突出。从语言使用的角度来说，不但使用了一些生动的动词，准确的名词，同时为了使本文串联自然，又使用了时间状语为连接词，将文章按照时间顺序表达完整。 浙江卷 【试题回放】 假设你是李越,你的加拿大笔友steve来信说,他和他的一些同学正在学中文,请你推荐两本

12、学中文的词典.根据下表提供的信息,请你给他写一封回信.英汉/汉英词典新华字典 收词(字)18,000(英语) 20,000(汉语)10,000价格52元11元 特点大量例子、用法说明,适合初学者中国最常用的汉语字典 参考词汇: dear steve, im so pleased to learn that you and your classmates are learning chinese. id like to recommend the following two dictionaries. the english-chinese/chinese-english dictionary

13、is really a good one for beginners. it has 18,000 english words and 20,000 chinese words. besides plenty of examples, it has many notes telling you bow to use a word. xinhua dictionary is the most popular chinese dictionary , and it has a vocabulary of 10,000 words. it may also be useful to some adv

14、anced learners of chinese. of the two, ecced is the more expensive, costing 52 yuan, and xd costs 11 yuan. please let me know if you want me to buy these dictionaries.yours, li yue 名师点评本文要完成的是书信的主要局部，因此不需要注意格式，但是不能遗漏要点。本文要点齐全，内容完整，详略得到。介绍的时候，层次清晰，逐一举例。文章流畅而连贯。有很多关于词汇和字典的表述，值得我们积累。 广东卷 【试题回放】假设你是下列图的

15、李华。请根据图画所提供的信息，写一篇英语作文，描述昨天晚上邻居看足球赛影响你学习的情况，并描写你随后与邻居交涉的过程(如：你向邻居提出要求，对方向你表示歉意等。) 注意：1. 词数：801202. 可以编写对话或其它表达方式描写你与邻居的交涉过程 about 9 oclock last night, i was doing my homework. suddenly i heard my neighbor shouting and laughing loudly. he was watching a football game on tv. i couldnt go on studying a

16、nd became impatient. i covered my ears, trying to keep the noises out, but failed. so i had to go my neighbor.i knocked at his door and said, good evening, mr. yang! could you please turn down your tv a bit? i am doing my homework. oh, im really sorry to have disturbed you. well do as you say. my ne

17、ighbor said politely. thank you very much. i said and went back to continue my study. 名师点评 这篇文章从整体上来看，内容完整，要点齐全。在准确领悟题意的根底上，用平实的语言，将文章娓娓道来，连贯而流畅。句式搭配长短结合。文章对对话的描写，很生动，让人有种身临其境的感觉。 【英语各档次的给分范围和要求】 第五档(很好);(21-25分) 1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 2. 覆盖所有内容要点。 3. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 4. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具

18、备较强的语言运用能力。 5. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 6. 完全到达了预期的写作目的。 第四档(好)：(16-20分) 1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 2. 虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。 3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。4. 语法结构或词汇方面应用根本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。 5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 6. 到达了预期的写作目的。 第三档(适当)：(11-15分) 1. 根本完成了试题规定的任务。 2. 虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。 3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。 4

19、. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。 5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。 6. 整体而言，根本到达了预期的写作目的。 第二档(较差)：(6-10分) 1. 未恰当完成试题规定的任务。 2. 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。 3. 语法结构单调、词汇工程有限。 4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。 5. 较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。 6. 信息未能清楚地传达给读者。 第一档(差)：(1-5分) 1. 未完成试题规定的任务。 2. 明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。 3. 语法结构单调

20、、词汇工程有限。 4. 较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。 5. 缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。【篇三：2007年高考英语总分值作文及名师评析】 2007年高考英语总分值作文及名师评析 2007高考英语总分值作文 【全国卷ii】 【试题回放】 一家宾馆新开业，为吸引外国宾客，希望在互联网上进行宣传。请你用英语为其 写一篇文字介绍。主要内容包括： 1.地点：距白山入口处500米; 2.房间及价格：单人间(共20间)，100元/天;双人间(共15间)，150元/天;热水淋浴;3.餐饮：餐厅(中、西餐)，咖啡厅(茶、咖啡);4.游泳池：全天免费开放; 5.欢送预定。 注意：1.

21、词数100左右，开头语已为你写好;2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 welcome to baishan mountain hotel! baishan mountain hotel is now open for business. 500 meters far from the entrance of baishan mountain, it provides single?person room, of which the price is rmb100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double? person rooms, wi

22、th a price of rmb 150 yuan per day. it also provides hot water bath service. you can enjoy both chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe. the swimming pool is open for free the whole day. all these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoya

23、ble. so come to enjoy yourself! welcome to book rooms in baishan mountain. 【名师点评】 本文开门见山，首先点明了主旨。本文最大的特点是应用了很多比拟复杂的句式，使文章比拟出彩。开头使用了独立结构交代宾馆位置。which引导的非限制性定语从句的使用也很正确。总地来说，文章句式精炼，是篇不错的总分值作文。积累卡片英汉互译 好词 1. provide v.提供2. convenience n.便利好句all these services can bring great convenience to you and areve

24、ry enjoyable.所有这些效劳都会给你带来便利，并且非常的愉快。评析：bring great convenience，带来便利。 【安徽卷】 【试题回放】 假设你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，假设你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，主要内容如下： l 表示赞成。 l 提出你喜欢的栏目。 l 简要说明理由。 注意： 1. 词数100左右。 2. 新的开头和结尾已为你写好。 3. 适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 4. 参考栏目：栏

25、目column dear mr. green, i am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. that sounds great! and i definitely agree with you on that.some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea. say, culture express gives us a better understanding of the wo

26、rld. since people from different parts of the world have different values, its necessary to learn from each other. this will offer a wonderful chance. apart from that, blurt out is pretty good for chinese students to learn english idioms and improve oral english. last but not least, entertainment is

27、 so cool! the popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely cant miss it! teenagers are just fond of the trendy things.well, i cant list more. i really cant wait to read that magazine!yours faithfully, li hua 【名师点评】 这是一篇总分值作文。由于这篇作文的出现，导致了安徽省今年的英语作文分数普遍偏低。仔

28、细分析了这篇文章，写的确实是好，很地道的美式英语，一些词语的大胆使用，让人不得不猜想此人或者是家人可能有过国外生活的经历，否那么这么地道标准的英语，可不是一朝一夕所能写出来的。 比方说：my cup of tea, apart from that, oral english, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大胆运用，list, cant wait to 简直是perfect! 况且文章中没有一个错误，不管是书写还是语法。英语能够学到这种程度，不可谓不让人佩服。 【江苏卷】 【试题回放】2007年4月29日上午10点到11点，全国亿

29、万学生阳光体育活动在各地大中小学校同时进行，江苏省1，100万学生积极参与了这项活动。教育部倡导学生： u 每天锻炼一小时 u 健康工作五十年 u 幸福生活一辈子 请你根据以上提示，用英语准备一份发言稿，向同学们讲述一下阳光体育活动的有关情况，并就高三学生是否需要每天花一小时锻炼，谈谈你的看法及理由。注意： 1、 发言稿应包括以上所有信息，要有适当发挥。 2、 词数：120左右。发言稿的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。 3、 参考词汇：阳光体育活动a national student sports program;教育部the ministry of education good after

30、noon, everyone,the national student sports program, waged by the ministry of education and aimed at improving students health, was held from 10：00a.m.11:00a.m.on april 29，2007 in many primary and middle schools all over china. almost 11 million students in jiangsu province participated in this progr

31、am. the ministry of education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years. our whole life will be very enjoyable. in my opinion, we senior high school students should do exercises for one hour a day even though our spare time is limited. health is a basic condition for our study. if we did not do exercises, we wouldnt be able to get good study records. so every one of you, join the program now!thank you! 【名师点评】 本文的结构十清楚晰，同时句式使用得熟练而准确。本文分为三段，前两段表达，后一段发表观点，典型的作文结构。在句式使用上，作者用法多样，使用了独立结构和虚拟语气，十分出彩。复杂的句式是本文的特点之一。积累卡片 好词1.wage v.发动2.aim v.瞄准3. advocate