(天津专用)2020届高考英语一轮复习专题十九书面表达课件

1、专题十九书面表达高考英语 (天津市专用)五年高考A组自主命题天津卷题组Writing 1(2019天津夏)假设你是晨光中学的李津,英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间,英方教师Chris将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座。现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件:(1)你喜欢的讲座话题(从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一);(2)选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容;(3)希望从中有何收获。注意:(1)词数不少于100;(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Chris,Im Li Jin, a

2、 student at Chenguang High School. Thank you for your time.Yours,Li Jin答案写作提示1.本文是应用文,形式为邮件。主要人称为第一人称;主体时态为一般现在时。2.写作要点:(1)你喜欢的讲座话题(从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一);(2)你喜欢该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容; (3)你希望得到的收获。3.分段内容:第一段介绍写作背景;第二段介绍你喜欢的话题及喜欢的原因,可适度拓展;第三段提出希望和祝愿。One possible version:Dear Chris,Im Li Jin, a student at Cheng

3、uang High School. It is such a great honor to be given a chance to re-spond to your e-mail which says you are coming to give a lecture about Western art. I am writing to tell you my opinion about the content of your speech.As you know, Chinese authority has been emphasizing the importance of studyin

4、g traditional art. Accordingly, I attach much interest to Chinese and Western art knowledge. There have been a few singers realizing their dream here since the establishment of our school. Hence I am crazy about musical knowledge, and I love traditional Jazz music in particular. Can you do me a favo

5、r to talk about it?精彩语句1.精美词汇respond v.答复,回复attach interest to.对感兴趣hence adv.因此,因而in conclusion最后2.出彩结构It is such a great honor to be given a chance to respond to your e-mail which says you are coming to give a lecture about Western art.(which引导定语从句)As you know, Chinese authority has been emphasizin

6、g the importance of studying traditional art. Accordingly, I attach much interest to Chinese and Western art knowledge. There have been a few singers realizing their dream here since the establishment of our school. Hence I am crazy about musical knowledge, and I love traditional Jazz music in parti

7、cular. Can you do me a favor to talk about it?In conclusion, I would rather contrast Jazz and Chinese folk music briefly. Waiting for your guid-ance!Thank you for your time.Yours,Li JinWriting 2 (2019天津春)假设你是晨光中学的李津。为配合学校的“读书月”活动,你校英语社团的微信公众号开展以“Lets Read”为题的征文活动。要求同学们根据个人的阅读体会,从所读过的书籍中选定一种类型,推荐给其他同

8、学。现请你投稿,文章内容应包括:(1)推荐书籍的类型及特点;(2)推荐的理由。 参考词汇:科幻小说 science fiction侦探小说 detective novel魔幻小说 fantasy传记文学 biography科普读物 popular science注意:(1)词数不少于 100;(2)所选书籍类型不限于参考词汇给出的范围;(3)内容充实、行文连贯;(4)题目已给出,不计入总词数。Lets ReadMarch 22, 2019By Li Jin答案写作提示1.本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写一篇英语征文。人称以第一人称为主,主体时态为一般现在时。2.文章要点:表明推荐书籍的名称和类型

9、;介绍该书的特点;阐明推荐此书的理由;表达对读者的祝愿。One possible version:Lets ReadMarch 22, 2019Today Id like to recommend a book to you which I like very muchThe Five Thousand Years History, which belongs to history books.The author selects important and famous figures and events in the history of China, which he orga-niz

10、es and cuts according to historical materials, and writes in modern language to make them easy to understand.This book opens a history gate to me and I feel more confident about my own country.I am proud that I am a Chinese and I will make more effort to build a more powerful country and let Chinese

11、 history more brilliant. I think everyone should read it and get this wonderful experience.I do hope youll like it!Enjoy reading!By Li Jin精彩语句1.精美词汇select v.挑选figure n.人物make more effort to do sth.更加努力去做某事2.出彩结构I think everyone should read it and get this wonderful experience.(think后跟省略连接词that的宾语从句)

12、Writing 3(2018天津夏)假设你是晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津,你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校,他曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖。你打算邀请他加入你的团队,参加即将于7月底在天津举行的世界青少年机器人技能竞赛。请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件。(1)比赛的时间、地点;(2)邀请他的原因;(3)训练计划将发送其邮箱,请他提出建议。注意:(1)词数不少于100;(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇:世界青少年机器人技能竞赛the World Adolescent Robotics CompetitionDear

13、Chris,I have good news to tell you. Im looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Jin答案写作提示1.本文是一封电子邮件,主要人称为第一人称和第二人称,主体时态为一般现在时和一般将来时。2.文章要点:说明写邮件的目的;介绍比赛的时间和地点;邀请他的原因;告知Chris训练计划将发送到他的邮箱并请他提出自己的建议。One possible version:Dear Chris,I have good news to tell you. The World Adolescent Robotics Competition i

14、s scheduled to be held at the end of July in Tianjin.Im writing to invite you to join our team to prepare for it.As far as I know, you once won a prize in a robotics competition.Therefore, I think not only will it be a golden opportunity for you to show your great talent, but also you can offer us g

15、uidance, which is of great significance for us to perform well in the coming competition.Our training plan is to be sent to your e-mail box.I would appreciate it if you could give us your personal advice after reading it.Im looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Jin精彩语句1.精美词汇schedule v. 安排;计划a golde

16、n opportunity 良机significance n. 重要性2.出彩结构Therefore, I think not only will it be a golden opportunity for you to show your great talent, but also you can offer us guidance, which is of great significance for us to perform well in the coming competition.(not only.but also.连接两个分句时,第一个分句用部分倒装结构;which 引导

17、的非限制性定语从句)Writing 4(2018天津春)假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。你在某网站的论坛上读到一位名为 Chris 的外国学生发的帖子,得知他有意来中国的大学学习。请根据以下提示给 Chris 留言:(1)鼓励他来中国留学;(2)说明来华留学的好处(如:加深对中国的了解,对个人发展的益处等);(3)表示愿意进一步提供帮助。 注意:(1)词数不少于 100;(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;(3)开头已给出,不计入总词数。ChrisAustraliaAny suggestions?Posted on Mar.22nd, 2018 9:00 PMIts time to mak

18、e a decision.Im wondering if I should go to China for col-lege.Li JinChinaReply to ChrisPosted on Mar.23rd, 2018 10:00 AMHi, Chris,答案写作提示1.本文为跟帖留言,属提纲类作文。以第一人称为主体人称;以一般现在时和一般过去时为主体时态。2.根据内容要点可分三段来写:鼓励Chris来华留学;说明来华留学的好处;表达自己的意愿:愿意进一步提供帮助。One possible version:Hi, Chris,I learned about the message you

19、 posted on the Internet that you have the intention to come to Chi-na for college, which makes me delighted because I believe it would be a great opportunity for you to enrich your life as well as broadening your mind.There are many advantages of studying in China.First of all, there are many remark

20、able universi-ties in China for you to choose to attend and you can experience the rich Chinese culture.Second, it is an extremely meaningful experience for you, providing you with a wonderful platform where you can not only learn more about China but also promote your personal abilities.Dont hesita

21、te to contact me if you need any more help.高级表达1.broaden ones mind开阔眼界2.an extremely meaningful experience 一次极其有意义的体验3.the rich Chinese culture灿烂的中国文化4.promote your personal abilities提升你的个人能力精彩语句1.精美词汇opportunity n.机会enrich vt.使丰富remarkable adj.卓越的,非凡的2.出彩结构I learned about the message you posted on

22、the Internet that you have the intention to come to China for college, which makes me delighted because I believe it would be a great op-portunity for you to enrich your life as well as broadening your mind.(message后接省去that/which的定语从句,that引导同位语从句,which引导非限制性定语从句,because引导原因状语从句)Second, it is an extr

23、emely meaningful experience for you, providing you with a wonderful plat-form where you can not only learn more about China but also promote your personal abilities.(现在分词短语providing.作伴随状语,where引导定语从句)Writing 5(2017天津夏)假设你是李津,与你以前的外籍教师Mrs.Green一直保持联系。近日她来信询问你的近况,请根据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。(1)简要介绍自己的学习和生活;(2)告知你

24、已成为八月底在津举办的第十三届全运会的志愿者,并介绍为此所做的准备(如深入了解天津等);(3)希望她有机会重访天津。注意:(1)词数不少于100;(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;(3)开头已给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇:第十三届全运会the 13th National GamesDear Mrs.Green,Im so glad to hear from you. Yours,Li Jin答案写作提示1.本文为提纲式作文,体裁为应用文。人称以第一人称为主,时态以一般现在时为主。2.写作要点:(1)介绍自己的学习和生活;(2)告诉Mrs.Green你已成为第十三届全运会的志愿者,并介

25、绍你为此所做的准备;(3)希望Mrs.Green重访天津。One possible version:Dear Mrs.Green,Im so glad to hear from you. With the college entrance examination drawing near, I am engaged in preparing for it.Meanwhile, owing to my great interest in sports, I pay close attention to the 13th National Games to be held in Tianjin a

26、t the end of August.And the good news I want to tell you is that I have become a volunteer for it.In order to have a good performance, I have made a lot of preparations for it.After school, I often surf the Internet to get more information about the history and culture of Tianjin.I also practice my

27、oral English every day.I do hope you can revisit Tianjin someday.Yours,Li Jin精彩语句1.精美词汇performance n.表现revisit v.重游,再访be engaged in 忙于2.出彩结构With the college entrance examination drawing near, I am engaged in preparing for it.(with复合结构)Writing 6(2017天津春)假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。你的美国笔友 Chris 正在学习汉语,他得知“中国诗词大会”在

28、CCTV 播出,非常感兴趣,便写信给你,希望你介绍相关情况及更多了解中国文化的途径。请根据以下提示给他写一封回信。(1)简单介绍“中国诗词大会”引起的反响;(2)介绍了解中国文化的途径(如阅读相关书籍、利用媒体资源等);(3)表达对 Chris 学习中国文化的祝愿。注意:(1)词数不少于 100;(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇:中国诗词大会 Chinese Poetry CompetitionDear Chris,Yours, Li Jin答案写作提示1.本文为提纲式作文,属于书信体。主要使用第一、三人称,以一般现在时为主体时态。2.

29、文章可分三段来写:首段简单介绍“中国诗词大会”在 CCTV 播出后的反响;第二段可具体推荐一本书;第三段表达自己的祝愿。One possible version:Dear Chris,Im glad to reply to your letter.Chinese Poetry Competition, which aims to encourage people to know more about traditional Chinese poetry culture, has been broadcast on CCTV and has attract-ed almost all the p

30、eople who are interested in Chinese poetry.In your letter, you mentioned that you are eager to know about Chinese culture.I think the best way to learn about it is to read some relevant books.Id like to recommend a book to you.The book, en-titled Read Poetry and Learn History by Wang Chunshui, is su

31、itable for the foreigners to learn classical Chinese poetry.The poems in the book can reflect the Chinese history and culture, many of which can give readers vivid pictures of the life of the ancient Chinese.And they can also im-prove your appreciation of Chinese poetry.I think the book is a good ch

32、oice for you.I believe you will understand the poems easily and effi-ciently.Wish you to enjoy the book and know more about China.Yours,Li Jin精彩语句1.精美词汇be interested in对感兴趣be eager to do sth.渴望做某事be suitable for适合2.出彩结构Chinese Poetry Competition, which aims to encourage people to know more about tra

33、ditional Chinese poetry culture, has been broadcast on CCTV and has attracted almost all the people who are interested in Chinese poetry.(句中使用了一个由which引导的非限制性定语从句和一个由who引导的定语从句)Writing 7(2016天津)假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津。一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动。现在,他们即将回国,你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。(1)回顾双方的交流活动(如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方

34、面);(2)谈谈收获或感想;(3)表达祝愿与期望。注意:(1)词数不少于100;(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear friends,How time flies!Thank you.答案写作提示1.本文为欢送会上的发言稿,人称为第一人称,写作时态用一般过去时、一般现在时、一般将来时。2.写作要点包括:回顾双方的交流活动,细数收获或感想,表达祝愿与期望。One possible version:Dear friends,How time flies! I am Li Jin, president of Student Union of Ch

35、enguang Middle School.Its my great privilege to be here, sharing this moment with our fellow friends from the Great Britain.During the two-week activities, we surely exchanged our ideas on learning, ways of life, PE and cultures.One of the highlights was the sports meeting where we competed with eac

36、h other in the basketball match.The past two weeks witnessed our growth and friendship.It is not only your enthusiasm but also your teamwork and good spirits that impress us.After the two-week exchange activities, we now have a better understanding of each other on a whole new level.And I sincerely

37、hope our friendship lasts forever.Wish you all the best!Thank you.高级表达1.Its my/a privilege to do sth.做某事是我的荣幸2.share.with.与分享pete with.与竞争精彩语句It is not only your enthusiasm but also your teamwork and good spirits that impress us.(强调句型,被强调部分使用了并列连词not only.but also.)Writing 8(2015天津)假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李津,你

38、校拟向美国友好交流学校的中文班捐赠一批图书。请根据以下提示,写一封邮件与中文班班长Chris联系,并告知将于今年七月赴对方学校参加夏令营时带去赠书。(1)自我介绍;(2)拟捐赠图书的类型、册数、用途等;(3)询问对方的其他需求。注意:(1)词数不少于100;(2)请适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。参考词汇:学生会the Student UnionDear Chris,Yours,Li Jin答案写作提示1.书信格式,用第一人称和第二人称,主要用一般现在时和一般将来时。2.要点齐全:自我介绍;捐赠图书的类型、册数、用途等;询问对方的其他需求;告知将于今年七月赴对方学校参加夏令营时带去赠书。3

39、.注意上下文的连贯性和书信语言的得体性。One possible version:Dear Chris,Im Li Jin,chairman of the Student Union in Chenguang High School.Im writing to tell you some-thing about donating books to your class.To enhance communication with your school,we prepared about 100 books ranging from Chinese cartoon to literature.W

40、ith them,you may have a better un-derstanding of China and its culture.Well take the books when participating in the summer camp this July to your school. Would you please tell me something about your other requirements? We will spare no effort to meet your needs.I sincerely hope that we may exchang

41、e with each other more and develop our friendship.Best wishes!Yours,Li Jin高级表达1.enhance vt.提高,增强2.range from.to.包括从到之间的各类事物3.participate in参加,参与4.spare no effort to do sth.不遗余力地做某事精彩语句I sincerely hope that we may exchange with each other and develop our friendship.(that引导宾语从句)B组统一命题、省(区、市)卷题组Writing

42、 1(2019课标全国)假定你是李华,暑期在伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者,内容包括:1.写信目的;2.个人优势;3.能做的事情。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.结束语已为你写好。Dear Sir,Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua答案写作提示本文是应用文中的申请信。主要人称为第一人称,主体时态为一般现在时。写作要点:1.写信目的;2.个人优势;3.能做的事情。分段内容:第一段介绍写信目的;第二段介绍个人优势及能做的事情,可根据需要做适当发挥;第三段给出适当的结尾。

43、One possible version:Dear Sir,I am Li Hua, a student studying in London, who is more than thrilled to be informed of the mes-sage that there will be a Chinese painting exhibition in your local art gallery.I am writing to apply for being a volunteer.As a student from China, I have been keen on Chines

44、e paintings. As you know, China has a grow-ing influence on todays world. In the meanwhile, more attention is paid to the study of the tradi-tional culture in Chinese high schools. So I have got the hang of the knowledge of Chinese paint-ings. By the way, I can also do well in communicating with oth

45、ers in oral English.I would extremely appreciate it if I have a chance to receive your approval.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua精彩语句1.精美词汇more than thrilled 非常激动get the hang of. 掌握;得知的窍门2.出彩结构I am Li Hua, a student studying in London, who is more than thrilled to be informed of the m

46、es-sage that there will be a Chinese painting exhibition in your local art gallery.(who引导非限制性定语从句;that引导同位语从句)In the meanwhile, more attention is paid to the study of the traditional culture in Chinese high schools.(本句使用了被动语态)Writing 2(2019课标全国)假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛,内容包括:1.比赛信息;2.赛前

47、准备;3.表达期待。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。答案写作提示1.本文是应用文。主要内容是告知队友比赛信息。2.文章的主体时态是一般现在时和一般将来时。人称以第一人称为主。3.文章可以分为三段。第一段是比赛信息;第二段是赛前准备;第三段表达期待。One possible version:Dear Chris,I am very pleased to inform you that we will have a friendly match with the volleyball team of Guangming Middle School next Monda

48、y. It will fall at 2 pm in our gymnasium, where about 1,000 students from the two schools will come to watch. In order to provide the students with a fantastic match, we need to have enough training. So we plan to practice together in the gym this Wednesday and Thursday, lasting from 4 pm to 6 pm. I

49、 would appreciate it much if you could participate in it on time.This is a friendly game, so we should keep in mind the principle of friendship first. Of course, we are looking forward to winning the game. I am sure we can realize it with our effort together. Yours,Li Hua精彩语句1.精美词汇in order to为了appre

50、ciate v.感激keep in mind记住2.出彩结构It will fall at 2 pm in our gymnasium, where about 1,000 students from the two schools will come to watch. (where引导非限制性定语从句)So we plan to practice together in the gym this Wednesday and Thursday, lasting from 4 pm to 6 pm.(本句使用了现在分词短语作伴随状语)Writing 3(2019课标全国)假定你是李华,你校将举

51、办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加,内容包括:1.时间;2.活动安排;3.欢迎他表演节目。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。答案写作提示1.本文是应用文中的邀请信,邀请你的英国朋友Allen来参加学校举办的音乐节。主体时态为一般现在时和一般将来时。2.写作要点:(1)活动时间;(2)活动安排;(3)欢迎 Allen参加音乐节并表演节目。3.分段内容:第一段介绍写作背景,发出邀请。第二段介绍学校音乐节的时间、安排和相关细节,并适当拓展。第三段欢迎Allen参加音乐节并表演节目。One possible version:Dear Allen, Long

52、time no see! I am glad to invite you to a music festival, which will take place in our school-yard. It is well-known that more attention has been paid to the inquiry of traditional culture in high schools lately. Accordingly, a music festival will be scheduled, which will motivate more adoles-cents

53、to gain all-around development. Furthermore, it is suggested that the participants be seated in the playground at 8 a.m. next Saturday, when the opening ceremony will be conducted. What a thrilling opportunity! Is it a good idea for you to register to show your talent? Waiting for your early reply.Y

54、ours,Li Hua精彩语句1.精美词汇take place 举行inquiry n.探究show ones talent 展示某人的才艺2.出彩结构I am glad to invite you to a music festival, which will take place in our schoolyard. (be glad to do sth.; which引导非限制性定语从句)Accordingly, a music festival will be scheduled,which will motivate more adolescents to gain all-arou

55、nd development. (which引导非限制性定语从句)Writing 4(2019江苏)Li Jiang:Have you heard this? A group of exchange students from the UK are visiting our school next month.Su Hua:Yes, I have. Some are already recommending the traditional Chinese dress for the wel-come ceremony.Li Jiang:But it seems people have diff

56、erent opinions. Su Hua:What do you think?Li Jiang:I think its a good idea. Its an opportunity to make the Chinese culture better known to in-ternational students.Su Hua:I agree. But we dont have to dress that way. Thats not our daily style. Besides, its not very convenient.Li Jiang:You see, its the

57、Chinese culture that the British friends are coming for. Just the right oc-casion.Su Hua:I prefer the school uniform. Its nice. Its also a better display of our school culture.【写作内容】1.用约30个词概括上述信息的主要内容;2.在上述场合,你是否倾向于穿中国传统服装?请说明理由(不少于两点)。【写作要求】1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;3.不必写标题。【评分标准】内容完整,语

58、言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。答案写作提示1.题干文章主要讨论学生在欢迎来访的交换生的仪式上的着装问题。有的同学认为要穿中国传统服饰,而有的同学认为穿校服就可以。2.主体写作部分表述自己对此问题的观点及其理由。同不同意均可,但是表达观点一定要论点明确,论据清楚合理。 3.文章可以分为三段。第一段概括对话内容,第二段提出自己的观点并加以论述,最后一段进行观点总结。主体时态是一般现在时。Possible version one:Li Jiang and Su Hua are discussing what to wear when receiving the British students nex

59、t month. Li recommends the traditional Chinese dress while Su prefers the school uniform.I would be happy to wear traditional Chinese clothes at the welcome ceremony. Firstly, this is pre-cisely what the British visitors are expecting. They come to learn about Chinese culture with their own eyes. Th

60、eir Chinese peers in the typical Chinese dress would be highly impressive. The school uniforms are fine, but not special enough to give a unique Chinese flavour. Secondly, the inconve-nience is not a problem if our purpose is to share Chinese culture. It is just the so-called inconve-nience that dis