2022高三高考英语二轮复习读后续写微技能

1、读后续写微技能一、题型解读读后续写是随着我国高考改革由教育部考试中心研制的英语高考新题型，2016年10月 在浙江省首次使用。该题型通过读写结合，检测学生的英语书面语言理解与表达能力。要求 学生能够梳理故事文体的结构、分析故事开展的线索、想象故事开展的情节以及续写故事的 开展和结局。2020年山东省新高考英语卷首次采用读后续写题型。读后续写考题，提供一段350词以 内的语言材料，要求考生依据该材料内容和所给段落开头语进行续写，将其开展成一篇与给 定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文(150词左右)。从试题结构看，读后续写评价的 是书面理解能力和书面表达能力。因此，在写作之前，首先读懂文本，理

2、清故事情节，然后 构思故事的开展和结局。二、命题特点该题型一方面考查考生对所学语言的实际运用能力，另一方面也培养学生的发散思维能 力。读后续写不是随心所欲地写，而是根据题目要求，再读懂原文的基础上，利用原材料的 素材、线索和情节等充分发挥想象力和创造力来续写。通过对试题的分析，我们可得出读后续写的四大命题特点：选材以故事类记叙文为主，内容有趣，故事线索 逻辑性强命题特点-所给出的段落开头与上文联系紧密，指明了续写 的方向命题特点-续写段的情节不唯一，可根据自己的理解续写不 同的内容三、评分原那么.此题总分为25分，按七个档次进行评分。.评分时，应主要从内容、词汇语法和篇章结构三个方面考虑，具体

3、为:续写内容的质量、完整性以及与原文情境的融洽度。所使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性。(3)上下义的衔接和全文的连贯性。.评分时，应先根据作答的整体情况确定其所属的档次，然后以该档次的要求来综合衡量,确定或调整档次，最后给分。.评分时还应注意:词数少于120的，酌情扣分;.人烟稀少的农村地区：the thinly populated rural area.位于太平洋沿岸某处：be located somewhere on the Pacific coast一、表示心理描写My heart began to race and my mind went blank.我心跳开始加速，脑子里

4、一片空白。So many thoughts crowded into her mind, all at once.那么多的想法突然涌入她的脑海。So ashamed was she that she could feel the blood rush to her face.她是如此的羞愧以至于脸如充血般发烫。When the host announced that she won the prize, a wide excitement took hold of her. 当主持人宣布她获奖时，她的激动之情溢于言表。. His heart sank when he heard the new

5、s that he foiled to win a prize.听到他没获奖的消息，他的心情沉重。On blue days you feel like you re floating in an ocean of sadness.在忧郁的日子里，你会觉得自己在悲伤的海洋里沉沉浮浮。As a result of an accident, Tony was suddenly thrown into a world of darkness and sank into hopelessness.因为一场事故，托尼的世界突然陷入一片黑暗与绝望之中。Terror and death struck, and

6、 her heart was beating painfully fast, banging against her ribs. 恐怖和死亡袭来，她的心脏跳动得非常快，撞击着她的肋骨。I felt that the blood in my body cooled/froze rapidly because of the terrible sight.看到这可怕的景象，我感觉我的血液都凝固起来。He was sick with fear, but the thought of the consequences urged him on.他因害怕而感到恶心，但一想到结果，他还是要继续下去。I wo

7、nder if it s because I haven t been able to be outdoors for so long that I ve grown so crazy about everything to do with nature.我不知道这是不是因为我太久无法出门的缘故，我变得对一切与大自然有关的事物都无比狂 热。I can well remember that there was a time when a deep blue sky, the song of the birds, moonlight and flowers could never have kep

8、t me spellbound.我仍然清楚地记得曾经有一段时间，湛蓝的天空，鸟儿清脆的歌声，月光明亮，花香弥漫, 从未令我心迷神往过。I was a little nervous at first, but everyone was so nice and friendly that I soon stopped worrying.起初我有点紧张，但是大家都那么友好，我很快便不再担忧了。The Eagles went home angry and bitter because they did not win the tournament.Meanwhile, the Kangaroos we

9、nt home and trained harder than before.老鹰队队员们回到了家，内心既愤怒又苦涩，因为他们没有赢得锦标赛。与此同时，袋鼠队 队员们回家后，训练得比以前更刻苦了。I felt so ashamed.I must be really stupid to fail a simple math quiz!我感到很丢脸。我一定是蠢到家了才会连一次简单的数学测试都没通过！Afterwards, I pretended to be cheerful, but Hannah sensed something was wrong.后来，我假装很开心，但是汉娜觉察到了异样。Af

10、ter a couple of weeks, the excitement started to fade, and homesickness started to set in. 几个星期后，那股兴奋劲开始减退，想家的情绪开始蔓延。二、表示环境描写The sun began to rise in the sky, bathing the mountain in golden light.太阳开始缓缓升起，给山披上了一层金纱。The sun rose over a quiet world and looked warmly down upon the peaceful village. 太阳在

11、一个宁静的世界里升起，温暖地俯视着这个宁静的村庄。The sky is clear blue now and the sun has flung diamonds down on meadows, river banks and woods.此时已是万里蓝天，太阳将钻石般灿烂夺目的阳光洒向草原，洒向河岸，洒向树林。The rose looks like an angel, swaying in the wind, dancing in the sun.这朵玫瑰就像是在风中摇摆、在阳光下跳舞的天使。The grounds were covered with dark green grass th

12、rough which stretched a straight white stone path.庭院里处处是碧绿的芳草，绿草中铺着洁白笔直的石路。The beautiful scenery is a feast for your eyes.美丽的景色令人大饱眼福。These sublime and magnificent scenes offered me the greatest consolation.这些令人赞叹的壮美景色给了我极大的抚慰。Nanjing, an old city with a rich and celebrated past, yet vigorous in her

13、 new youth-how lovely she is!南京，这座古老而又年轻的历史文化名城，是多么的可爱！It was so quiet in the classroom that the sound of a needle in the ground could be heard.教室里很安静，连一根针掉在地上的声音都听得见。When we reached the top of the hill, a magnificent view of the sea greeted us.当我们到达山顶时，我们看到了一片壮丽的海景。The dark, rainy evening, the wind

14、, the thundering clouds held me entirely in their power. 那漆黑的雨夜，刮着大风，电闪雷鸣，乌云滚滚，我完全被这种景象镇住了。However, the lakes shone like glass in the setting sun and looked wonderful.然而，湖水在落日的余晖下闪亮如镜，景色迷人。The hut was dark inside so it took time for our eyes to adjust.小屋内很黑，所以我们的眼睛需要点时间才能适应。The room is in a mess, wi

15、th pizza boxes on the floor and dirty dishes in the sink.In the corner, there is a garbage can around which are pieces of garbage and waste paper.房间里一片混乱，地上扔了些比萨盒子，水槽里堆着脏盘子。角落里有一个垃圾箱，周围散 落着废纸屑和垃圾。Upon the arrival of spring, beautiful birds will sing happily in the park.春天一到，美丽的鸟儿们就会在公园里欢快地歌唱。The nar

16、row windows admit little light into the room.窗户很窄，只有少量的光能照进这个房间。At the close of the afternoon service, we returned by an exposed and hilly road, where the bitter winter wind, blowing over a range of snowy summits to the north, almost grayed the skin from our face.下午的祷告结束以后，我们沿着一条光秃崎岖的山路返回。冬日刺骨的寒风吹过大

17、雪覆盖的 山峰，吹向北边，吹得我们一脸苍白萧索。. The brightly burning meteor darkened the light.熊熊燃烧的流星使光线都变暗了。三、表示动作描写It was obvious that the manager of the coffee shop was waiting for Li Fang to leavehe wiped the tables, then sat down and turned on the TV.很明显，咖啡馆的经理在等李方离开他擦好桌子，然后坐下来，翻开电视。His eyes stare at what is left o

18、f the brother? s dinner on table.他的眼睛盯着兄弟俩留在餐桌上的残羹剩菜。Oliver gets it from a desk and gives it to Henry like a gift.奥利弗从桌上取过信,像送礼物一 样递给亨利。The hostess screams, the other customers look at her and she puts a hand to her mouth. 老板娘尖叫起来，其他顾客都望着她，于是她用手捂住了嘴巴。The owner, hostess and waiter all bow as Henry le

19、aves.当亨利离开的时候，店主、老板娘和服务员都向他鞠躬致敬。Charlie first picks out the laces and eats them as if they were spaghetti.Then he cuts off the leather top of the shoe as if it were the finest steak.查理先把鞋带挑出来，像吃意大利面一样把它们吃了。然后他把皮制的鞋头切下来，就好像 那是最美味的牛排。She stepped back appearing surprised and put up her hands, as if in

20、defence.她退了几步，显得很吃惊，举起了手，想要自卫。He held her firmly in his arms and she felt the warmth of his body.She screamed, pushed him away and ran to her room for the rest of the day.他把她紧紧地搂在怀里，她感觉到他身体的温热，尖叫了起来，推开他，跑进她的房间，之 后一整天都未出来。The boys who had never come across anything like this before started jumping ou

21、t of the windows.以前从来没有见过这种情况的男孩们吓得从窗户跳了出去。Professor Higgins carelessly throws a handful of money into her basket.希金斯教授漫不经心地朝她的篮子里扔了一把钱。Eliza Doolittle： (looking at the collected money in amazement) Well, I never.A whole pound! 伊莱扎杜利特尔：(惊奇地看着收集起来的钱)啊，我还从来没有见过！整整一英镑呢！Mrs Pearce： (only half resigned t

22、o it) Very well, sir.(goes downstairs) 皮尔斯夫人：(似听非听地)好吧，先生。(随即向楼下走去). Daniel runs into his bedroom and shuts the door angrily.丹尼尔跑进卧室，生气地关上了门。During the experiment, volunteers were asked to sniff various pleasant smells and unpleasant smells.实验期间，志愿者要去闻各种好闻的、不好闻的气味。The Eagle s captain knocked the bal

23、l to the ground with his hand, and then kicked it and scored.The referee blew the whistle； the match was over and the Eagles had won.老鹰队的队长用手将球击倒在地，踢了一脚，进球得分了，裁判吹响了哨子。比赛结束，老 鹰队赢了。She said that someone must have been spying on us in the washroom, but I didn t believe her explanation.她说肯定有人在洗手间一直监视我们，

24、但是我不相信她的解释。As I dropped my dad off, I watched him, dressed in his work clothes, getting his tools from the trunk of my car.我让父亲下车，看着他穿着工作服，从车后备箱里拿工具。He broke down in tears and was never going to let her out of his sight again.他痛哭流涕，再也不会让她离开自己的视线。Her father turned away as a tear of joy rolled down hi

25、s cheek.她的父亲别过脸，喜悦的泪水从脸颊上滚落下来。四、人物外貌描写He had a wide mouth and humorous grey eyes.他有一张大嘴和幽默的灰色眼睛。Two spots of color brightened/lit up her cheeks.两朵红霞晕染了她的脸颊。He has two big dark eyes under a pair of thick eyebrows.在一对浓密的眉毛下是他大而黑的双眼。I noticed that his eyes were black-coal black. 我注意到他的眼睛是黑色的炭黑色的。. She

26、arrived late for class， her hair wet and messy.她上课迟到了，头发又湿又脏。She was fair-skinned, having reddish hair and long fingers.她皮肤白皙，有着红发和修长的手指。His strongly-built body and sun-tanned skin make him look like a sportsman. 他强壮的身体和晒黑的皮肤使他看起来像一个运发动。Everything about him was old except his eyes and they were the

27、same color as the sea and were cheerful and undefeated.他身上的一切都显得古老，除了那双眼睛，它们像海水一般蓝，是乐观而不肯认输的。He has sparking blue green eyes, thinning silver hair that spills onto his forehead, big ears, a triangular nose, and tufts of graying eyebrow.他的眼睛闪烁着蓝绿色光芒，稀疏的银发散落在前额，大耳朵，三角形的鼻子和灰白的眉毛。The young woman was tai

28、l, with grace and elegance.She had a great amount of dark hair that was shown in the sunlight, and a face more beautiful than any other, with dark, mysterious eyes.She was polite and well-mannered, with a tender look.这个年轻的女人很高，且很优雅。她有一头乌黑的头发，在阳光下显得十分美丽，她的脸比 任何其他人都漂亮，她有一双神秘的黑眼睛。她彬彬有礼，举止文雅，目光温柔。五、人物神态

29、描写A dreaming look came over her face.她脸上浮现出梦幻般的神情。Her face was full of gloom and cruelty.她面色阴沉，表情冷酷。He smiled, his eyes full of laughter.他露出了笑容，双眼充满笑意。Her eyes gleamed and her fragile face broke into a smile.她的眼睛闪烁着光芒，精致的脸庞展现出微笑。Color glowed in his face and his strange eyes widened with joyfulness.他

30、的脸熠熠闪光，奇怪的眼睛因欢乐而大大睁开。Aley became happy now and a gentle smile spread over her face.阿利变得很开心，整张脸洋溢着温和的微笑。She rode the rest of the way home wearing a Mona Lisa smile of peace and grace.她带着蒙娜丽莎式的平静而优雅的微笑，骑完了剩下的回家路。He was glaring down at me again, his black eyes full of disgust.他又低头瞪着我，黑色眼瞳里充满了厌恶。His eye

31、s lit up when she walked into the room.A smile lit up her face.The smile spread across her face, which lit up his gloomy afternoon.看见她走进房间，他两眼一亮。她笑了，脸上露出了喜色。她满脸的微笑，点亮了他阴郁的 下午。Her cheeks were glowing.Her tears mingled with the blood on her face, dropping her gaze. 她双颊绯红，泪水和脸上的血混在了一起，同时目光低垂，不再凝视。六高级句式

32、结构It was the first time in a year and a half that V d seen the night face to face.这是我一年半以来第一次目睹夜晚。句子结构：It is/was the first（second.） time that sb. +现在完成时/过去完成时：这是某人第几 次做某事。It was my sister who first had the idea to cycle along the entire Mekong River from where it begins to where it ends,首先想到要沿着湄公河从源

33、头骑车到终点的是我的姐姐。（句子结构：强调句It is/was +被强调局部+ that/who;fromto连接where引导的宾语从句。）All hope was not lost.不是所有的希望都破灭了。（句子结构：局部否认）Only then did we decide to answer violence with violence.直到那时我们才决定以暴制暴。（句子结构：Only+状语+局部倒装。）Never will Zhou Yang forget his first job at the office of China Daily.周洋永远不会忘记他在中国日报办公室获得的第一

34、份工作。（句子结构：never等表示否认意义的词位于句首，句子用局部倒装。）. Among the painters who broke away from the traditional style of painting were the Impressionists, who lived and worked in Paris.在那些突破传统画法的画家中有生活和工作在巴黎的印象派画家。句子结构：among（介词）位于句首的倒装句，who引导非限制定语从句。Frederick William I ，the King of Prussia, could never have imagined

35、 that his greatest gift to the Russian people would have such an amazing history.普鲁士国王腓特烈威廉一世绝不可能想到他送给俄罗斯人民的厚礼会有这样一段令人惊讶 的历史。（句子结构：主语+同位语+谓语+宾语从句。）There is no doubt that the boxes were then put on a train for Konigsberg, which was at that time a German city on the Baltic Sea.毫无疑问，这些箱子后来被装上火车运往哥尼斯堡，当

36、时德国在波罗的海海边的一个城市。（句子结构：There is no doubt+that引导的同位语从句+ which引导的非限制性定语从句。）India has a national festival on October 2 to honour Mohandas Gandhi, the leader who helped gain India s independence from Britain.印度在10月2日有一个全国性的节日，以纪念莫罕达斯甘地，这位帮助印度独立于英国的 领袖。（句子结构：名词+同位语+定语从句。）Perhaps we ought to combine our id

37、eas and provide a balanced menu with food full of energy and fiber.或许我们应该结合彼此的想法，然后提供一个营养充足且富含纤维的健康均衡的菜单。（句子结构：介词短语作定语，相当于一个定语从句which/that is full of。）Earlier that day, when they crossed the Rocky Mountains, they managed to catch sight of some mountain goats and even a grizzly bear and an eagle.那天清晨

38、，当她们穿越落基山山脉时，她们看到了野山羊，甚至还看到了一只大灰熊和一只 鹰。（句子结构：时间状语+ when引导定语从句+主句）Going eastward, you, 11 pass mountains and thousands of lakes and forests, as well as wide rivers and large cities.一路向东，你会经过重重青山，路过千千万万的湖泊、山林，还有宽阔的河流和大都市。（句子结构：现在分词短语作状语；并列表达“AandB, as well as C and Do ）As Victor Hugo once said, “ Laug

39、hter is the sun that drives winter from the human face ”， and up to now nobody has been able to do this better than Charlie Chaplin.正如维克多雨果所说：“笑是阳光，能驱散人们脸上的寒冬”,目前为止，在这点上没有人 做得比查理卓别林更好。（句子结构：as引导非限制性定语从句；否认意义的词与比拟级连用表示最高级含义。）You may find it astonishing that Charlie was taught to sing as soon as he co

40、uld speak and dance as soon as he could walk.你会吃惊地发现，查理一会说话就有人教他去唱歌，一会走路就有人教他跳舞。句子结构：find it（形式宾语）+的: + that引导的宾语从句；that引导的宾语从句中包含着as soon as引导的时间状语从句。They are so hungry that they try boiling a pair of leather shoes for their dinner.他们太饿了，于是尝试着煮一双皮鞋当作晚餐。（句子结构：sothat句型。）With all these attractions, no

41、 wonder tourism is increasing wherever there is a Disneyland. 有这么多引人入胜之处，难怪有迪士尼乐园的地方，其旅游业就会增长。句子结构：with+.作原因状语；（it is） no wonder+. +wherever/whenever/whatever弓【导的 让步状语从句。John Snow was a well-known doctor in London一（and he was） so famous, indeed, that he attended Queen Victoria to ease the birth of h

42、er babies.约翰斯诺曾经是伦敦一位著名的医生他确实太负盛名了，所以能照看维多利亚女王，并 帮助她顺利分娩。（句子结构：一个简单句和一个复合句合并成一句，很好地运用了插入语和符号来连接句子。） 18. The seats were comfortable and after a calming drink, which made us sleepy, our eyes closed. 座位非常舒适，喝了点镇静剂后，我们很快闭上了眼睛，感到昏昏欲睡（句子结构：非限制性定语从句插在主句和状语之间。）Without the new paints and the new technique, w

43、e would not be able to see the many great masterpieces for which this period is famous.没有新的颜料和新的（绘画）手法，我们就不能看到这一时代很多著名的杰作。句子结构：“介词without+机”作条件状语，主句（虚拟语气）+介词（for）+which引导的定 语从句。It is easy to write and, like the cinquain, can give a clear picture and create a special feeling using the minimum of word

44、s.它容易写，而且像五行诗一样，它可以用最少的词语呈现一幅清晰的画面，表达出一种特殊 的感情。（句子结构：1口$ + 44/+ |：010 5由.，北10 +机作插入语，现在分词短语作方式状语。）It seems amazing that at my age 1 am still fit enough to cycle 20 kilometers in an afternoon. 感到不可思议吧，像我这样的年纪，身体健康而且能在一个下午骑车20公里。句子结构：It（形式主语）+ seems+M： + that引导主语从句。There is no doubt that the earth is

45、becoming warmer and that it is human activity that has caused this global warming rather than a random but natural phenomenon.毫无疑问，地球正在变暖，而地球变暖正是人类活动所致，而非一种无规律的自然现象。句子结构：There is no doubt that.and that句式（两个同位语从句并列）；在第二个that引导的 同位语从句中，又用了 it isthat强调句型。I was about to go back to sleep when suddenly my

46、 bedroom became as bright as day. 我刚要继续睡觉，突然我的卧室亮如白昼。（句子结构：be about to do.when.o ）The other two climbed down into the crater to collect some lava for later study, but this being my first experience, I stayed at the top and watched them.另外两人向下爬进火山口去收集供日后研究用的岩浆，我是第一次经历这样的事，所以留在 山顶上观察他们。（句子结构：独立主格结构thi

47、s being my first experience作原因状语。）Just accept them for who they are, and give them encouragement to live as rich and full a life as you do.要接受他们，给他们以鼓励，让他们能像你一样过得丰富多彩，充实美满。（句子结构：as+形容词+a/an +名词+as的用法。）Pressed by my friends and relations, I decided to send my invention to the patent office to get rec

48、ognition for my successful idea.由于朋友和亲戚的敦促，我决定把我的创造送到专利局，请他们对我这次成功的思路给予认 可。（句子结构：过去分词短语作原因状语。）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。My dad and I both love to remember the past.As he was approaching 60, I wanted to do something really fun.I came up with an idea： What if I could get the memories people

49、 had of him, put each one into an envelope-60 in total-and have him open them one by one on his birthday? So I wrote an email to my family and friends, explaining my idea.This was what I said： Hello, everyone!If you re receiving this email, you probably know that our dad, Patrick Burns, is turning 6

50、0 next month.To celebrate his birthday, we d like to put together a little surprise to let him know that his nearest and dearest are thinking of him.We would be so grateful if you d write down a favorite memory you have of our dad and put it in the post. You can just write it down on a piece of pape

51、r and sign your name.Thank you so much! We do appreciate you taking a few minutes to do this； it will he so worth it when he reads all the memories people have of him!Holly, 7bm, Lake, and SusieI sent this email and waited.And then the replies started coming in and I was amazed.There were so many me

52、mories.They came from the 50 s,60 s and 70 s, from every decade between now and the day my dad was born.They came from my mother, my siblings, my grandma, my dad s friends, my dad s sister, my dad s first boss, a colleague at his first job, from people who hadn, t seen my dad for 40 years, from peop

53、le I hadn, t even contacted originally but who had been told about the project by someone else.They typed them and handwrote them.They mailed them and emailed them.The night before my dad s birthday, my sister and I stayed up late, putting everything together.The next morning, after breakfast and pr

54、esents and cake, we gave the pile of envelopes to him, “Just one more thing for you, “ we said.注意：续写词数应为150左右。It took him a really, really long time to open them.This birthday meant as much to me as it did to my dad.第一步 读文本（拆分理解）My dad and I both love to remember the past.As he was approaching 60, I

55、 wanted to do something really fun.I came up with an idea： What if I could get the memories people had of him, put each one into an envelope-60 in total-and have him open them one by one on his birthday? So I wrote an email to my family and friends, explaining my idea.This was what I said： 分析：父亲和“我”

56、都喜欢回忆过去。父亲60岁生日即将到来，因此“我”想送给他一份特 别的礼物：邀请亲朋好友分别把他们对“我”父亲的记忆用书信的形式记下来，送给父亲。 段落关键词：remember； memories 段落大意：故事背景：回忆过去。Hello, everyone!If you9 re receiving this email, you probably know that our dad, Patrick Bums, is turning 60 next month.To celebrate his birthday, we d like to put together a little surp

57、rise to let him know that his nearest and dearest are thinking of him.We would be so grateful if you d write down a favorite memory you have of our dad and put（2）书写较差以致影响交际的，酌情扣分；单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面，评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑, 英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。四、评分档次it in the post. You can just write it down on a piece of pap

58、er and sign your name.档次描述第七档（22-25 分）创造了新颖、丰富、合理的内容，富有逻辑性，续写完整，与原文情境 融洽度高；使用了多样且恰当的词汇和语法结构，表达流畅，语言错误很少，且完 全不影响理解；自然有效地使用了段落间、语句间衔接手段，全文结构清晰，前后呼应， 意义连贯。第六档（18-21 分）创造了比拟丰富、合理的内容，比拟有逻辑性，续与比拟完整，与原文 情境融洽度较局；使用了比拟多样且恰当的词汇和语法结构，表达比拟流畅，有个别错误， 但不影响理解；比拟有效地使用了语句间衔接手段，全文结构比拟清晰，意义比拟连贯。第五档（1517 分）创造了基本合理的内容，有一

59、定的逻辑性，续写基本完整，与原文情境 相关；使用了比拟恰当的词汇和语法结构，表达方式不够多样性，表达有些许 错误，但基本不影响理解；使用了语句间衔接手段，全文结构比拟清晰，意义比拟连贯。第四档（11 14 分）创造了基本完整的故事内容，但有的情节不够合理或逻辑性不强，与原 文情境基本相关；使用了简单的词汇和语法结构，有局部语言错误和不恰当之处，个别部 分影响理解；尚有语句衔接的意识，全文结构基本清晰，意义基本连贯。第三档（610 分）内容和逻辑上有一些重大问题，续与不够完整，与原文有一定程度脱节； 所用的词汇有限，语法结构单调，错误较多且比拟低级，影响理解； 未能有效地使用语句间衔接手段，全文

60、结构不够清晰，意义欠连贯。第二档（15 分）内容和逻辑上有较多重大问题，或有局部内容抄自原文，续写不完整， 与原文情境基本脱节；所使用的词汇非常有限，语法结构单调，错误极多，严重影响理解； 几乎没有使用语句间衔接手段，全文结构不清晰，意义不连贯。Thank you so much! We do appreciate you taking a few minutes to do this； it will be so worth it when he reads all the memories people have of him!HollyTom, Lake, and Susie 分析：“我