公开课课件 高中英语短文改错讲解

HowtodoProof-reading高中英语短文改错Howtodo高中英语短文改错1考查目标1）识别错误并正确校正语篇的能力2）综合运用英语知识的能力3）准确理解语篇，掌握内容及行文逻辑的能力考查目标1）识别错误并正确校正语篇的能力2解题步骤1.(浏览全文，掌握大意）2.（分句阅读，逐行找错）3.（检查核对，攻克难点）解题步骤1.(浏览全文，掌握大意）2.（分句阅读，逐行找错）31.Icangotohomenow.2.Ilikeplayingpiano.3.IamfondatEnglish.theWrongword∧MissingwordofUnnecessary

word高考短文改错的考察方式theWrongword∧MissingwordofUn4动词形，名词数．还要注意形和副．代词格，细领悟介词短语须关注．习惯用法要记住．冠词连词常光顾．

ALimerick高考短文改错的考点动词形，名词数．还要注意形和副．代词格，细领悟介词短语须关注5一、动词形

1.动词的时态和语态错误.

2.主、谓不一致的错误。3.非谓语动词的正确使用高考链接１：Whentheairmove,wehavewind.moves一、动词形1.6

1.Waterpollutionoftenbringondisease.2.Sofar,hemadealivingbypickingupwastes.

3.Thechurchburneddownyesterdaydatefromthe18thcentury.

4.Compareto1992,thepriceofgrainwasincreasedabout50%.

5.Judgefromhisaccent,heisasoutherner.

6.Withaboyledtheway,theystartedtowardsthevillage.bringshasdatesJudgingleadingCompared

1.Waterpollutionoftenbring71.LiMingcameseemeeverymonth.

∨to非谓语，细辨别1.不定式符号to的有无问题；2.动名词作主语、宾语问题;3.and连接的不定式或动名词前后一致问题;现在分词和过去分词的区别等。2.Isawtheboysplayedgamesonthe

bankofthelakewhenIpassed.playing∨to非谓语，细辨别2.Isawtheboyspl8二、名词数

指名词单、复数形式的用法错误。1.可数与不可数名词的混用2.可数名词的单复数的错用3.名词的格的误用高考链接2：Wewritetoeachotherallthetimes.time二、名词数指名词单、复数形式的用法错误。高考链接91.Don’tlosehearts,you’llbesuccessfulintime.2.Ineedsomemoreinformations.

3.Thesemachineslookthesame,buttheyareofdifferentkind.heartinformationkinds1.Don’tlosehearts,you’llbe10三、还要注意形和副１．修饰名词，系动词后要用形容词２．修饰动词，形容词，过去分词，整个句子用副词３．比较级和最高级的使用4.近义词或形近词的误用（late/later/latter/lately,hardly/hard,close/closely,most/mostly...）高考链接３：ItisstillhardlyformetowriteinEnglish.hard三、还要注意形和副１．修饰名词，系动词后要用形容词高考链接３111.Thebadnewsmadeusfeelsadly.2.Thechildrenlearntoreadandwrite,theyplaygamesasgood.3.It’snotgoodtokeepchildrenbusilywiththeirstudiesalldaylong.sadwellbusy1.Thebadnewsmadeusfeelsa12四、代词格，细领悟人称代词，物主代词的使用．２．反身代词oneself的使用．３．关系代词的使用.４.不定代词的使用．５．Both,

all,

either,

neither,

none的使用.6.Whose

和who’s，its和it’s的区别．高考链接４：IheardthatMr.WangwouldteachourEnglishthisterm.us四、代词格，细领悟人称代词，物主代词的使用．高考链接４：u131.Knowingisonething;doingisother.

2.Ialsoenjoyedthedayswhenwespenttogether.3.Hedrovetoofast,andthepolicestoppedherandhandedhimaticket.another(that/which)him1.Knowingisonething;doing14五、介词短语须关注，

习惯用法要记住．主要考查常见介词，固定搭配。

1)介词的多余或缺失;

2)介词的错用(这部分需要平时多多积累，弄清常用介词的固定搭配)。高考链接５：Themanissittingnexthisson.to∧五、介词短语须关注，主要考查常见介词，固定搭配。高考151.Don’tgetintothehabitatsmoking.2.HecalledonJennyonthehopeofgettinghelpfromher.3.Agreatmanyofstudentswouldlikegiveupdrinking.ofwith1.Don’tgetintothehabitat161.TodayIvisitedtheSmiths－myfirstvisittoaAmericanfamily．

2.Wemaybeonefamilyandliveunderasameroof.

3.Whatagoodnewswe’veheard.六、冠词常光顾

1）不定冠词a和an互改2）不定冠词a或an和定冠词the互改3）根据需要增删冠词(注意习惯用法)anthe六、冠词常光顾anthe171.Youcan’tconsiderhimahonestman.2.InChina,childrenusuallystartschoolatanageofseven.

3.Itisnecessaryfortheteacherstoaddthearttotheirteachings.

anthe1.Youcan’tconsiderhimahon181.Thefoodwasgoogandtheservicewaspoor.2.Becausemyparentsareverykindtome,soIdon’twanttoletthemdown.七、连词常光顾逻辑关系，包括并列连词

(and,but,or)、状语从句（when/while等状语从句）名词性从句（that,what等名词性从句）定语从句（关系代词who、that、which、as，关系副词when，where，why）___but3.ThehousewhichLuXunoncelivedisbeingrepairednow.where七、连词常光顾___but3.Thehousewhic191.Thoughitwascold,buthewentoutwithoutacat.2.Whateveryoudo,andI’llberightherewaitingforyou.3.Thiskindofcarcostsalotofmoney,andhecanaffordit.4.Soiftheyhadsaidwastrue,Iwouldhavesucceeded.butwhat∧1.Thoughitwascold,buthew20

四不改:

①标点符号不改②大小写不改③词序错误不改④单词拼写不改

文中出现带汉语注释的词，在句中不可能错

FourpointsthatyoushouldpayattentiontoDon'tforget！

四不改:Fourpointsthatyoush21

规范答题，否则不得分！1.Icangotohomenow.2.Ilikeplayingpiano.3.IamfondatEnglish.the在下方划线，正确的词写在下面。∧箭头的方向，添加的词写在下面of不要用别的符号

规范答题，否则不得分！the在下方划线，正确的词写在下22短文改错：假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改同桌写的一篇作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删减：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。巩固练习(NMET2015)短文改错：巩固练习(NMET2015)23Attention!1.每句最多两处错误。2.每处错误只修改一词。3.只有前十处给分。（避免为了得分整篇文章都改！）Attention!1.每句最多两处错误。24

WhenIwasachild,Ihopedtoliveinthecity.IthinkIwouldbehappythere.NowIamlivinginacity,butImissmyhomeincountryside.Theretheairiscleanorthemountainsaregreen.Unfortunately,onthedevelopmentofindustrialization,theenvironmenthasbeenpolluted.Lotsofstudieshavebeenshownthatglobalwarminghasalreadybecomeaveryseriouslyproblem.Theairswebreatheinisgettingdirtieranddirtier.Muchrareanimalsaredyingout.Wemustfoundwaystoprotectyourenvironment.Ifwefailedtodoso,wewouldlivetoregretit.WhenIwasachild,25

WhenIwasachild,Ihopedtoliveinthecity.IthinkIwouldbehappythere.NowIamlivinginacity,butImissmyhomeincountryside.Theretheairiscleanorthemountainsaregreen.Unfortunately,onthethe_________thought____and____with∧WhenIwasachild,26

developmentofindustrialization,theenvironmenthasbeenpolluted.Lotsofstudieshavebeenshownthatglobalwarminghasalreadybecomeaveryseriouslyproblem.Theairswebreatheinis____________serious______airdevelopmentofindustrializ27

gettingdirtieranddirtier.Muchrareanimalsaredyingout.Wemustfoundwaysto

protectyourenvironment.Ifwefailedtodoso,wewouldlivetoregretit._______Many________find______ourgettingdirtieranddirtier28小结做短文该错应采取三个步骤1.通读短文，掌握大意2.细读全文，逐一作答3.复读全文，验证答案小结做短文该错应采取三个步骤1.通读短文，掌握大意29HowtodoProof-reading高中英语短文改错Howtodo高中英语短文改错30考查目标1）识别错误并正确校正语篇的能力2）综合运用英语知识的能力3）准确理解语篇，掌握内容及行文逻辑的能力考查目标1）识别错误并正确校正语篇的能力31解题步骤1.(浏览全文，掌握大意）2.（分句阅读，逐行找错）3.（检查核对，攻克难点）解题步骤1.(浏览全文，掌握大意）2.（分句阅读，逐行找错）321.Icangotohomenow.2.Ilikeplayingpiano.3.IamfondatEnglish.theWrongword∧MissingwordofUnnecessary

word高考短文改错的考察方式theWrongword∧MissingwordofUn33动词形，名词数．还要注意形和副．代词格，细领悟介词短语须关注．习惯用法要记住．冠词连词常光顾．

ALimerick高考短文改错的考点动词形，名词数．还要注意形和副．代词格，细领悟介词短语须关注34一、动词形

1.动词的时态和语态错误.

2.主、谓不一致的错误。3.非谓语动词的正确使用高考链接１：Whentheairmove,wehavewind.moves一、动词形1.35

1.Waterpollutionoftenbringondisease.2.Sofar,hemadealivingbypickingupwastes.

3.Thechurchburneddownyesterdaydatefromthe18thcentury.

4.Compareto1992,thepriceofgrainwasincreasedabout50%.

5.Judgefromhisaccent,heisasoutherner.

6.Withaboyledtheway,theystartedtowardsthevillage.bringshasdatesJudgingleadingCompared

1.Waterpollutionoftenbring361.LiMingcameseemeeverymonth.

∨to非谓语，细辨别1.不定式符号to的有无问题；2.动名词作主语、宾语问题;3.and连接的不定式或动名词前后一致问题;现在分词和过去分词的区别等。2.Isawtheboysplayedgamesonthe

bankofthelakewhenIpassed.playing∨to非谓语，细辨别2.Isawtheboyspl37二、名词数

指名词单、复数形式的用法错误。1.可数与不可数名词的混用2.可数名词的单复数的错用3.名词的格的误用高考链接2：Wewritetoeachotherallthetimes.time二、名词数指名词单、复数形式的用法错误。高考链接381.Don’tlosehearts,you’llbesuccessfulintime.2.Ineedsomemoreinformations.

3.Thesemachineslookthesame,buttheyareofdifferentkind.heartinformationkinds1.Don’tlosehearts,you’llbe39三、还要注意形和副１．修饰名词，系动词后要用形容词２．修饰动词，形容词，过去分词，整个句子用副词３．比较级和最高级的使用4.近义词或形近词的误用（late/later/latter/lately,hardly/hard,close/closely,most/mostly...）高考链接３：ItisstillhardlyformetowriteinEnglish.hard三、还要注意形和副１．修饰名词，系动词后要用形容词高考链接３401.Thebadnewsmadeusfeelsadly.2.Thechildrenlearntoreadandwrite,theyplaygamesasgood.3.It’snotgoodtokeepchildrenbusilywiththeirstudiesalldaylong.sadwellbusy1.Thebadnewsmadeusfeelsa41四、代词格，细领悟人称代词，物主代词的使用．２．反身代词oneself的使用．３．关系代词的使用.４.不定代词的使用．５．Both,

all,

either,

neither,

none的使用.6.Whose

和who’s，its和it’s的区别．高考链接４：IheardthatMr.WangwouldteachourEnglishthisterm.us四、代词格，细领悟人称代词，物主代词的使用．高考链接４：u421.Knowingisonething;doingisother.

2.Ialsoenjoyedthedayswhenwespenttogether.3.Hedrovetoofast,andthepolicestoppedherandhandedhimaticket.another(that/which)him1.Knowingisonething;doing43五、介词短语须关注，

习惯用法要记住．主要考查常见介词，固定搭配。

1)介词的多余或缺失;

2)介词的错用(这部分需要平时多多积累，弄清常用介词的固定搭配)。高考链接５：Themanissittingnexthisson.to∧五、介词短语须关注，主要考查常见介词，固定搭配。高考441.Don’tgetintothehabitatsmoking.2.HecalledonJennyonthehopeofgettinghelpfromher.3.Agreatmanyofstudentswouldlikegiveupdrinking.ofwith1.Don’tgetintothehabitat451.TodayIvisitedtheSmiths－myfirstvisittoaAmericanfamily．

2.Wemaybeonefamilyandliveunderasameroof.

3.Whatagoodnewswe’veheard.六、冠词常光顾

1）不定冠词a和an互改2）不定冠词a或an和定冠词the互改3）根据需要增删冠词(注意习惯用法)anthe六、冠词常光顾anthe461.Youcan’tconsiderhimahonestman.2.InChina,childrenusuallystartschoolatanageofseven.

3.Itisnecessaryfortheteacherstoaddthearttotheirteachings.

anthe1.Youcan’tconsiderhimahon471.Thefoodwasgoogandtheservicewaspoor.2.Becausemyparentsareverykindtome,soIdon’twanttoletthemdown.七、连词常光顾逻辑关系，包括并列连词

(and,but,or)、状语从句（when/while等状语从句）名词性从句（that,what等名词性从句）定语从句（关系代词who、that、which、as，关系副词when，where，why）___but3.ThehousewhichLuXunoncelivedisbeingrepairednow.where七、连词常光顾___but3.Thehousewhic481.Thoughitwascold,buthewentoutwithoutacat.2.Whateveryoudo,andI’llberightherewaitingforyou.3.Thiskindofcarcostsalotofmoney,andhecanaffordit.4.Soiftheyhadsaidwastrue,Iwouldhavesucceeded.butwhat∧1.Thoughitwascold,buthew49

四不改:

①标点符号不改②大小写不改③词序错误不改④单词拼写不改

文中出现带汉语注释的词，在句中不可能错

FourpointsthatyoushouldpayattentiontoDon'tforget！

四不改:Fourpointsthatyoush50

规范答题，否则不得分！1.Icangotohomenow.2.Ilikeplayingpiano.3.IamfondatEnglish.the在下方划线，正确的词写在下面。∧箭头的方向，添加的词写在下面of不要用别的符号

规范答题，否则不得分！the在下方划线，正确的词写在下51短文改错：假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改同桌写的一篇作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删减：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。巩固练习(NMET2015)短文改错：巩固练习(NMET2015)52Attention!1.每句最多两处错误。2.每处错误只修改一词。3.只有前十处给分。（避免为了得分整篇文章都改！）Attention!1.每句最多两处错误。53

WhenIwasachild,Ihopedtoliveinthecity.IthinkIwouldbehappythere.NowIamlivinginacity,butImissmyhomeincountryside.Theretheairiscleanorthemountainsaregreen.Unfortunately,onth