writing - a letter of 教学课件讲解

ALetterofAdvice[EWP3]ReadthePossibleVersionaloudDearTom,I’msorryyouhavehadaquarrelwithyourfriend.Herearesometipsforyou.First,don’tbetooworried.Mostfriendshavedisagreementsfromtimetotime.Second,whynotsaysorryforwhatyoudidwrong?Ifyoudothis,yourfriendwillknowyouvaluehis/herfriendshipandwanttomakeupwithhim/her.Atthesametime,he/shewillsurelyrealizehe/shewasatfault,too.Third,talkwithyourfriendaboutyourdeepestfeelingsandthoughts.Onlyinthiswaycanyouunderstandeachotherbetter.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.Yours,LiHua呈现主题---就来信呈现需解决的问题提出针对性的建议表明观点或提出希望建议信----“三段式结构”Para.1----呈现主题(就来信呈现需解决的问题)Para.2----提出针对性的建议Para.3----表明观点或提出希望Para.1呈现主题---就来信呈现需解决的问题WhatproblemdoesXiaoDonghave?-----Heisnotgoodatcommunicating withpeopleandcan’tmakegood friendswiththem.Yourshowtime:WritethefirstparagraphI’msorryyouhavehadaquarrelwithyourfriend.Herearesometipsforyou.Thefollowingaremysuggestions.Para.2----提出针对性的建议(适当说明原因)注意使用过渡衔接词和提建议的句式[EW.P3]First,don’tbetooworried.(Mostfriendshavedisagreementsfromtimetotime.)

Second,whynotsaysorryforwhatyoudidwrong?(Ifyoudothis,yourfriendwillknowyouvaluehis/herfriendshipandwanttomakeupwithhim/her.)

Atthesametime,he/shewillsurelyrealizehe/shewasatfault,too.Third,talkwithyourfriendaboutyourdeepestfeelingsandthoughts.(Onlyinthiswaycanyouunderstandeachotherbetter.)Tobeginwith,

youshouldbeconcernedaboutothersandtrytobefriendlyaspossibleasyoucan.(Ifyouarealwaysreadytohelpothers,yourclassmateswillknowyoubetter.)

What’smore,itisagoodideaforyoutobeagoodlistenerwhileothersarespeaking.(Inthisway,peoplewillfeelcomfortabletobewithyou.)

Atlast,youhadbettertakeanactivepartinclassactivities(whereyoucanshowyourtalentandmakefriendswithotherpartners.)表示顺序的常用衔接词(OrderlyTransitionalmakers)Firstofall，...Inaddition…首先，……；另外，……；Tobeginwith...，Moreover./What’smore/Besides..，Finally...第一，……；此外……，最后……Firstly，...Secondly，...Finally，...第一……；第二……；最后……First,…Second,…Third,…Shareyourideastochangethesituationwithgroupmemberandgiveyourreasons.Yourshowtime:WritethesecondparagraphPara.3----表明观点或提出希望Someusefulsentences

----EWP3Yourshowtime:WritethethirdparagraphFinishyourletter.《周报》同步评估试题第1期阅读C篇和D篇（选做一篇）以及完形填空DearXiaoDong,Iamgladtohearfromyou.Fromyourletter,Iknowthatyouarenotgoodatcommunicatingwithpeopleanddon’tknowhowtomakefriendsinthenewschool,soyouneedmyadvice.

Firstofall,you’dbetterfindthechancetojoininpeople’sdiscussiontoknowmoreabouteachother,sothatyoucanfindtheclassmateswhohavethesamehobbiesasyou.Besides,itwouldbeagoodideaifyoucould

showyourgreatinterestinthetopicbyaskingquestionswhilelisteningtoothers.Finally,whentheyareintrouble,youshouldofferhelptoyourclassmatesandsharetheirsorrowsandpains.Ihopemyadvicewillbehelpfulandyoucanmakesomefriendssuccessfulsoon.Yours,MissWangDearXiaoDong,Iamgladtohearfromyou.Fromyourletter,Iknowthatyouarenotgoodatcommunicatingwithpeopleanddon’tknowhowtomakefriendsinthenewschool,andthefollowingsaremysuggestions.

[回应来信，指出问题]

Firstofall,

you’dbetterfindthechancetojoininpeople’sdiscussiontoknowmoreabouteachother,sothatyoucanfindtheclassmateswhohavethesamehobbiesasyou.Besides,

itisagoodideaforyoutobeagoodlistenerwhileothersarespeaking.Inthisway,peoplewillfeelcomfortabletobewithyouandwouldliketomakefriendswithyou.Finally,whentheyareintrouble,youshouldofferhelptoyourclassmatesandsharetheirsorrowsandpains,whichcanshowyou’reakindandeasy-goingperson.

[针对问题提出建议]

Ihopemyadvicewillbehelpfultoyou

andyoucanmakesomefriendssuccessfulsoon.[表明观点或提出希望]

Yours,MissWangjoin

vt./vi.加入；参加joinaclub/anorganization/anarmy----tobeamemberofHaseveryonejoinedtheYouthLeague?joinsb.(indoingsth.)----todosth.withsb.TogetherWouldyoujoinusfordinner?joinin+活动

----takepartin----Willjoin(us)inthediscussion?[《全优》P9]joinin/takepartin/attend的区别----详见《全优》P9Istillfindithardtomakegoodfriendswiththem.[《全优》P9]find+it(形式宾语)+adj./n.(宾补)+todo/that---(真正宾语)常用此结构的动词：consider认为;feel;find(觉得);guess;imagine(想象);make;thinkWeallconsideritourduty

tohandinhomeworkontime.他觉得看电影学英语很有用。

Hethinks/findsit___________________byseeingfilms.usefultolearnEnglishIwouldbegratefulifyoucouldgivemesomeadvice.如果……我将不胜感激---Iwouldappreciateitif……根据汉语提示，完成下列句子。Susan:Hi,Maria!Longtimenosee.______________________________________________（你和你的新室友相处如何）?Maria:Notverywell.Infact,Iamhavingsometroublewithher.Susan:What’sup?HowareyougettingalongwithyournewroommateMaria:Myroommate________________________（不喜欢早点睡觉）andshesurfstheInternetdeepintotheni