高三作文指导润色文章1课件

WorldExpocommemorativecoinsWhydoyouwanttohavethisWorldExpocoin?WorldExpocommemorativecoins11.so---that2.too---to3.Itis---that---4.With---5.(Thereason)why---isthat---6.belikelyto/Itislikelythat---7.Itseemsthat---sb./sth.seemstobe/do8.Itneveroccurstosb.that---9.Only---10.Thereisnodoubtthat---11.havetrouble/difficulty(in)doing12.can’thelpdoing13.Themore---,themore---14.Thereisnopoint(in)doingsth.15.pastorpresentparticiples1.so---that2

高三英语写作指导

润饰词句，增加文采高三英语写作指导3DearSirorMadam,

Pleaselistentomyhope.I’maseniormiddleschoolstudent.IwanttobeanexchangestudentinEnglandsinceIwasachild.It’sthebestwaytoimprovemylanguage.Englandhasmanypalacesandchurches.Iwanttolivewiththehostfamily,IcanknowmoreabouttheEnglishculture.Icanmakesomefriendswithblueeyesandgoldenhair.Ithinkit’scoolandwonderful.Itcanopenmyeyesightareainthisway.That’smyheartwords.Pleaseconsiderit.Yoursfaithfully,LiHuaDearSirorMadam,4评点：

1.基本交代清楚了来信目的；

2.没有分段

3.没有运用过渡的连接词；

4.表达方式单一，语句欠丰富，

5.基本上没有高级词汇和句型；

6.开头生硬,结尾处汉式英语较严重.评点：5Thefirstparagraph:Giveabriefself–introductionandmakeclearyourpurposeThesecondparagraph:Givereasonsorlistsomeadvantagesofbeinganexchangestudent.(containingfacts,data,examples,etc.)Thethirdparagraph:Expresswishesandgratitude.Thefirstparagraph:Give6DearSirorMadam,

Pleaselistentomyhope.I’maseniormiddleschoolstudent.IwanttobeanexchangestudentinEnglandsinceIwasachild.

It’sthebestwaytoimprovemylanguage.Englandhasmanypalacesandchurches.Iwanttolivewiththehostfamily,IcanknowmoreabouttheEnglishculture.Icanmakesomefriendswithblueeyesandgoldenhair.Ithinkit’scoolandwonderful.Itcanopenmyeyesightareainthisway.That’smyheartwords.

Pleaseconsiderit.Yoursfaithfully,LiHuaDearSirorMadam,7I’maseniormiddleschoolstudent.Iwanttobeanexchangestudent.I’maseniorschoolgirlwhowantstobeanexchangestudenttoEnglandforoneyear.It’sthebestwaytoimprovemylanguage.AsEnglishisbecomingmoreandmoreimportantinjob-huntingandcommunication,thereisnodoubtthatbeinganexchangestudentisaneffectivewaytosuccess.1.使用从句I’maseniormiddleschoolstu8Iwanttolivewiththehostfamily,IcanknowmoreabouttheEnglishculture.

ItislivingtogetherwiththehostfamilythatcanhelpmegetabetterunderstandingoftheEnglishculture.2.使用强调句Iwanttolivewiththehostf9InspiredbytheEnglishculture,I’mwillingtoseizetheopportunitytolivewiththehostfamilytoenrichmyknowledge.Livingwiththehostfamily,IcanhaveabetterunderstandingoftheEnglishculture.

3.使用非谓语动词Iwanttolivewiththehostfamily,IcanknowmoreabouttheEnglishculture.

InspiredbytheEnglishcult10Englandhasmanypalacesandchurches.

（一般）Englandisalsoanancientcountrywithmanyculturalrelicsandfascinatingcastles.

（高级）4.使用with的复合结构Englandhasmanypalacesandc11OnlybystudyingabroadinEnglandcanIbroadenmyhorizons.Itcanopenmyeyesightareainthisway.5.使用倒装句OnlybystudyingabroadinEng12,goingabroadisthebestwaytomasteraforeignlanguageassoperfectalearningcircumstanceisoffered.

,itislivingtogetherwiththehostfamilythatcanhelpmegetabetterunderstandingoftheEnglishculture.,oneisboundtobenefitalotfromaone-yearstudylikethis.,EnglandisadevelopedcountrywherealotofjobOpportunitiesareinstoreforme.

6、使用恰当的连接词Reasonsforbeinganexchangestudent:TobeginwithWhat’smoreInadditionTherefore,go131.ThereasonswhyIaminterestedinitarelisted________.2.Ihopeyoucan_______this______________andIwould______________ifyoucouldgivemeanearlyreply.3.I__________tovisitplacesofinterestinEngland.4.Iwill___________this

opportunityto_________________.5.Itisalsosaidthattheweatherthereis___________.7.运用高级词汇，提高表达层次asfollowstakeintoconsiderationbeverygratefulhaveadesiremakethemostofmakemyselfimprovedagreeableasfollowstake---intoconsiderationbeverygratefulmakethemostofagreeablemakemyselfimprovedhaveadesire1.ThereasonswhyIaminteres14DearSir, IamaseniorschoolstudentwhowantstobeanexchangestudentinEnglandforoneyear,soIamwritingtoapplytoyouforyouradmission._________________________________________________. ___________,asEnglishisbecomingmoreandmoreimportantinJob-huntingandcommunication,thereisnodoubtthatbeinganexchangestudentisaneffectivewaytosuccess._________,ItislivingtogetherwiththehostfamilythatcanhelpmegetabetterunderstandingoftheEnglishculture._________,Englandisalsoanancientcountrywithmanyculturalrelicsandfascinatingcastles.OnlybystudyingtherecanIbroadenmyhorizons.___________,IwillmakethemostofthisopportunitytomakemyEnglishimprovedifpossible. _______,_______________________________________________.IhopeyoucantakemyrequestintoconsiderationandIwouldbeverygratefulifyoucouldgivemeanearlyreply.yourssincerelyWangHuaThereasonswhyIaminterestedinitarelistedasfollows.TobeginwithWhat’smoreInadditionThereforeInawordoneisboundtobenefitalotfromaone-yearstudylikethisDearSir,ThereasonswhyIam15假如你是李明，本学期你们班级里从外省转来一名学生王华，他一时无法融入新的集体，感到苦恼，请给他写一封信，信中应该包括以下要点：1.分析原因。2.提出建议。假如你是李明，本学期你们班级里从外省转来一名学生王华，他一时16DearWanghua,Youfeelupsetasyouareanewcomer,andyoucan’tgetfamiliarwitheveryonesoon.Ithinkyoushouldbeactive!Anyway,Iwilltrytohelpyou.Inmyopinion,youaretooshytotalktoyourclassmates.Maybethenewsurroundingsmakeyouuncomfortable.Nevergiveupyourselfandisolateyourself.Thefollowingaremysuggestions.First,youmustspeaktoothersandcommunicatewiththeothersmore.Second,don’talwaystrytoregardyourselfasanimportantoneintheclass,justrelaxyourselfanddisplayyourabilitiesfreely,thenotherswillbeawarethatyouareaniceperson.Inthisway,whenyoutryyourbest,youcanreallybecomeapartofourclass,Ithinkyouwillbepopularwiththeothers.Wishyougoodluck!

YoursLiMingDearWanghua,17DearWanghua,(background)MynameisLiming.Iamyournewclassmate.welcometoourschool.Iknowthatyoucan’tgetintoourclass.Iwillhelpyou.(reason)Ithinkthereasonyoucan’tgetalongwithuswasthatyoudidn’tlikecommunicatingwithus.Ifyoucommunicatewithus,we’llknoweachother.Itisgoodforustodevelopourfriendships.youarefromotherplace.SoyouhavenotbeenusedtothecustomofShanghai.Itisquitenormal.Youneedtime.(suggestion)Youshouldtrycommunicatingwithclassmates,teachersandyourfriends.Itwillhelpyoualot.Ifyouhavetime,youcangoouttoplaywithus.Wecanplaybasketball,singsongsanddoalotofinterestingthings.Ihopeyouwillbeourfriendquickly.Itisgoodforyouandourclass,(conclusion)Takemyadviceandyouwillfeelbetter,trustme!YoursLimingDearWanghua,18Goodbye!Goodbye!19

写作练习：由湖南卫视策划“超级女声”节目连续热播，在很多观众特别是中学生中引起了很大的反响，上周末你们班也为此展开了一场讨论，讨论结果如下：

观点支持者

1.给一些平凡却爱唱歌的女孩子提供了一个展示才华的舞台.2.增强了她们的竞争意识.观点反对者

1.花费了太多的时间和精力.2.因为不能集中精力学习,对她们将来自身发展不利.你的观点

注意:1.行文应连贯,内容应完整;2.词数:100-120左右

Recentlymanypeopleespeciallyhighschoolstudentshavebeenfascinatedbyasingingcompetition“Supergirls’voice”,whichwasheldbyHunanTVStation.写作练习：由湖南卫视策划“超级女声”节目连续热播，在很多观20WorldExpocommemorativecoinsWhydoyouwanttohavethisWorldExpocoin?WorldExpocommemorativecoins211.so---that2.too---to3.Itis---that---4.With---5.(Thereason)why---isthat---6.belikelyto/Itislikelythat---7.Itseemsthat---sb./sth.seemstobe/do8.Itneveroccurstosb.that---9.Only---10.Thereisnodoubtthat---11.havetrouble/difficulty(in)doing12.can’thelpdoing13.Themore---,themore---14.Thereisnopoint(in)doingsth.15.pastorpresentparticiples1.so---that22

高三英语写作指导

润饰词句，增加文采高三英语写作指导23DearSirorMadam,

Pleaselistentomyhope.I’maseniormiddleschoolstudent.IwanttobeanexchangestudentinEnglandsinceIwasachild.It’sthebestwaytoimprovemylanguage.Englandhasmanypalacesandchurches.Iwanttolivewiththehostfamily,IcanknowmoreabouttheEnglishculture.Icanmakesomefriendswithblueeyesandgoldenhair.Ithinkit’scoolandwonderful.Itcanopenmyeyesightareainthisway.That’smyheartwords.Pleaseconsiderit.Yoursfaithfully,LiHuaDearSirorMadam,24评点：

1.基本交代清楚了来信目的；

2.没有分段

3.没有运用过渡的连接词；

4.表达方式单一，语句欠丰富，

5.基本上没有高级词汇和句型；

6.开头生硬,结尾处汉式英语较严重.评点：25Thefirstparagraph:Giveabriefself–introductionandmakeclearyourpurposeThesecondparagraph:Givereasonsorlistsomeadvantagesofbeinganexchangestudent.(containingfacts,data,examples,etc.)Thethirdparagraph:Expresswishesandgratitude.Thefirstparagraph:Give26DearSirorMadam,

Pleaselistentomyhope.I’maseniormiddleschoolstudent.IwanttobeanexchangestudentinEnglandsinceIwasachild.

It’sthebestwaytoimprovemylanguage.Englandhasmanypalacesandchurches.Iwanttolivewiththehostfamily,IcanknowmoreabouttheEnglishculture.Icanmakesomefriendswithblueeyesandgoldenhair.Ithinkit’scoolandwonderful.Itcanopenmyeyesightareainthisway.That’smyheartwords.

Pleaseconsiderit.Yoursfaithfully,LiHuaDearSirorMadam,27I’maseniormiddleschoolstudent.Iwanttobeanexchangestudent.I’maseniorschoolgirlwhowantstobeanexchangestudenttoEnglandforoneyear.It’sthebestwaytoimprovemylanguage.AsEnglishisbecomingmoreandmoreimportantinjob-huntingandcommunication,thereisnodoubtthatbeinganexchangestudentisaneffectivewaytosuccess.1.使用从句I’maseniormiddleschoolstu28Iwanttolivewiththehostfamily,IcanknowmoreabouttheEnglishculture.

ItislivingtogetherwiththehostfamilythatcanhelpmegetabetterunderstandingoftheEnglishculture.2.使用强调句Iwanttolivewiththehostf29InspiredbytheEnglishculture,I’mwillingtoseizetheopportunitytolivewiththehostfamilytoenrichmyknowledge.Livingwiththehostfamily,IcanhaveabetterunderstandingoftheEnglishculture.

3.使用非谓语动词Iwanttolivewiththehostfamily,IcanknowmoreabouttheEnglishculture.

InspiredbytheEnglishcult30Englandhasmanypalacesandchurches.

（一般）Englandisalsoanancientcountrywithmanyculturalrelicsandfascinatingcastles.

（高级）4.使用with的复合结构Englandhasmanypalacesandc31OnlybystudyingabroadinEnglandcanIbroadenmyhorizons.Itcanopenmyeyesightareainthisway.5.使用倒装句OnlybystudyingabroadinEng32,goingabroadisthebestwaytomasteraforeignlanguageassoperfectalearningcircumstanceisoffered.

,itislivingtogetherwiththehostfamilythatcanhelpmegetabetterunderstandingoftheEnglishculture.,oneisboundtobenefitalotfromaone-yearstudylikethis.,EnglandisadevelopedcountrywherealotofjobOpportunitiesareinstoreforme.

6、使用恰当的连接词Reasonsforbeinganexchangestudent:TobeginwithWhat’smoreInadditionTherefore,go331.ThereasonswhyIaminterestedinitarelisted________.2.Ihopeyoucan_______this______________andIwould______________ifyoucouldgivemeanearlyreply.3.I__________tovisitplacesofinterestinEngland.4.Iwill___________this

opportunityto_________________.5.Itisalsosaidthattheweatherthereis___________.7.运用高级词汇，提高表达层次asfollowstakeintoconsiderationbeverygratefulhaveadesiremakethemostofmakemyselfimprovedagreeableasfollowstake---intoconsiderationbeverygratefulmakethemostofagreeablemakemyselfimprovedhaveadesire1.ThereasonswhyIaminteres34DearSir, IamaseniorschoolstudentwhowantstobeanexchangestudentinEnglandforoneyear,soIamwritingtoapplytoyouforyouradmission._________________________________________________. ___________,asEnglishisbecomingmoreandmoreimportantinJob-huntingandcommunication,thereisnodoubtthatbeinganexchangestudentisaneffectivewaytosuccess._________,ItislivingtogetherwiththehostfamilythatcanhelpmegetabetterunderstandingoftheEnglishculture._________,Englandisalsoanancientcountrywithmanyculturalrelicsandfascinatingcastles.OnlybystudyingtherecanIbroadenmyhorizons.___________,IwillmakethemostofthisopportunitytomakemyEnglishimprovedifpossible. _______,_______________________________________________.IhopeyoucantakemyrequestintoconsiderationandIwouldbeverygratefulifyoucouldgivemeanearlyreply.yourssincerelyWangHuaThereasonswhyIaminterestedinitarelistedasfollows.TobeginwithWhat’smoreInadditionThereforeInawordoneisboundtobenefitalotfromaone-yearstudylikethisDearSir,ThereasonswhyIam35假如你是李明，本学期你们班级里从外省转来一名学生王华，他一时无法融入新的集体，感到苦恼，请给他写一封信，信中应该包括以下要点：1.分析原因。2.提出建议。假如你是李明，本学期你们班级里从外省转来一名学生王华，他一时36DearWanghua,Youfeelupsetasyouareanewcomer,andyoucan’tgetfamiliarwitheveryonesoon.Ithinkyoushouldbeactive!Anyway,Iwilltrytohelpyou.Inmyopinion,youaretooshytotalktoyourclassmates.Maybethenewsurroundingsmakeyouuncomfortable.Nevergiveupyourselfandisolateyourself.Thefollowingaremysuggestions.First,youmustspeaktoothersandcommunicatewiththeothersmore.Second,don’talwaystrytoregardyourselfasanimportantoneintheclass,justrelaxyourselfanddisplayyourabilitiesfreely,thenotherswillbeawarethatyouareaniceperson.Inthisway,whenyoutryyourbest,youcanreallybecomeapartofourclass,Ithink