(新高考)高考英语二轮复习课时精炼考向50 应用文写作之咨询信和推荐信(解析版)

考向50应用文写作之咨询信和推荐信咨询信【写作示例】假定你是李华,打算今年暑假去美国旅游。请你给TravelAmerica国际旅行社写一封电子邮件进行咨询,内容如下:1.请其推荐合适的旅游路线;2.请其告知相关的旅游费用。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。DearSir/Madam,

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【考场审题】Step1:精准审题谋篇布局人称第一人称(I),第二人称(you)时态一般现在时段落布局开头点题:说明写信目的主体段落:说明需要咨询的内容结尾:期待对方的回信Step2:头脑风暴字字珠玉(1)美词:inquire,recommend,inaddition,intend,appreciate(2)佳句:①IintendtostayinAmericaforabout10days,duringwhichIhopetohavealookatsomeuniquenaturalsceneryandhaveatasteoflocalcustoms.②Inaddition,I’dliketoknowthepricesoftheroutes,coveringallthetravelingexpenses.Step3:斟酌词句妙笔生花要点1:我打算在美国住10天左右,希望能看一看那些独特的自然风景,品味一下当地的风俗。一般表达:IintendtostayinAmericaforabout10days,andIhopetohavealookatsomeuniquenaturalsceneryandhaveatasteoflocalcustoms.

句式升级(定语从句)IintendtostayinAmericaforabout10days,duringwhichIhopetohavealookatsomeuniquenaturalsceneryandhaveatasteoflocalcustoms.

要点2:除此之外,我想了解包括所有旅行费用的路线的价格。一般表达:Inaddition,I’dliketoknowthepricesoftheroutes,andallthetravelingexpenses.句式升级(分词短语作定语)Inaddition,I’dliketoknowthepricesoftheroutes,coveringallthetravelingexpenses.

Step4:衔接过渡斐然成篇【参考范文】DearSir/Madam,I’mplanningtotraveltotheUSAinthecomingJuly.Therefore,I’mwritingtoinquireabouttravelroutesofyouragency.IintendtostayinAmericaforabout10days,duringwhichIhopetohavealookatsomeuniquenaturalsceneryandhaveatasteoflocalcustoms.So,couldyoupleaserecommendsomesuitabletravelroutes?Inaddition,I’dliketoknowthepricesoftheroutes,coveringallthetravelingexpenses.Areplyatyourearliestconvenienceishighlyappreciated.Yours,LiHua推荐信【写作示例】假定你是李华。你的美国网友David看完电影《哪吒之魔童降世》海外版后非常喜欢,写信想请你再推荐一部中国电影。请你根据以下要点给他回信:1.表示高兴;2.推荐一部电影;3.推荐的理由(至少两条)。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。【考场审题】Step1:精准审题谋篇布局人称第一人称(I),第二人称(you)时态一般现在时;一般将来时段落布局开头点题:说明写信目的主体段落:推荐的电影和推荐的理由结尾:表达希望Step2:头脑风暴字字珠玉(1)美词:delighted,fascinated,havemuchincommonwith,appealtosb.,additionally,perfectly(2)佳句:①I’mdelightedtoknowyou’refascinatedbytheChinesefilm,NeZha.②Thisanimatedfilm,whichisalsobasedonclassicChinesefairytales,hasmuchincommonwithNeZha.Step3:斟酌词句妙笔生花要点1:我很高兴知道你对中国电影《哪吒之魔童降世》感兴趣。一般表达:Iamgladtoknowyou’reinterestedintheChinesefilm,NeZha.句式升级(高级词汇,被动语态)I’mdelightedtoknowyou’refascinatedbytheChinesefilm,NeZha.要点2:这部电影也是以神话故事为基础,和哪吒有许多相似之处。一般表达:ThisanimatedfilmisalsobasedonclassicChinesefairytales,andhasmuchincommonwithNeZha.

句式升级(定语从句)Thisanimatedfilm,whichisalsobasedonclassicChinesefairytales,hasmuchincommonwithNeZha.

Step4:衔接过渡斐然成篇【参考范文】DearDavid,I’mdelightedtoknowyou’refascinatedbytheChinesefilm,NeZha.AndI’mperfectlywillingtorecommendanotherimpressiveChinesemovieatyourrequest.SinceIknowanimatedfilmsareyourfavorites,youcan’tmissMonkeyKing:HeroIsBack.Thisanimatedfilm,whichisalsobasedonclassicChinesefairytales,hasmuchincommonwithNeZha,soIthinkit’llappealtoyou.Additionally,MonkeyKingandNezhaarebothregardedasheroesbyChinesepeople.Throughmovies,youwillgetabetterunderstandingofChineseculture.Ihopeyou’llfindthemoviewellworthseeing.Yours,LiHua【检测训练】1．假设你是美国纽约市的一名高中生Chris,打算暑假来天津学习汉语，来信向你在天津一中的笔友李津咨询他们学校的国际班汉语课程。请你根据以下提示给李津写一封咨询信。内容要点：1.想学汉语的原因（中国文化；个人发展……）2.咨询国际班汉语课程的情况（班级大小；是否侧重听说；能不中国学生交流）3.询问是否提供食宿。注意：（1）词数不少于100；（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯；（3）开头已给出，不计入总词数。DearliJin,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YoursChris【参考范文】DearliJin,It'smypleasuretotellyouaboutmyplanforstudyingChineseinTianjinthissummervacation.CouldyoupossiblyprovidemewithsomeinformationabouttheChinesecoursesforinternationalclassesinyourschool?YouknowIamalwaysinterestedinChinesecultureandaveryimportantreasonformetolearnChineseisthatlearningChinesecouldbringbettercareerprospectsforyoungpeople.Iwanttoknowhowmanystudentstherewillbeineachclassandifthecoursesfocusonlisteningorspeakingpractice.Besides,canIhavetheopportunitytotakepartinsomeactivitiesandtocommunicatewithChinesestudents?ThatwillsurelybeagoodchanceformetolearnmoreaboutChina.Also,Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldtellmewhetheraccommodationisincluded.Iamlookingforwardtoyourresponseatyourearliestconvenience.YoursChris【写作步骤】第一步：审题：确定时态和人称。这封信主要是Chris向你（李津）咨询学校的国际班汉语课程，所以时态应以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主。第二步：列提纲（重点词组）providemewithsomeinformationabout…（给我提供一些关于……的信息）；theChinesecoursesforinternationalclasses（国际班的汉语课程）；learningChinesecouldbringbettercareerprospects（学汉语能带来更好的职业前景）；focusonlisteningandspeakingpractice（注重听说练习）；havetheopportunityto…（有机会做某事）；agoodchanceformeto…（对我做什么是一个很好的机会）等。第三步：遣词造句：同学们在写作时不能逐句翻译，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯，同时要点表述要完整，文章要通顺，准确使用时态和语态。第四步：连句成文：写作时要适当使用连词、过渡词和插入语，使文章浑然一体。同时恰当而合理地使用一些高级词汇和句型，如定语从句等，以提高文章档次。【写作亮点】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多句式，如：第一段第一句使用了It’smypleasuretodosth.的句型，使用It作形式主语，不定式作真正的主语。第二段第一句使用了省略了that的宾语从句及that引导的表语从句。第二段第二句也使用了宾语从句。第二段第五句使用了if引导的条件状语从句。此外本文还使用了一些高级词汇，如providemewithsomeinformationabout…；learningChinesecouldbringbettercareerprospects；focusonlisteningandspeakingpractice；havetheopportunityto…；agoodchanceformeto…等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。2．假设你是李华，你想参加剑桥大学（UniversityofCambridge）的夏令营活动。请写封信向夏令营负责人Smith教授咨询相关事宜，要点如下：1、表达你的意愿；2、咨询相关事宜。注意：1、词数100左右；2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearMr.Smith,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【参考范文】DearMr.Smith,I’malwaysdreamingofbeingadmittedtotheUniversityofCambridge.Andyouradvertisementaboutthesummercampcaughtmyattention.IamastudentinChina.Wouldyoubesokindastotellmemoreinformationaboutthecamp.Firstofall,I’dliketoknowwhenthecoursewillstartandhowmanyclasshoursthereareperweek?Second,howmuchdoIhavetopayforthecourseanddoesthecostcovertheaccommodation?Besides,isthereanythingthatIshouldpayspecialattentionto?Iwouldbemostgratefulifyoucouldsendmetheinformation.Lookingforwardtoyourimmediateresponse.Yourssincerely,LiHu【写作步骤】第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是李华，你想参加剑桥大学（UniversityofCambridge）的夏令营活动。请写封信向夏令营负责人Smith教授咨询相关事宜，要点如下：1、表达你的意愿；2、咨询相关事宜。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：dreamof(梦想)；beadmittedto(录取)；UniversityofCambridge(剑桥大学)；catchmyattention(引起我的注意)；accommodation(住宿)等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般过去时、现在进行时、一般现在时和一般将来时。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【写作亮点】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如I’malwaysdreamingofbeingadmittedtotheUniversityofCambridge.非谓语动词的运用；Iwouldbemostgratefulifyoucouldsendmetheinformation.运用条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。3．假定你是高三学生李华。随着高考的临近，你感到学习压力越来越大。晚上经常失眠，上课精力不集中，学习效率低下,现在对备考复习很茫然。你写信给心理学家Dr.Bloom,咨询解决问题的方法。内容包括：1.写信目的；2.咨询内容；3.期待回复。DearDr.Bloom,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YoursSincerely,LiHua【参考范文】DearDr.Bloom,I'mLiHua,aseniorthreestudent.I'mwritingtoaskyouforsomeadvice.

WiththeapproachoftheCollegeEntranceExamination,I'mundergreatpressure,whichgreatlyaffectsmylifeandstudy.Ican'tfallasleepatnightandIoftenwakeupsuddenlyatmidnight.Asaresult,Ican'tfocusonwhattheteachersaysinclassanditdisturbsmealot.Ataloss,Idon'tknowhowtopreparefortheCollegeEntranceExamination.WhatshouldIdo?Knowingyouareanexpertinit,Isincerelyhopeyoucangivemesomevaluableadviceonhowtosolvetheproblmes.

Lookingforwardtoyourreply.YoursSincerely,LiHua【写作步骤】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1.介绍写信的目的；2.介绍咨询的内容；3.期待对方的回复。第二步:列提纲（重点词组）asksb.foradvice;withtheapproachof;underpressure;fallasleep;wakeup;asaresult;focuson;ataloss;preparefor;solvetheproblem;lookforwardto;anexpertin第三步：连词成句1.I’mwritingtoaskyouforadvice.2.Knowingyouareanexpertinit,Isincerelyhopeyoucangivemevaluableadviceonhowtosolvetheproblems.3.Asaresult,Ican’tfocusonwhattheteachersaysinclass.4.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：firstofall,firstly/first,secondly/secondandthen,finally,intheend,atlast(供参考)2.表并列补充关系：whatismore,besides,moreover,furthermore,inaddition,aswellas,notonly…but(also),including(供参考)3.表转折对比关系：however,onthecontrary,but,inspiteof+n/doing,ontheonehand…ontheotherhand,some,whileothers,asfor,so...that…(供参考)4.表因果关系：asaresult连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，【写作亮点】[高分句型1]Asaresult,Ican'tfocusonwhattheteachersaysatclass.(what引导宾语从句)[高分句型2]Knowingyouareanexpertinit,Isincerelyhopeyoucangivemevaluableadviceonhowtosolvetheproblems.(knowingyouareanexpertinit现在分词作状语，特殊疑问词how+动词不定式作宾语)[高分句型3]I'mundergreatpressure,whichgreatlyaffectsmylifeandstudy.(which引导非限制性定语从句)4．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter打算这个寒假来中国旅游，让你推荐个城市，你想推荐杭州作为他旅游行程的首选。请用英语给他写封推荐信，内容包括：1.推荐城市；2.推荐理由；3.你的祝愿。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】DearPeter,I’mdelightedtoknowyou’recomingtoChinaforyourwinterholiday.Personally,I’dliketorecommendthecityofHangzhoutoyou.WhenitcomestoHangzhou,thefirstthingthatcomestomindisWestLake,whichhasbeenascenicspotforhundredsofyears.Besides,therearemanytouristattractionsinandaroundthecity,suchasTiger-runningSpring,TheLingyinMonasteryandSpringDawnatSuCauseway.Mostimportantly,Hangzhouishometodeliciousfood,suchasDongpoPorkandLongjingShrimp.Ihopetheniceweatherandconvenienttransportationherecanmakeyourtripmoreenjoyable.Yours,LiHua【写作步骤】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时，少量现在完成时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1.介绍推荐城市；2.介绍推荐理由;3.表达你的祝愿。第二步：列提纲（重点词组）bedelightedtodosth.;recommendsth.tosb.;cometomind;inandaroundthecity;suchas;behometo第三步：连词成句1.I’mdelightedtoknowyou’recomingtoChinaforyourwinterholiday.2.Personally,I’dliketorecommendthecityofHangzhoutoyou.3.WhenitcomestoHangzhou,thefirstthingthatcomestomindisWestLake,whichhasbeenascenicspotforhundredsofyears.4.Therearemanytouristattractionsinandaroundthecity,suchasTiger-runningSpring,TheLingyinMonasteryandSpringDawnatSuCauseway.5.Ihopetheniceweatherandconvenienttransportationherecanmakeyourtripmoreenjoyable.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：Firstofall,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second…Andthen,Finally,Intheend,Atlast(供参考)

2.表并列补充关系：besides,mostimportantly,and3.表转折对比关系：However,Onthecontrary,but,Although+clause(从句),Inspiteof+n/doing,asfor,(供参考)4.表因果关系：Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,Asaresult(供参考)连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。【写作亮点】[高分句型1]WhenitcomestoHangzhou,thefirstthingthatcomestomindisWestLake,whichhasbeenascenicspotforhundredsofyears.（由关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句）[高分句型2]Ihopetheniceweatherandconvenienttransportationherecanmakeyourtripmoreenjoyable.（由that引导宾语从句作hope的宾语，省略that）[高分句型3]IinviteyoutovisitHangzhou,whereyoucanenjoytheniceweatheranddeliciousfood.（由关系副词where引导非限制性定语从句）5．假如你是学生会主席李华，学校安排你给即将到你校任教的外教Martin推荐一名学生助手，请根据以下要点给他写封推荐信。1.欢迎Martin的到来，推荐WangPeng同学当助手(assistant)2.推荐的理由（沟通能力；热心助人；英语水平等）3.美好祝愿。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】DearMartin,I’mLiHua,ChairmanoftheStudents'Union.It'sgreattolearnthatyouarecomingtoteachinourschoolasanoralEnglishteachernextterm.Iwasaskedtowritetoyou,recommendingWangPeng,aSenior2student,aged17,tobeyourassistant.Heisadiligentstudent,whocanusethecomputerskillfullyandhasagiftforcommunicatingwithothers.What'smore,hehasagoodcommandofEnglish,whichmakeshimspeakEnglishfluently.Last,heisalwaysreadytohelpothersinneed.IamconfidentthathecanbehelpfulinyourworkandlifeinChina.Ifyouhaveanyquestions,pleasedonothesitatetocontactme.I’mlookingforwardtoyourcoming.Yourssincerely,LiHua【写作步骤】1.词汇积累学期：term→semester助手：assistant→helper勤勉的：diligent→sedulous精通：begoodat=beanexpertat2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：Last,heisalwaysreadytohelpothersinneed.拓展句：Last,heisalwaysreadytohelpotherswhoareinneed.【写作亮点】[高分句型1]Iwasaskedtowritetoyou,recommendingWangPeng,aSenior2student,aged17,tobeyourassistant.(运用现在分词短语作状语)[高分句型2]Heisadiligentstudent,whocanusethecomputerskillfullyandhasagiftforcommunicatingwithothers.(运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)6．假设你是李华，你的外国朋友Tom的中文取得很大的进步，且对中国文学有着深厚的兴趣，他想买一本书，请你写一封e-mail，向他推荐一本书，并写出推荐的理由。内容包括：1.推荐的书名；2.推荐这本书的三个主要原因；3.重申这本书的优点。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________