(新高考)高考英语二轮复习课时精炼考向51 应用文写作之祝贺信和报道类写作(解析版)

考向51应用文写作之祝贺信和报道类写作祝贺信【写作示例】假定你是李华,得知你的外国笔友Peter获得了“汉语桥”中文演讲比赛一等奖。你为他感到骄傲,并给他写一封祝贺信,要点如下:1.天天练习讲汉语,从不会到流利,终于成功;2.继续努力,有机会来中国留学;3.希望见面和交流。注意:1.词数80左右。2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。参考词汇:“汉语桥”中文演讲比赛“ChineseBridge”Chinesespeechcontest【考场审题】Step1:精准审题谋篇布局人称第一人称(I),第二人称(you)时态一般现在时;一般过去时段落布局:开头点题:表达祝贺主体段落:成功的原因并进行鼓励结尾:再次表达祝贺Step2:头脑风暴字字珠玉(1)美词:expressmycongratulations,opportunity,communicate(2)佳句:①Asthesayinggoes,“Everythingcomestohimwhowaits”.②GoingonstudyingChineseharder,youwillhavetheopportunitytostudyinChina.Step3:斟酌词句妙笔生花要点1:正如谚语所说:“成功属于有准备的人”。一般表达:Thereisasayinggoinglikethis,“Everythingcomestohimwhowaits”.句式升级(定语从句)Asthesayinggoes,“Everythingcomestohimwhowaits”.

要点2:如果你继续努力学习汉语,你就会有机会来中国学习。一般表达:IfyougoonstudyingChineseharder,youwillhavetheopportunitytostudyinChina.句式升级(分词短语作状语)GoingonstudyingChineseharder,youwillhavetheopportunitytostudyinChina.

Step4:衔接过渡斐然成篇【参考范文】DearPeter,Iwouldliketoexpressmycongratulationstoyouonyourreceivingthefirstprizeof“ChineseBridge”Chinesespeechcontest.IknowthatyouwerenotgoodatChineseatfirst.However,youpracticedspeakingChineseeveryday.Asthesayinggoes,“Everythingcomestohimwhowaits”.Finally,yousucceeded!Inmymind,thismatchisverydifficultforaforeignstudent.SoI’msosurprisedthatyoubecomechampionofthiscompetition.GoingonstudyingChineseharder,youwillhavetheopportunitytostudyinChina.Atlast,Ihopetoseeyouandcommunicatewithyou.Sincerecongratulationstoyouagain!Yours,LiHua报道类【写作示例】假定你是李华,上周日你校举办了5千米越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:1.参加人员;2.跑步路线:从校门口到南山脚下;3.活动反响。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式作答。ACross-CountryRunningRace【考场审题】Step1:精准审题谋篇布局人称we时态一般现在时,现在完成时段落布局开头点题:点明越野赛的时间、参与人员和目的主体段落:越野赛的过程结尾:表达参加越野赛的收获Step2:头脑风暴字字珠玉(1)美词:inspiresb.todosth.,ontheway,fallbehind,keeprunning,buildup,beofgreatimportance(2)佳句:①ItwasallthestudentsinSenior3whoparticipatedinit.②Notonlyhavewerealizedthatbuildingupourbodyisofgreatimportance,butwehavealsolearnedmoreabout“persistenceleadstosuccess”.Step3:斟酌词句妙笔生花要点1:参赛者是我们高三全体学生。一般表达:AllthestudentsinSenior3tookpartinit.

句式升级(强调句式,高级词汇)ItwasallthestudentsinSenior3whoparticipatedinit.

要点2:我们不仅意识到了锻炼身体很重要,还对“坚持就是胜利”体会更深了。一般表达:Wehaverealizedthatbuildingupourbodyisofgreatimportance,andwehavealsolearnedmoreabout“persistenceleadstosuccess”.

句式升级(倒装结构)Notonlyhavewerealizedthatbuildingupourbodyisofgreatimportance,butwehavealsolearnedmoreabout“persistenceleadstosuccess”.

Step4:衔接过渡斐然成篇【参考范文】ACross-CountryRunningRaceLastSunday,ourschoolheldafive-kilometercross-countryrunningrace.ItwasallthestudentsinSenior3whoparticipatedinit.Thepurposeofthisracewastoinspireusstudentstopaymoreattentiontophysicalexercise.At7a.m.wesetoffattheschoolgate.AndthenweranallthewaytothefootofSouthHill.Ontheway,althoughsomestudentsfellbehind,theykeptrunninguntilthefinishingline.Fromthisactivity,notonlyhavewerealizedthatbuildingupourbodyisofgreatimportance,butwehavealsolearnedmoreabout“persistenceleadstosuccess”.【检测训练】1．假如你是李华，得知美国好友Eric已成功申请耶鲁大学（YaleUniversity），现请你用英文给他写封电子邮件向他表示祝贺，内容要点包括：1.成功的祝贺；2.努力的肯定；3.未来的祝愿。注意：1、词数80左右；2、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】DearEric,LearningthatyouhavebeenadmittedtoYaleUniversity,I’mwritingtoextendmyheartfeltcongratulations.Undeniably,opportunitiesfavorthosewhoarewellprepared.Inthepastthreeyears,you’vebeenexploring,accumulatingandprogressingsteadilyinyourstudy.Nowyoureffortshavepaidoff.You’vemadeittoyouridealuniversity.AndIamsure,atYaleUniversitywheremorechanceswillbeavailableforyoutoexhibityourcompetence,youwillmakeevenmoreremarkableachievements.Congratulationsagainandbestwishesforyourbrightfuture.YoursLiHua【写作步骤】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般将来时和现在完成时,少量现在完成进行时和一般现在时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1.对他的成功表示祝贺；2.对他的努力表示肯定;3.对他的未来表示祝愿。第二步:列提纲（重点词组）beadmittedto;payoff;beavailableforsb.todosth.;makeevenmoreachievements;bestwishesfor第三步：连词成句1.LearningthatyouhavebeenadmittedtoYaleUniversity,I’mwritingtoextendmyheartfeltcongratulations.2.Undeniably,opportunitiesfavorthosewhoarewellprepared.3.Inthepastthreeyears,you’vebeenexploring,accumulatingandprogressingsteadilyinyourstudy.4.You’vemadeittoyouridealuniversity.5.Congratulationsagainandbestwishesforyourbrightfuture.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）本文主要使用了表并列补充关系的衔接词：and连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。【写作亮点】[高分句型1].Undeniably,opportunitiesfavorthosewhoarewellprepared.（由关系代词who引导的定语从句）[高分句型2].AndIamsure,atYaleUniversitywheremorechanceswillbeavailableforyoutoexhibityourcompetence,youwillmakeevenmoreremarkableachievements.（由关系副词where引导的定语从句）2．假定你是李华，你观看了英国好朋友Leslie参加的学校演讲比赛直播，他的演讲“SuccesscomesfromHardWork”获得了一等奖。请你给他写一封祝贺信，内容包括：1.表示祝贺。2.评论及赞赏。3.表达祝愿。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】DearLeslie,IreallyenjoyedwatchingyourEnglishspeechcompetitiononTVandIwasdelightedtoseeyouwinthefirstprize.Iamwritingtoconveymysincerecongratulationstoyou.Itdidnotsurprisemeatallwhenhostannouncedyouasthewinner.Ithasalwaysbeenyourburningdesiretobeanoutstandingspeaker,andyouhavebeensoindustriousandperseveranttomakeyourdreamcometrue.Asafamoussayinggoes,“nopains,nogains”.Yourhardworkhasnowfinallypaidoff.Asyousaidinyourspeech,successreallydoescomefromhardwork.Congratulationsonceagain.Iwishyoufurthersuccessinthefuture.Yours,LiHua【写作亮点】[高级句型一]Iswasyoureffortandperseverancethatmadeyourdreamcometrue.是你的努力和毅力让你梦想成真。句中使用了强调句型。3．假定你是李华，你的堂兄李国强在美国留学，后来去苹果公司实习，最后婉拒公司的挽留，决定去华为技术有限公司（HuaweiTechnologiesCo.LTD）就职。请你根据下面提示给他写封邮件表示祝贺。1.祝贺他学成回国；2.华为在信息与通信技术（ICT）领域的地位；3.你的感想。Dearcousin,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,Lihua【参考范文】Dearcousin,IwouldliketoexpressmycongratulationstoyouonyoursuccessfulgraduationintheUnitedStates.However,whatshockedmemostwasthatyoueventurneddownApple’stemptingofferanddecidedtoreturntoChinaandhavealreadyobtainedthecurrentjobofferfromHuaweiTechnologiesco.LTD,whichisthepioneerinInformationandCommunicationsTechnologycurrently.Tobehonest,yourspiritofpatriotismtouchesmedeeply.Ibelievethatwithyoursensiblechoice,therewillbemoreoverseastudentslikeyoutomaketheirchoiceswisely.Iamreallyproudofyou,andyousetagoodexamplenotjusttomebutalsothewholeyoungergeneration.WewillseeourChineseenterprisesbecomingmoreandmorecompetitiveinternationally,andourmotherlandgettingstrongerthaneverbefore.Faithfullyyours,Lihua【写作亮点】范文要点全面，结构清晰，层次分明，上下文连贯，在表达时用到了很多高级词汇，如expresscongratulationstosb.on…；shock；turndown；obtain；touch；sensiblechoice；makeachoice；competitive；getstronger；beproudof；setagoodexample等；复杂句式的运用提升了文章层次，如主语从句的运用和定语从句的运用However,whatshockedmemostwasthatyoueventurneddownApple’stemptingofferanddecidedtoreturntoChinaandhavealreadyobtainedthecurrentjobofferfromHuaweiTechnologiesco.LTD,whichisthepioneerinInformationandCommunicationsTechnologycurrently.；therebe句型的运用therewillbemoreoverseastudentslikeyoutomaketheirchoiceswisely；“see+宾语+现在分词作宾语补足语”的运用wewillseeourChineseenterprisesbecomingmoreandmorecompetitiveinternationally等。4．你校的体育节刚刚结束。请给学校英语报写一篇报道，报道体育节的主要活动、精彩瞬间及意义。注意1.词数100词左右；2.可以通当增加细节，使文连贯；3.报道的开头已为你写好，不入词数。参考词汇:开幕式openingceremony项目item______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Theschoolsportscarnival,whichtookplacelastFridayandSaturday,wasagreatsuccess.Thecrowdscheerontheirclassmateswhotookpartinmorethan10excitingevents.Thecarnivalstartedwithanopeningceremonywhichincludedastudentathletemarchanddanceperformancebyourschool’sstreetdanceclub.Thiswasfollowedbytheeventsthemselves.AmongthemanygreatperformanceswasLiHua’swininthe1500-metrerunningraceandQiQi’sdominantvictoryinthegirls100-metrerace.Perhapsthebiggestcheerofthemeetwasforthestudentswhentheydefeatedtheteachersinthetug-of-warcompetition.Afteritsconclusion,manystudentssaidtheylovethesportsmeetasitprovidedthemwithanopportunitytorelax,demonstratetheirsportsabilitiesandbuildfriendshipandschoolspiritamongthestudents.【写作步骤】第一步：审题体裁：提纲类作文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般过去时。结构：总分法要求：报道体育节的主要活动、精彩瞬间及意义。第二步:列提纲（重点词组）takeplace；cheeron；takepartin；dominant；defeat；demonstrate第三步：连词成句1.Theschoolsportscarnival,whichtookplacelastFridayandSaturday,wasagreatsuccess.2.Thecrowdscheerontheirclassmateswhotookpartinmorethan10excitingevents.3.Thecarnivalstartedwithanopeningceremonywhichincludedastudentathletemarchanddanceperformancebyourschool’sstreetdanceclub.4.Thiswasfollowedbytheeventsthemselves.5.AmongthemanygreatperformanceswasLiHua’swininthe1500-metrerunningraceandQiQi’sdominantvictoryinthegirls100-metrerace.6.Perhapsthebiggestcheerofthemeetwasforthestudentswhentheydefeatedtheteachersinthetug-of-warcompetition.7.Afteritsconclusion,manystudentssaidtheylovethesportsmeetasitprovidedthemwithanopportunitytorelax,demonstratetheirsportsabilitiesandbuildfriendshipandschoolspiritamongthestudents.第四步：连句成篇1.表文章结构顺序：Firstofall,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second…Andthen,Finally,Intheend,Atlast2.表并列补充关系：Whatismore,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,InadditionAswellas,notonly…but(also),including,3.表转折对比关系：while,meanwhile,However,Onthecontrary,but,Although+clause(从句),Inspiteof+n/doing,Ontheonehand…,Ontheotherhand…Some…,whileothers…,asfor,so…that…4.表因果关系：Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,Asaresult连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，第五步：润色修改【写作亮点】文章结构合理，思路清晰，使用了恰当的连接词及词组使行文连贯，如“which，who，after”，也运用了一些高级词汇和表达，如“takeplace；cheeron；takepartin；dominant；defeat；demonstrate”以及定语从句、状语从句等，增加了文章的亮点，体现了学生较高的英语学科素养。5．假定你是校英语报的记者李华，上周日，你和班里的同学去参观了杭州科技馆，请写一则新闻报道报道,内容包括以下要点：1.活动内容(至少两项）；2.简短评论。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】LastSunday,thestudentsfromClass3ofourschoolwenttovisitthelatesttechnologyexhibitionattheHangzhouScienceandTechnologyMuseum.

Firstofall,undertheleadershipofteachersandstaff,thestudentsenteredtheBiologyMuseumandsawavarietyofbiologicalspecimens,whichsurprisedthestudents.Afterthat,thestudentsenteredtheSpaceMuseum.ManystudentsexperiencedsimulatedStarTrekontheastronauttrainers.Finally,everyonecametotheRobotMuseum.Industrialrobotsperformeddancing,Beijingoperaandplayedrockandrollforvisitors.

Throughpersonalexperience,thestudentslearnedmoreaboutscienceinarelaxedenvironment,andhadabetterunderstandingofthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,whichhasenhancedtheirmotivationtoexplorescience.【写作步骤】1.词汇积累新的：latest→newly/freshly领导：leadership→guide

各种各样的：avarietyof→various/multifarious

亲身：personal→inperson

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：Finally,everyonecametotherobotMuseum.Industrialrobotsperformeddancing,Beijingoperaandplayedrockandrollforvisitors.

拓展句：Finally,everyonecametotherobotMuseum,whereIndustrialrobotsperformeddancing,Beijingoperaandplayedrockandrollforvisitors.

【写作亮点】[高分句型1]Museumandsawavarietyofbiologicalspecimens,whichsurprisedthestudents.(使用which引导非限定性定语从句。)[高分句型2]Throughpersonalexperience,thestudentslearnedmoreaboutscienceinarelaxedenvironment,andhadabetterunderstandingofthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,whichhasenhancedtheirmotivationtoexplorescience.(使用动名词understanding作宾语，which引导非限定性定语从句。)6．假定你是李华，上周你学校邀请了几位专家来校做职业生涯规划的讲座，你作为学校英文报的记者写了一篇报道，内容包括：讲座的目的、主要内容和同学的体会。注意:1．词数100左右。2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3．报道题目已给出，不计入总词数。Setsailoncareerplanning!_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Setsailoncareerplanning!Lastweek,ourschoolbroughtinsomeexpertstogiveaseriesoflecturesconcerningcareerplanningwiththeaimofbroadeningstudents’horizonsandkeepingthemmoreexposedtothepresent-daysociety.Thelecturesweremainlyabouttheintroductionsofsomeprofessions,includinglaw,medicine,publicmediaandfinance.Allthespeakers,whowerewell-preparedandofhumorousstyle,gavevividandinformativepresentationstous.Throughanalyzingtheprofessionalcharacteristicsandoutlook,theybroughthometouswhatarethemostimportantqualitiesandabilitiesrequiredbythejobmarket.AllpresentwereattentiveallthewayandhighlyresponsivebyraisingquestionsintheQ&Asection,whichhelpedfurtherclarifythepuzzlestheyhadabouttheirfuturecareers.Thelectureshaveapositiveandfar-reachingeffectonushighschoolstudentsgiventhatwearemostlyill-informedofwhatisexpectedofusinthefuturesociety.Manystudentshadaverypositivefeedbackabouttheevents,thinkingthattheselecturesunfoldedmanycareerpossibilitiesforthem.Besides,somestudentsevensuggestedthatfieldtripstocompaniesshouldbeorganizedsothattheycanhaveaclearerpictureofwhatmanydifferentcareersreallylooklike.【写作步骤】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般过去时和一般现在时。结构：总分总法要点：讲座的目的、主要内容和同学的体会。第二步：列提纲（重点词组）bringin；aseriesof；experts；lectures；careerplanning；withtheaimof；broadenstudents’horizons；exposedto；present-day；theintroductionsof；publicmedia；well-prepared；vivid；professionalcharacteristicsandoutlook；themostimportant；jobmarket；alltheway；Q&Asection；raisequestions；futurecareers；haveapositiveandfar-reachingeffecton；ill-informed；feedback；fieldtrips；sothat；haveaclearerpictureof等第三步：连词成句1.Ourschoolbroughtinsomeexpertstogiveaseriesoflecturesconcerningcareerplanningwiththeaimofbroadeningstudents’horizonsandkeepingthemmoreexposedtothepresent-daysociety.2.Thelecturesweremainlyabouttheintroductionsofsomeprofessions,includinglaw,medicine,publicmediaandfinance.3.Allthespeakers,whowerewell-preparedandofhumorousstyle,gavev