高考英语概要写作 Summary Writing课件

SummaryWritingSummaryWriting1Criteriaforagoodsummary理解准确，涵盖全部要点。能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇。完全使用自己的语言。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所完成的概要结构紧凑。Contents(内容)Languageskills(语言)Structure(结构)Criteriaforagoodsummary理解准2IntheUK,PhysicalEducation(PE)iscompulsoryinstateschoolsuntiltheageof16–thatis,sportsarecompulsoryforaslongaseducationiscompulsory.Everyyear,moreandmoreparentscomplaintotheirchildren’sschoolsaboutPE.Theybelievethattheirchildrenshouldn’thavetoparticipateinphysicalactivityiftheydon’twantto.SupportersofPE,however,believethatitisacrucialelementofall-roundschoolingandoursociety’swell-being.TheyinsistPEinschoolsremainsoneofthefewplacesbywhichtheyouthcanbeforcedtoparticipateinaerobic(有氧的)exercise.Firstly,theybelievethatparticipationinsportpromoteshealth.Infactphysicaleducationisaspringboardforinvolvementinsportandphysicalactivitiesthroughoutlife.Governmentis,orshouldbe,concernedwiththehealthofitscitizens.EncouragingphysicalactivityintheyoungthroughcompulsoryPEfightschildobesityandcontributestoforminglifelonghabitsofexercise.Thisdoesn’thavetobethroughtraditionalteamsports;increasinglyschoolsareabletoofferexerciseintheformofswimming,gymnastics,dance,etc.Besides,physicaleducationhelpstodevelopcharacterandthemutual(相互的)respectrequiredtosucceedinanadultenvironment.Playingteamsportsbuildscharacterandencouragesstudentstoworkwithothers,astheywouldbeexpectedtodoinmostbusinessorsportingenvironments.Sportteacheschildrenhowtowinandlosewithgoodgraceandbuildsastrongschoolspiritthroughcompetitionwithotherinstitutions.Itisoftentheexperienceofplayingonateamtogetherthatbuildsthestrongestfriendshipsatschool,whichendureforyearsafterwards.Finally,thepursuitfornationalsportingachievementbeginsinschools.Ifschoolsdon’thavecompulsoryPE,itismuchhardertopickout,developandequipathletestorepresentthecountryonawiderstage.However,it’smucheasiertofindsuitableindividualsifthere’safullsportsprogramineveryschool.IntheUK,PhysicalEducatio3Step1:Identify

thegenre

(体裁)andtopicofthepassage.Genre: A.Narration(记叙文). B.Exposition(说明文). C.Argumentation(议论文).Topic: CompulsoryPhysicalEducationintheUKStep1:Identifythegenre(体裁4Step2:Findthetopicsentencesand

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thestructureofthepassage.①②③④①②③④①②③④A B CStep2:Findthetopicsentenc5ThestructureofthepassageTopic:CompulsoryPEintheUKReason/Benefit1Reason/Benefit2Reason/Benefit3ThestructureofthepassageT6Para.1Moreandmoreparentscomplaintotheirchildren’sschoolsaboutPE.SupportersofPE,however,believethatitisacrucialelementofall-roundschoolingandoursociety’swell-being.Step2:Findthetopicsentencesand

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structureofthepassage.IntheUK,PhysicalEducation(PE)iscompulsoryinstateschoolsuntiltheageof16–thatis,sportsarecompulsoryforaslongaseducationiscompulsory.Everyyear,moreandmoreparentscomplaintotheirchildren’sschoolsaboutPE.Theybelievethattheirchildrenshouldn’thavetoparticipateinphysicalactivityiftheydon’twantto.SupportersofPE,however,believethatitisacrucialelementofall-roundschoolingandoursociety’swell-being.TheyinsistPEinschoolsremainsoneofthefewplacesbywhichtheyouthcanbeforcedtoparticipateinaerobic(有氧的)exercise.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Para.1Moreandmoreparents7Para.2Firstly,pulsoryPEfightschildobesityandcontributestoforminglifelonghabitsofexercise.

Step2:Findthetopicsentencesand

figureout

the

structureofthepassage.

Firstly,theybelievethatparticipationinsportpromoteshealth.Infactphysicaleducationisaspringboardforinvolvementinsportandphysicalactivitiesthroughoutlife.Governmentis,orshouldbe,concernedwiththehealthofitscitizens.EncouragingphysicalactivityintheyoungthroughcompulsoryPEfightschildobesityandcontributestoforminglifelonghabitsofexercise.Thisdoesn’thavetobethroughtraditionalteamsports;increasinglyschoolsareabletoofferexerciseintheformofswimming,gymnastics,dance,etc.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Para.2Firstly,theybelieve8Para.3Besides,physicaleducationhelpstodevelopcharacterandthemutualrespectrequiredtosucceedinanadultenvironment.Step2:Findthetopicsentencesand

figureout

the

structureofthepassage.

Besides,physicaleducationhelpstodevelopcharacterandthemutual(相互的)respectrequiredtosucceedinanadultenvironment.Playingteamsportsbuildscharacterandencouragesstudentstoworkwithothers,astheywouldbeexpectedtodoinmostbusinessorsportingenvironments.Sportteacheschildrenhowtowinandlosewithgoodgraceandbuildsastrongschoolspiritthroughcompetitionwithotherinstitutions.Itisoftentheexperienceofplayingonateamtogetherthatbuildsthestrongestfriendshipsatschool,whichendureforyearsafterwards._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Para.3Besides,physicaleduc9Para.4Finally,thepursuitfornationalsportingachievementbeginsinschools.it’smucheasiertopickout,developandequipathletestorepresentthecountryonawiderstage.Step2:Findthetopicsentencesand

figureout

the

structureofthepassage.

Finally,thepursuitfornationalsportingachievementbeginsinschools.Ifschoolsdon’thavecompulsoryPE,itismuchhardertopickout,developandequipathletestorepresentthecountryonawiderstage.However,it’smucheasiertofindsuitableindividualsifthere’safullsportsprogramineveryschool._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Para.4Finally,thepursuitfo10Para.1Para.2Para.3Para.4Moreandmoreparentscomplaintotheirchildren’sschoolsaboutPE.SupportersofPE,however,believethatitisacrucialelementofall-roundschoolingandoursociety’swell-being.Firstly,pulsoryPEfightschildobesityandcontributestoforminglifelonghabitsofexercise.Besides,physicaleducationhelpstodevelopcharacterandthemutualrespectrequiredtosucceedinanadultenvironment.Finally,thepursuitfornationalsportingachievementbeginsinschools.It’smucheasiertopickout,developandequipathletestorepresentthecountryonawiderstage.topicsentencesPara.1Moreandmoreparents11Tips

onrewriting(改述)1.Usesynonymsandnear-synonyms(运用同义词和近义词)2.Useactive/passivevoice(主被动换用)3.Changewordforms(改换词形)4.Generalizefromdetails(归纳细节)5.Expresstheoppositemeaning(正话反说)Step3:RewritethetopicsentencesTipsonrewriting(改述)1.Uses12Para.1Moreandmoreparentscomplaintotheirchildren’sschoolsaboutPE.SupportersofPE,however,believethatitisacrucialelementofall-roundschoolingandoursociety’swell-being.Step3:RewritethetopicsentencesDespiteparentalcomplaintaboutchildren’sforcedinvolvementinsport,advocatesofPEhighlight

thesignificanceandnecessityofcompulsoryPEinschools.Despiteparentalcomplaintaboutchildren’sforcedinvolvementinsport,advocatesofcompulsory

PEregarditvitaltoschoolingandsocietyandthereforeabsolutelynecessary.Para.1Moreandmoreparents13Para.2Firstly,pulsoryPEfightschildobesityandcontributestoforminglifelonghabitsofexercise.Step3:RewritethetopicsentencesFirstly,itbetterschildren’shealthbydistancingthemfromobesityandencouragingthemtoworkouthabitually.Firstly,itridsstudentsofchildobesityand

ushersthemintolifelonginvolvementinexercise,thusresultingintheirhealthimprovement.Para.2Firstly,theybelieve14Para.3Secondly,PEassiststheyoungindevelopingtheteamspirit,learningtorespectmutuallyandbuildingstrongfriendships.Step3:RewritethetopicsentencesMoreover,physicaleducationprovidesvitalfactorsinstudents’futuresuccess,likecharacterdevelopment,mutualrespect,teamworkandlastingfriendships.Moreover,itcultivatesstudents’characterdevelopment,sportsmanship,teamworkandlastingfriendships,makingfortheirfuturesuccess.Para.3Secondly,PEassistst15Para.4Finally,thepursuitfornationalsportingachievementbeginsinschools.It’smucheasiertopickout,developandequipathletestorepresentthecountryonawiderstage.Step3:RewritethetopicsentencesLastly,asaconvenientapproachtoselectingpotentialathletes,PElaysasolidfoundationfornationalsportingachievement.Atlast,compulsoryPEinschoolsmakesfortheeasierselectionofexcellentathletestofightfornationalsportinghonor.Para.4Finally,thepursuitf16Step4:Include

differentinformationinalogicalsentence.1.adversativerelation(转折)but,however,onthecontrary,despite…,while-clause,etc.2.causalrelation(因果)therefore,owingto,asaresultof…,beattributedto,contributeto,accountfor,…,(thus)v-ing…,etc.Step4:Includedifferentinf17Step5:Combine

thesentencestoformapassage.Payattentiontothefollowingaspects:1.conciseness(简洁)2.precision(准确)3.coherence(连贯)Tipsonhowtocombinesentences:1.Uselinkingwords/phrases/clauses(运用连接性词句)2.Usevarioussentencepatterns(运用多种句型)Step5:Combinethesentences18Onepossibleversion

Despiteparentalcomplaintaboutchildren’sforcedinvolvementinsport,advocatesofPEhighlight

thesignificanceandnecessityofcompulsoryPEinschools.(1)Firstly,itbetterschildren’shealthbydistancingthemfromobesityandencouragingthemtoworkout

habitually.(2)Moreover,itcultivatesstudents’characterdevelopment,sportsmanship,teamworkandlastingfriendships,makingfortheirfuturesuccess.(3)

Lastly,asaconvenientapproachtoselectingpotentialathletes,PElaysasolidfoundationfornationalsportingachievement.(4)

(73words)OnepossibleversionDe19SummaryWritingSummaryWriting20Criteriaforagoodsummary理解准确，涵盖全部要点。能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇。完全使用自己的语言。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所完成的概要结构紧凑。Contents(内容)Languageskills(语言)Structure(结构)Criteriaforagoodsummary理解准21IntheUK,PhysicalEducation(PE)iscompulsoryinstateschoolsuntiltheageof16–thatis,sportsarecompulsoryforaslongaseducationiscompulsory.Everyyear,moreandmoreparentscomplaintotheirchildren’sschoolsaboutPE.Theybelievethattheirchildrenshouldn’thavetoparticipateinphysicalactivityiftheydon’twantto.SupportersofPE,however,believethatitisacrucialelementofall-roundschoolingandoursociety’swell-being.TheyinsistPEinschoolsremainsoneofthefewplacesbywhichtheyouthcanbeforcedtoparticipateinaerobic(有氧的)exercise.Firstly,theybelievethatparticipationinsportpromoteshealth.Infactphysicaleducationisaspringboardforinvolvementinsportandphysicalactivitiesthroughoutlife.Governmentis,orshouldbe,concernedwiththehealthofitscitizens.EncouragingphysicalactivityintheyoungthroughcompulsoryPEfightschildobesityandcontributestoforminglifelonghabitsofexercise.Thisdoesn’thavetobethroughtraditionalteamsports;increasinglyschoolsareabletoofferexerciseintheformofswimming,gymnastics,dance,etc.Besides,physicaleducationhelpstodevelopcharacterandthemutual(相互的)respectrequiredtosucceedinanadultenvironment.Playingteamsportsbuildscharacterandencouragesstudentstoworkwithothers,astheywouldbeexpectedtodoinmostbusinessorsportingenvironments.Sportteacheschildrenhowtowinandlosewithgoodgraceandbuildsastrongschoolspiritthroughcompetitionwithotherinstitutions.Itisoftentheexperienceofplayingonateamtogetherthatbuildsthestrongestfriendshipsatschool,whichendureforyearsafterwards.Finally,thepursuitfornationalsportingachievementbeginsinschools.Ifschoolsdon’thavecompulsoryPE,itismuchhardertopickout,developandequipathletestorepresentthecountryonawiderstage.However,it’smucheasiertofindsuitableindividualsifthere’safullsportsprogramineveryschool.IntheUK,PhysicalEducatio22Step1:Identify

thegenre

(体裁)andtopicofthepassage.Genre: A.Narration(记叙文). B.Exposition(说明文). C.Argumentation(议论文).Topic: CompulsoryPhysicalEducationintheUKStep1:Identifythegenre(体裁23Step2:Findthetopicsentencesand

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thestructureofthepassage.①②③④①②③④①②③④A B CStep2:Findthetopicsentenc24ThestructureofthepassageTopic:CompulsoryPEintheUKReason/Benefit1Reason/Benefit2Reason/Benefit3ThestructureofthepassageT25Para.1Moreandmoreparentscomplaintotheirchildren’sschoolsaboutPE.SupportersofPE,however,believethatitisacrucialelementofall-roundschoolingandoursociety’swell-being.Step2:Findthetopicsentencesand

figureout

the

structureofthepassage.IntheUK,PhysicalEducation(PE)iscompulsoryinstateschoolsuntiltheageof16–thatis,sportsarecompulsoryforaslongaseducationiscompulsory.Everyyear,moreandmoreparentscomplaintotheirchildren’sschoolsaboutPE.Theybelievethattheirchildrenshouldn’thavetoparticipateinphysicalactivityiftheydon’twantto.SupportersofPE,however,believethatitisacrucialelementofall-roundschoolingandoursociety’swell-being.TheyinsistPEinschoolsremainsoneofthefewplacesbywhichtheyouthcanbeforcedtoparticipateinaerobic(有氧的)exercise.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Para.1Moreandmoreparents26Para.2Firstly,pulsoryPEfightschildobesityandcontributestoforminglifelonghabitsofexercise.

Step2:Findthetopicsentencesand

figureout

the

structureofthepassage.

Firstly,theybelievethatparticipationinsportpromoteshealth.Infactphysicaleducationisaspringboardforinvolvementinsportandphysicalactivitiesthroughoutlife.Governmentis,orshouldbe,concernedwiththehealthofitscitizens.EncouragingphysicalactivityintheyoungthroughcompulsoryPEfightschildobesityandcontributestoforminglifelonghabitsofexercise.Thisdoesn’thavetobethroughtraditionalteamsports;increasinglyschoolsareabletoofferexerciseintheformofswimming,gymnastics,dance,etc.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Para.2Firstly,theybelieve27Para.3Besides,physicaleducationhelpstodevelopcharacterandthemutualrespectrequiredtosucceedinanadultenvironment.Step2:Findthetopicsentencesand

figureout

the

structureofthepassage.

Besides,physicaleducationhelpstodevelopcharacterandthemutual(相互的)respectrequiredtosucceedinanadultenvironment.Playingteamsportsbuildscharacterandencouragesstudentstoworkwithothers,astheywouldbeexpectedtodoinmostbusinessorsportingenvironments.Sportteacheschildrenhowtowinandlosewithgoodgraceandbuildsastrongschoolspiritthroughcompetitionwithotherinstitutions.Itisoftentheexperienceofplayingonateamtogetherthatbuildsthestrongestfriendshipsatschool,whichendureforyearsafterwards._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Para.3Besides,physicaleduc28Para.4Finally,thepursuitfornationalsportingachievementbeginsinschools.it’smucheasiertopickout,developandequipathletestorepresentthecountryonawiderstage.Step2:Findthetopicsentencesand

figureout

the

structureofthepassage.

Finally,thepursuitfornationalsportingachievementbeginsinschools.Ifschoolsdon’thavecompulsoryPE,itismuchhardertopickout,developandequipathletestorepresentthecountryonawiderstage.However,it’smucheasiertofindsuitableindividualsifthere’safullsportsprogramineveryschool._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Para.4Finally,thepursuitfo29Para.1Para.2Para.3Para.4Moreandmoreparentscomplaintotheirchildren’sschoolsaboutPE.SupportersofPE,however,believethatitisacrucialelementofall-roundschoolingandoursociety’swell-being.Firstly,pulsoryPEfightschildobesityandcontributestoforminglifelonghabitsofexercise.Besides,physicaleducationhelpstodevelopcharacterandthemutualrespectrequiredtosucceedinanadultenvironment.Finally,thepursuitfornationalsportingachievementbeginsinschools.It’smucheasiertopickout,developandequipathletestorepresentthecountryonawiderstage.topicsentencesPara.1Moreandmoreparents30Tips

onrewriting(改述)1.Usesynonymsandnear-synonyms(运用同义词和近义词)2.Useactive/passivevoice(主被动换用)3.Changewordforms(改换词形)4.Generalizefromdetails(归纳细节)5.Expresstheoppositemeaning(正话反说)Step3:RewritethetopicsentencesTipsonrewriting(改述)1.Uses31Para.1Moreandmoreparentscomplaintotheirchildren’sschoolsaboutPE.SupportersofPE,however,believethatitisacrucialelementofall-roundschoolingandoursociety’swell-being.Step3:RewritethetopicsentencesDespiteparentalcomplaintaboutchildren’sforcedinvolvementinsport,advocatesofPEhighlight

thesignificanceandnecessityofcompulsoryPEinschools.Despiteparentalcomplaintaboutchildren’sforcedinvolvementinsport,advocatesofcompulsory

PEregarditvitaltoschoolingandsocietyandthereforeabsolutelynecessary.Para.1Moreandmoreparents32Para.2Firstly,pulsoryPEfightschildobesityandcontributestoforminglifelonghabitsofexercise.Step3:RewritethetopicsentencesFirstly,itbetterschildren’shealthbydistancingthemfromobesityandencouragingthemtoworkouthabitually.Firstly,itridsstudentsofchildobesityand

ushersthemintolifelonginvolvementinexercise,thusresultingintheirhealthimprovement.Para.2Firstly,theybelieve33Para.3Secondly,PE