新高考英语：读后续写课件

continuationwriting读后续写

continuationwriting1读后续写的具体内容提供一段350词以内的语言材料，要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示关键词进行续写（150词左右），将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。读后续写的具体内容提供一段350词以内的语言材料，要求考生依2第五档：21-25第四档：16-20第三档：11-15第二档：6-10第一档：1-5第五档：21-253第五档：21-25与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接合理。内容丰富，应用了5个以上短文中标出的关键词语。所使用语法结构和词汇丰富，准确，可能有些许错误，但完全不影响意义表达。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑。记叙文阅读理解能力记叙文书面表达能力第五档：21-25与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落开头语4与所给短文融洽度较高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接较为合理。内容比较丰富，应用了5个以上短文所标出的关键词语。所使用的语法结构和词汇较为丰富、准确，可能有些许错误，但不影响意义表达。比较有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑。第四档：16-20与所给短文融洽度较高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接较为合理。第四5读后续写过程中存在的问题：续写内容与所给短文在叙述意图上不一致续写内容与所给短文在相关细节上相矛盾续写内容与所给短文在语篇结构上不连贯读后续写过程中存在的问题：续写内容与所给短文在叙述意图上不一6读后续写的能力要求一、记叙文阅读理解能力二、由读到写的思维能力三、记叙文书面表达能力读后续写的能力要求一、记叙文阅读理解能力7一、记叙文阅读理解能力浅层的信息定位能力：深层的文本分析能力：

what,when,where,who,why,how等理清故事的发展线索明确文本的主要矛盾关注故事的语言风格一、记叙文阅读理解能力浅层的信息定位能力：深层的文本分析能力8阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。OneweekendinJuly,Janeandherhusband,Tom,haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbyalakeintheforest.Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom,“I’mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp”andwalkedaway.Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace,sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.“Tom!”shecried.“Help!”Noreply.IfonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephoneinthatbagwithTom.Janekeptmoving,butthefarthershewalked,themoreconfusedshebecame.Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.Lyingawakeinthedark,JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.Shewantedtoholdhimandtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.Janeroseatthebreakofday,hungryandthirsty.Shecouldhearwatertrickling(滴落)somewhereatadistance.Quicklyshefollowedthesoundtoastream.Tohergreatjoy,shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandateafewberries.Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.Feelingstrongernow,Janebegantowalkalongthestreamandhopeitwouldleadhertothelake.Asshepickedherwaycarefullyalongthestream,Janeheardahelicopter.Isthatforme?Unfortunately,thetreesmadeitimpossibleforpeopletoseeherfromabove.Afewminuteslater,anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.Janetookoffheryellowblouse,thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandflagthemiftheycamebackagain.But

no

more

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and

it

was

dark.

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daybreak

when

Jane

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_________________________________________2016年高考读后续写阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。9Readforinformationwho:what:where:Jane,TomJanewaslost.

intheforestReadforinformationwho:Jane,10OneweekendinJuly,Janeandherhusband,Tom,haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbyalakeintheforest.Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom,“I’mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp”andwalkedaway.Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace,sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.“Tom!”shecried.“Help!”Noreply.IfonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephoneinthatbagwithTom.Janekeptmoving,butthefarthershewalked,themoreconfusedshebecame.Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.Lyingawakeinthedark,JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.Shewantedtoholdhimandtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.Janeroseatthebreakofday,hungryandthirsty.Shecouldhearwatertrickling(滴落)somewhereatadistance.Quicklyshefollowedthesoundtoastream.Tohergreatjoy,shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandateafewberries.Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.Feelingstrongernow,Janebegantowalkalongthestreamandhopeitwouldleadhertothelake.Asshepickedherwaycarefullyalongthestream,Janeheardahelicopter.Isthatforme?Unfortunately,thetreesmadeitimpossibleforpeopletoseeherfromabove.Afewminuteslater,anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.Janetookoffheryellowblouse,thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandflagthemiftheycamebackagain.But

no

more

helicopters

came

and

it

was

dark.

_________________________________It

was

daybreak

when

Jane

woke

up.

_________________________________________ReadfortheorganizationInwhatorderisthematerialdeveloped?OneweekendinJuly,……Asnightwasbeginningtofall,……Janeroseatthebreakoftheday,……But……anditwasgettingdarkagain.ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.timesequenceReadfortheorganizationInwh11Readfortheplotbehaviorsfeelingspara.1quarrel,walkedawayangrypara.2waslostfrightened,regretful,confused,para.3criedpara.4keptmoving,hadtostop,wantedpara.5saw,drank,ate,feltstrongerjoyful,hopefulpara.6heard,tookoff,thinkinghopeful,anxiousReadfortheplotbehaviorsfeel12BeginningClimaxEndingquarrelledgotlostcriedwantedsaw,drank,ateheard,tookoff,thinkingthat...angryfrightenedregretful(helicopters)joyfulhopefulnomorehelicopterswokeuprescued?feelings?BeginningClimaxEndingquarr13Readforthelanguage阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。OneweekendinJuly,Janeandherhusband,Tom,haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbyalakeintheforest.Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom,“I’mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp”andwalkedaway.Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace,sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.“Tom!”shecried.“Help!”Noreply.IfonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephoneinthatbagwithTom.Janekeptmoving,butthefarthershewalked,themoreconfusedshebecame.Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.Lyingawakeinthedark,JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.Shewantedtoholdhimandtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.Janeroseatthebreakofday,hungryandthirsty.Shecouldhearwatertrickling(滴落)somewhereatadistance.Quicklyshefollowedthesoundtoastream.Tohergreatjoy,shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandateafewberries.Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.Feelingstrongernow,Janebegantowalkalongthestreamandhopeitwouldleadhertothelake.Asshepickedherwaycarefullyalongthestream,Janeheardahelicopter.Isthatforme?Unfortunately,thetreesmadeitimpossibleforpeopletoseeherfromabove.Afewminuteslater,anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.Janetookoffheryellowblouse,thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandflagthemiftheycamebackagain.But

no

more

helicopters

came

and

it

was

dark.

_________________________________It

was

daybreak

when

Jane

woke

up.

_________________________________________Withnopathtofollow,Jane…………,sheturnedaround,hopingto……Janetookoffheryellowblouse,thinkingthat……Janerose……,hungryandthirsty.Ifonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephone……Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.Readfor阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构14二、由读到写的思维能力细读两段续写的开头语，理顺续写段落的逻辑关系；围绕划定的10个关键词，合理创新故事情节。Para.1:But

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it

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HowdidJanefeelthen?HowdidJanestrugglethroughthenight?Didshefallasleep?Para.2:It

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WasJanerescued?WhorescuedJane?Howwassherescued?Howdidshefeelthen?二、由读到写的思维能力细读两段续写的开头语，理顺续写段落的逻15Theunderlinedwordswhere020304

yellowblousewalkedTomhelicopterJanelakestreamclimbedatadistancetohergreatjoyTheunderlinedwordswhere020316Classify10keywordsintodifferentgroups._________________:Jane,Tom_________________:walked,climbed_________________:helicopter,yellowblouse_________________:lake,stream,atadistance_________________:tohergreatjoycharactersbehaviorstoolsplacesfeelingsClassify10keywordsintodif17三、记叙文书面表达能力(一)语言的丰富性

(二)语篇的连贯性

三、记叙文书面表达能力(一)语言的丰富性18(一)语言的丰富性1.词汇、句式、语法的多样性2.情感表达的多样性3.动词使用的丰富性(一)语言的丰富性1.词汇、句式、语法的多样性191.词汇、句式、语法的多样性简单句，复合句以及强调句、倒装句等特殊句式的使用情况。主被动语态、非谓语动词、独立主格结构、with的复合结构、虚拟语气的使用情况。常见初级词汇、高级词汇，以及不同词性的使用情况。比喻、拟人、夸张等修辞格的使用情况。句式结构：语法结构：词汇选择：修辞手法：1.词汇、句式、语法的多样性简单句，复合句以及强调句、倒装202.情感表达的多样性Jane'sfeelingswalkedaway,turnedaround,criedIsthatforme?“Tom!”“Help!”Nightwasbeginningtofall.Itwasdaybreak.confused,hungryandthirsty...walkedaway,turnedaround,criedwalkedaway,turnedaround,criedactionswordssurroundingsthoughtslooks2.情感表达的多样性Jane'swalkedaway21

“Anotherrace,anotherrace!”saidthelittleboy.Thewiseoldmansteppedforwardandpresentedthelittleboywithtwonewchallengers,anelderlyweakladyandablindman.“Whatisthis?”saidthelittleboy.“Thisisnorace.”Hesaid.“Race!”saidthewiseman.Theracewasstartedandtheboywastheonlyfinisher,theothertwochallengersleftstandingatthestartingline.Thelittleboywasexcited.Heraisedhisarmsindelight.Thecrowd,however,wassilentshowingnosentimenttowardthelittleboy.“Whathashappened?Whydon’tthepeoplejoininmysuccess?”heaskedthewiseoldman.“Raceagain.”saidtheman,“Thistime,finishtogether,allthreeofyou,finishtogether,”saidthewiseman.urgedaskdcomplainedrepliedcontinued3.动词使用的丰富性“Anotherrace,anotherr22Usemorespecificwordstoreplace“say”.shout,scream,yell,roar,cry,whisper,interrupt,add,continue,tell,remark,predict,repeat,guess,implyrefuse,agree,admit,complain,smile,urge,apologize,sigh,beg,explain，promise,comfort,compromise，warnask,wonder,doubt,answer,reply方式态度问答Usemorespecificwordstorep23

Godfeltsadandsighedtothebutterfly,“Doyouregretforwhatyouhavedone?”“No!”thebutterflysaidfirmly,withouthesitation.“Hewasyourlover,butnowhestayswithanotherwoman.Withoutyou,hecouldn’thaverecovered.”Godsaidwithpity.“Ilovehim.”thebutterflysaidinalowvoice,“althoughIcan’tbetheoneheloves,Iwanthimtobehappy.NeverwillIregretwhatIhavedone.”Godsmiled,“Trueloveisthemostinvaluablethingintheworld.”Thebutterflythenleftthetownwiththebestwishesfortheman.Godfeltsadandsighedto24firmly/excitedly/seriously/jokingly/sincerelyingreatsurprise/alowvoice/asoftvoicewithdelight/excitement/embarrassment/pride/respect/alarm/satisfaction/caution/patience/certaintyMakeyour“say”morespecific.firmly/excitedly/seriously/jok25

……“Ohyes,Daddy,youknowIloveyou,”thelittlegirlsaidsincerely.“Well,then,givemeyourpearls.”“Oh!Daddy,notmypearls!”Jennyrefused,shakingherheadviolently.“ButyoucanhaveRosy,myfavoritedoll.Rememberher?Yougavehertomelastyearformybirthday.Andyoucanhaveherteapartyoutfittoo.Okay?”“Ohnodarling,that’sOkay.”Herfatherbrushedhercheekwithakiss.“Goodnight,littleone.”……26eyeshandsheadstare/glareat/lookherintheeye/withhereyesshining/filledwithtearsHiseyessparklewithexcitement/gratitudepathimontheshoulder/headgrasp/holdone'shandspointtosb/sthwavehishandsnod/shakehisheadviolentlyHethoughtforamomentMakeyournarrationmorevividwithappropriatemovement.eyeshandsheadstare/glareat27

Butnomorehelicoptercameanditwasgettingdarkagain.

Amidthedreadfuldarkness,strangesoundsofwildbeastswereheard.“Ifitweren'tforthatstupidquarrel,Iwouldn'tbetrappedhere,”shethoughttoherself,regretfultearscloudinghereyes.Surroundedbythefearandtiredness,Janefeltexhaustedandfinallyslidintosleep.“Tom,isthatyou?”shemurmured.“Tom,help!”Inherdream,shesawamanextendinghisarmstowardsheratadistance.

ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.

Afterawashing,Janecontinuedtoforceherwayahead.Intheboundlesssearch,shefounditimpossibletofindawayout,whichthrewherintodesperation.Fortunately,ahelicopterflewoverheadjustatthatmoment.InnotimedidJanerushtotherockandclimbontoit.Shewavedheryellowblousemadlytothepassinghelicopter.Tohergreatjoy,thistime,thehelicopterspottedher.ThemomentJanewasreunitedwithherhusband,hertearscloudedhervision.Theyhuggedeachothertightlyinthewarmlightofthesettingsun.wordssurroundingsthoughtslooksButnomorehelicopter28(二)语篇的连贯性

1.内容连贯故事大意一致，写作意图一致(二)语篇的连贯性故事大意一致，写作意图一致292.语句连贯——衔接词的准确使用but/howeverneverthelesswhereasalthoughthoughunfortunatelyinsteadonthecontrarybesidesmoreoverfurthermorewhat'smorewhat'sworseworsestillsothusthereforehenceconsequentlyaccordinglyasaresult2.语句连贯——衔接词的准确使用but/however30OneweekendinJuly,Janeandherhusband,Tom,haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbyalakeintheforest.Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom,“I’mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp”andwalkedaway.Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace,sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.“Tom!”shecried.“Help!”Noreply.IfonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephoneinthatbagwithTom.Janekeptmoving,butthefarthershewalked,themoreconfusedshebecame.Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.Lyingawakeinthedark,JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.Shewantedtoholdhimandtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.Janeroseatthebreakofday,hungryandthirsty.Shecouldhearwatertrickling(滴落)somewhereatadistance.Quicklyshefollowedthesoundtoastream.Tohergreatjoy,shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandateafewberries.Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.Feelingstrongernow,Janebegantowalkalongthestreamandhopeitwouldleadhertothelake.Asshepickedherwaycarefullyalongthestream,Janeheardahelicopter.Isthatforme?Unfortunately,thetreesmadeitimpossibleforpeopletoseeherfromabove.Afewminuteslater,anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.Janetookoffheryellowblouse,thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandflagthemiftheycamebackagain.But

no

more

helicopters

came

and

it

was

dark.

_________________________________It

was

daybreak

when

Jane

woke

up.

_________________________________________3.语言连贯——语言风格一致3.语言连贯——语言风格一致31

Butnomorehelicoptercameanditwasgettingdarkagain.

Amidthedreadfuldarkness,strangesoundsofwildbeastswereheard.“Ifitweren'tforthatstupidquarrel,Iwouldn'tbetrappedhere,”shethoughttoherself,regretfultearscloudinghereyes.Surroundedbythefearandtiredness,Janefeltexhaustedandfinallyslidintosleep.“Tom,isthatyou?”shemurmured.“Tom,help!”Inherdream,shesawamanextendinghisarmstowardsheratadistance.

ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.

Afterawashing,Janecontinuedtoforceherwayahead.Intheboundlesssearch,shefounditimpossibletofindawayout,whichthrewherintodesperation.Fortunately,ahelicopterflewoverheadjustatthatmoment.InnotimedidJanerushtotherockandclimbontoit.Shewavedheryellowblousemadlytothepassinghelicopter.Tohergreatjoy,thistime,thehelicopterspottedher.ThemomentJanewasreunitedwithherhusband,hertearscloudedhervision.Theyhuggedeachothertightlyinthewarmlightofthesettingsun.Butnomorehelicopter32OneweekendinJuly,Janeandherhusband,Tom,haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbyalakeintheforest.Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom,“I’mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp”andwalkedaway.Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace,sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.“Tom!”shecried.“Help!”Noreply.IfonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephoneinthatbagwithTom.Janekeptmoving,butthefarthershewalked,themoreconfusedshebecame.Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.Lyingawakeinthedark,JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.Shewantedtoholdhimandtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.Janeroseatthebreakofday,hungryandthirsty.Shecouldhearwatertrickling(滴落)somewhereatadistance.Quicklyshefollowedthesoundtoastream.Tohergreatjoy,shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandateafewberries.Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.Feelingstrongernow,Janebegantowalkalongthestreamandhopeitwouldleadhertothelake.Asshepickedherwaycarefullyalongthestream,Janeheardahelicopter.Isthatforme?Unfortunately,thetreesmadeitimpossibleforpeopletoseeherfromabove.Afewminuteslater,anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.Janetookoffheryellowblouse,thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandflagthemiftheycamebackagain.But

no

more

helicopters

came

and

it

was

dark.

_________________________________It

was

daybreak

when

Jane

woke

up.

_________________________________________3.语言连贯——语言风格一致Withnopathtofollow,Jane…………,sheturnedaround,hopingto……Janetookoffheryellowblouse,thinkingthat……Janerose……,hungryandthirsty.Ifonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephone……Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.3.语言连贯——语言风格一致Withnopath33

Butnomorehelicoptercameanditwasgettingdarkagain.

Amidthedreadfuldarkness,strangesoundsofwildbeastswereheard.“Ifitweren'tforthatstupidquarrel,Iwouldn'tbetrappedhere,”shethoughttoherself,regretfultearscloudinghereyes.Surroundedbythefearandtiredness,Janefeltexhaustedandfinallyslidintosleep.“Tom,isthatyou?”shemurmured.“Tom,help!”Inherdream,shesawamanextendinghisarmstowardsheratadistance.

ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.

Afterawashing,Janecontinuedtoforceherwayahead.Intheboundlesssearch,shefounditimpossibletofindawayout,whichthrewherintodesperation.Fortunately,ahelicopterflewoverheadjustatthatmoment.InnotimedidJanerushtotherockandclimbontoit.Shewavedheryellowblousemadlytothepassinghelicopter.Tohergreatjoy,thistime,thehelicopterspottedher.ThemomentJanewasreunitedwithherhusband,hertearscloudedhervision.Theyhuggedeachothertightlyinthewarmlightofthesettingsun.Butnomorehelicopter34

Butnomorehelicoptercameanditwasgettingdarkagain.

Amidthedreadfuldarkness,strangesoundsofwildbeastswereheard.“Ifitweren'tforthatstupidquarrel,Iwouldn'tbetrappedhere,”shethoughttoherself,regretfultearscloudinghereyes.Surroundedbythefearandtiredness,Janefeltexhaustedandfinallyslidintosleep.“Tom,isthatyou?”shemurmured.“Tom,help!”Inherdream,shesawamanextendinghisarmstowardsheratadistance.

ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.

Afterawashing,Janecontinuedtoforceherwayahead.Intheboundlesssearch,shefounditimpossibletofindawayout,whichthrewherintodesperation.Fortunately,ahelicopterflewoverheadjustatthatmoment.InnotimedidJanerushtotherockandclimbontoit.Shewavedheryellowblousemadlytothepassinghelicopter.Tohergreatjoy,thistime,thehelicopterspottedher.ThemomentJanewasreunitedwithherhusband,hertearscloudedhervision.Theyhuggedeachothertightlyinthewarmlightofthesettingsun.4.结构连贯——

前后呼应Butnomorehelicopter35关于衔接：1.关注段落内部句与句之间的衔接；2.关注与续写段落首句之间的衔接；3.关注两个续写段落之间的衔接；4.关注上下文间的前后呼应。关于衔接：36

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Ihadaninterestingchildhood.Itwasfilledwithsurprisesandamusements,allbecauseofmymother---loving,sweet,yetabsent-mindedandforgetful.OnestrangefamilytripwetookwhenIwaseleventellsalotabouther.

MytwosetsofgrandparentslivedinColoradoandNorthDakota,andmyparentsdecidedtospendafewweeksdrivingtothosestatesandseeingallthesightsalongtheway.Asthefirstdayofourtripapproached,David,myeight-year-oldbrother,andIunwillinglysaidgood-byetoallofourfriends.Whoknewifwe’deverseethemagain?Finally,themomentofourdeparturearrived,andweloadedsuitcases,books,games,campingequipment,andatentintothecarandbravelydroveoff.Webravelydroveoffagaintwohourslaterafterwe’dreturnedhometogetthepurseandtraveler’schecksMomhadforgotten.

DavidandIwerealwaysalittlenervouswhenusinggasstationbathroomsifMomwasdrivingwhileDadslept:“Youstandoutsidethedoorandplaylookout(放哨)whileIgo,andI’llstandoutsidethedoorandplaylookoutwhileyougo.”Ihadterriblepicturesinmymind:“Honey,wherearethekids?”“What?!Oh,Gosh…Ithoughttheywerebeingawfullyquiet.”Wewereneveractuallyleftbehindinastrangecity,butweweren’tabouttotakeanychances.

Onthefourthorfifthnight,wehadtroublefindingahotelwithavacancy.Afterdrivinginvainforsometime,Momsuddenlygotagreatidea:Whydidn’twefindahousewithalikely-lookingbackyardandaskifwecouldsetuptentthere?DavidandIbecamenervous.Toourgreatrelief,Dadturneddowntheidea.Momnevercouldunderstandourobjections(反对).Ifastrangefamilyshoweduponherfrontdoorstep,Momwouldhavebeendelighted.Shethinkseveryoneintheworldisasniceassheis.Wefinallyfoundavacancyinthenexttown.

Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.____________________________Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.____________________________2017年高考读后续写阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成37

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Ihadaninterestingchildhood.Itwasfilledwithsurprisesandamusements,allbecauseofmymother---loving,sweet,yetabsent-mindedandforgetful.OnestrangefamilytripwetookwhenIwaseleventellsalotabouther.

MytwosetsofgrandparentslivedinColoradoandNorthDakota,andmyparentsdecidedtospendafewweeksdrivingtothosestatesandseeingallthesightsalongtheway.Asthefirstdayofourtripapproached,David,myeight-year-oldbrother,andIunwillinglysaidgood-byetoallofourfriends.Whoknewifwe’deverseethemagain?Finally,themomentofourdeparturearrived,andweloadedsuitcases,books,games,campingequipment,andatentintothecarandbravelydroveoff.Webravelydroveoffagaintwohourslaterafterwe’dreturnedhometogetthepurseandtraveler’schecksMomhadforgotten.

DavidandIwerealwaysalittlenervouswhenusinggasstationbathroomsifMomwasdrivingwhileDadslept:“Youstandoutsidethedoorandplaylookout(放哨)whileIgo,andI’llstandoutsidethedoorandplaylookoutwhileyougo.”Ihadterriblepicturesinmymind:“Honey,wherearethekids?”“What?!Oh,Gosh…Ithoughttheywerebeingawfullyquiet.”Wewereneveractuallyleftbehindinastrangecity,butweweren’tabouttotakeanychances.

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