定语从句在写作中的运用课件

TheAttributiveClauseusedinwriting

定语从句在写作中的运用TheAttributiveClauseusedin1Guessing1.Sheisawoman.Sheisabeautifulwoman.Sheisabeautifulwomanwhoabandonedallherfamily,flewtotheskyandlivedaloneinanisolatedpalace.Guessing1.Sheisawoman.Guessing2.Itisananimal.Itisalovelyanimal.Itisalovelyanimalwithtwolongears.Itisalovelyanimalwithtwolongears,whichfeedsoncarrots.Guessing2.Itisananimal.Guessing3.Itisafestival.It’saChinesetraditionalfestival.It’saChinesetraditionalfestivalwhen

peoplegettogethertowatchthemoonandenjoymooncakesdelightedly.Mid-autumnDayGuessing3.Itisafestival.MGuessing4.It’sanobject.It’sanobjectinourclassroomnow.It’sanobjectinourclassroomnow,withoutwhichIcan’tmakemyvoiceloudenoughastobeheardbyyouclearly.Mini-loudspeakerGuessing4.It’sanobject.MiniTheAttributiveClause1.Sheisabeautifulwoman_______abandonedallherfamily,flewtotheskyandlivedaloneinanisolatedpalace.

2.Itisalovelyanimalwithtwolongears,______feedsoncarrots.3.It’saChinesetraditionalfestival_____peoplegettogethertowatchthemoonandenjoymooncakesdelightedly.4.It’sanobjectinourclassroomnow,________whichIcan’tmakemyvoiceloudenoughastobeheardbyyouclearly.who/thatwhichwhenwithout定从:先行词(名,代,句)+关系词(代,副)

找先行词--还原法—判成分---确定关系词TheAttributiveClause1.Sheis3.判断成分Heusedthetelescope___hismothergavehimtoseethemountainclearly.thetelescopeHismothergavehimthetelescope物物1.找到先行词2.还原法4.确定关系词(that/which)宾语3.判断成分Heusedthetelescope__定语从句在写作中的运用课件1.ThefilmiscalledTitanic,anditisabeautifulandsadlovestory.Thefilmthat/whichiscalledTitanicisabeautifulandsadlovestory.Rewritethesentences1.ThefilmiscalledTitanic,2.Jackisapoorpainter.Hewonashipticketbyplayingcards.Jack,whowonashipticketbyplayingcardsisapoorpainter.Rewritethesentences2.Jackisapoorpainter.He3.TheymetandfellinlovewitheachotheronTitanic.TheyhadahappytimeonTitanicTheymetandfellinlovewitheachotheronTitanicwheretheyhadahappytime.Rewritethesentences3.Theymetandfellinlovewi4.Sadly,thenicejourneywasdestroyedbyanunexpectedstorm,andJacklosthislifeforsavingLucyinthestorm.Sadly,thenicejourneywasdestroyedbyanunexpectedstorminwhich/whereJacklosthislifeforsavingLucy.Rewritethesentences4.Sadly,thenicejourneywas

Ourclassisabigfamily.Itismadeupof26girlsand10boys.Allofthemareverydiligentandwarm-hearted.GuoZhiyongisourmonitor.Heisalwaysreadytohelpothers.Heissuchagoodboythatwealllikehimverymuch.Ourclassisabigfamily,whichismadeupof26girlsand10boys,allofwhomareverydiligentandwarm-hearted.GuoZhiyongisourmonitor,whoisalwaysreadytohelpothers.Heissuchagoodboythatwealllikehim.Ourclassisabigfamily.TranslatethesentencesintoEnglish1.昨天他卖了他的车，一个月之前他刚买的。Yesterdayhesoldhiscar,whichheboughtamonthago.TranslatethesentencesintoETranslatethesentencesintoEnglish2.所有的邻居都羡慕这个家庭，在这个家庭里,父母把孩子当做朋友。Alltheneighborsadmirethisfamilywheretheparentstreattheirchildrenlikefriends.TranslatethesentencesintoETranslatethesentencesintoEnglish3.中国政府已经把中秋节定为法定假日（make...alegalholiday),在那天人们可以休假一天。TheChinesegovernmenthasmadetheMid-AutumnFestivalalegalholiday,whenpeoplecanhaveadayoff.TranslatethesentencesintoETranslatethesentencesintoEnglish4.就是在昨天我们吃饭的餐馆我把我的包丢了。

ItwasintherestaurantwherewehaddinnertogetherthatIlostmybag.TranslatethesentencesintoETranslatethesentencesintoEnglish5.耐心是一种品质，没有它你不可能把工作做好。Patienceisakindofquality,withoutwhichyoucan’tworkwell.TranslatethesentencesintoE定语从句在基础写作中的运用内容：公共场所禁烟实施时间：2011年1月1日起实施范围：全国目标：所有室内公共场所无烟措施：张贴禁烟标志相关数据：（1）吸烟人数：约3.5亿（2）分布：男性75％;女性：25％（3）受二手烟影响人数：约5.4亿（4）因二手烟死亡人数：超过10万/年定语从句在基础写作中的运用内容：公共场所禁烟实施时间：2011年1月1日起实施范围：全国目标：所有室内公共场所无烟Thisdecision,_____aimstomakeallindoorpublicplacessmoke-free,willcomeintoeffectfromthefirstdayof2011.which实施时间：2011年1月1日起Thisdecision,（1）吸烟人数：约3.5亿（2）分布：男性75％;女性：25％CurrentlyChinahasabout350millionsmokers,among_____75%aremenand25%arewomen.whom（1）吸烟人数：约3.5亿CurrentlyChinah（3）受二手烟影响人数：约5.4亿（4）因二手烟死亡人数：超过10万/年Around540millionpeopleareaffectedbysecond-handsmoke,_____causes100,000deathsperyear.定语从句在写作中的作用:1.整合信息,使意思更为明确2.使句子结构更为紧凑which（3）受二手烟影响人数：约5.4亿Around540miPractice2008背景：射击最初只是生存工具，19世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动。1896：第一次成为奥运项目1904：中断1928：中断1932：重回奥运会1968：第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛现状：稳步发展，1896奥运会只有三项射击项目，现今有17项。Shooting,______wasameansofsurvivaloriginally,developedintoasportonlyinthelate19thcentury.whichPractice2008Shooting,______waPractice2011基本信息：⑴书名：BattleHymnoftheTigerMother⑵作者：AmyChua，美籍华人，耶鲁大学教授⑶出版时间：2010年⑷内容：作者用中国传统方式教育两个女儿的故事⑸效应：引发中美教育方式孰优孰劣的讨论相关报道：⑴中文版：2011年初开始在中国销售⑵意外反应：多数中国妈妈不赞同作者的做法⑶最新消息：17岁的大女儿已被哈佛和耶鲁录取Practice2011⑵作者：AmyChua，美籍华人，

耶鲁大学教授⑷内容：作者用中国传统方式教育

两个女儿的故事ItsauthorisAmyChua,aChineseAmericanandprofessoratYale,____tellsstoriesinherbookabouthowsheeducatedhertwodaughtersinthetraditionalChineseway.who⑵作者：AmyChua，美籍华人，ItsauthoriPracticemakesperfect.根据下列内容,运用定语从句写一篇五句话的文章介绍中国.1.众所周知,中国有960万平方公里的土地,是世界第三大国.2.中国有56个民族,其中汉族人(theHanEthnic)占94%3.中国有许多大河流,其中长江,黄河是最重要的河流.4.曾有一段时间,中国的经济落后于世界

许多国家.5.随着经济的增长,中国人被歧视的日子一去不复返,所有中国人都为此感到自豪.Practicemakesperfect.根据下列内容,话题运用______isknowntoall,Chinawithanareaof9.6millionsquarekilometers,isthethirdlargestcountryintheworld.TheChinesenationconsistsof56nationalities,among______theHanEthnicGroupisthelargest,makingup94%ofthewhole.Besides,therearemanybigriversinChina,themostimportantof_____aretheYangtzeRiverandtheYellowRiver.Therewasatime_____Chineseeconomywasfarbehindmanyothercountriesintheworld.However,withthedevelopmentoftheeconomy,thedaysaregoneforever______theChinesepeoplewerelookeddownupon,______allChineseareproudof.Aswhichwhichwhenwhenwhich话题运用______isknowntoall,Ch写作中存在问题一、词语的错用：有:have/has

therebebemadeupof/consistof2.长江、黄河

theYangtzeRiverandthe

YellowRiver3.第三大

thethirdlargest写作中存在问题一、词语的错用：4.经济

finance:Financeisthecommercialorgovernmentactivityofmanagingmoney,debt,credit,andinvestment.

economy:Acountry'seconomyisthewealththatitgetsfrombusinessandindustry.5.发展:develop

改进:improve财政;金融经济4.经济财政;金融经济6.民族

people/nationality7.落后

latter:Youuselattertodescribethelaterpartofaperiodoftimeorevent.（一个时期或事件）后一半的，接近终了的fallbehind/dropbehind8.makeup占比例takeup占据时间空间IknowhowbusyyoumustbeandnaturallyIwouldn'twanttotakeuptoomuchofyourtime.6.民族二、词性develop(v.)development(n.)economic(adj.)economy(v.)strength(n.)strong(adj.)discrimination(n.)discriminate(v.)三、短语第三大国thethirdlargestcountry瞧不起lookdownupon骄傲beproudof/takepridein令人高兴的是toone’sdelight二、词性四、主谓不一致TheYangzeRiverandtheYellowRiveristhemostimportantriver.TheHanEthnicmakeup94%...Chinahave…Chinesewaslookdownuponareriversmakeshaswere四、主谓不一致areriversmakeshaswere四.定语从句错用ThedayofChinesbeenlookdownuponhasgoneaway,allofwhomareproudofit.Having56ethnics,amongwhichtheHanEthnicare94%TheChinesenationconsistsof56nationalities,amongwhichtheHanEthnicGroupisthelargest,makingup94%ofthewhole.句子一定要有谓语动词Chinawith9.6millionsquarekilometerslandandthethirdlargestcountryintheworld.ItisallofChinesethatproudofit.Peoplebelookdownupon.…whicheveryonemoreandmoreconfidence.四.定语从句错用五、句型TherewasatimewhenAs连词+句子

With介词AstheeconomyofChinadevelopingfastlyAstheeconomyofChinadevelopsfastWiththeeconomydevelopWiththedevelopmentofeconomy五、句型ThedayswhenChinesewerelookeddownuponwentbyandneverreturned.SuchabigcountryisChinathatithas56nationalities,amongwhich94%aretheHanEthnic.ThedayswhenChinesewerelookeddownuponwillnotcomeback.ItwasnotuntileconomicgrowththatChinesepeoplerealizedtheywouldnolongerbediscriminated.SofastisthecountrydevelopingthatChinastandupandfacetotheworldbeyondyourimagine.ThedayswhenChinesewerelooItisknowntoeverybodythatChinaisthethirdlargestcountryoftheworld,with9.6millionsquarekilometers.TherearemanyriversinChina,mostimportantofwhichareChangjiangandHuanghe.ChangjiangRiverandHuangheRiverrunningacrossChinaliketwohugedragonsarethemostimportantriversinChina.Withthedevelopmentofeconomy,allChinesepeopleareproudofisthattheyarenolongerlookeddownupon.ItisknowntoeverybodythatThankYou!ThankYou!TheAttributiveClauseusedinwriting

定语从句在写作中的运用TheAttributiveClauseusedin38Guessing1.Sheisawoman.Sheisabeautifulwoman.Sheisabeautifulwomanwhoabandonedallherfamily,flewtotheskyandlivedaloneinanisolatedpalace.Guessing1.Sheisawoman.Guessing2.Itisananimal.Itisalovelyanimal.Itisalovelyanimalwithtwolongears.Itisalovelyanimalwithtwolongears,whichfeedsoncarrots.Guessing2.Itisananimal.Guessing3.Itisafestival.It’saChinesetraditionalfestival.It’saChinesetraditionalfestivalwhen

peoplegettogethertowatchthemoonandenjoymooncakesdelightedly.Mid-autumnDayGuessing3.Itisafestival.MGuessing4.It’sanobject.It’sanobjectinourclassroomnow.It’sanobjectinourclassroomnow,withoutwhichIcan’tmakemyvoiceloudenoughastobeheardbyyouclearly.Mini-loudspeakerGuessing4.It’sanobject.MiniTheAttributiveClause1.Sheisabeautifulwoman_______abandonedallherfamily,flewtotheskyandlivedaloneinanisolatedpalace.

2.Itisalovelyanimalwithtwolongears,______feedsoncarrots.3.It’saChinesetraditionalfestival_____peoplegettogethertowatchthemoonandenjoymooncakesdelightedly.4.It’sanobjectinourclassroomnow,________whichIcan’tmakemyvoiceloudenoughastobeheardbyyouclearly.who/thatwhichwhenwithout定从:先行词(名,代,句)+关系词(代,副)

找先行词--还原法—判成分---确定关系词TheAttributiveClause1.Sheis3.判断成分Heusedthetelescope___hismothergavehimtoseethemountainclearly.thetelescopeHismothergavehimthetelescope物物1.找到先行词2.还原法4.确定关系词(that/which)宾语3.判断成分Heusedthetelescope__定语从句在写作中的运用课件1.ThefilmiscalledTitanic,anditisabeautifulandsadlovestory.Thefilmthat/whichiscalledTitanicisabeautifulandsadlovestory.Rewritethesentences1.ThefilmiscalledTitanic,2.Jackisapoorpainter.Hewonashipticketbyplayingcards.Jack,whowonashipticketbyplayingcardsisapoorpainter.Rewritethesentences2.Jackisapoorpainter.He3.TheymetandfellinlovewitheachotheronTitanic.TheyhadahappytimeonTitanicTheymetandfellinlovewitheachotheronTitanicwheretheyhadahappytime.Rewritethesentences3.Theymetandfellinlovewi4.Sadly,thenicejourneywasdestroyedbyanunexpectedstorm,andJacklosthislifeforsavingLucyinthestorm.Sadly,thenicejourneywasdestroyedbyanunexpectedstorminwhich/whereJacklosthislifeforsavingLucy.Rewritethesentences4.Sadly,thenicejourneywas

Ourclassisabigfamily.Itismadeupof26girlsand10boys.Allofthemareverydiligentandwarm-hearted.GuoZhiyongisourmonitor.Heisalwaysreadytohelpothers.Heissuchagoodboythatwealllikehimverymuch.Ourclassisabigfamily,whichismadeupof26girlsand10boys,allofwhomareverydiligentandwarm-hearted.GuoZhiyongisourmonitor,whoisalwaysreadytohelpothers.Heissuchagoodboythatwealllikehim.Ourclassisabigfamily.TranslatethesentencesintoEnglish1.昨天他卖了他的车，一个月之前他刚买的。Yesterdayhesoldhiscar,whichheboughtamonthago.TranslatethesentencesintoETranslatethesentencesintoEnglish2.所有的邻居都羡慕这个家庭，在这个家庭里,父母把孩子当做朋友。Alltheneighborsadmirethisfamilywheretheparentstreattheirchildrenlikefriends.TranslatethesentencesintoETranslatethesentencesintoEnglish3.中国政府已经把中秋节定为法定假日（make...alegalholiday),在那天人们可以休假一天。TheChinesegovernmenthasmadetheMid-AutumnFestivalalegalholiday,whenpeoplecanhaveadayoff.TranslatethesentencesintoETranslatethesentencesintoEnglish4.就是在昨天我们吃饭的餐馆我把我的包丢了。

ItwasintherestaurantwherewehaddinnertogetherthatIlostmybag.TranslatethesentencesintoETranslatethesentencesintoEnglish5.耐心是一种品质，没有它你不可能把工作做好。Patienceisakindofquality,withoutwhichyoucan’tworkwell.TranslatethesentencesintoE定语从句在基础写作中的运用内容：公共场所禁烟实施时间：2011年1月1日起实施范围：全国目标：所有室内公共场所无烟措施：张贴禁烟标志相关数据：（1）吸烟人数：约3.5亿（2）分布：男性75％;女性：25％（3）受二手烟影响人数：约5.4亿（4）因二手烟死亡人数：超过10万/年定语从句在基础写作中的运用内容：公共场所禁烟实施时间：2011年1月1日起实施范围：全国目标：所有室内公共场所无烟Thisdecision,_____aimstomakeallindoorpublicplacessmoke-free,willcomeintoeffectfromthefirstdayof2011.which实施时间：2011年1月1日起Thisdecision,（1）吸烟人数：约3.5亿（2）分布：男性75％;女性：25％CurrentlyChinahasabout350millionsmokers,among_____75%aremenand25%arewomen.whom（1）吸烟人数：约3.5亿CurrentlyChinah（3）受二手烟影响人数：约5.4亿（4）因二手烟死亡人数：超过10万/年Around540millionpeopleareaffectedbysecond-handsmoke,_____causes100,000deathsperyear.定语从句在写作中的作用:1.整合信息,使意思更为明确2.使句子结构更为紧凑which（3）受二手烟影响人数：约5.4亿Around540miPractice2008背景：射击最初只是生存工具，19世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动。1896：第一次成为奥运项目1904：中断1928：中断1932：重回奥运会1968：第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛现状：稳步发展，1896奥运会只有三项射击项目，现今有17项。Shooting,______wasameansofsurvivaloriginally,developedintoasportonlyinthelate19thcentury.whichPractice2008Shooting,______waPractice2011基本信息：⑴书名：BattleHymnoftheTigerMother⑵作者：AmyChua，美籍华人，耶鲁大学教授⑶出版时间：2010年⑷内容：作者用中国传统方式教育两个女儿的故事⑸效应：引发中美教育方式孰优孰劣的讨论相关报道：⑴中文版：2011年初开始在中国销售⑵意外反应：多数中国妈妈不赞同作者的做法⑶最新消息：17岁的大女儿已被哈佛和耶鲁录取Practice2011⑵作者：AmyChua，美籍华人，

耶鲁大学教授⑷内容：作者用中国传统方式教育

两个女儿的故事ItsauthorisAmyChua,aChineseAmericanandprofessoratYale,____tellsstoriesinherbookabouthowsheeducatedhertwodaughtersinthetraditionalChineseway.who⑵作者：AmyChua，美籍华人，ItsauthoriPracticemakesperfect.根据下列内容,运用定语从句写一篇五句话的文章介绍中国.1.众所周知,中国有960万平方公里的土地,是世界第三大国.2.中国有56个民族,其中汉族人(theHanEthnic)占94%3.中国有许多大河流,其中长江,黄河是最重要的河流.4.曾有一段时间,中国的经济落后于世界

许多国家.5.随着经济的增长,中国人被歧视的日子一去不复返,所有中国人都为此感到自豪.Practicemakesperfect.根据下列内容,话题运用______isknowntoall,Chinawithanareaof9.6millionsquarekilometers,isthethirdlargestcountryintheworld.TheChinesenationconsistsof56nationalities,among______theHanEthnicGroupisthelargest,makingup94%ofthewhole.Besides,therearemanybigriversinChina,themostimportantof_____aretheYangtzeRiverandtheYellowRiver.Therewasatime_____Chineseeconomywasfarbehindmanyothercountriesintheworld.However,withthedevelopmentoftheeconomy,thedaysaregoneforever______theChinesepeoplewerelookeddownupon,______allChineseareproudof.Aswhichwhichwhenwhenwhich话题运用______isknowntoall,Ch写作中存在问题一、词语的错用：有:have/has

therebebemadeupof/consistof2.长江、黄河

theYangtzeRiverandthe

YellowRiver3.第三大

thethirdlargest写作中存在问题一、词语的错用：4.经济

finance:Financeisthecommercialorgovernmentactivityofmanagingmoney,debt,credit,andinvestment.

economy:Acountry'seconomyisthewealththatitgetsfrombusinessandindustry.5.发展:develop

改进:improve财政;金融经济4.经济财政;金融经济6.民族

people/nationality7.落后

latter:Youuselattertodescribethelaterpartofaperiodoftimeorevent.（一个时期或事件）后一半的，接近终了的fallbehind/dropbehind8.makeup占比例takeup占据时间空间IknowhowbusyyoumustbeandnaturallyIwouldn'twanttotakeuptoomuchofyourtime.6.民族二、词性develop(v.)development(n.)economic(adj.)economy(v.)strength(n.)strong(adj.)discrimination(n.)discriminate(v.)三、短语第三大国thethirdlarge