英语写作常见语法错误课件

英语写作常见语法错误-1常见语法错误举例：NowisgoldentimeforustoattainafaircommandofEnglish. (词性使用不当。now是副词，不能作主语。可改为：Nowitisthegoldentimeforus…)2. Myroommateissotroublesome,Icanhardlyputwithhimanymore.11/25/20221英语写作常见语法错误英语写作常见语法错误-1常见语法错误举例：11/22/20英语写作常见语法错误-2(标点符号错误。两个句子之间缺少连词。可改为：MyroommateissotroublesomethatIcanhardly…)Atypicalfamilynowadaysisconsistedofthreetofourmembers. (语态错误。consistof一定要使用主动语态。可改为：Atypicalfamilynowadaysconsistsofthreetofourmembers.)11/25/20222英语写作常见语法错误英语写作常见语法错误-2(标点符号错误。两个句子之间缺少连词英语写作常见语法错误-34. Theabove-mentioneddisadvantageswhicharebroughtaboutbyenvironmentalpollutionisverydetrimentalbutoftenmisspeople’sattention. (句子的主语是advantages，要用复数动词。可改为：Theabove-mentionedadvantageswhichare…pollutionareverydetrimental…)11/25/20223英语写作常见语法错误英语写作常见语法错误-34. Theabove-ment英语写作常见语法错误-4Ifyoutryyourbesttogetmoreaerobicexerciseandpracticeitwheneverandwhereverpossible,wecanmaintaingoodphysicalcondition. (指代不清。you与we指代不一致。可改为：Ifyoutry…whereverpossible,youcanmaintain…)11/25/20224英语写作常见语法错误英语写作常见语法错误-4Ifyoutryyourbe英语写作常见语法错误-56. Inmyopinion,Ithinktheownerisjustifiedtodoso. (inmyopinion与Ithink重复累赘。可改为：Ithinktheowneris…或：Inmyopinion,theowneris…)Ifadopted,wehopethelawwillresolvetheproblem.

11/25/20225英语写作常见语法错误英语写作常见语法错误-56. Inmyopinion,英语写作常见语法错误-6(ifadopted的逻辑主语是thelaw，与句子的主语we不一致，为悬垂分词。可改为：Ifthelawisadopted,wehope…或：Ifadopted,thelawwillresolvetheproblem.)以上错误如果稍加小心，尚可避免。但下文中的错误则需要考生格外注意。11/25/20226英语写作常见语法错误英语写作常见语法错误-6(ifadopted的逻辑主语英语写作常见语法错误-7

Inmodernsociety,computersarebecomingmoreandmorepopular.Theyarewidelyusedfordifferentuses.Manypeopleusethemtotypeletters,somepeoplestillwriteletterswithapen.Iprefertotypeletteronthecomputer.Becauseitisfast,correct,andclean.11/25/20227英语写作常见语法错误英语写作常见语法错误-7 Inmodernsociet英语写作常见语法错误-8

First,fast.Youcantype90to100wordsinoneminute.Thepersonwhoisgoodatitcanevenmore.Andnowadays,alotofpeopleareworkinghardtoobtainthecertificateofcomputertyping.Manyofthemgetcertificates,however,somedonot.11/25/20228英语写作常见语法错误英语写作常见语法错误-8First,fast.Yo英语写作常见语法错误-9

Inmodernsociety,computersarebecomingmoreandmorepopular.Theyarewidelyusedfordifferentuses.(1)Manypeopleusethemtotypeletters,somepeoplestillwriteletterswithapen.Iprefertotypeletteronthecomputer.(2)Becauseitisfast,correct,andclean. 在上一段落中，划线部分属于句子结构方面的错误。（1）两句话之间不能用逗号隔开，应加上并列连词and。（2）sentencefragment。这种断句只能使用在英语口语、某些文学作品或非正式的写作中。11/25/20229英语写作常见语法错误英语写作常见语法错误-9 Inmodernsociet英语写作常见语法错误-10(3)First,fast.Youcantype90to100wordsinoneminute.(4)Thepersonwhoisgoodatitcanevenmore.Andnowadays,alotofpeopleareworkinghardtoobtainthecertificateofcomputertyping.(5)Manyofthemgetcertificates,however,somedonot.（3）这根本不是一句话，至少应改为：Firstly,itisfast.（4）can是情态动词，后面缺少实义动词，因此意思表达不清。可改为：Thepersonwhoisgoodatitcantypeevenmorewords.（5）however是副词，不能连接两个句子。可改为：Manyofthemgetcertificates.However,somedonot.或：Manyofthemgetcertificates;however,somedonot.11/25/202210英语写作常见语法错误英语写作常见语法错误-10(3)First,fast.句子改错（1）

Educationisnolongerfreeasitusetobe. Educationisnolongerfreeasitusedtobe.Forexample,thecomputerthatisusedeverywheretodaytoincreaseefficiencyandsavethecostoflabor. Forexample,thecomputerthatisusedeverywheretodayincreasesefficiencyandsavesthecostoflabor.Inourcountrywevoteforourgovernment,(?)thenextfederalelectioniscomingagain. Inourcountrywevoteforourgovernmentwhenthenextfederalelectioniscomingagain.11/25/202211英语写作常见语法错误句子改错（1）Educationisnolonger句子改错（2）Aftertheyexpressthereopinion,hedicidedtoreducestheoperationalexpenses. Aftertheyexpressedtheiropinion,hedecidedtoreducetheoperationalexpenses.Manypeoplearedishonestwithgovernment.Althoughtheyaremarried,buttheydon’twanttodeclaretheyaremarried. Manypeoplearedishonestwithgovernment.Althoughtheyaremarried,theydon’twanttodeclaretheyaremarried.11/25/202212英语写作常见语法错误句子改错（2）Aftertheyexpressther句子改错（3）TheclosingdownofhospitalscausesinconvenienceforthegrowingnumberofpatientsinOntario. TheclosingdownofhospitalscausesinconveniencefortheincreasingpatientsinOntario.“Howdoyouthinkofmyboyfriend,Dad?”thegirlask. “Howdoyouthinkofmyboyfriend,Dad?”thegirlasked.Winterstormsthatbringice,sleet,andsnow

theycancausetrafficproblem. 11/25/202213英语写作常见语法错误句子改错（3）Theclosingdownofhos句子改错（4）Winterstormsthatbringice,sleet,andsnowcancausetrafficproblem.（or:Winterstormsbringice,sleet,andsnowwhichcancausetrafficproblem.)Thecakewassupposetobetasty. Thecakewassupposedtobetasty.Theriverwillfloodagainnextyearunlesswewillbuildabetterdam. Theriverwillfloodagainnextyearunlesswebuildabetterdam.11/25/202214英语写作常见语法错误句子改错（4）Winterstormsthat句子改错（5）Therunnerlookerasifhewaswinded. Therunnerlookedasifhewaswinded.IfIwouldhavetrainedfortherace,Imighthavewon. IfIhadbeentrainedfortherace,Iwouldhavewon.TheinstructordividedtheworkbetweenSamandI. TheinstructordividedtheworkbetweenSamandme.11/25/202215英语写作常见语法错误句子改错（5）Therunnerlookerasif句子改错（6）Hermothertoldher

shewasgoingtovisitBeijing.

Hermothertoldher,“IamgoingtovisitBeijing.”Becauseourcarwasoverheating,itcameasnosurprisethatitbrokedownjustasitbegantorain. Becauseourcarwasoverheating,itcamewithnosurprisethatitbrokedownjustasitbegantorun.11/25/202216英语写作常见语法错误句子改错（6）Hermothertoldhershe句子改错（7）Themoon,alongwithVenus,arevisibleinthenightsky.

Themoon,alongwithVenus,isvisibleinthenightsky.Threehundreddollarsarewhatwemustpay. Threehundreddollarsiswhatwemustpay.Thecandidatefeltunusualenergetic. Thecandidatefeltunusuallyenergetic.11/25/202217英语写作常见语法错误句子改错（7）Themoon,alongwithVe句子改错（8）ThephysicistMarieCuriediscoveredradium,(?)shewontwoNobelPrizes. ThephysicistMarieCuriediscoveredradium,soshewontwoNobelPrizes.Peoplefearedthattheywouldnolongerbeabletohappilyliveinpeace. Peoplefearedthattheywouldnolongerbeabletoliveinpeacehappily.11/25/202218英语写作常见语法错误句子改错（8）ThephysicistMarieCur英语写作常见语法错误-1常见语法错误举例：NowisgoldentimeforustoattainafaircommandofEnglish. (词性使用不当。now是副词，不能作主语。可改为：Nowitisthegoldentimeforus…)2. Myroommateissotroublesome,Icanhardlyputwithhimanymore.11/25/202219英语写作常见语法错误英语写作常见语法错误-1常见语法错误举例：11/22/20英语写作常见语法错误-2(标点符号错误。两个句子之间缺少连词。可改为：MyroommateissotroublesomethatIcanhardly…)Atypicalfamilynowadaysisconsistedofthreetofourmembers. (语态错误。consistof一定要使用主动语态。可改为：Atypicalfamilynowadaysconsistsofthreetofourmembers.)11/25/202220英语写作常见语法错误英语写作常见语法错误-2(标点符号错误。两个句子之间缺少连词英语写作常见语法错误-34. Theabove-mentioneddisadvantageswhicharebroughtaboutbyenvironmentalpollutionisverydetrimentalbutoftenmisspeople’sattention. (句子的主语是advantages，要用复数动词。可改为：Theabove-mentionedadvantageswhichare…pollutionareverydetrimental…)11/25/202221英语写作常见语法错误英语写作常见语法错误-34. Theabove-ment英语写作常见语法错误-4Ifyoutryyourbesttogetmoreaerobicexerciseandpracticeitwheneverandwhereverpossible,wecanmaintaingoodphysicalcondition. (指代不清。you与we指代不一致。可改为：Ifyoutry…whereverpossible,youcanmaintain…)11/25/202222英语写作常见语法错误英语写作常见语法错误-4Ifyoutryyourbe英语写作常见语法错误-56. Inmyopinion,Ithinktheownerisjustifiedtodoso. (inmyopinion与Ithink重复累赘。可改为：Ithinktheowneris…或：Inmyopinion,theowneris…)Ifadopted,wehopethelawwillresolvetheproblem.

11/25/202223英语写作常见语法错误英语写作常见语法错误-56. Inmyopinion,英语写作常见语法错误-6(ifadopted的逻辑主语是thelaw，与句子的主语we不一致，为悬垂分词。可改为：Ifthelawisadopted,wehope…或：Ifadopted,thelawwillresolvetheproblem.)以上错误如果稍加小心，尚可避免。但下文中的错误则需要考生格外注意。11/25/202224英语写作常见语法错误英语写作常见语法错误-6(ifadopted的逻辑主语英语写作常见语法错误-7

Inmodernsociety,computersarebecomingmoreandmorepopular.Theyarewidelyusedfordifferentuses.Manypeopleusethemtotypeletters,somepeoplestillwriteletterswithapen.Iprefertotypeletteronthecomputer.Becauseitisfast,correct,andclean.11/25/202225英语写作常见语法错误英语写作常见语法错误-7 Inmodernsociet英语写作常见语法错误-8

First,fast.Youcantype90to100wordsinoneminute.Thepersonwhoisgoodatitcanevenmore.Andnowadays,alotofpeopleareworkinghardtoobtainthecertificateofcomputertyping.Manyofthemgetcertificates,however,somedonot.11/25/202226英语写作常见语法错误英语写作常见语法错误-8First,fast.Yo英语写作常见语法错误-9

Inmodernsociety,computersarebecomingmoreandmorepopular.Theyarewidelyusedfordifferentuses.(1)Manypeopleusethemtotypeletters,somepeoplestillwriteletterswithapen.Iprefertotypeletteronthecomputer.(2)Becauseitisfast,correct,andclean. 在上一段落中，划线部分属于句子结构方面的错误。（1）两句话之间不能用逗号隔开，应加上并列连词and。（2）sentencefragment。这种断句只能使用在英语口语、某些文学作品或非正式的写作中。11/25/202227英语写作常见语法错误英语写作常见语法错误-9 Inmodernsociet英语写作常见语法错误-10(3)First,fast.Youcantype90to100wordsinoneminute.(4)Thepersonwhoisgoodatitcanevenmore.Andnowadays,alotofpeopleareworkinghardtoobtainthecertificateofcomputertyping.(5)Manyofthemgetcertificates,however,somedonot.（3）这根本不是一句话，至少应改为：Firstly,itisfast.（4）can是情态动词，后面缺少实义动词，因此意思表达不清。可改为：Thepersonwhoisgoodatitcantypeevenmorewords.（5）however是副词，不能连接两个句子。可改为：Manyofthemgetcertificates.However,somedonot.或：Manyofthemgetcertificates;however,somedonot.11/25/202228英语写作常见语法错误英语写作常见语法错误-10(3)First,fast.句子改错（1）

Educationisnolongerfreeasitusetobe. Educationisnolongerfreeasitusedtobe.Forexample,thecomputerthatisusedeverywheretodaytoincreaseefficiencyandsavethecostoflabor. Forexample,thecomputerthatisusedeverywheretodayincreasesefficiencyandsavesthecostoflabor.Inourcountrywevoteforourgovernment,(?)thenextfederalelectioniscomingagain. Inourcountrywevoteforourgovernmentwhenthenextfederalelectioniscomingagain.11/25/202229英语写作常见语法错误句子改错（1）Educationisnolonger句子改错（2）Aftertheyexpressthereopinion,hedicidedtoreducestheoperationalexpenses. Aftertheyexpressedtheiropinion,hedecidedtoreducetheoperationalexpenses.Manypeoplearedishonestwithgovernment.Althoughtheyaremarried,buttheydon’twanttodeclaretheyaremarried. Manypeoplearedishonestwithgovernment.Althoughtheyaremarried,theydon’twanttodeclaretheyaremarried.11/25/202230英语写作常见语法错误句子改错（2）Aftertheyexpressther句子改错（3）TheclosingdownofhospitalscausesinconvenienceforthegrowingnumberofpatientsinOntario. TheclosingdownofhospitalscausesinconveniencefortheincreasingpatientsinOntario.“Howdoyouthinkofmyboyfriend,Dad?”thegirlask. “Howdoyouthinkofmyboyfriend,Dad?”thegirlasked.Winterstormsthatbringice,sleet,andsnow

theycancausetrafficproblem. 11/25/202231英语写作常见语法错误句子改错（3）Theclosingdownofhos句子改错（4）Winterstormsthatbringice,sleet,andsnowcancausetrafficproblem.（or:Winterstormsbringice,sleet,andsnowwhichcancausetrafficproblem.)Thecakewassupposetobetasty. Thecakewassupposedtobetasty.Theriverwillfloodagainnextyearunlesswewillbuildabetterdam. Theriverwillfloodagainnextyearunlesswebuildabetterdam.11/25/202232英语写作常见语法错误句子改错（4）Winterstormsthat句子改错（5）Therunnerlookerasifhewaswinded. Therunnerlookedasifhewaswinded.IfIwouldh