八年级上册Unit-8写作课件

Unit8Howdoyoumakeabananamilkshake?(writing)112021Unit8HowdoyoumakeabananaDeliciousfood(美食)22021Deliciousfood(美食FirstpeelSecond,cutupNext,put…inThen,pour…intoAfterthat,turnonFinally,drinkHowcanwemakeabananamilkshake?abananamilkshake32021FirstpeelHowcanwemaYunnanricenoodles42021Yunnanricenoodles42021HowcanwemakeYunnanricenoodles?

（怎样制作云南米线？从文中找出原材料吧）chickenLettucechickensoupricenoodleseggrelish（佐料）Ingredients(原料):52021HowcanwemakeYunnanricenSteps(阅读短文找出米线制作过程）

Putthericenoodlesintothesoup.Cooktheeggs,meatandlettuceinthepotofhotsoup,onebyone.

Washthelettuceandcutitup.Cutthechickenintopieces.Makethechickensoupveryhot,over100℃.FirstNextThenThenFinally62021Steps(阅读短文找出米线制作过程）PuttheriYunnanRiceNoodlesInYunnan,manypeopleeatricenoodlesforbreakfast,andevenforlunchanddinner.Tomakethisspecialfood,youneedtohavericenoodles,chickensoup,chicken,lettuceandeggs.(Ofcourse,youcanalsohaveotherthingslikefishanddifferentvegetables.)First,washthelettuceandcutitup.Next,cutthechickenintopieces.Then,makethechickensoupveryhot,over100℃.Then,cooktheeggs,meatandlettuceinthepotofhotsoup,onebyone.Finally,putthericenoodlesintothesoup.Now,it’stimetoenjoythericenoodles!Beginning开头Ending结尾3a72021YunnanRiceNoodlesBeginningOutline提纲Steps步骤Topic话题YunnanRiceNoodlesMainpart正文InYunnan,manypeopleeat…Now,it’stimetoenjoy…Ingredients原料First,wash…cut…upNext,cut…into…Then,make…Then,cook…Finally,put…into…

ricenoodles,chickensoup,chicken,lettuce…Beginning开头

Ending结尾82021OutlineSteps步骤Topic话题MainparH owtomake…目标：根据写作技巧完成写作任务。Doyouknowhowtomakeotherfood?Canyouwritetherecipe(食谱）92021H owtomake…目标：Doyouknowho写作第一步Howcanwemakeourwritingperfect?(怎样才能使我们的写作更完美?）？102021写作第一步Howcanwemakeourwriti第一步列列举出文中涉及的具体信息1Whatfooddoyouwanttomake?Iwanttomake______.2Whydoyoulikethefood?Because__________3Whatingredientsdoyouneed?Ineed_______.4Howcanyoumakeit?First,___.Next,____.Then,____Afterthat,____.Finally,____List

112021第一步列1Whatfooddoyouwantt第二步变变换句式Now,it’stimetoenjoythericenoodles!It’stimetoenjoy…Let’senjoy…/Wecanenjoy…change122021第二步变Now,it’stimetoenjoy

1添首尾句/段首句In…,weusuallyhave…尾句It’stimetoenjoy…/Let’senjoy第三步添add132021第三步添add132021

添过渡句Tomakethisspecialdeliciousfood,weneedto…添过渡词First，next,then,afterthat,finally142021142021YunnanRiceNoodlesInYunnan,manypeopleeatricenoodlesforbreakfast,andevenforlunchanddinner.Tomakethisspecialfood,youneedtohavericenoodles,chickensoup,chicken,lettuceandeggs.(Ofcourse,youcanalsohaveotherthingslikefishanddifferentvegetables.)First,washthelettuceandcutitup.Next,cutthechickenintopieces.Then,makethechickensoupveryhot,over100℃.Then,cooktheeggs,meatandlettuceinthepotofhotsoup,onebyone.Finally,putthericenoodlesintothesoup.Now,it’stimetoenjoythericenoodles!Topic话题过渡句过渡词152021YunnanRiceNoodlesTopic话题过渡句过检查人称

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第四步查自查和互查check162021第四步查check162021列1变2添3查4书面表达写作技巧同义句式亮点句式添过渡词添首尾句/段查人称查时态查句法查词数What…How…Why…172021列1变2添3查4书面表达写作技巧同义句式添过渡词查人称WhaWriting(话题作文）我们常吃面条作为早餐，营养又健康。结合云南米线的制作过程，写一篇西红柿鸡蛋面制作过程的文章。要求书写工整，内容全面，80词左右。小提示（列出提纲）Yourwritingwillbeeasierifyouwriteanoutline（提纲）

first.先列出提纲会让你的写作更容易。182021Writing(话题作文）小提示（列出提纲）182021Beginning开头Mainpart正文Ending:结尾Ingredients原料Steps步骤First…Next…Then…Afterthat…Finally…

Forbreakfast,weusuallyeat....Onetomato,twoeggs,somenoodles,salt,waterandcoriander(香菜）Now,it’stimetotaste…/Let’senjoy….Keywords(关键词):wash,cutup,put...in,addcook,Topic:TomatoandEggNoodlesOutline提纲192021Beginning开头Mainpart正文Ending:TomatoandEggNoodles__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________小提示：（查）完成写作后要记得检查哟！检查人称、时态、内容、句法结构202021TomatoandEggNoodles___作文评分标准一档12---15分书写工整，要点齐全，语篇结构完整，语言基本无误，词数符合要求二档9---11分书写较工整，要点基本齐全，语篇结构较完整，语言错误不影响意义表达，词数基本符合要求三档5---8分书写不够工整，要点不齐全，语篇结构不完整，语言结构单一，错误较多，词数不足50四档0-4分只能写出与所要求内容有关的一些词汇，词数不足20212021作文评分标准Goodmethodwillletusstudybetter.（好方法会让我们学习事半功倍）Yourwritingwillbebetterandbetter.Comeon!222021GoodmethodwillletusstudySummary(总结)Four-stepWritingStrategyishelpful.StepsTopicBeginningMainpartEndingIngredientsFirst,…Next,…Then,…Finally,……232021Summary(总结)Four-stepWritingS1perfect(完善)yourwritingafterclass.2Makesomefoodforyourfamilyandwritedowntherecipe2420211perfect(完善)yourwritingaft252021252021Unit8Howdoyoumakeabananamilkshake?(writing)1262021Unit8HowdoyoumakeabananaDeliciousfood(美食)272021Deliciousfood(美食FirstpeelSecond,cutupNext,put…inThen,pour…intoAfterthat,turnonFinally,drinkHowcanwemakeabananamilkshake?abananamilkshake282021FirstpeelHowcanwemaYunnanricenoodles292021Yunnanricenoodles42021HowcanwemakeYunnanricenoodles?

（怎样制作云南米线？从文中找出原材料吧）chickenLettucechickensoupricenoodleseggrelish（佐料）Ingredients(原料):302021HowcanwemakeYunnanricenSteps(阅读短文找出米线制作过程）

Putthericenoodlesintothesoup.Cooktheeggs,meatandlettuceinthepotofhotsoup,onebyone.

Washthelettuceandcutitup.Cutthechickenintopieces.Makethechickensoupveryhot,over100℃.FirstNextThenThenFinally312021Steps(阅读短文找出米线制作过程）PuttheriYunnanRiceNoodlesInYunnan,manypeopleeatricenoodlesforbreakfast,andevenforlunchanddinner.Tomakethisspecialfood,youneedtohavericenoodles,chickensoup,chicken,lettuceandeggs.(Ofcourse,youcanalsohaveotherthingslikefishanddifferentvegetables.)First,washthelettuceandcutitup.Next,cutthechickenintopieces.Then,makethechickensoupveryhot,over100℃.Then,cooktheeggs,meatandlettuceinthepotofhotsoup,onebyone.Finally,putthericenoodlesintothesoup.Now,it’stimetoenjoythericenoodles!Beginning开头Ending结尾3a322021YunnanRiceNoodlesBeginningOutline提纲Steps步骤Topic话题YunnanRiceNoodlesMainpart正文InYunnan,manypeopleeat…Now,it’stimetoenjoy…Ingredients原料First,wash…cut…upNext,cut…into…Then,make…Then,cook…Finally,put…into…

ricenoodles,chickensoup,chicken,lettuce…Beginning开头

Ending结尾332021OutlineSteps步骤Topic话题MainparH owtomake…目标：根据写作技巧完成写作任务。Doyouknowhowtomakeotherfood?Canyouwritetherecipe(食谱）342021H owtomake…目标：Doyouknowho写作第一步Howcanwemakeourwritingperfect?(怎样才能使我们的写作更完美?）？352021写作第一步Howcanwemakeourwriti第一步列列举出文中涉及的具体信息1Whatfooddoyouwanttomake?Iwanttomake______.2Whydoyoulikethefood?Because__________3Whatingredientsdoyouneed?Ineed_______.4Howcanyoumakeit?First,___.Next,____.Then,____Afterthat,____.Finally,____List

362021第一步列1Whatfooddoyouwantt第二步变变换句式Now,it’stimetoenjoythericenoodles!It’stimetoenjoy…Let’senjoy…/Wecanenjoy…change372021第二步变Now,it’stimetoenjoy

1添首尾句/段首句In…,weusuallyhave…尾句It’stimetoenjoy…/Let’senjoy第三步添add382021第三步添add132021

添过渡句Tomakethisspecialdeliciousfood,weneedto…添过渡词First，next,then,afterthat,finally392021142021YunnanRiceNoodlesInYunnan,manypeopleeatricenoodlesforbreakfast,andevenforlunchanddinner.Tomakethisspecialfood,youneedtohavericenoodles,chickensoup,chicken,lettuceandeggs.(Ofcourse,youcanalsohaveotherthingslikefishanddifferentvegetables.)First,washthelettuceandcutitup.Next,cutthechickenintopieces.Then,makethechickensoupveryhot,over100℃.Then,cooktheeggs,meatandlettuceinthepotofhotsoup,onebyone.Finally,putthericenoodlesintothesoup.Now,it’stimetoenjoythericenoodles!Topic话题过渡句过渡词402021YunnanRiceNoodlesTopic话题过渡句过检查人称

检查时态

检查内容

检查句法

第四步查自查和互查check412021第四步查check162021列1变2添3查4书面表达写作技巧同义句式亮点句式添过渡词添首尾句/段查人称查时态查句法查词数What…How…Why…422021列1变2添3查4书面表达写作技巧同义句式添过渡词查人称WhaWriting(话题作文）我们常吃面条作为早餐，营养又健康。结合云南米线的制作过程，写一篇西红柿鸡蛋面制作过程的文章。要求书写工整，内容全面，80词左右。小提示（列出提纲）Yourwritingwillbeeasierifyouwriteanoutline（提纲）

first.先列出提纲会让你的写作更容易。432021Writing(话题作文）小提示（列出提纲）182021Beginning开头Mainpart正文Ending:结尾Ingredients原料Steps步骤First…Next…Then…Afterthat…Finally…

Forbreakfast,weusuallyeat....Onetomato,twoeggs,somenoodles,salt,waterandcoriander(香菜）Now,it’stimetotaste…/Let’senjoy….Keywords(关键词):wash,cutup,put...in,addcook,Topic:TomatoandEggNoodlesOutline提纲442021Beginning开头Mainpart正文Ending:TomatoandEggNoodles_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________