写作高分-课件lesson2-discuss类型议笔记版

议题型分类大搞定这一步，稳稳上6.5分第一种议题Discussbothviewsandgiveyour讨论双方观点，并且给出你的个人意见第一种议题Discussbothviewsandgiveyour 段各自分析A和B两个观点的合理性，然后在结尾段给出自己的个人观点。我认为给出清晰的个人观点比中间段的各自拓展有难度。观点A和B之间可能的两一方弱一方强(一般用“虽然…但是…”的逻辑来思考这个题目里的两个观点让你感觉一瞬间就找到了弱强的区别，所以你打算按照“虽然…..但是….”的逻辑来展开讨论。比较常见 “虽然…..但是….”逻辑如下从短期来看早点工作能让年轻人早点经济独立，但是从长远来看拥有高学历对事业发展更有帮助。一些人可能因为运动场所增加而变得健康，但是大部分人需要别的措施来改善健康有的时候人们不可避免要发出噪音，但是大部分情况下噪音应该被严格控制第一种情况的结构安(although)……….(but(预告个人观点，轻松结束介绍段Ontheone 段—顺着题目展开弱的观点(TS是现成的Ontheother 段—顺着题目展开强的观点(TS是现成的一般两句话。先重复自己偏向的观点。然后再提出建 /反驳你不赞同方Somepeoplethnkthatweshouldsendmessagestocontacelligentlivesonotherplanets,whileotherssaythatitisdangeroustodoso.Discussbothvewsandgiveyouropinion.Peoplehave ingviewsastowhetherweshouldsendsignalstocontactaliensfarawayfromtheEarth.Inmyopinionalthoughtheattempttosearchandcontactinligentaliensmaybringussomepositivechangeswearefarfrombeingpreparedtodoso.Ontheonehand,fromtheofsomeoptimists,theremaybegreatbenefitstoconnectingalienlifeforms.ItislikelythatourneighboursinspacewouldlendustheirfarmoreadvancedtechnologiestosolveaseriesofproblemsontheEarth.Forexample,environmentalpollutioncouldbeeradicatedandlife-threateningdiseasescouldbecuredifwearetechnologicallyimprovedbyouralienfriends.Whatismore,withtheirhelpandassistance,humanbeingsmaybeabletomakeasignificantstepforwardtolivetheEarth.ThismeansthatwewouldnolongerbeafraidoffacinganycatastrophesthatmightdestroyourhomeOntheotherhand,advocatesofcontactingextraterrestriallifemaybeoverlyoptimisticandmanypeoplebelievethatngsoleadstoahigherpossibilityofendangeringhumanbeings.ThefirstreasonisthattheEarthmaybeattackedbyinligentlivesfromtheouterspace.Thisisbecausetheymaynotbeasfriendlyasweexpect.Inpossessionoffarmorepowerfultechnology,aliensthatwehavemanagedtocontactwouldrobusof andevenenslaveus.Inaddition,evenifthesealienvisitorswerefriendly,theirvisittouswouldstillleadtodisasters,astheymaycomealongwithesandgermsnotexistingontheEarth.ally,(AlthoughIadmitthatourcuriosityfortheexistenceofotherinligentlivesbeenexistingforcenturies,)IdonotagreethatweshouldletthemknowwheretheEarthisuntilwearetechnologicallypreparedtofaceallThedeclininglevelofhealthinthegeneralpopulationisaproblemfacedbymanycountries.Inmyopinion,althoughincreasingthenumberofsportsfacilitiesmayencouragesomepeopletobephysicallyAdvocatesoftheincreaseinthenumberofsportsfacilitiesbelievethatithelpspeopletostayhealthy.1).Ifthereweremoreeasy-to-reachlocalsportscentres,peoplewouldbemorelikelytomakeexercisearegularpartoftheirlives.Ratherthanjustcollapseinfrontofthescreeneveryevening,theywouldspendsomequalitytimeswimmingorjogging,whichcontributespositivelytogoodhealthandfitness.2).Inaddition,thevarietyofsportsthatcouldbeofferedwouldcaterforallages,levelsoffitnessandOntheotherhand,Iagreewiththosepeoplewhodenythatincreasingthenumberoffacilitiesforphysicalactivitiesisthebestsolutiontohealth-relatedproblems.1).Thefirstreasonisthatinterestinsportisnotuniversal,soadditionalfacilitiesmightsimplyattractthealreadyfit,notthosewhomostneedthem.2).Inaddition,aswellasphysicalactivity,thereareseveralmeasuresthatcanbeusedtoraisethelevelof(重复观点)Myviewisthatfocusingonsportsfacilitiesistoonarrowanapproachandwouldnothavethedesiredresults提出建议)Peopleshouldbeencouragednotonlytobemorephysicallyactivebutalsotoadaptahealthierlifestyleingeneral.必须注意第二种情A/B观点的内容让你觉得他们在解决一个问题上是的，所以你会选择一个共存的观点逻辑来写这篇文章。,Ontheonehand,段—展开A观点(现成的Ontheotherhand,段—展开B观点(现成的(仍然两句话)ally,先重复个人观点，然后强调两者各自的重要性Ibelievethatrulesandfreedomplayequallyimportantrolesinthedevelopmentofyoungchildren,sotheyshouldco-existinthegrowthofeverychild.Ibelievethatthejointeffortoftheernmentandindividualsisthekeytoeradicatingenvironmentalproblems.IbelievethombinationofskyscrapersandhousesisanidealstrategyofcityIbelievethatbothpunishmentsandothermeasuresshouldbeusedtogethertomakeroadssafer.Somebelievethepurposeofeducationistoprepareindividualstobeusefultothe society,whileotherssaythepurposeistohelpindividualstoachieve alambitionsDiscussbothviewsandgiveyour ernmentallotsaconsiderableproportionofitsbudgettowardsmakingasmanycitizensaspossiblehavetheaccesstoeducationHowever,debateaboutthepurposesofeducationneverseemstoendFrommypointofview,suchaninvestmentisaimedatpreparingyoungpeoplefornotonlylifeandworkbutalsocitizenshipFromanindividual,theprimarygoalofeducationhasbeenhelyoungpeoplefindasatisfyingjoband eindependentthinkersWithregardtotheformer,educationcanmakeasignificantcontributiontocareerachievementsbyequipyoungpeoplewiththeknowledgeandskillstheyneedtosecureaplaceatagooduniversity,startaninternship,andeventuallylandadecentjobAsforthelatter,schoolscanpositivelycontributetotrainingstudents’objectiveandunbiasedwayoflookingatvariousissuesbyexposingthemtoawiderangeofsubjects,suchasliterature,philosophyandhistoryOntheotherhand,asfarasthe ernmentisconcerned,thepurposeofprioritizing investmentineducationistomakeyoungchildrenableandresponsiblecitizensinthefutureHavinganuneducatedpopulationmeansthountryisboundtobe economicallyandtechnologicallyunderdevelopedbecausewearelivinginaknowledge-basedworldTherefore,priorityofmany ernmentsistoensurea productiveandcreativeworkforcethrougheducationInaddition,itistruethatreceivingeducationallowspeopletobehavemorerationallysothatasocietywithlower crimerateandlesscanbeanticipatedallyIthinkthateducationisundoubtedlyamultipurposetoolwhichnotonlyempowersindividualstopursueambitiousgoalsinbothlifeandworkbutalsofacilitatesmajorimprovementsofsocietywhich合并到SomepeoplethinkthatstrictpunishmentsfordrivingoffencesarethekeytoreducingtrafficaccidentsOthers,however,believethatothermeasureswouldbemoreeffectiveinimprovingroadsafetyDiscussboththeseviewsandgiveyourownPeoplehavedifferingviewswithregardtothequestionofhowtomakeourroadssafer.Inmyview,bothpunishmentsandarangeofothermeasurescanbeusedtogethertopromotebetterdrivinghabits.Ontheonehand,strictpunishmentscancertainlyhelptoencouragepeopletodrivemoresafely.Penaltiesfordangerousdriverscana adeterrent,meaningthatpeopleavoidrepeatingthesameoffence.Therearevarioustypesofdrivingpenalty,suchassmallfines,licencesuspension,driverawarenesscourses,andevenprisonsentences.Theaimofthesepunishmentsistoshowdangerousdriversthattheiractionshavenegativeconsequences.Asaresult,wewouldhopethat emoredisciplinedandalert,andthattheyfollowtherulesmorecarefully.Ontheotherhand,(manypeoplebelievethat)safedrivingcanbepromotedinseveraldifferentwaysthatdonotpunishdrivers.Firstly,itisvitallyimportanttoeducatepeopleproperlybeforetheystarttodrive,andthiscouldbedoneinschoolsorevenaspartofanextendedormoredifficurivingtest.Secondly,moreattentioncouldbepaidtosaferoaddesign.Forexample,signscanbeusedtowarnpeople,speedbumpsandroadbendscanbeaddedtocalmtraffic,andspeedcamerascanhelptodeterpeoplefromdrivingtooquickly.Finally,ernmentsorlocalcouncilscouldreduceroadaccidentsbyinvestinginbetterpublictransport,whichwouldmeanthatfewerpeoplewouldneedtotravelbycar.大家试着自己写一下这个结尾段discuss总结A/B的共同讨论点(模板句回答个人观题目：有人认为玩电脑游戏对孩子在方方面面都有坏处，而有的人认为这些游戏对孩子的发展Peoplehavedifferentviewsaboutwhetherchildrenshouldbeallowedtoplaycomputergames.Inmynotabsoluynegative.discuss写出事实版—观点A和B之间共通的事Somepeopleregardgamesasharmlessfun,orevenasauseful