六级写作课件

写作资源库一、写作技能二、常见错误分析三、标点符号的使用四、提纲式作文五、段首句作文六、图表作文七、应用文八、校园生活九、交通旅游十、环境气候十一、体育影视十二、人物描写十三、文化风俗十四、日常生活十五、职业工作十六、社会生活十七、情感话题十八、节日祝福十九、励志格言二十、写作常用句型二十一、衔接词写作资源库、写作技能W1.SentenceWriting句子写作Producingacompletethoughtbyasimplesentenceacomplicatedsentence1.2Ebinationb.contractionexpansiontransitionW2.ParagraphWriting段落写作WritingatopicsentenceDevelopingthetopicsentencethroughexamplescauseandeffectcomparisonandcontrastprocessdefinitionanalogyclassificationcombinedmethodParagraphunityParagraphcoherenceW3.PassageWriting成段文章的写作GuidedwritingParaphrasingOutliningSummarizingInformationtransferDescriptionNarrationExpositionArgumentationW4.LetterWriting写信Writingpersonalletters4.2WritingbusinesslettersW5.AbstractWriting写摘要W6.Note-taking记笔记W7.FreeComposition无提示写作二、常见错误分析.不一致(Disagreements)所谓不一致不光指主谓不一致，它还包括了数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致等。［例］Whenonehavemoney,hecandowhathewantto.［剖析］one是第三人称单数，因而本句的have应改为has;同理，want应改为wants.本句是典型的主谓不一致。［改为］Onceonehasmoney,hecandowhathewants(todo)..修饰语错位(MisplacedModifiers)英语与汉语不同，同一个修饰语置于句子不同的位置，句子的含义可能引起变化。对于这一点，中国考生往往没有引起足够的重视，因而造成了不必要的误解。［例］Heisahandsomeman;hehasawideforehead,astraightnose,andlongbrownhairwithglasses.［剖析］withglasses位置不当，容易引起误解。从修饰关系上来看，它应该修饰longbrownhair,这样的话，意思就成了“戴眼镜的褐色长发”，显然不恰当。［改为］Heisahandsomemanwithglasses;hehasawideforehead,astraightnose,andlongbrownhair..句子不完整(SentenceFragments)在口语中，交际双方可借助手势、语气、上下文等，不完整的句子完全可以被理解.可是书面语就不同了，句子结构不完整会令意思表达不清，这种情况常常发生在主句写完以后，作者又想加些补充说明时发生。［例］Therearemanywaystoknowthesociety.ForexamplebyTV,radio,newspaperandsoon.［剖析］本句后半部分“forexamplebyTV,radio,newsp叩erandsoon.”不是一个完整的句子，仅为一些不连贯的词语，不能独立成句。［改为］Therearemanywaystoknowthesociety,forexample,byTV,radio,andnewspaper..悬垂修饰语(DanglingModifiers)所谓悬垂修饰语是指句首的短语与后面句子的逻辑关系混乱不清。［例1］Attheageoften,mygrandfatherdied.［剖析］这句中attheageoften只点出10岁时，但没有说明“谁”10岁时.按一般推理不可能是mygrandfather,如果把这个悬垂修饰语修改得更明确•点，全句就不那么费解了。［改为］WhenIwasten,mygrandfatherdied.［例2］Todowellincollege,goodgradesareessential.［剖析］句中不定式短语“todowellincollege”的逻辑主语不清楚。［改为］Todowellincollege,astudentneedsgoodgrades..词性误用(MisuseofPartofSpeech)“词性误用”常表现为：介词当动词用；形容词当副词用；名词当动词用等。［例］Nonecannegativetheimportanceofmoney.［剖析］negative系形容词，误作动词。［改为］Nonecandenytheimportanceofmoney..指代不清(AmbiguousReferenceofPronouns)指代不清主要讲的是代词与被指代的人或物关系不清，或者前后所用的代词不•致。［＜列1］Marywasfriendlytomysisterbecauseshewantedhertobeherbridesmaid.［剖析］读完上面这一句话，读者无法明确地判断两位姑娘中谁将结婚，谁将当伴娘。如果把易于引起误解的代词的所指对象加以明确，意思就一目了然了。［改为］Marywasfriendlytomysisterbecauseshewantedmysistertobeherbridesmaid.［例2］Andwecanalsoknowthesocietybyservingityourself.［剖析］句中人称代词we和反身代词yourself指代不•致。［改为］Wecanalsoknowthesocietybyservingitourselves..融合句(FusedSentence)融合句指的是两个或两个以上的句子在•起使用，没有标点符号将它们隔开，也没有连词将它们连接起来。纠正这种病句的方法仍然是从逻辑关系上对其进行分析，或者对原句的结构作适当的调整，或者给原句加上适当的标点符号。如：［例1］AtfirstIwonderedifIshouldspeaktohersheseemedsoabsorbedinherthoughts.［剖析］本句中有Ishouldspeaktoher和sheseemedsoabsorbedinherthoughts是两个具有独立主谓结构和完整意思的句子，应该把它们用句号分开或用连词连接起来。［改为］SheseemedsoabsorbedinherthoughtsthatatfirstIwonderedifIshouldspeaktoher.［例2］IenteredthehouseIsmeltsomethingburning.［剖析］同例1-一样，本句中的Ienteredthehouse和Ismeltsomethingburning也是两个具有独立主谓结构和完整意思的句子，应该把它们用句号分开或用连词连接起来。［改为］IsmeltsomethingburningwhenIenteredthehouse..措词毛病(TroublesinDiction)措词是指在特定的句子中如何适当地选用词语的问题。［例］Theincreasinguseofchemicalobstaclesinagriculturealsomakespollution.［剖析1显然,本句把obstacles“障碍”，“障碍物”误作substance“物质”了。另外“theincreasinguse(不断增加的使用)”应改为“abusiveuse(滥用)”。［改为］Theabusiveuseofchemicalsubstancesinagriculturealsocauses/leadstopollution..累赘(Redundancy)言以简洁为贵，写句子没有一个多余的词，写段落没有一个不必要的句子。能用单词的不用词组，能用词组的不用从句或句子。［例1］Inspileofthefactthatheislazy,Ilikehim.［剖析］本句的**thefactthatheislazy"系同谓语从句，用在此处，使句子显得较为复杂。［改为］Inspiteofhislaziness,Ilikehim.［例2］Forthepeoplewhoarediligentandkind,moneyisjustthethingtobeusedtobuythethingtheyneed.［剖析］整个句子可以大大简化。［改为］Diligentandcaringpeopleusemoneyonlytobuywhattheyneed..不连贯(Incoherence)不连贯是指一个句子前言不对后语，或是结构上不畅通。［例］Thefreshwater,itisthemostimportantthingsoftheearth.［剖析］Thefreshwater与逗号后的it不连贯。It与things在数方面不一致。［改为］Freshwateristhemostimportantthingintheworld..综合性语言错误(ComprehensiveMisusage)所谓“综合性语言错误”，是指除了上述10种错误以外，还有诸如时态、语态、标点符号、大小写等方面的错误。［例］Today,Moneytoeverybodyisveryimportance,our'seat,cloth,live,goetc.alldependonmoney,andpeoplejointoworkitforthemoney.［剖析］句中的第•个Money的首字母应小写：our本身为物主代词，'s多余；eat,live和go为动词,不能用物主代词来修饰；work意为“工作”时为不及物动词，后面不能直接跟宾语。［改为］Today,moneyisveryimportanttomanypeople.Wedependonmoneytoprovidethedailynecessitiesoflife,suchasfood,clothing,shelter,andtransportation,andweworkinordertoearnthemoney.三、标点符号的使用句号Period［.］1)用以表示一个句子的结束：HockeyisapopularsportinCanada.ThefederalgovernmentisbasedinOttawa.2)用在缩写中：B.C.(BritishColumbia)isaprovincelocatedontheWestCoast.Dr.BethunewasaCanadianwhoworkedinChina.Thecompanyislocatedat888BaySt.inToronto.Itis4:00p.m.inHalifaxrightnow.问号QuestionMark［?］在句子的结尾使用问号衣示是直接疑问句：HowmanyprovincesarethereinCanada?注意：在间接疑问句结尾不要加问号：Theteacheraskedtheclassaquestion.Donotaskmewhy.叹号ExclamationMark[!]在句子的结尾使用叹号表示惊讶、兴奋等情绪:WewontheStanleyCup!Theforestisonfire!逗号Comma[,]1）句子中的停顿：Therefore,weshouldwritealettertotheprimeminister.2）在疑问句中引出说话人：“Icancometoday,vshesaid,“butnottomorrow.3）排列三个或以上的名词：Onlario,Quebec,andB.C.arethethreebiggestprovinces.4）引出定语从句：EmilyCarr,whowasbornin1871,wasagreatpainter.单引号Apostrophe[']1）表示所有：ThisisDavid'scomputer.Thesearetheplayer'sthings,（thingsthatbelongtotheplayer）注意：对于复数形式的名词，只加Thesearetheplayers'things,（thingsthatbelongtotheplayers）2）缩写：Idon'tknowhowtofixit.引号QuotationMarks直接引出某人说的话：Theprimeministersaid,“Wewillwintheelection.^^“Icancometoday,“shesaid,“butnotlomorrow.”冒号Colon[:]1）弓I出一系列名词：Therearethreepositionsinhockey:goalie,defense,andforward.2）引出一个较长的引语:Theprimeministersaid:uWewillfight.Wewillnotgiveup.Wewillwinthenextelection/'分号Semicolon[;]1）将两个相关的句子连接起来:Thefestivalisverypopular;peoplefromallovertheworldcomehereeachyear.2）和逗号,同使用引出--系列名词：ThethreebiggestcitiesinCanadaareToronto,Ontario;Montreal,Quebec;andVancouver,B.C.破折号Dash[—]1）在一个句子前作总结：Mild,wet,andcloudy—thesearethecharacteristicsofweatherinVancouver.2）在•个句子的前面或后面加入额外的注释：Thechildren——Pierre,Laura,andAshley—wenttothestore.MostCanadians—butnotall—votedinthelastelection.3）表示某人在说话过程中被打断：Thewomansaid,llIwanttoask—“whentheearthquakebegantoshaketheroom.10,连字符Hyphen[-]1）连接两个单词：sweet-smellingfire-resistant2）连接前缀和单词：anti-Canadianon-contact3）在数字中使用：one-quartertwenty-three下面的第四~七部分是按照写作形式对不同文体的作文进行的总结，便于考生根据文体需要来调用相关的词汇、句子、知识内容以及利用其中给出的若干练笔题H进行实际写作练习。四、提纲式作文（一）比较类作文I.常用句式与结构Theadvantagesfaroutweighthedisadvantages.TheadvantagesofAaremuchgreaterthanthoseofB.AmaybepreferabletoB,butAsuffersfromthedisadvantagesthat...Itisreasonabletomaintainthat...butitwouldbefoolishtoclaimthat...Forallthedisadvantages,ithasitscompensatingadvantages.Likeanythingelse,ithasitsfaults.AandBhaveseveralpointsincommon.AbearssomeresemblancestoB.However,thesameisnotapplicabletoB.AandBdifferinseveralways.Evidently,ithasbothnegativeandpositiveeffects.Peopleusedtothink...,butthingsaredifferentnow.ThesameistrueofB.WonderingasAis,ithasitsdrawbacks.ItistruethatA...,butthechieffaults(obviousdefects)are...Nowadays,isplayingamoreandmoresignificantroleinpeople'sdailylife.However,people'sopinionsarestilldividedonthispoint.Thosewhoareinfavorofclaimthatithasalotofadvantages.Foronething...Foranother...Thosewhoareopposedtoholdthattherearemanydisadvantages.Ontheonehand...Ontheotherhand...Byandlarge,theadvantagesderivedfromfaroutweighthedisadvantagesentails.Fewthingscanbecomparedwithintermsof...Ontheonehand...Ontheotherhand...However,justlikeanythingelse,therearealsodisadvantagesfor...Foronething...oranother...Allinall,wecouldsafelycometotheconclusionthattheprosoutweighthecons.Thepasttwentyyearswitnessedthefastdevelopmentof...Abrighterfutureisawaitingusifwemakegooduseofit.Thereisagoodsideandabadsidetoeverything,andarenoexception.Generallyspeaking,thepositiveaspectscouldbelistedasfollows.Foronething...Foranother...However,aseverycoinhastwosides,thenegativeaspectsarealsoobvious.Ontheonehand...Ontheotherhand...Upuntilnow,wecouldseeitclearlythat...Thekeyliesintheusersolongaswecouldmakeproperuseofit.Itcanbemosthelpfultousinmanyrespects.表示好处Ithasthefollowingadvantages.Itdoesusalotofgood.Itbenefitsusquitealot.Itisbeneficialtous.Itisofgreatbenefittous.表示坏处Ilhasmoredisadvantagesthanadvantages.Ildoesusmuchharm.Itisharmfultous.II.练笔一Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicOnElectiveCourses.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below..开设选修课的好处.选修课出现的问题.如何看待这一问题III.练笔二Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicPelRaising.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below..圈养宠物的好处.圈养宠物带来的问题.我的看法IV.练笔三Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicComputerinOurLife.Youshouldwriteabout150wordsandbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below..计算机给人类生活带来了很多变化.计算机给我们的工作和学习带来了方便.计算机也带来了一些问题ComputerinOurLifeV.练笔四Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicCyberGameandYouths.Youshouldwriteabout150wordsandbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below..介绍电脑游戏在年轻人中的受欢迎程度.电脑游戏可以使年轻人认识电脑、开发智力.但沉溺其中也会损害他们的身心健康CyberGameandYouthsVI.练笔五Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicFace-lifting.Youshouldwriteabout150wordsandbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below..现在社会上整容的人越来越多.整容的益处.整容带来的问题（二）对比类作文I.常用句式与结构Somepeopleareinfavoroftheideaofdoing,,,Theypointoutthefactthat（支持X的第•个原因）.Theyalsoarguethat（支持X的另个原因）.However,otherpeoplestandonadifferentground.Theyconsideritharmfultodo...Theyfirmlypointoutthat（反对X的第,个理由）.Anexamplecangivethedetailsofthisargument',,Thereissometruthinbotharguments.ButIthinktheadvantagesofoverweighthedisadvantages.Inadditiontotheabove-mentionednegativeeffectsitmightbringabout,alsomay（的乂•个坏处）.Peopleholddifferentviewsabout...Somepeoplebelieve（argue,think）that...Butotherpeopletakeanoppositeside.Theyfirmlybelievethat...Asforme,Iagreetotheformer/latteridea.Peopleholddifferentviewsabout...Somepeopleareinfavoroftheopinionthat...whileotherspointoutthat...AsfarasIamconcerned,theformer/latteropinionholdsmoreweight.Foronething...Foranother...Lastbutnotleast...Toconclude...Therearenosameopinionsamongpeopleabout（争论的焦点）.Somepeopleareinfavoroftheviewthat,whileotherstakeanoppositeside,firmlybelievingthat.AsfarasIamconcerned,theformer/latternotionispreferableinmanysenses.Thereasonsareasfollows.Firstly,...;secondly,...;Finally,...Firstofall...Furthermore...Amongallofthesupportingevidences,oneisthestrongest.Thatis...Anaturalconclusionfromtheabovediscussionisthat...Asacollegestudent,Iamsupposedto.Fromabove,wecanpredictthat...II.练笔一Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicHowtospendourtime.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninEnglish)below.SomepeopleprefertospendmostoftheirtimealoneOthersliketobewithfriendsmostofthetimeDoyouprefertospendyourtimealoneorwithfriends?GivereasonstosupportyouranswerIII.练笔二Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicShouldPhysicalExercisebeRequired.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninEnglish)below.SomepeoplesaythatphysicalexerciseshouldbearequiredpartofeveryschooldayOtherpeoplebelievethatstudentsshouldspendthewholedayonacademicstudiesWhat'syourpointofviewIV.练笔三Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicShouldEuthanasiaBeLegalized.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below..有的人赞成实行安乐死.有的人反对安乐死合法化.我的看法V.练笔四Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicBuyingorBorrowingBooks.Youshouldwriteabout150wordsandbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below..有些人认为书应该借来看.有些人认为书应该买来看.你的选择BuyingorBorrowingBooksVI.练笔五Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicAdultEducation.Youshouldwriteabout150wordsandbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below..有人认为成人教育是有必要的.有人认为成人教育没有多大的价值.我的看法AdultEducationvn.练笔六Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicCorporalPunishment.Youshouldwriteabout150wordsandbaseyourcompositionontheoutline（giveninChinese）below..有些国家父母可以体罚孩子.而在有些国家这样做是违法行为.我的看法（三）驳论类作文.常用句式与结构Manypeoplearguethat（错误观点）.Bysayingthat,theymean（对这个观点的进一步解释）.Anexampletheyhavepresentedisthat.Theremightbesomeelementsoftruthinthesepeople'sbelief.Butifweconsideritindepth,wewillfeelnoreservationtoconcludethat（与错误观点相反的观点）.Thereareanumberofreasonsbehindmybelief...Somepeoplelakeitforgrantedthat（错误观点）.Forinstance,.Yetmanyothersdon'tthinkso.TheythinkIhal（与错误观点相反的观点）.Theyregardas.Theylaughatthosewhothink.Tminfavorofthelatteropinion.Ithink.Wemustn't.Weshould.Althougheveryonebelievesthat...,Idoubtwhethertheargumentbearsmuchanalysis.Asopposedtowidelyheldviews,Iarguethat...Ifstruethat...,butthisisnottosaythat...Onemaysay...Iprobablywill.But...Ilisonethingtobelievethat...,itisquiteanothertosaythat...练笔一Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicCanborrowingmoneyharmthefriendship.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below..有些人认为借朋友钱会伤害友情.我不同意这种看法III.练笔二Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicDonatingBlood.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below..有些学校把“无偿献血”活动与学分挂钩.我不同意这种做法IV.练笔三Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicMyViewonMarrowDonation.Youshouldwriteabout150wordsandbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below..有些人认为骨髓捐献有害健康，因此不提倡这一做法.我不同意这种说法V.练笔四Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicPhysicalEducationCourses.Youshouldwriteabout150wordsandbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below..近些年来有些大学的体育课越来越少.我不同意这种做法VI,练笔五Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicPersonalSpace.Youshouldwriteabout150wordsandbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below..每个人都应该有自己的空间.家长不应该干涉孩子的学习和生活.我不这样认为(四)立论类作文I.常用句式与结构ItistrueIhat（普遍存在的观点）.However,（谈不同的观点）.【ihink（提出自己的观点，即文章的论点）.（过渡句，转向观点的论证，根据情况选择具体的词）canbelistedasfollows.Firstly,（论证理由一）.Secondly,（论证理由.）.Forexample,（举例具体说明理由二）.Thirdly,（论证理由三）.Acaseinpointisthat（举例具体说明理由三）。Itgoeswithoutsayingthat（转折句，提出执行该观点时应注意的事项）.Thereisnodoubtthat（得出结论）.Inconclusion（总结全文）。Onlywhenwe...canwe...Takingallthesefactorsintoconsideration,wemaysafelycometotheconclusionthat...Consequently,wecanseeclearlythat...Inaword,Iwarmlywelcome...Inmymind,weshould...Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wecanseeclearlythatthekeyliesin...II.练笔一Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicwhatjobsdocollegegraduateswanttotake.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutline（giveninChinese）below..目前大学毕业生的择业情况.男、女同学就业选择的区别.结论III.练笔二Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicTheWaytoGetInformation.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below..获得信息的方式有很多种.我最喜欢通过…获得信息.结论IV.练笔三Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicSaveOurMotherTongue.Youshouldwriteabout150wordsandbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below..我国这两年掀起了“英语热”.人们对汉语的重视程度远不如英语.结论SaveOurMotherTongueV.练笔四Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicQualityProvidesBestGuarantee.Youshouldwriteabout150wordsandbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below..目前市场上存在着一些劣质产品.激烈的市场竞争中劣质产品最终会被优质产品所淘汰.结论QualityProvidesBestGuaranteeVI.练笔五Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicWasteinHumanResource.Youshouldwriteabout150wordsandbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below..国内部分用人单位片面强调高学历.很多优秀的本科生被拒之门外WasteinHumanResource（五）解释说明类作文.常用句式与结构Anumberoffactorsareaccountableforthissituation.Theanswertothisprobleminvolvesmanyfactors.Thephenomenonmainlystemsfromthefactthat...Thefactorsthatcontributetothissituationinclude...Thechangein...largelyresultsfromthefactthat...Wemayblame...,buttherealcausesare...Partoftheexplanationsforitisthat...Oneofthemostcommonfactors(causes)isthat...Anothercontributingfactor(cause)is...Perhapstheprimaryfactoristhat...Butthefundamentalcauseisthat...Anumberoffactorsmightcontributeto(leadto)(accountfor)thephenomenon(problem).Withthedevelopment/improvementof,(problem).Itisnecessarythatweshouldlearnsometrickstoperformbelterin.Ontheonehand,.Ontheotherhand,.Therefore,howto(solvetheproblem)isworthpayingattention.Firstly,.Forexample,Secondly,.Forexample,.Thirdly,.Inotherwords,.Infact,thewaysto(solvetheproblem)arecountless.It'stimethatwe(solvetheproblem).Inonewayofthinking,is.Forsomeobjectiveorsubjectivereasons,.Inanotherway,maybea.Itmakesusthinkalot.Forexample,.Inmyopinion,is.Aspeopleoftensay,is.Inaword,...练笔一Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicAQualifiedCollegeStudent.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below..我国现在大学生越来越多，面对激烈就业竞争，如何提高个人的索质是当务之急.我认为一名合格的大学生应具备哪些基本的素质III.练笔二Directions:Forthispartyouareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicABoominAdultEducation.Youshouldwritenolessthan150wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:.现在许多成年人都利用业余时间去大学或夜校读书.出现这种成人教育热的原因是….结论W.练笔三Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicSandstorms.Youshouldwriteabout150wordsandbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below..目前我国有些地区沙尘暴越来越严重.造成这种现象的原因.如何解决这•问题SandstormsV.练笔四Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicHealth—ASeriousIssueonCampus.Youshouldwriteabout150wordsandbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below..大学生的健康状况令人担忧.导致这一状况的原因.如何解决这一问题Health—ASeriousIssueonCampusVI.练笔五Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicHowtoFindaJob.Youshouldwriteabout)50wordsandbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below..现在找工作不是件容易事.大学生找工作的途径有哪些.应该注意哪些问题HowtoFindaJob五、段苜句作文■常用句式与结构（略）.练笔一Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositionaboutMyFirstJobinthreeparagraphs,thefirstsentenceofeachparagraphisgiven.Yourpartofwritingshouldbenolessthan120words.BeforeIstudiedatuniversity,.Inagreathurry,.Worstofallwasthat..练笔二Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositionaboutMoviesofViolenceinthreeparagraphs,thefirstsentenceofeachparagraphisgiven.Yourpartofwritingshouldbenolessthan120words.Nowadays,therearemoreandmoremoviesofviolenceonthemarket..However,.Therefore,itisessentialthat.六、图表作文1.对图表的描述.介绍图表Asisshown/described/illustrated/indicated/revealedinthecartoon/picture/graph/chart/table,...Ascanbeclearlyseenfromthecartoon...Whatavividpictureitis!Ittellsusthat...Accordingtothetable...,Ascanbeseenfromthetable...,Itcanbeseenfromthetable...Itisself-evidentthat...,Itgoeswithoutsayingthat...,Thereisnodenyingthefactthat统计数据的表达方法increase/fallslightly/alitlle/sharply/dramatically/drasticallyfrom...to...,skyrocket/soar/rise/decline/jumpfrom...to...remainsteadyat...,leveloffat...,peakat...,reachtheclimaxat...,reachthelowat...,accountfor...twice/three...timesasmany/muchas...,onefifth/aquarter/athird/ahalfof数据变化的表达方法Thenumber/amountof...increased/jumped/rose/decreased/dropped/fell/suddenly/rapidly/dramatically/sharply/steadily/gradually/slowly/slightlyfrom...to...Therewasasudden/rapid/dramatic/significant/sharp/steady/gradual/slow/slightincrease/jump/rise/decrease/drop/fallinthenumber/amountof...from...to开头和结尾的常用句型Thetwographsdescribethesamethingseenintwodifferentways.Thefirstdiagramsimplyrecords...Thesecondgraphthrowsanewlighton...Thekeyfindingstakenfromthesurveysareasfollows:...ThistableprovidesseveralimportantpointsofcomparisonbetweenAandB.Itisobviousinthegraph/lablethattherate/number/amountofYhasundergonedramaticchanges.Ithasgoneup/grown/fallen/droppedconsiderablyinrecentyears（asXvaries）.AtthepointofXLYreachesitspeakvalueof…（多少）.Whatisthereasonforthischange?Mainlythereare…（多少）reasonsbehindthesituationreflectedinthegraph/table.Firstofall,…（第一个原因）.Moreimportantly,…（第二个原因）.Mostimportantofall,…（第三个原因）.Fromtheabovediscussions,wehaveenoughreasontopredictwhatwillhappeninthenearfuture.Thetrenddescribedinthegraph/tablewillcontinueforquitealongtime（ifnecessarymeasuresarenottaken括号里的使用于那些不太好的变化趋势）.2.对于线性图表的描述.对于上升趋势的描述a.可以使用的动词或动词词组:toincreasetogouptorisetogrowtojumptoleaptosoartoshoottopickupb.可以使用的名词：anincreaseagrowthajumpasoaranupwardtrend.对于上升到某个位置的描述：①a.中的动词+to+具体数据。②a.中的动词+to+thepeakof+具体数据。③a.中的动词+reachingthepeakof+具体数据。④a.中的动词+reaching+具体数据。⑤topeakat+具体数据⑥toclimbto+具体数据(3)对于上升的程度的描述①a.中的动词+by+具体数据。②a.中的动词+副词*。(4)对于下降趋势的描述：a.可以使用的动词或动词词组：tofalltodecreasetogodowntoslidetocollapsetodeclinetodropb.可以使用的名词：acollapseadecreaseafalladeclineadrop.对于下降到某个位置的描述：①a.中的动词+to+具体数据。②a.中的动词+to+thebottomof+具体数据。③a.中的动词+reachingthebottomof+具体数据。④a.中的动词+reaching+具体数据。.对于卜.降程度的描述：①a.中的动词+by+具体数据。②a.中的动词+副词*。.对于平稳的趋势的描述：a.可以使用的动词或动词词组：tohardlychangetohavelittlechangetokeepsteadytolevelofftoremainconstanttostaythesame*表示程度的副词:(1).程度较大：considerablydramaticallygreatlymarkedlyobviouslyquicklyrapidlysharplysignificantlysuddenly(2).程度较小：slightlygraduallyslowlysteadily.上升和下降趋势的组合描述(嵌入了时间和程度之后)：.嵌入时间时所使用的介词和介词词组：infrom...to...betweenand...during...and...atthestartof...bytheendof...over...attheendof...throughout时间+具体数据.先上升后下降的句型： increasedslowlyduring...and...butfellsharplyinAsteadyfallin...during...and...followedthesharpincreasein先下降后上升的句型：...fellbefore...begantomakearecoverycontinuetherecovery,climbingtodroppedduring...butincreasedagaininfellandthenpickedupduringcollapsedbeforerisingto...attheendof起伏波动的句型：...fluctuatedsharplyallthrough...波动不大的句型:...hardlychangedthroughtheperiodbetween...and...3.饼状图形的描述.对于百分比进行描述所使用的句型:...%the...is/has/have/areaccountsfor...%ofthetotal...lakesup...%inthewholechart.趋势的比较：.表示相似的句型(实例)：BothsharepricesrosesharplyinJanuary.Neithercompanyhasmadeaprofityet.LikeX,YfellinJune.XrosejustassharplyasY..表示差异的句型(实例)：Xfellsharplywhereas/whileYremainedsteady.XfellquicklycomparedtoY.UnlikeY,Xroseby10%.XrosefarmoredramaticallythanY..表示倍数的句型：the...doubled/paredwiththosein客观比较的句型：...is...incontrastto...3).数据的修饰：.表示不足的词或词组：upto,below,under,almost,nearly.表示超过的词或词组：Over,morethan,justover常用词与短语上升：increase,rise,ascend,surge,goup,climb,mount,levelup卜降：decrease,fall,drop,descend,decline,reduce,lessen,leveldown平稳:stable,steady,remain/maintain/keep/bethesameas/similarto波动：fluctuate,fluctuation,riseandfallsupanddown占：occupy,takeup,accountfor,gain而：while,however,whereas,ontheotherhand,actually/infact相比:bycontract,onthecontrary,likewise,comparedwith最高点：thehighest,thetop,thesummit,thepeak,themost最低点：bottom,less,least,rockbottom平均：mean,average趋势：tendancy,trendinclination预见：prediction达到顶峰：mountto在...中占...：gainthepercentageof有一个稳定的过程:astableperiodcanbeseen练笔一Directions:Inthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositionofnolessthan120wordsontopic:TheIncreaseintheNumberofCandidatesandPassersintheCET.Studythefollowingchartcarefullyandbaseyourcompositionontheinformationgiveninthechart..说明图表所表明的报考和通过CET考试人数的变化趋势。.分析产生这些变化的原因。.你从这张图表中所得出的结论。练笔二Directions:Inthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositionofnolessthan120wordsontopic:AverageincomeoftheChinesepeasantsbetween1978and1986.Studythefollowinggraphcarefullyandbaseyourcompositionontheinformationgiveninthechart..说明图表所表明的农民平均收入变化趋势.分析产生这些变化的原因.你从这张曲线图中所得出的结论AverageIncomeoftheChinesePeasantsBetween1978to1986练笔三Directions:Inthispart»youareallowed30minutestowriteacomposit