读后续写：骑马迷路 遇困难不放弃 课件 【知识建构+点播拓展】高考英语作文备考

ContinuationWriting骑马迷路任务：1.找出文章中的when,where,who,what,how2.结合原文，由第一段首句和第二段首句推出故事情节。3.找好主题立意：结合上文，想好一个升华句或者方向（体现故事圆满结局的句子或故事给我们启示的句子）readingforplot01

It

was

summer,

and

my

dad

wanted

to

treat

me

to

a

vacation

like

never

before.

He

decided

to

take

me

on

a

trip

to

theWild

West.

We

took

a

plane

to

Albuquerque,

a

big

city

in

the

state

of

New

Mexico.

We

reached

Albuquerque

in

the

late

afternoon.UnclePaul,

my

dad’s

friend,

picked

us

up

from

the

airport

and

drove

us

up

to

his

farm

in

Pecos.

His

wife

cooked

us

a

delicious

dinner

and

we

got

to

know

his

sons

Ryan

and

Kyle.

My

dad

and

I

spent

the

night

in

theguestroom

of

the

farmhouse

listening

to

the

frogs

and

water

rolling

down

the

river

nearby.

Very

early

in

the

morning,Uncle

Paul

woke

us

up

to

have

breakfast.

“

The

day

starts

at

dawn

on

my

farm,”

he

said.

After

breakfast,

I

went

to

helpAunt

Tina

feed

the

chickens,

while

my

dad

went

with

Uncle

Paul

to

take

the

sheep

out

to

graze(

吃草

).

I

was

impressedto

see

my

dad

and

Uncle

Paul

riding

horse.

They

looked

really

cool.

In

the

afternoon,

I

asked

Uncle

Paul

if

I

could

take

a

horse

ride,

and

he

said

yes,

as

long

as

my

dad

went

with

me.

Iwasn’t

going

to

take

a

horse

ride

by

myself

anyway.

So,

my

dad

and

I

put

on

our

new

cowboy

hats,

got

on

our

horses,and

headed

slowly

towards

the

mountains.

“Don’t

be

late

for

supper.”

Uncle

Paul

cried,

“and

keep

to

the

track

so

thatyou

don’t

get

lost!”

“Ok!”

my

dad

cried

back.

After

a

while

Uncle

Paul

and

his

farm

house

were

out

of

sight.

It

was

sopeaceful

and

quiet

and

the

colors

of

the

brown

rocks,

the

deep

green

pipe

trees,

and

the

late

afternoon

sun

mixed

tocreate

a

magic

scene.

It

looked

like

a

beautiful

woven(

编织的

)

blanket

spread

out

upon

the

ground

just

for

us.注意

:

1.

所续写短文的词数应为

150

左右；

2.

应使用

5

个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.

续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.

续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph

one:

Suddenly

a

little

rabbit

jumped

out

in

front

of

my

horse.

_____________________________.Paragraph

two:

We

had

no

idea

where

we

were

and

it

got

dark.______________________________________.

范例解析

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。原文分析Itwassummer,andmydadwantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.HedecidedtotakemeonatriptotheWildWest.WetookaplanetoAlbuquerque,abigcityinthestateofNewMexico.WereachedAlbuquerqueinthelateafternoon.UnclePaul,mydad'sfriend,pickedusupfromtheairportanddroveusuptohisfarminPecos.我和父亲开始一场从未有过的旅行。原文分析HiswifeTinacookedusadeliciousdinnerandwegottoknowhissonsRyanandKyle.MydadandIspentthenightintheguestroomofthefarmhouselisteningtothefrogsandwaterrollingdowntherivernearby.Veryearlyinthemorning.UnclePaulwokeusuptohavebreakfast“Thedaystartsatdawnonmyfarm,”hesaid.Afterbreakfast,IwenttohelpAuntTinafeedthechickens,whilemydadwentwithUnclePaultotakethesheepouttograze（吃草）.

IwasimpressedtoseemydadandUnclePaulridinghorses.Theylookedreallycool.

我和父亲开始一场从未有过的旅行。原文分析Intheafternoon,IaskedUnclePaulifIcouldtakeahorseride,andhesaidyes,aslongasmydadwentwithme.Iwasn'tgoingtotakeahorseridebymyselfanyway.So,mydadandIputonournewcowboyhats,gotonourhorses,andheadedslowlytowardsthemountains."Don'tbelateforsupper,"UnclePaulcried,"andkeeptothetracksothatyoudon'tgetlost!""OK!”mydadcriedback.z我和父亲骑马上山，注意环境描写原文分析AfterawhileUnclePaulandhisfarmhousewereoutofsight.ItwassoPeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreenpinetrees^andthelateafternoonsunmixedtocreateamagicscene.Itlookedlikeabeautifulwoven（编织的）blanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus.z我和父亲骑马上山，注意环境描写回答下面几个问题，检测一下你是否读懂了原材料。Q2:Whatdidthewriterwanttodothenextafternoon?Why?Q1:WheredidthewriterandhisfatherstayinAlbuquerque?Q3:Didthewriterridebyhimself?Q4:WhatdidUnclePaulremindthembeforetheysetout?Q5:Howdidthewriterfeelonthehorseback?回答下面几个问题，检测一下你是否读懂了原材料。Q2:Whatdidthewriterwanttodothenextafternoon?Why?Q1:WheredidthewriterandhisfatherstayinAlbuquerque?Q3:Didthewriterridebyhimself?OnUnclePaul’sfarm.Totakeahorseride.Becausehewantedtobecoolaswell.No,hedidn’t.Hisfatherwentwithhim.回答下面几个问题，检测一下你是否读懂了原材料。Q4:WhatdidUnclePaulremindthembeforetheysetout?Q5:Howdidthewriterfeelonthehorseback?Verypleased/satisfied.Keepingtothetracktoavoidgettinglostandreturningontimeforsupper.写作思路02首句精研：研读两段给出句，想想它们给我们提供了哪些续写线索？Para.1:Suddenlyalittlerabbitraninfrontofmyhorse.Para.2:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.路上遇到兔子迷路了首句精研：研读两段给出句，想想它们给我们提供了哪些续写线索？Para.1:Suddenlyalittlerabbitraninfrontofmyhorse..Para.2:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.1.Howdidtheygetlost?2.Wheredidthehorsescarrythem?3.Howdidtheyfeelaboutanddealwiththesituation?1.Didtheyeventuallymakeitbacktothefarmhouse?2.How?阅读完材料，试着完成下面的故事山吧！WhatdidIdo?SeeingDadandUncleridinghorses,Iwantedtotryhorseridingmyself.Alittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse…Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark…2.

Build-up3.

Climax4.

Resolution5.

Ending1.

OpeningMydadtookmetoUnclePaul’sfarmtoexperiencethefarmlife.Para.1:Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Para.2:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.plotHowdidwegetlost?…panickedthehorse…chasedtherabbit…照应原文：para4.keeptothetracksothatyoudon’tgetlost.Howdidwefindthewayback?Wefollowedtheriverbackto…(自救）UnclePaulfoundus(hat).（他救）Thelightguidedusback.（自救）照应原文：Para3.…listeningto…waterrollingdowntherivernearbyclues(线索）in

thepassage1.时间表达2.情感表达3.心理活动；4.动作描写；5.事件及经过；6.感悟；7.可套用的句式。Justthen,…=Justatthatmoment

正在那时扩写句子1.我追着兔子跑2.马跑的很快3.我不想摔下马4.爸爸让我平静下来5.我不想马伤到兔子

6.爸爸想到方法7.看灯光，我们感到激动。8.我感到特别害怕.9.我希望我们不会看到饿狼。翻译1.我追着兔子跑我毫不犹豫地追着兔子跑从来没有见过这么可爱的动物以至于我毫不犹豫地追着她。IhadneverinlifeseensolovelyacreaturethatIchaseditwithouthesitation.NeverbeforeinmylifehadIseensolovelyacreaturethatIchaseditwithouthesitation/thinkingtwice.so...that...如此...以至于...never倒装句

翻译2.马跑的很快马被吓所以跑的很快我的马吓得跑得比我想象的还快。MyhorsewassostartledthatitranfasterthanIcouldimagine.SostartledwasmyhorsethatitranfasterthanIcouldimagine.so...that...倒装句翻译3.我不想摔下马我努力保持平衡不让自己掉下马尽管我很害怕，我努力保持平衡不让自己掉下马。ThoughIwasfrightened,Itriedtokeepmybalancetopreventmyselffromfallingoff.FrightenedasIwas,Itriedtokeepmybalancetopreventmyselffromfallingoff.spaprednoeffortstokeepmybalance,preventingmefromfallingoff.4.爸爸让我平静下来爸爸尽力让我平静下来爸爸感觉到了我的恐惧和担忧，尽力让我平静下来。Myfathersensedmyfearandconcerns,andhetriedtocalmmedown.Sensingmyfearandconcerns,mydadtriedtocalmmedown.非谓语动词：v-ing作状语佳句翻译5.我大声喊着，猛地一拉缰绳，防止马儿伤到这个小东西。（yellout,pullbackthereins,v-ing）6.我几乎要奔溃了，突然爸爸想到了一个好办法。7.一看到远处的微弱灯光，我们感到一阵激动。8.想到我们被困森林，没法找到回去的路，我感到特别害怕.9.带着怀疑的念头，我希望我们不会看到饿狼。5.我大声喊着，猛地一拉缰绳，防止马儿伤到这个小东西。（yellout,pullbackthereins,非谓语v-ing）Iyelledoutloudly,pullingbackthereinsinordertostopthehorsefromhurtingthelittlecreature.6.我几乎要奔溃了，突然爸爸想到了一个好办法。（beontheedgeof...when...）Iwasalmostonthevergeof

breakingdownwhenagoodideahitmyfather.7.一看到远处的微弱灯光，我们感到一阵激动。（themoment/minute;arushof...）Themomentwesawthefaintlightinthedistance,wefeltarushofexcitement.8.想到我们被困森林，没法找到回去的路，我感到特别害怕.Atthethought

thatwewerestuckinthedarkforestunabletofindthewayout,Iwasseizedwithastrongsenseofhorror.9.带着怀疑的念头，我希望我们不会看到饿狼。Withdoubtfulthoughtsgoingthroughmyhead,Ihopedthatwewouldn’tseehungrywolves.Ending:

Afterwhatseemedlikeages,thefarmhousefinallycameinsight.Finally,wearrivedatthefarmhouse,safeandsound.Whatanight!Finally,wearrivedhomesafelyjustintimeforsupper.Whatathrillingbutmemorablevacationitwas.Itturnsoutthereisalwaysawayoutofanyplight(困境)aslongaswestaycalm.

Reflectingonthismemory,Iregardedthisexperienceasmyspecialadventurewithmydad.Para.2:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.自然式结尾留白式结尾呼应原文式结尾点题式结尾反思哲理式结尾

Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Itwassuchalovelycreaturethatwedecidedtorunafterit.Intheprocessofchasing

it,Iwastotallyattractedbythecharmofbeautifulflowers.Afterawhile,wecompletelygotlostintheforest.Therewasnobodyinoursightbutthetrees.

“Wemaynotbeabletomakeitbacktothefarmhouseintimeforsupper.”Ithoughttomyself.Afterlongwalk,wefelthungryandtired.feelingdialogue（内心独白）actionsurroundingsExample

Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.Thecoldwindwasblowinghard

andthedarknessmademescared.“Dad,whatcanwedo?”“Allisgoingwell!”

Dadanswered.Wewanderedintheforestanddidn'tknowwhatwouldhappentous.Suddenly,weheardthesoundofariver.Wedecidetofollowtheriver.Afterawhile,weheardthefamiliarsoundofsheepandcaughtsightofthefarmhouse.surroundingsdialogueactionfeeling

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