读后续写练习写作：大战北极熊-高三英语二轮复习

读后续写范文8篇:大战北极熊阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Onefall,mywife

Elli

andIhadasinglegoal:to

photograph

polarbears.Wewerestayingataresearchcampoutside“thepolarbearcapitaloftheworld”—thetownofChurchillinManitoba,Canada.Taking

pictures

ofpolarbearsisamazingbutalsodangerous.Polarbears—likeallwildanimals—shouldbephotographedfroma

safe

distance.WhenI’mfacetofacewithapolarbear,Ilikeittobethrougha

camera

withatelephotolens.Butsometimes,thatiseasiersaidthandone.Thiswasoneofthosetimes.AsElliandIcookeddinner,ayoungmalepolarbearwhowasplayinginanearbylakesniffed,andsmelledourgarlic

bread.Thehungrybearfollowedhisnosetoourcamp,whichwassurroundedbyahighwire

fence.Hepulledandbitthewire.Hestoodonhisbacklegsandpushedatthewoodenfenceposts.Terrified,ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.Weyelledatthebear,hitpotshard,andfiredblankshotgunshellsintotheair.Sometimesloud

noises

likethesewillscarebearsoff.Notthispolarbearthough—hejustkepttryingtoteardownthefencewithhismassivepaws(爪子).

Iradioedthecampmanagerforhelp.Hetoldmeahelicopterwasonitsway,butitwouldbe30minutesbeforeitarrived.Makingthebestofthiscloseencounter（相遇）,Itooksomepicturesofthebear.ElliandIfearedthefencewouldn’tlastthrough30moreminutesofthebear’spunishment.ThecampmanagersuggestedIusepepper

spray.Thesprayburnsthebears’eyes,butdoesn’thurtthem.SoIapproachedouruninvitedguestslowlyand,throughthefence,sprayedhimintheface.Withanangryroar（吼叫）,thebear

ran

tothelaketowashhiseyes.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.

Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived.

【参考答案1】Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.

Roarsandscreamspiercedthesilencewithneedle-likeshrillness.The

noises

turned

Elli

andIpalewithhorror.Ifearedthatthegiantwoulddestroyourwhole

fence.Heroaredrepeatedly,shattering

whatwasleftofthesilence.Elliseizedthisopportunitytotakesome

pictures

ofthebear.Theanimal’snoisesechoedallaroundus.Webetrayedourfeelingsbyhuddling

together,shiveringwithfear.Afterthoroughlyscrutinizing

thearea,hetrotted

forwardafewsteps.Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived.

MyheartleapedwithjoyasIknewwewere

likelytobesaved.Elli

usedpepper

spray

againtobuyusenoughtime.Butthistimethebearbecamemorealert.He

regarded

uswiththemercilessnecessityofhunger,sowethrowallthefoodwehave.Hethenturnedawayandstarteddevouring.Aswewereclimbingtheropeladder,Elliprayedlikeathousandtimestoshowthankfulnessofbeing

safe

andsound.

（154词，21分）

【参考答案2】Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.

Hecouldnotresistthetemptationofthebread.Thepepper

spray

hadslowedthebearbutwasn’tenoughtostopthebeast.Onthecontrary,itprovokedthebearandmadehimeven

morefurious.MuchasIwantedto

photograph

theapproachingbear,mysurvivalinstinctovertookmydesiretocapturetheperfectphoto.Inamomentofpanic,

Elli

andIdecidedtogivehimwhathewanted—thegarlic

bread.Whileitwaslookinglikeadarkcloud,wethrewthebreadatthebearalittlebitatatimeuntilithad

run

out.Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived.

Buttheirritatedbearhasalreadystartedtowhackthe

fence.Ifearedthatthebearwouldteardownthefenceatanyminute.Luckily,therangerscametoourrescue.Theymanagedtocalmthebeardownanddistracthimwithsomesortofacoustics.Eventhoughmyheartwasstillthumpingwildlyinsidemychest,Isnatchedmy

camera

andsnappedonelastshotofthebear,aphotothatIhadalwayslongedtocapture.Thoughriskingmylife,I’vegotthebestpictureeverandit’sallworthit.

（200词，22分）【参考答案3】Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.

Thefurrygiantmusthavegatheredhiswits,forhesuddenlyrearedupandattackedthe

fence

withferociousstrength,leavinganarrowopeningonit.Behindme,

Elli

muffledcryofterror.Myeyeswerefixedontheintruder.Mymindracedlikeflashasmyhandsgropedforanythingthatmightkeepus

safe

fromthebear’srampage.That’swhenIfeltthe

camera.Withlittlehesitation,Ishovedtheequipmentthroughtheopeningasthepolarbearclosedhisjawsonthelensandthenpulledmywholecameraoutandsmashedit.Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived.

I

ran

backtothecamp,stumblingahundredtimesinmyhaste.Ellicontactedthepilotovertheradio.Hearingthatwehadnotsufferedanyphysicalinjury,thepilottoldustostayputandcoverourears.Theharshwhooshing

noise

oftheapproachinghelicopterspookedtheyoungbear.Theanimaltookafewhesitantstepsbackandeventuallydisappearedbacktowardsthelake.Althoughmycamerahasmetitsgloriousend,andthoughallour

pictures

werelost,ourmemoryofthisunexpectedencounterremainsfreshtillthisday.

（187词，23分）【参考答案4】Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.Thenwerealizedthatthesprayhadonlyangeredhimevenmore,forheseemedmuchfiercerthistimeandviolentlypushedthefencelikemad.Myheartracedwildly,notknowingwhattodo.Atthiscriticalmoment,Elligrabbedseveralpiecesofgarlicbreadandthrewthemoverthefence.Itworked!Thebearstoppedtheattackandrantothebread.Butitwasn’tlongbeforeheateupallthebreadandcamebackagain.Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived.“Thankgoodnesswearesaved!”Ellicriedout.Oncethehelicopterlanded,wegotontoitinnotime,excitedandrelieved.Whenweweresafeonthehelicopterupintheair,Iwasamazedtospotthatthebearhadfinallytorndownthefenceandrantowardsthefoodweleftbehind.Iquicklytookoutthecameraandphotographedtherarescene—wewererobbedbyapolarbear!

【参考答案5】Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.Roarsandscreamspiercedthesilencewithneedle-likeshrillness.ThenoisesturnedElIiandIpalewithhorror.Ifearedthatthegiantwoulddestroyourwholefence.Heroaredrepeatedly,shatteringwhatwasleftofthesilence.EIliseizedthisopportunitytotakesomepicturesofthebear.Theanimal'snoisesechoedallaroundus.Webetrayedourfeelingsbyhuddlingtogether,shiveringwithfear.Afterthoroughlyscrutinizingthearea,hetrottedforwardafewsteps.Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived.MyheartleapedwithjoyasIknewwewerelikelytobesaved.EIliusedpeppersprayagaintobuyusenoughtime.Butthistimethebearbecamemorealert.Heregardeduswiththemercilessnecessityofhunger,sowethrowallthefoodwehave.Hethenturnedawayandstarteddevouring.Aswewereclimbingtheropeladder,Eliprayedlikethousandtimestoshowthankfulnessofbeingsafeandsound.

【参考答案6】Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.Heexposedhissharpteeth,glaringatusasheranforward.Andagainthebearstoodtohisbacklegs,wantingtotearthefencelikeamonster.Itseemedthathi