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DescriptiveEssaysDescriptionofaPerson1整理课件DescriptiveWritingTheprimarypurposeofdescriptivewritingistodescribeaperson,placeorthinginsuchawaythatapictureisformedinthereader'smind.Capturinganeventthroughdescriptivewritinginvolvespayingcloseattentiontothedetailsbyusingallofyourfivesenses.2整理课件HowdoesaTeddybearlook?3整理课件4整理课件Cuddly（想拥抱的）,soft,lovely,brown,furry,fuzzy（毛绒绒的）,adorable…

5整理课件CharacteristicsofDescription1.Gooddescriptivewritingincludesmanyvividsensorydetailsthatpaintapictureandappealstoallofthereader'ssensesofsight,hearing,touch,smellandtastewhenappropriate.6整理课件(1).Therose’sfragrantperfumefilleduptheentireroom,driftingintoourwelcomingnostrils.Iimagineitcanonlybemanufacturedinnature’sflawlessgarden.(2).Therosemusttastebetterthanthesweetestofnectars(花蜜).Atleastthebumblebees(大黄蜂)thinkso.7整理课件2.Gooddescriptivewritingoftenmakesuseoffigurativelanguagesuchasanalogies,similesandmetaphorstohelppaintthepictureinthereader'smind.8整理课件Simileandmetaphor(1)Herheartislikeafire,blazingwithpassion.(2)Hishairisasmessyasabird’snest.(3)Thechildisasnaughtyasacuriousmonkey.(4)Hervoiceisasymphony.(5)Thefatherisastubbornbear.9整理课件APoemMyLuveIsLikeARed,RedRosebyRobertBurns

O,myluve’slikeared,redrose,哦我心爱的人就像一朵红玫瑰，一朵红玫瑰That’snewlysprunginJune.它在春天的六月初绽O,myluve’slikethemelodie,哦我心爱的人就像那段旋律That´ssweetlyplay’dintune.它是如此甜蜜

Asfairartthou,mybonielass,我的淑女，我美丽的人儿SodeepinluveamI,我如此地迷恋你AndIwillluvetheestill,mydear,我会永远爱你，亲爱的Tilla’theseasgangdry.我爱你直到大海干涸10整理课件Tilla’theseasgangdry,mydear,我爱你直到大海干涸，我亲爱的Andtherocksmeltwi’thesun!我爱你直到太阳融化岩石AndIwillluvetheestill,mydear,我将永远爱你，我亲爱的Whilethesandso’lifeshallrun.我的爱与我的生命同行

Andfaretheeweel,myonlyluve!再见，我唯一的爱Andfaretheeweel,awhile!再见，无论多久AndIwillcomeagain,myluve,我会再次回到你身边，我的爱Tho’itweretenthousandmile!哪怕我们分别天涯

11整理课件3.Gooddescriptivewritingusespreciselanguage.Generaladjectives,nouns,andpassiveverbsdonothaveaplaceingooddescriptivewriting.Usespecificadjectivesandnounsandstrongactionverbstogivelifetothepictureyouarepaintinginthereader'smind.12整理课件Examples:Abstract:Itwasaniceday.Concrete:Thesunwasshiningandaslightbreezeblewacrossmyface.Abstract:Thetrafficwasheavy. Concrete:Ouroldcarpuffed（冒烟）asMainStreetbecameclogged（堵塞的）withalineofclamoring（喧闹的）motorists.Abstract:Mr.Smithwasagreatteacher.Concrete:Mr.Smithreallyknewhowtohelpusturnourthoughtsintogoodstoriesandessays.13整理课件4.Gooddescriptivewritingisorganized.Somewaystoorganizedescriptivewritinginclude:chronological(time),spatial(location),andorderofimportance.Whendescribingaperson,youmightbeginwithaphysicaldescription,followedbyhowthatpersonthinks,feelsandacts.14整理课件DescriptionofapersonThinkingifthedescriptionissuccessfulintellingthereaderswhatapersonlookslike.Tobespecific,thedescriptionshouldanswersomeofthefollowingquestion.

1)Whatclothesisthepersonwearing?

2)Howoldisheorshe?

3)Howtallistheperson?

4)Whatishisorherfigurelike,bigorsmall,slimorstocky?

5)Whatishisorhercomplexion?

6)Whatarehisorherfacialfeatures,e.g.featuresofhair,eyes,nose,lips,teeth?

7)Whatmakesthispersondifferentfromothers?

8)Doesthispersonhaveanyfeaturesthatstandout,suchasascaronthenose?15整理课件Height(1)Heisverytall.(2)Heisquiteshort.(3)Heisrelativelynormalheight.16整理课件BuildSheisskinny.(negative)Sheisanorexic.(medical)Sheisunderweight.(negative)Sheisthin.(negative)Sheisslim.(positive) Sheisslender.(positive)17整理课件Sheisfat.(negative)Sheistubby.(negative)Sheisoverweight.(negative)Sheisplump.(neutral)Sheisstocky.(neutral)Sheisbonny.(positive)18整理课件ComplexionCharacteristicsDarkLightFairOlivePaleTanPimply（疙瘩）Freckles（斑点）SpotsPimples（粉刺）19整理课件What’sthedifference?20整理课件21整理课件CharacterandPersonalityambitious,confident,dependent,passionate,vigorous,aggressive,sensitive,patient,prudent,cautious,polite,rude,reckless,optimistic,humorous,sociable,easygoing,diffident,broad-minded,narrow-minded,proud,arrogant,conceited,hesitant,sentimental,pessimistic,insensitive,rigid,insolent,considerate,queer,self-important,self-centered,vain…22整理课件MyBoyfriendbySangHeePark

Letmedescribemybestfriend.HisnameisJohn.Imethim7yearsagoforthefirsttime.Ifoundoutabouthimfromaflyerpostedinthestreet.Areyouanxiousabouthim?Firstofall,helookslikewhitecake.Hishairiswhitelikefreshcream.Hiseyesareliketwoblackpearls.Hisnoseisalwaysmoistenedlikedewyflowers.Hisearsareasbigastherestofhisface.Wheneverheruns,hishairisglossyandhisearsflutter.Ialwaysembracehim.Atthattime,Ihaveasensationofgoingbehindtheclouds.Inaddition,hissmellissweetlikecandy,exceptwhenhedoesn'ttakeabathforalongtime.However,Ialwayslikehimanyway.23整理课件EachtimeIsay,"Let'seat,"herunsalongpanting.Asaresult,hestrainshisears,andhelollsouthistongue.Maybe,theglitterofhiseyesisthemostpurethingintheworld.However,ifhemakesamistake,herunsunderthesofaandstaysasstiffasice.Then,hehangshishead.Inaddition,hestepsoutfromunderthesofawhilehiseyesswimwithtears.Also,heliesdowntoshowhisbelly.Imustforgivehismistake.Maybeyoucanguess.Heismydog!Heislivinginmyhometown.Asaresult,Imisshimnow.Heteachesmeabouthowtoloveanimals.Inaddition,hemakesfriendswithmewhenIamlonely.Ilovehimsomuch.Asaresult,Iwanttolivewithhimforever.24整理课件PhysicalAppearanceDescriptionMr.Bingleywasgoodlookingandgentlemanlike;hehadapleasantcountenance（面容）,andeasy,unaffected（自然的，不矫揉造作的）manners.Hissisterswerefinewomen,withanairofdecided（果断的）fashion.Hisbrother-in-law,Mr.Hurst,merelylookedthegentleman;buthisfriendMr.Darcysoondrewtheattentionoftheroombyhisfine,tallperson,handsomefeatures,noblemien（风采）;andthereportwhichwasingeneralcirculationwithinfiveminutesafterhisentrance,ofhishavingtenthousandayear.25整理课件26整理课件27整理课件Hischaracterwasdecided.Hewastheproudest,mostdisagreeable（厌恶的，难相处的）manintheworld,andeverybodyhopedthathewouldnevercomethereagain.28整理课件SpeechDescription“Whatishisname?”“Bingley.”“Ishemarriedorsingle?”“Oh!Single,mydear,tobesure!Asinglemanoflargefortune;fourorfivethousandayear.Whatafinethingforourgirls!”“Howso?Howcanitaffectthem?”“MydearMr.Bennet,”repliedhiswife,“howcanyoubesotiresome!”youmustknowthatIamthinkingofhismarryingoneofthem.”“Isthathisdesigninsettlinghere?”“Design!Nonsense,howcanyoutalkso!Butitisverylikelythathemayfallinlovewithoneofthem,andthereforeyoumustvisithimassoonashecomes.”29整理课件30整理课件“Oh!MydearMr.Bennet,”asheenteredtheroom,“wehavehadamostdelightfulevening,amostexcellentball.Iwishyouhasbeenthere.Janewassoadmired,nothingcouldbelikeit.Everybodysaidhowwellshelooked;andMr.Bingleythoughtherquitebeautiful,anddancedwithhertwice.Onlythinkofthatmydear;heactuallydancedwithtwice;andshewastheonlycreatureintheroomthatheaskedasecondtime…Iwassovexed（焦急的）toseehimstandupwithher.…Iamquitedelightedwithhim.Heissoexcessivelyhandsome!31整理课件ActionDescriptionMr.Bingleyhassoonmadehimselfacquaintedwithalltheprincipalpeopleintheroom;hewaslivelyandunreserved,dancedeverydance,wasangrythattheballclosedsoearly,andtalkedofgivingonehimselfatNetherfield.Suchamiable（和蔼可亲的）qualitiesmustspeakofthemselves.Whatacontrastbetweenhimandhisfriend!Mr.DarcydancedonlyoncewithMrs.HurstandoncewithMissBingley,declinedbeingintroducedtoanyotherlady,andspenttherestoftheeveninginwalkingabouttheroom,speakingoccasionallytooneofhisownparty.

32整理课件33整理课件MentalDescriptionThemannerinwhichtheyspokeoftheMerytonassemblywassufficientlycharacteristic.Bingleyhasnevermetwithpleasantpeopleorprettiergirls;everybodyhadbeenmostkindandattentivetohim,therehadbeennoformality,nostiffness,hehadsoonfeltacquaintedwithalltheroom;andastoMissBennet,hecouldnotconceiveanangelmorebeautiful.Darcy,onthecontrary,hasseenacollectionofpeopleinwhomtherewaslittlebeautyandnofashion,fornoneofwhomhehadfeltthesmallestinterest,andfromnonereceivedeitherattentionorpleasure.MissBennetheacknowledgedtobepretty,butshesmiledtoomuch.34整理课件35整理课件36整理课件ScenedescriptionItwasbeautifulspringweather,butneitherdogsnorhumanswereawareofit.Eachdaythesunroseearlierandsetlater.Itwasdawnbythreeinthemorning,andtwilightlingeredtillnineatnight.Thewholelongdaywasablazeofsunshine.Theghostly（幽灵的，可怕的）wintersilencehadgivenwaytothegreatspringmurmurofawakeninglife.Thismurmurarosefromalltheland,fraught（充满的）withthejoyofliving.Itcamefromthethingthatlivedandmovedagain,thingswhichhadbeenasdeadandwhichhadnotmovedduringthelongmonthsoffrost.Thesap（树液）wasrisinginthepines.Thewillowsandaspens（山杨树）wereburstingoutinyoungbuds.Shrubsandvineswereputtingonfreshgarbs（服装，打扮）ofgreen.(takenfromTheCalloftheWild)37整理课件38整理课件MovieWritingPleasewatchthemovieIfYouaretheOne,andthenwriteadescriptiveessayaboutthemaincharacters.39整理课件MarriageSeekingAprettyyoungladywassittingtherequietly.Withthesunshiningcharminghair,asenseofdesolation(忧伤)flashedthroughthebeautifulfacebelow.Awakingfromtheimaginationafewsecondslater,QinFenwenttowardsherandsaidhellotoher.Atthismoment,Qingotachancetoobserveheratsuchaclosedistance.Shewaswell-shapedindeed.Thewhiteshirtwithwell-designedV-neckband（衣领）showedherattractivechestandherlongandstraightlegsunderablackminiskirtaddedamaturesenseoffemininitytoher.Howcanthisprettycharmingladybeleft?AquestionoccurredtoQin’smind.40整理课件TrueLoveQinFendidn’tloveher,eventhoughshewasbeautiful.Shehadanarrestingface,pointed（尖角的）chin（下巴）,square（颚）jaw.Hereyeswerepaleblackwithoutatouchofhazel（淡褐色）,starred（点缀）withbristly，（短而硬的）blacklashes（睫毛）andslightlytilted（翘起）attheends.Abovethem,herthickblackbrows（眉毛）slanted（倾斜）upward,cuttingastartlingoblique（倾斜的）lineinherwhiteskin.41整理课件ABlindDateShockedbythefirstsightoftheairhostess,QinFenadmiredthebeauty:shewasdressedinawhiteshort-sleevedshirtwithV-collar,ablackknee-lengthskirt,andapairofsimplehigh-heeledsandals.Especiallyherslenderlegs,henoticed,weremuchmoreattractive.Shewassittingonsofaelegantly,withherlegscrossed.Whenshespoke,thewordsfromhersexyplumplipswere