英语六级写作之天龙八部

大学英语六级备考

CollegeEnglishTestBand-6杭州新东方：陈曲HangzhouNewOriental:Frank教授课程：写作部分Courses:WritingPart对于题目的解读Direction:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitled….Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.题目解读：1.六级写作给出题目2.三句话写三段，不要“别出心裁”。3.字数绝对不得少于150个字最新六级题目2009年12月现在有不少家长送孩子参加各种艺术班；1.对这种做法有人表示支持，2.有人并不赞成；3.我认为…Shouldparentssendtheirkidstoartclasses?写作五条黄金法则印象给分（2581114）1.提纲要点→翻译成英文→各段中心句2.惊艳→学会制造亮点（尤其第一段）3.清晰→学会使用标志词（尤其是主体段）4.六级词汇≤六级高端词汇≤GRE词汇5.卷面保持清楚→切忌藏宝图再次强调：文章分成三段六级词汇SampleBut,honestyisnotonlyveryimportanttopeople,butalsoverygoodtoorganizationsandnations.Nevertheless,honestyisnotonlyofessentialsignificancetoindividuals,butcontributestoorganizationsandnationsaswell.替代词的使用新六级写作历年真题考试时间题目提纲2009.06OntheImportanceofaname名字重不重要2008.12HowtoImproveStudent’sMentalHealth大学生心理健康问题2008.06WillE-booksReplaceTraditionalBooks电子图书是否会取代传统图书新六级写作历年真题考试时间题目提纲2007.12DigitalAge数字化产品对于人们生活的影响2007.06ShouldOneExpectaRewardWhenDoingaGoodDeed做了好事要不要回报2006.12TheImportanceofReadingClassics阅读经典书籍对人的成长很重要历年题目的第一段2009.061.有人认为名字很重要2008.121.大学生的心理健康十分重要2008.061.随着信息技术的发展，电子图书越来越多2007.121.如今数字化产品得到越来越多广泛的使用，例如…2007.061.有人做好事期望得到回报；2006.121.阅读经典书籍对人的成长至关重要。写作核心：句型总起：阅读经典书籍非常重要。初中Readingclassicsisveryimportant.高中beimportant=beof…importancegreatvitalcrucial写作核心：句型Itisofvitalimportancetoreadclassics.大学预科Nothingismoreimportantthan…Nothingismoreimportantthantoreadclassics.大学四级playa/an…role/part写作核心：句型Readingclassicsplaysaveryimportantrolenowadays.六级高分important=significant=essentialpivot=indispensibleNothingplaysamoreindispensiblerolethantoreadclassics.天龙八部–第一部2006.12TheImportanceofReadingClassicsItisgenerallyacceptedthatnothingcanplayamoreindispensablerolethanreadingbooks.描述类经典句真理类经典句Itisgenerallyacceptedthatoneshouldneverexpectarewardwhendoingagooddeed.Seeminglyjustifiable,however,itisnotalwaysthecase.第一部发散存在类经典句升级：Thereislittledoubtthat…Thereisgeneralacceptancethat…Itcannotbedeniedthat…Thereisagrowingrecognitionthat…Ithasbeenwidelynotedthat…Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat…Aprevailingnotion/trendisthat…天龙八部–第二部2007.12DigitalAgeIT技术数字时代Probablywithoutourconsciousness/realization,theITtechnologyseemstogivebirthtoadigitalageintoday’sworld.A--⊙emergeintopeople’ssight/visionA--BAgivebirthtoBOwningtothedevelopmentofITindustry,e-booksingrowingnumberbegintoemergeintopeople’svision.英汉差异1英语多被动，汉语多主动。我们应该重视阅读电子书Weshouldpayattentiontoe-books.Youshouldpayattentiontoe-books.文章中不得出现you！！！Attentionshouldbepaidtoreadinge-books.英汉差异1加比较级：MuchmoreattentionthaneverbeforehavebeenpaidtoE-books.laidconcentration/focuson/upon…Muchmoreconcentrationsthaneverbeforehavebeenlaidon/uponreadingclassics.attachimportanceto天龙八部–第三部2008.06WillE-booksReplaceTraditionalBooks?Inrecentyears,muchmoreattentionthaneverbeforehasbeenpaidtothefast-developingITindustrywhichhasbroughtunprecedentedtransformationstohumanbeings’life.Inrecentyears,muchmoreattentionthaneverbeforehasbeenlaidon/focusedon/paidto…A–-(B)-CAbringBtoC天龙八部–第四部2009.06OntheImportanceofaName长期以来，人们一直都对名字的重要性很感兴趣。Overthepastcenturies,peoplehavelongbeeninterestedinidentifyingthesignificanceofaname.Peoplehavelongbeeninterestedinidentifying…（影响）effectinfluenceimpact（作用）force（意义）importancesignificance天龙八部–第五部2009.12Shouldparentssendtheirkidstoartclasses孩子的教育已经成为最重要的社会问题之一。Children’seducationhasrecentlyarisenasoneoftheessentialproblems.之一…hasarisenasoneof…可以取代become…新生事物天龙八部–第六部2008.12TheImportanceofStudent’smentalhealth孩子心理健康的重要性众说纷纭。Nowadaystheimportanceofstudents’mentalhealthhasbeenamatterofdebate/beenopentodebate.Ahavebeenamatterofdebate/beenopentoB升级：…haveledto/resultedin/triggered/giverisetoaheateddiscussion.Asregards…,therehasbeenaheateddiscussionamongthegeneralpublicinoursociety.天龙八部–第七部2009.06Shouldparentssendtheirkidstoartclasses越来越多的父母开始考虑把孩子送到艺术学校去。Anincreasingnumberofparentsbegintoconsidersendingtheirkidstoartclasses,suchasdrawinganddancingonweekendsorduringtheholidays.Anincreasing/growingnumberofpeoplebeginto…可以取代moreandmore…Peopleingrowingnumber英汉差异2汉语多短句，英语多长句windflowersnowmoon小桥流水人家Murmuringstreamflowsunderneaththebridge,leadingtoelegantdwelling.某人做好事要求回报发散英汉差异2Oneshouldexpectarewardafterdoingagooddeed.Thoughthequestionisseeminglysimple,itposesaconsiderablechallengetothesociety.Andittendstoshowcasepeople’smoralbelief.10---710---9甚至10？天龙八部–第八部2007.06ShouldOneExpectaRewardWhenDoingaGoodDeed?Seeminglysimple,thequestionofwhetheroneshouldexpectarewardafterdoingagooddeedposesaconsiderablechallengewhichtendstoshowcasepeople’smoralbelief.…poseaconsiderablechallengeto……tendto…当中文出现容易时Itendtobelieve/claimthat…第八部发散使动类经典句升级(对…造成了…)pose…to…或者place/put…on…1.Pollutionposesagreatthreattoourexistence.2.Rapidpopulationgrowthwillput/placeastrainoneconomiesaroundtheworld.3.Smokingplaceagreatinfluenceonourhealth.第八部发散趋势类经典句升级：tendto…belikelyto…beinclinedto…beliableto…beaptto…beproneto…第八部发散1.Onetendstoshoutwhenhegetsexcited.2.Inwinter,peopleareapttocatchcold.3.Heislikelytomakemistakeswhentired.4.Sheispronetolosetemperindifficultsituation.5.Leoisliabletoactaggressively.6.Thiskindofshoesisinclinedtosliponwetground.天龙八部步法现象类新事物旧事物新兴趣旧事物多人群ariseasbeinterestedinpayattentiontoincreasing描述类新旧事物描述playarole讨论类讨论热议debatediscussion动作类出现结果举例emergeposechallengeforinstance为什么要用天龙八部天龙八部核心→句型如2007年12月DigitalAge数字时代可以使人们受益，也可能带来危害。Digitalagebothhasadvantagesanddisadvantages.ItgoeswithoutsayingthatDigitalagebothhaveadvantagesanddisadvantages.Exercise开头句经典练习：学习英语到底有多难？思路设计:1a.现在越来越多的人在学习英语1b.英语扮演着非常重要的角色2a.然而如何学好英语却成为重中之重2b.举例说明学习英语的情况KeytotheExercise第一句话：天龙八部出鞘句型1：…ariseasoneof…1.Englishlearninghasrecentlyarisenasoneoftheessentialproblemsforanystudents,regardlessoftheiragegenderorbackground.增加描述regardlessof…=irrespectiveof…KeytotheExercise句型2：muchmoreattentionthaneverbeforehasbeenpaidto/laidon/focusedon/concentratedon…2.Atpresent,muchmoreconcentrationthaneverbeforehasbeenlaiduponEnglishlearningbymajorityofthestudentsrangingfromkindergartenkidstocollegeundergraduates.增加对象KeytotheExercise句型3：peoplehavelongbeeninterestedin…3.Overthepastdecades,peoplehavebeenlonginterestedinlearningaforeignlanguagesoastoimprovetheirabilitytocommunicatewithothersandEnglishinparticularhasbeentheirfocus.增加目的KeytotheExercise句型4：Anincreasingnumberof…beginto…4.AnincreasingnumberofstudentsnowadaysstarttolearnEnglishataveryearlyage,evenwhentheyareinpre-school.增加时间（地点）KeytotheExercise句型5.Thereisgenerallyacceptedthat…nothingplaya…rolethan…5.ThereisagrowingrecognitionthatEnglishhasplayedadominantroleincurrentworldincommunication.5’.Itisanirrefutablefactthat,incurrentworld,nothingcanplayamoreindispensablepartincommunicationthanEnglish.KeytotheExercise第二句话：六脉神剑承接句型6.…hasemergedintopeople’svision6.Nevertheless,theissueofhowtolearnEnglishwellhasemergedintopeople’svision,sincemostcollegestudentsstillfindthesubjectdifficultandthelanguageunintelligible,despitetheirlearningEnglishforovertenyears.增加因果转折KeytotheExercise句型7.thequestionof…pose/put/place…7.TheissueofhowtolearnEnglishwellhasplacedconsiderablestrainonmostofthecollegestudents,whoregarditasagreatnecessityfortheirfuturecareer.KeytotheExercise句型8.thequestionof…hasbeenopentodebate/triggeredaheateddiscussion8.Consequently,theissueofhowtomasterthislanguagehasbeenopentodebate/triggeredaheateddiscussion.Thus,asregardshowtoimprovetheEnglishlanguageskill,therehasbeenaheateddiscussionamongthegeneralpublicinoursociety.KeytotheExercise句型9.举例类回忆发生类句型witness9.TakeChinaforexample,thepastdecadeshaswitnessedadramaticincreaseinthenumberofpeoplewhoiseager/hasshowntheirgreatanxietytomasterthislanguage.KeytotheExercise开头句组合1---英文重要现状Thereisagrowingrecognitionthat,incurrentworld,nothingcanplayamore