高考英语读后续写素材积累一讲义

英语读后续写素材积累一细节描写|环境1.Onceonadarkwinter’sday,whentheyellowfoghungsothickandheavyinthestreetsofLondonthatthelampswerelightedandtheshopwindowsblazedwithgasastheydoatnight,anodd-lookinglittlegirlsatinacabwithherfatherandwasdrivenratherslowlythroughthebigthoroughfares.2.Principally,shewasthinkingofwhataqueerthingitwasthatatonetimeonewasinIndiaintheblazingsun,andtheninthemiddleoftheocean,andthendrivinginastrangevehiclethroughstrangestreetswherethedaywasasdarkasthenight.Shefoundthissopuzzlingthatshemovedclosertoherfather.3.Soheheldherverycloselyinhisarmsasthecabrolledintothebig,dullsquareinwhichstoodthehousewhichwastheirdestination.Itwasabig,dull,brickhouse,exactlylikealltheothersinitsrow.4.Thenheliftedheroutofthecabandtheymountedthestepsandrangthebell.SaraoftenthoughtafterwardthatthehousewassomehowexactlylikeMissMinchin.Itwasrespectableandwellfurnished,buteverythinginitwasugly;andtheveryarmchairsseemedtohavehardbonesinthem.Inthehalleverythingwashardandpolished--eventheredcheeksofthemoonfaceonthetallclockinthecornerhadaseverevarnishedlook.Thedrawingroomintowhichtheywereusheredwascoveredbyacarpetwithasquarepatternuponit,thechairsweresquare,andaheavymarbletimepiecestoodupontheheavymarblemantel.细节分类|人物及动作1.Shesatwithherfeettuckedunderher,andleanedagainstherfather,whoheldherinhisarm,asshestaredoutofthewindowatthepassingpeoplewithaqueerold-fashionedthoughtfulnessinherbigeyes.(with复合结构，定语从句使用)2.“Papa,”shesaidinalow,mysteriouslittlevoicewhichwasalmostawhisper,“papa.”“Whatisit,darling?”CaptainCreweanswered,holdinghercloserandlookingdownintoherface.“WhatisSarathinkingof?”“Isthistheplace?”Sarawhispered,cuddlingstillclosertohim.“Isit,papa?”(说话类动词的选择，并伴随动作)3.“Well,papa,”shesaidsoftly,“ifwearehereIsupposewemustberesigned.”Helaughedatherold-fashionedspeechandkissedher.Hewasreallynotatallresignedhimself,thoughheknewhemustkeepthatasecret.HisquaintlittleSarahadbeenagreatcompaniontohim,andhefeltheshouldbealonelyfellowwhen,onhisreturntoIndia,hewentintohisbungalowknowingheneednotexpecttoseethesmallfigureinitswhitefrockcomeforwardtomeethim.(现在分词做状语)4.“Hereweare,Sara,”saidCaptainCrewe,makinghisvoicesoundascheerfulaspossible.5.Asshesatdowninoneofthestiffmahoganychairs,Saracastoneofherquicklooksabouther.“Idon’tlikeit,papa,”shesaid.“ButthenIdaresaysoldiers--evenbraveones--don’treallyLIKEgoingintobattle.”CaptainCrewelaughedoutrightatthis.Hewasyoungandfulloffun,andhenevertiredofhearingSara’squeerspeeches.“Oh,littleSara,”hesaid.“WhatshallIdowhenIhavenoonetosaysolemnthingstome?Nooneelseisassolemnasyouare.”“Butwhydosolemnthingsmakeyoulaughso?”inquiredSara.“Becauseyouaresuchfunwhenyousaythem,”heanswered,laughingstillmore.Andthensuddenlyhesweptherintohisarmsandkissedherveryhard,stoppinglaughingallatonceandlookingalmostasiftearshadcomeintohiseyes.(现在分词做状语，边说边做)6.ItwasjustthenthatMissMinchinenteredtheroom.Shewasverylikeherhouse,Sarafelt:tallanddull,andrespectableandugly.Shehadlarge,cold,fishyeyes,andalarge,cold,fishysmile.ItspreaditselfintoaverylargesmilewhenshesawSaraandCaptainCrewe.Shehadheardagreatmanydesirablethingsoftheyoungsoldierfromtheladywhohadrecommendedherschooltohim.Amongotherthings,shehadheardthathewasarichfatherwhowaswillingtospendagreatdealofmoneyonhislittledaughter.“Itwillbeagreatprivilegetohavechargeofsuchabeautifulandpromisingchild,CaptainCrewe,”shesaid,takingSara’shandandstrokingit.“LadyMeredithhastoldmeofherunusualcleverness.Acleverchildisagreattreasureinanestablishmentlikemine.”Sarastoodquietly,withhereyesfixeduponMissMinchin’sface.Shewasthinkingsomethingodd,asusual.(with复合结构，现在分词做状语)7.“WhydoesshesayIamabeautifulchild?”shewasthinking.“Iamnotbeautifulatall.ColonelGrange’slittlegirl,Isobel,isbeautiful.Shehasdimplesandrose-coloredcheeks,andlonghairthecolorofgold.Ihaveshortblackhairandgreeneyes;besideswhich,Iamathinchildandnotfairintheleast.IamoneoftheugliestchildrenIeversaw.Sheisbeginningbytellingastory.”Shewasmistaken,however,inthinkingshewasanuglychild.ShewasnotintheleastlikeIsobelGrange,whohadbeenthebeautyoftheregiment,butshehadanoddcharmofherown.Shewasaslim,supplecreature,rathertallforherage,andhadanintense,attractivelittleface.Herhairwasheavyandquiteblackandonlycurledatthetips;hereyesweregreenishgay,itistrue,buttheywerebig,wonderfuleyeswithlong,blacklashes,andthoughsheherselfdidnotlikethecolorofthem,manyotherpeopledid.Stillshewasveryfirminherbeliefthatshewasanuglylittlegirl,andshewasnotatallelatedbyMissMinchin’sflattery.(外貌描写)练一练：请用with复合结构翻译以下句子1.她含着眼泪说了声再见。__________________