【三维设计】高考英语一轮复习 写作专题讲座 第七讲 高级词汇和较复杂结构的写作与训练课件

一、使用高级词汇词汇量能反映一个人知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标准。考生要想取得高分，就要强化使用复杂、高级的词汇。常用方法如下：1．多实少虚写作中多用specificwords，少使用generalwords，多用蕴含感情色彩的词语，少用中性词。如good指人时可用以下形容词替换：kind,honest,generous,selfless,brave,warm­hearted,sympathetic,honorable,humorous,smart,gentle等；good指事物或事情时可用以下形容词替换：great,fantastic,splendid,marvelous,excellent,wonderful,meaningful,enjoyable,nice等。以下句子中的形容词虽然都可以用good代替，但远不如原句出彩。Ihopeeveryonecanhavea

time.Heisa

teacher.Thisisreallya

ideatogoclimbingMountHuathisweekend.wonderfulwarm­heartednice2．短语优先多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。Icannolongerbearthewayhespeakstous.→Icannolonger

thewayhespeakstous.He

whatIsaidintheclass.→He

whatIsaidintheclass.putupwithdidn'tlistentoturnedadeafearto3．弃旧取新写作中要恰当得体地使用高中学过的、较长的词汇。Weall

thesamechance.→Weall

thesamechance(opportunity)．Wehave

homeworktodoattheweekend.→Wehave

homeworktodoattheweekend.havepossessalotofendless4．避免重复尽量避免过多地使用某一个单词，必要时选择使用其他恰当的同义词或词组来代替。Ilikereadingwhilemybrother

watchingfootballmatches.→Ilikereadingwhilemybrother

watchingfootballmatches.likesenjoysWe'vebuiltanewexperimentbuildingbesidetheoldoneandwe'vealso

alibrarywheretheoldplaygroundusedtobe.→We'vebuiltanewexperimentbuildingbesidetheoldoneandwe'vealso

alibrarywheretheoldplaygroundusedtobe.builtsetup二、使使用较较复杂杂结构构1．在一一篇文文章中中要适适当地地改变变语法法结构构来增增加文文章表表达方式的的多样样性。。(1)改变时时态和和语态态Thebellisringingnow.→Theregoesthebell!(2)使用名名词性性从句句Itdisappointedeverybodythattheplayerwasbadlyinjuredinthefirstround.→Thefactthattheplayerwasbadlyinjuredinthefirstrounddisappointedeverybody.(3)使用较高高级的状状语从句句Iwon'tbelievewhatyousay.→Nomatterwhatyousay,Iwon'tbelieve.(4)使用定语语从句Thegirlisspokenhighlyof.Hercompositionwaswellwritten.→Thegirlwhosecompositionwaswellwrittenisspokenhighlyof.(5)使用虚拟拟语气Youdidn'ttakemyadvice,soyoufailedintheexam.→Ifyouhadtakenmyadvice,youwouldn'thavefailedintheexam.(6)使用倒装装句Somevaluablebooksandmycreditca→Initaresomevaluablebooksandmycreditcards.(7)使用强调句型Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.→Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthatheknewwhathadhappened.2．改变句句子开头头的方式式。不要要一味地地采用““主语—谓语—宾语”的的文法语语序。可可以适当当地把一一些成分分(如状语)提前，放放在句子子的开头头，这样样使整个个句子读读起来跌跌宕起伏伏，增加加书面表表达的表表现力。。Wemetattheschoolgateandwen→EarlyinthemorningwemetattheschoolgateandwenttotheHongxingFarmtogether.Theyoungmancouldn'thelpcryingwhenheheardthebadnews.→Hearingthebadnews,theyoungmancouldn'thelpcrying.3．通过整整合的方方式，把把几个松松散的句句子用一一定的连连接方式连接接起来，，也可以以对所学学