高三英语写作专项读后续写素材积累讲义

**续写技能支架——一.语言支架整理——Neverbeforeinhislifehadhebeensooverwhelmed(击败，制服)insuchimmense（adj.巨大的）curiositytofindoutwhatwasinthelocker.（倒装句式以及高级词汇）WhatamazedHarrywasthattherewasaboxofdiamondinsidethelocker.（主语从句）Afterwhatseemedlikeacentury,Harryeventuallyregainedhispresence.ofmind.（回过神来）（夸张修辞以及高级词汇）Withfancythoughtsfillinghismind,Harryopenedthelockerwiththekeyeagerly.（with的复合结构）Afterhavingsuchanarrowescape（死里逃生）,neverdidHarryexceptsomethingnewagain.（倒装句）Hearinghiswifewasstillpersuadinghimrepeatedly,Harrycastacoldglanceatherandturnedaroundtoopenthelocker.（高级短语）Hiswifewasashamedtoaccountfor（对...做出解释）whathadhappened,whichturnedouttobeafruitless（不成功的）attempt.（定语从句）Neverbeforeinhislifehadhesunkinto（陷入）anembarrassingsituation.（倒装句以及高级词汇）Withmanypeoplepouringintothehotel,anideaofescapingimmediatelyflashedthroughhismind.（高级词汇）ItwasnotuntilhiswifecametothepolicestationandexplainedtothepolicemenpatientlythatHarrywasreleasedandwenthome.Drivenbyaburningdesire（强烈的欲望）tofigureoutwhatwasinthelocker,Harryturnedadeafear（对...置若罔闻）tohiswife’swords.——二.情感支架整理——Harryopenedthelockerwhichhadthenumber164withhisheartpoundingwildlyandthroattightening.Overwhelmedwithfears,Harrycouldfeelhisheartpoundingwildlyinhischestandbloodracingthroughhisveins.Hiswifewasfrozentothespotwithanunusualpaleface.Whenseeingthetwopolicemen,Harrywasshocked,rootedtothespotwhilehiswifenumbed,speechlessly.AfloodofhorrorexplodedinHarry’smind.——三.细节描写支架整理——Gazingat(盯着）hiswifewithsuchaburningdesire,Harrybeggedhiswifetoallowhimtohavealookatitwithjustablinkofaneye.（一眨眼）Withhispalmssweating,Harrystruggledtosaysomething,buthisheadwasblankimmediatelyandfailedtosayanything.Withsuchaburningdesireforsomethingnewtohappen,Harryturnedadeafeartohiswife’skindreminding.Harry’seyesweregleaming（闪烁）withguilt.Chokingwithwords,Harryjusttrembleduncontrollably.四、富有哲理的总结好句Weallhavemomentsofdesperation,butifwecanfacethemstraight（adv.）,wewillfindoutjusthowstrongwereallyare.我们都有绝望的时候，但是只有直面它，我们才知道我们有多坚强。Everyloserknowsthewaystosucceed,butonlythesuccessfulonesreallycarrythemoutpersistently.每个失败者都知道成功的方法，只有成功者只是按照他的方法坚持去做。Takeendeavorasahabitinsteadoftemporarypassion.把努力当成你的习惯，而不是一时的心血来潮。Lifeistooshorttowasteondisappointment.Ifitisnottheend,pleasesmileandgostraightahead.生命太短，没时间留给遗憾，若不是终点，请微笑着一直向前。Donotbeafraidofdarkness.Donotbeafraidofchasingyourdreams.Donotbeafraidofyourself.Followyourownpath.不要害怕黑暗，不要害怕追逐自己的梦想，不要害怕与众不同的自己，走自己的路。Weallfocustoomuchonbeingextracautioustorealizethatnoteveryoneintheworldisouttogetus.Therearegoodpeopleandgoodthingsoutthere.五、手上动作的描写1.Stunned,Istoodupandgaveheranawkwardhug/huggedherinanawardway.2.Speechless,shesmiledradiantlyandgatheredhersonintoherarms.3.Theneareritgot,themoreshewavedtheyellowblousewildly.4.Themantookthesacks一满袋,reachedinto伸手去hispocketandplacedfourcoinsinReuben'shand.5.Then,clutching紧握thetincan罐头,heheadedfortheshop.6.HeparkeddownthestreetfromBobby'shouse,andrushedtohisfrontdoor,tremblingwithexcitement.7.Themangentlywrapped包，裹thegiftinbrownpaper

andplacedtheparcelinReuben'shands.8.Doralifted举起thelid,tearsbeginningtoblur使看不清楚hervision.9.Seeingnootherpeoplenoticeus,IplacedtheChristmaspresentdownandpounded连续重击hisdoorbell.10.Shedidn'tsayaword,butsmiledawatery虚弱的smileandheldmyhandtightly.11.Asweshookhandswiththenewowners,Itoldthemhowfortunatetheywere.12.Hepatted轻拍myhead,andinquired询问:

“Isthereanythingparticularyouwant?”13.Hewassqueezing挤压，捏mywristsohardthatitached.14.Shestroked抚摸herfingersthroughmyhair,andsaid:

“OfcoursethereisaSantaClause.”15.Shehanded递thenapkintome,andthree$20billsfellontomydeskwhenIopenedit.16.Stevielookedatme,andthenathismother,thenpulledout抽出oneofthenapkins.17.TheclassclappedwarmlyasMr.Leepresentedmewiththereward.18.Hereachedinto伸手去hispocketandwithdrew拿出anote纸币.19.Mrs.Damonpointedto指thequotationfromAlbertEinsteinhangingonthewall.20.Calmlyhepickedup拿起thebrushandstartedagaintowhitewash把……刷白.21.

Shenervouslyfingered用手指触摸hercollar.22.Hestroked抚摸thecatandpattedthedog23.Shetapped轻拍himontheshoulder.24.Hegrasped握紧myhandandweran.25.Shegrabbed抓住herbriefcaseandrantothebusstop.26.Thethiefsnatched抢夺thehandbaganddisappearedintothecrowd.27.Pressthebutton.28.Pleasehandle搬动thegoodswithgreatcare。29.Georgestoodsilentlywithhisarmsfolded双臂交叉.六、脚上动作描写1.ThenLisastoodupandmadeherwaythrough穿过thecrowdtowardme.2.Lisaplantedherfeetfirmlyinfrontofme.3.Shemanagedtoclimbontoitandwaitedpatiently.4.Reubenran/rusheddownWaterStreet,tremblingwithgreatpanic.5.TheshadowswerelengtheningwhenReubenarrivedatthefactory.6.Then,clutchingthetincan,heheadedfortheshop.7.Racinghome,Reubenburstthrough冲进thefrontdoor.8.Disappointedandfrustrated,thepoormanmadehiswaybackto返回hisfamily.9.Suddenly,thewomanstoodupandenteredthehouseintears.10.Andyet,theyalljuststoodtherestaringatme,motionless.11.BelleRingernoddedthoughtfully,andFranniehurriedoff匆匆离去towaitontherestofhertables.12.Iledthemtowardalargecornerbooth.Icouldfeeltherestofthestafffollowingbehindaswemarchedthrough穿过thediningroom.13.Idragged硬撑着行进myselfthroughdailychores日常琐事,feelingexhausted.14.Theelderlymanfledaway逃走withgreatpanic.15.Themansteppedback后退/steppedonto踏上theplatformtotakeagoodlookatthepaintings.

16.Heleapttohisfeet一跃而起andrushedoutofthelivingroom.17.Hesprung跳，突然弹开fromhischairandrushedtopickupthetelephone.18.Hejumpedupandrushedoutofthelivingroom.19.Shejustsattherestaringintospace.20.Thekidssataroundacampfire.21.Pleaseremainseateduntilyournameiscalled.22.Heseatedhimselfcomfortablyatthefootofthebed.23.Hetookhisusualseatatthefrontoftheclassroom.24.Thatmanishurt,he'slimping跛行.25.Hewassodrunkthathestaggered摇摇晃晃地走allthewayhome.26.Shestumbled跌跌撞撞地走upstairsandintobed.27.Shetiptoed踮着脚走tothebedsoasnottowakethebaby.28.Theystrolled闲逛aroundthepark.29.Theyenjoywandering漫步throughthecountryside.30.Hepacedupanddown走来走去theplatform,waitingforthetrain.31.Demonstratorsmarchedthroughthestreetsofthecity.32.Ababycrawls爬行beforehecanwalk.33.Pauldecidedtoedgeaway缓缓移动fromthecrowd.34.Thecatcrept爬行silentlytowardsthebird.35.Theboysneaked偷偷地走inwithoutpaying.36.Imustdash急奔orI'llmissthetrain.37.Shegoesjoggingeveryday.38.Hetrippedover被……绊倒thestepandfell.39.Thegrouphikeduptothetopofthehill.40.AsIwassittinginthepark,Iwatchedascouplesseemedtomeander漫步aroundhappily.七、看的动作描写1.Weallgatherinfrontofthetelevision,prayingtocatchaglance/glimpseof看一眼hisface.2.Seeingnootherpeoplenoticeus,IplacedtheChristmaspresentdownandpoundedhisdoorbell.3.Hereyesfellonthephotosofherandmeatmyfourthbirthdayparty.4.Singinghappily,shegazedat凝视hersurroundingswithlarge,innocenteyes.5.Thewomanwasstaring盯着看eagerlyatthegirl,tryingtomakeaconversation.6.Iwatchedhelplessly,asthewomanfeltmoreandmorefrustratedandhopeless.7.ThenIcreptdownstairsandexamined检查thetagsattachedtoeachofthepackages.8.Whenhefinishedheraised/liftedhiseyesandlookedoutthewindow.9.Shehadspottedamanpacingdownthehall.10.Whenthestudentssteppedoffthebus,James’seyeswidenedinsurprise.11.Werecognizedthefamouscomedianonhisarrival.12.Meghannoddedseriously,eyesglistening闪烁withheld-backtears.13.Swallowinghard,IstaredintoMeghan’seyesforalongmoment,wonderinghowIcouldcopewithit.14.Thenhejumpedup,eyestwinkling闪烁asherantofetchsomeofhisprizedMatchboxcars.15.Iwastakingmytime,strollingintheparkandlookinginshopwindows.八、说话的动作描写1.Reubenmurmured低声说athankyouandranhomealltheway.2.“Here,Mum!Here!”Reubenexclaimed呼喊asherantoherside.3.Ayoungmancametothepolicestation,surroundedbyagroupofjournalists,declaring声明，宣称thathehadspottedthemurderer.5.“Timetogo.”

Iwhispered小声说tothegirl,wishingshecouldfollowmerightaway.6.Myteammateswereallscreaming尖叫asIdashedtowardthefinishline.7.Ipickeduptheballonelasttimeandgrumbled抱怨道,

“Pleasejustcometogetthedamnball.”8.FranniequicklytoldBelleRingerandtheothertwodriversaboutStevie'ssurgery,andthensighed.9.Thehousegotreallynoisyatthattime,witheverybodyholleringandshoutingatthetopofhisvoice.10.“HowcanIletyouthrowawaythethingthatmeansthemosttoyou?”Ipleaded乞求withhim.11.Theyletoutasurprisinglyloudvoice.12.Thesmilefrozeonhisface;hismouthfellwideopen.13.Heinterruptedthesilencewithanannouncement:

“ThedeadlinetoenterfortheCompetitionistomorrow.”14.

“Ihaven’tfinished;Ineedmoretime,”hebegged.“That’swhatMichelangelosaid.”

Mr.Edgar

joked.15.ShegreetedJamesandinquired询问.

“Areyoureadyforourfieldtrip?”

Jamesdidn’trespond.16.

“Whatdoyouthinkmattersforabird?”Mrs.Damonquestioned.17.Headdedsoftly,“Imissyou.”18.Rosescoldedthechildgentlyforbeingnaughty.19.Shesuggestedawalkintheopenairandhereadilyagreed.20.Studentsareclearlyinformedthatdrugswillnotbetolerated.21.LetmeexplainwhatImean.22.“Look,Ican’ttellyou.Oh,comeon,givemeahint.’23.“Well,thereisnothingwecandoaboutitnow,”shesighed.24.“Iwouldn’tbeafraid,“sheboasted吹嘘道.25.Byaviolenteffortsheconqueredhergriefandrepliedinacalmvoice,Benstammered结结巴巴地说outanapology.26.Sheuttered说，发出acryofjoy:27.Attheendofaweektheyhadlostallhope.Loisel,whohadagedfiveyears,declared:Wemustconsiderhowtoreplacethatornament.28.Thenhebegantorecount讲述theadventuresagain.29.Mauchecomestammered结巴着说:“Butsincethepocketbookwasfound.”30.Hetalkedof谈论hisadventureallday.九、身体的动作描写1.ShefeltasleepanddreamedofseeingTom.2.Suddenlyatallfiguredressedinadarkcloakappearedbeforehim.3.Deathspokewithathreateningvoice,anddisappeared.4.Dr.Urssenbecksuddenlyfoundhimselfinalargeroomwherethousandsofcandleswereburning.5.Thelittlegirlslowlypushesherselfontheswing.6.Theyaresittingoutsideinthecoolnightonawoodenporch,talkingquietly.7.OneofthemapproachedandaskedpolitelyifIwouldthrowtheballbacktohim.8.Wantingtoappearagreeable,Ibentdown,pickeduptheballand,eyeshalf-shut,threwitbackashardasIcould.9.OnceIwasonthebus,Icrouchedinaseatandshutmyeyes.10.Inaflashmyfriendwasinthecarandgone,disappearinginacloudofdust.11.ForamomentIjuststoodthere,paralyzed(呆若木鸡).十、心理活动描写1.Theseeventsconstantlyremindmeofmyfather’sabsence.2.Iimmediatelypicture/imaginehimwalkingthroughthedoor,wearingashiningsmile.3.MostdaysIhopethatmaybehewillturnupatmydoorsteponeday.4.Atthatverymoment,hewonderedwhetherhewouldbesentencedtodeathforkillingpeople.5.Hewasdeterminedtotellpeoplethetruth,butnoonecouldhearhisvoice.6.Sotheyoungmanrealizedthepolicehadarrestedthewrongperson,andhetookthegreatcouragetoexposetherealcriminal.7.Ifocusedmythoughtsoneverypartofmyself.8.Wenoddedourheadsinagreement,understandingeachother.9.SomehowIgottheideaitwouldbefuntowakenmyfatherbyfiringit.10.Iwaswonderingwherehewas.Ihadanewjoketotellhim.11.Iwasafraidtogotosleep,forfearthatIwouldwakeupthewayIhadbeenbefore.12.ThenItriedtofigureoutwhatIshoulddo.Followmyfriendtothehospital?13.TherewasnothingIcouldaccomplish完成there,Iconvinced说服myself.15.AsIstartedmycar,Irealizedthatmyfriendhadlefthistruckandkeysatthecourts.16.FromthatoneexperienceIlearnedthatthemostimportantthinginlifeisn’tthemoneyyoumake.17.Iwillcherish珍惜thefondmemoriesfortherestofmylife.

18.Atthisdarkandhopelessmoment,awonderfulideacametohim.Itfilledhismindwithabrightlight.19.Tomthoughtforamoment,wasabouttoagree;buthechangedhismind.20.Thepeasant农民,surprisedanddisturbed烦恼的,swallowedatinyglassofbrandy.（upset,bewildered困惑的,shocked,doubtful）21.Shemethisgazeatlast,aredflushcreepingacrossherface.22.Hewenthomeashamed,chockingwithangerandconfusion.(embarrassed，

regretful后悔的，apologetic愧疚的）23.Hegrewangry,becomingannoyed,hot,andshocked.24.Thepeasantstoodchokingwithangerandfear因愤怒和恐惧说不出话来.25.Hewasconsumedwith为（某种感情）而不断受折磨guiltaftertheaccident.26.Hewasconsumedby/with为（某种感情）而不断受折磨jealousy.27.Hewashauntedby被……所困扰hismemoriesofthewar.28.ThedayoftheballdrewnearandMadameLoiselseemedsad,uneasy,anxious.29.Twogreattearsranslowlyfromthecornersofhereyestowardthecornersofhermouth.30.Shesatwaitingonachairinherballdress,withoutstrengthtogotobed,overwhelmed,不知所措的withoutanyfire,withoutathought.读后续写（满分25分）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Birthdaysaretypicallytheoccasionsfordelightandfeasting.Familyand

friends

gettogetherontheoccasionandconveytheirregards祝愿withthebeautiful

presents

theybringwiththemselves.Iampersonallyabigfanofbirthdaysandwaitformy

birthday

approximately大约amonthprior先前的totheday.

Thisyear,mybirthdaycameoffonlastMonday.Ididn’tknowthatmy

parents

hadarrangeda

special

partyforme.Ateighto’clockintheeveningofmyluckybirthday,Iwasaloneathomecomplainingandfrowning皱眉,andpityingmyselfformymisfortune.Ithoughtitwasgoingtobeaspecialdayfilledwithpresentsand

fun,butallI

received

wasa“HappyBirthday”.

Allofasudden,theelectricitywascutoffandtherewasacompletedarknessinthehouse.Icouldn’tdoanything.Therefore,Idecidedtogotosleepandendthisunluckyday.

Outoftheblueinthatquietnight,Iheardasuddennoisecomingfromdownstairs.Startled受惊吓的andterriblyshocked,Isuspected怀疑thatsomeonebrokeintothehouse.Immediately,Itriedtophonemyparents,butnooneanswered.

Afteracoupleofminutesoffear,Istartedtocalmdown.AlthoughinthemeantimeIheardmorenoisesofpeopletalking,Isummonedupsomecourage鼓起勇气andstartedheadingfor走向thebasement.AsIslowlydrewcloser走进tothebasement,Iguessedthereweremorethanoneperson,butIfoundithardtobelieve.Therecouldn’tbealotofpeopleinourbasement!

Courageously勇敢地,Iopenedthedoorofthebasement.Therewasacomple