中考英语记叙文写作课件

Writing我校即将举行主题为kindness的演讲比赛，请你写一篇演讲稿。要点:1.结合经历,简述你帮助他人或得到帮助的事2.你对此的感想3.你未来的计划注意：1.短文须包括所有要点，可适当增加细节。2.文中不得出现真实的校名与人名。3.词数：100左右。4.演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Goodmorning,everyone!It‘smygreathonortogiveaspeechabout“kindness”____________________________________________________________________________________________________Thanksforlistening!WritingTask一审(Read)1.Topic主题3.Style体裁2.Person人称5.Tense时态6.Purpose意图4.Keypoints要点theFirstPerson

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内容TopicExperienceFeelingPlan二列(List)3.Keypoints要点·Point1When,what,how，who,where……Experience：·Point2Feelings：Goodsentences？♦直到尝试了，你才会知道你会成功。♦当我看到人们脸上喜悦的表情的时候，我得到一种强烈的满足感。♦帮助别人对我来说是梦想成真。♦我可以做自己喜欢做的事情，同时也能帮助其他人。♦有了你的帮助，我才有可能……♦再次感谢你改变了我的生活。Howdoyoufeelwhenyouhelpothers?IgetsuchastrongfeelingofsatisfactionwhenIseethelookofjoyonpeople’sfaces.Helpingothersisadreamcometrueforme.IcandowhatIlovetodoandhelpothersatthesametime.Youhelpedtomakeitpossibleformetodosth…Thankyouagainforchangingmylife.二列(List)3.Keypoints要点·Point3I’mgoingtodo…InthefutureIwilldo…Icanvolunteertodo…Idecidetodo…Iplantodo…Iwouldliketodo…Iwanttodo………

theFutureTensePracticeWrite6sentencestodescribeyourexperience,feelingsandplans.kindnessExperience:____________________________________________________Feelings:______________________________________________________Plans:__________________________________________________________三加(Add)四美(Beautify)Adddetailslinkingwords,adjectives(形容词)，adverbs(副词)，differentsentencepatterns(不同句式)，proverbs/sayings,...Igetafeelingofsatisfaction.IgetsuchastrongfeelingofsatisfactionwhenIseetheanimalsgetbetterandthelookofjoyontheirowner’sfaces.ThebusdriverWangPingstoppedthebus.Thebusdriver,24-year-oldWangPing,stoppedthebuswithoutthinkingtwice.Hegotoff

andaskedthewomanwhathappened.予人玫瑰，手有余香。帮助别人就是帮助我们自己。你付出的越多,你得到的越多.让我们通过帮助别人让世界充满爱和温暖。Helpingothersishelpingourselves.Rosesgiven,fragranceinhand.Themoreyougive,themoreyouwillget.Let’smaketheworldfullofloveandwarmthbyhelpingothers.Goodmorning,everyone!It‘smygreathonortogiveaspeechabout“kindness”.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thanksforlistening!五查(Check)六抄(Copy)1.Allthekeypoints.内容充实，覆盖要点（内容，要点）2.Richwords,sentencepatterns.Nogrammarorspellingmistakes.用词适切，语法正确，句型多样（词汇，语法，句型）3.Clearstructure,linkingwords…结构紧凑，意思连贯（语意，连词，指代）4.Correctpunctuation(标点),letters.Cleanandneathandwriting,100words.书写规范，词数适宜（标点符号、大小写、词数）Ifwekeepon