高考英语复习 读后续写 范文 Mike 游泳和冰淇淋

高考英语写作之续写篇原文细节1：Para1Mike奋力向前，信心满满下定决心一定要赢有个选手超越了他尽管很紧张，但内心依然勇气十足没有丝毫犹豫，闭上眼睛，奋力冲向终点Para2他非常惊喜父母祝贺Mike,给了一个大大的拥抱父亲建议来个冰激淋庆祝下Mike拒绝了“收尾点睛”：努力才是幸运符原文细节2：PART02遣词造句Para1Mike奋力向前，信心满满情绪的“外露”句式：

Judgingfromsb’seyes/expression/behavior,itwasevidentthatsbdidsth(wastrappedin+情绪).“从某人的眼神/表情/行为判断，很明显，某人……(陷入….中)。Mikeswamforward,anditwasevidentthathewasfullofenergy,confidenceandmotivation.Para1内心下定决心一定要赢“动作链”动作链描写：

Havingdone…,sb.did…,did…anddid….Havingswumforawhile,hebithisliptightly(紧咬嘴唇)/clenchedhisteeth(紧咬牙齿),fixedhiseyesonthefinishinglineandmadeuphismind,“everythingisonmyside,Icanwintherace.”Para1有个选手超越了他Undernocircumstancehadheexpectedthatanotherswimmercouldswimpast.某人绝不会料到，…会如此……Bynomeans/undernocircumstancehadsb.expectedsth.tobesoadj.…Para1尽管很紧张，但内心依然勇气十足Nervousthoughhewas,hisheartwasfilledwithnothingelsebutabundantcourage.尽管某人又……又……，但是某人的内心充满了……Adj.andadj.thoughsb.was,sb’sheartwasfilledwithnothingelsebut……Para1没有丝毫犹豫，闭上眼睛，奋力冲向终点“立即行动”“解决矛盾”之“立即行动”:没有丝毫犹豫，某人……Withouttheslightesthesitation,sbdid…Withouttheslightesthesitation,heclosedhiseyesandtriedhisbesttodashtothefinishingline.原文细节1：Para1Mike奋力向前，信心满满下定决心一定要赢有个选手超越了他尽管很紧张，但内心依然勇气十足没有丝毫犹豫，闭上眼睛，奋力冲向终点Para2他非常惊喜父母祝贺Mike,给了一个大大的拥抱父亲建议来个冰激淋庆祝下Mike拒绝了“收尾点睛”：努力才是幸运符原文细节2：Para2他非常惊喜Soonhefeltawarmcurrentwellingupinherheartandsurgingthroughhim.某人感到一股强烈……在内心升腾、奔涌。Sb.feltagreatsenseof+情绪+

wellingupinsb.’sheartandsurgingthroughsb.Para2父母祝贺Mike,给了一个大大的拥抱“先闻其声”“转场衔接”之“先闻其声”:

“Congratulations,mysweetboy!”hisfatherandmotherutteredthewordsinthesamebreathandfondlygatheredMikeintotheirarms.通过“语言”、“声音”来进行场景的切换Para2父亲建议来个冰激淋庆祝下爸爸排了排他的肩膀，说道:“来个冰淇淋庆祝下怎么样？”“Hey,whynothaveyourfavoriteicecreamandcelebrate!”saidhisfather,pattinghimontheshoulder.Para2Mike拒绝了Mike’sthroattightenedwhenhenoticedtheicecreaminhisfather’shand,butherefusedithurriedly,andreplied,“。。。”

Para2ItwasonthatdaythatMikerealizedthatone’sluckycharmwasnothingbuthisdiligence.就在那一天Mike明白了一个人的幸运符只不过是他的勤奋。Para2Itwasonthatdaythat