新教材高中英语UNIT2TRAVELLINGAROUNDSectionⅤReadingforWriting-写一封旅行计划的邮件学案新人教版必修第一册

/08/8/ReadingforWriting——写一封旅行计划的邮件[学范文·背佳句]——它山之石，可以攻玉范文诠释[教材原文]DearXiaoLi，Mytimeherewell.Iclassmates.Overwell.Ilovemynewschoolandclassmates.OvertheOctoberholiday，myparentsandIareplanningtogotoXi'antoseetheTerracottaArmy.I'veheardthatitisanamazingsight，andIcan'twaittogo.Tome,thestoryoftheTerracottaArmyisalmostunbelievable.It'samazingthattherearemorethan8，000statues，andnooneinmoderntimesknewaboutthemuntilthe1970s.We'realsoplanningtovisitseveralotherplacesinXi'an.MydadandIarebothlookingforwardtogoingtotheShaanxiHistoryMuseum，becausemydadloveshistoryandIhaveheardthatthismuseumisknownasa“Chinesetreasurehouse”！We'realsogoingtotheXi'anCityWallandafewotherfamoussights.We'retakingthetrain，leavingthedaybeforetheOctoberholidaybegins.We'rearrivingat9：30a．m.andwillstartsightseeingrightaway，soIhopewesleepwellonthetrain！Iguessthat'sallfornow！I'llwriteagainsoonandsendphotos！Doyouhaveanyplansforthecomingholiday？Hopetohearfromyousoon.Yourfriend，Richard[名师论道][学语言]第一段1.本段使用了amazing和unbelievable，说明兵马俑栩栩如生，令人称奇。短语can'twaittodosth意为“迫不及待做某事”，展示了作者的迫切心情。2.本段运用了不定式短语(toseetheTerracottaArmy)作目的状语；宾语从句(I'veheardthat...)；it作形式主语而that从句为真正的主语(It'samazingthat...)以及not...until句型(nooneinmoderntimes...untilthe1970s)，这些高级句式的运用描绘出兵马俑是令人向往之处。第二段1.本段使用了短语lookforwardto，描述了作者和父亲对参观陕西历史博物馆盼望许久。2.本段使用了because引导的原因状语从句(becausemydadloveshistory...)以及that引导的宾语从句(Ihaveheardthatthismuseum...)，写出了作者和父亲打算参观陕西历史博物馆的原因。第三、四段1.第三段中短语rightaway的使用表达出作者去观光的急切心情。2.第三、四段运用了现在进行时表将来(We'retakingthetrain...,We'rearrivingat9：30a．m.)；现在分词短语作状语(leavingthedaybefore...)；宾语从句(Ihopewesleepwell...,Iguessthat'sall...)以及不定式作宾语(Hopetohearfromyousoon.)，这些高级句式的运用描绘出作者打算乘坐的交通工具、出发及到达时间以及盼望尽快收到来信等细节。[学结构]短文由四部分组成：第一部分：开门见山地指出旅游的目的地和时间；第二部分：简单介绍其他旅游景点；第三部分：介绍交通工具及动身时间；第四部分：询问计划并表达期望。文章恰当地使用了副词also和从属连词because以及并列连词and，使文章浑然一体。佳句背诵一、旅行计划的开头：交代时间和目的地。1.Thismonth,IwilltraveltoChangshaandZhangjiajiewithmytwofriends,whichissupposedtobeaseven-daytrip.这个月，我要和两个朋友去长沙和张家界旅游，这应该是一次七日之旅。2.I'mplanningtotraveltoSuzhou,acitycalledEasternVenice.我计划去苏州旅游——一个被称为东方威尼斯的城市。3.TheMayDayiscoming,andIamgoingtotraveltoShanghaitoseeitsbeautifulscenery.五一节就要来了，我打算去上海欣赏其美景。二、主体段落：交代动身时间、所乘坐的交通工具、停留的时间等。1.Wewillsetouton10June.我们6月10日出发。2.Iwillstaythereforaboutthreedays.我要在那儿待大约三天。3.I'mplanningtogotherebytrainandcomebackbybus.我计划乘火车去那儿，乘公共汽车回来。三、旅行计划的结尾：自己的想法和对对方的期待或要求。1.DoyouhaveanyplansforthecomingMayDayholiday？对于即将到来的五一假期，你有计划吗？2.Lookforwardtohearingfromyousoon.盼望着尽快收到你的回信。[仿佳作·找差距]——巧借外力，事半功倍[题目要求]假定你是李华，寒假即将来临，你打算和家人下周去北京游览长城。请你给你的好友王明写一封电子邮件，分享你的出行计划。要点：1.对长城的认识；2．其他旅游目的地(故宫和颐和园)及交通方式；3．表达期望。注意：1.词数80左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：故宫theImperialPalace;颐和园theSummerPalace[仿写步骤]Step1一仿结构布局合理第一段：旅游时间和目的地介绍。第二段：简单介绍其他旅游景点及交通工具。第三段：询问计划并表达期望。Step2二仿语言规范美观1．我和我的父母计划去游览长城。MyparentsandIareplanningtopayavisittotheGreatWall.(现在进行时)2．长城有着悠久的历史。TheGreatWallhasalonghistory.3．它是由古代中国人民创造的一个伟大奇迹。ItisagreatwondercreatedbytheancientChinesepeople.4．长城已经成为中国最着名的旅游景点之一。TheGreatWallhasbecomeoneofthemostfamoustouristattractionsinChina.5．我们迫不及待地想去参观。(wait)Wecan'twaittovisitit.6．我们还计划参观北京的其他地方，如故宫、颐和园。We'realsoplanningtovisitotherplacesinBeijing,suchastheImperialPalace,theSummerPalace.7．我们将乘火车去那儿。(take)We'retakingthetraintogothere.8．希望早日收到你的来信。(hope)Hopetohearfromyousoon.Step3三仿句间过渡自然1．用并列连词连接句2和句3TheGreatWallhasalonghistoryanditisagreatwondercreatedbytheancientChinesepeople.2．用表示因果关系的并列连词连接句4和句5TheGreatWallhasbecomeoneofthemostfamoustouristattractionsinChina,sowecan'twaittovisitit.Step4誊写DearWangMing,I'mgladtotellyoumyparentsandIareplanningtopayavisittotheGreatWallnextweek.TheGreatWallhasalonghistoryanditisagreatwondercreatedbytheancientChinesepeople.NowtheGreatWallhasbecomeoneofthemostfamoustouristattractionsinChina,sowecan'twaittovisitit.Besides,we'realsoplanningtovisitotherplacesinBeijing,suchastheImperialPalace,theSummerPalace.We'retakingthetraintogothere.Doyouhaveanyplansforthecomingholiday?Hopetohearfromyousoon.Yourssincerely,LiHua1．sightn．景象；视野；视力(教材p.30)I'veheardthatitisanamazingsight,andIcan'twaittogo.我听说那是一个令人惊叹的景象，我迫不及待地想去看。(1)insight 看得见，在视力范围之内outofsight 看不见，在视力范围之外atfirstsight 初看时，乍一看atthesightof... 一看见……(2)catchsightof 看见losesightof 看不见comeintosight 进入视野[佳句]Assoonasyouentertheuniversitygate,youwillcatchsightofmanyoldtreesandbuildings.一踏进这所大学的校门，你就会看见许多古老的大树和建筑物。[练透]用sight的相关短语填空①Therewasnotaxiinsight,soIhadtotakeabusintothetown.②Icaughtsightofmyformerteacherjustnow，butheturnedatacornerandIlostsightofhim.③Theboy'seyeswidenedatthesightoftherichvarietyoffoodonshow.④Attherailwaystation,themotherwavedgoodbyetoherdaughtertillthetrainwasoutofsight．[写美]同义句转换⑤Theboybegantorunassoonashesawtheteacher.→Atthesightoftheteacher，theboybegantorun.(sight)2．commentn．议论；评论vi.&vt.发表意见；评论(教材p.31)Reviseyourdraftaccordingtoyourpartner'scomments.根据你搭档的评论修改草稿。(1)commenton/uponsth 对……发表评论commentthat... 评论……(2)makecommentson/about... 对……加以评论nocomment 无可奉告[佳句]Afterthefilm,eachclassissupposedtohaveadiscussionandthenallthestudentsareexpectedtomakecommentsandexpresstheirviewsaboutthefilm.电影结束后，每个班级都要进行讨论，然后所有的学生都要发表评论，表达自己对这部电影的看法。[练透]单句语法填空①Theteacheroftenmakescommentson/abouthowdifferentthetwoboysare.②Don'toffercomments(comment)ifyoucannotunderstandtherealmeaningofit.[写美]补全句子③I'dappreciateitifyoucanmakecommentson/aboutmywork.如果你能对我的工作进行评论，我将不胜感激。[句型公式]Itis＋形容词＋that(教材p.30)It'samazingthattherearemorethan8，000statues,andnooneinmoderntimesknewaboutthemuntilthe1970s.令人吃惊的是，(兵马俑)有8，000多个雕像，而且直到20世纪70年代现代人才知道它们(的存在)。it作形式主语的常用句式：(1)Itbe＋形容词(obvious、possible、strange、natural、important、amazing...)＋that从句；(2)Itbe＋名词短语(apity、afact、anhonour、nowonder...)＋that从句。[佳句]Itisamazingthatthelittleboyshouldbesorudetohismotherinpublic.这个小男孩在公共场合对他母亲如此粗鲁，真令人吃惊。[练透]补全句子①It'snecessarythat(有必要)youshouldknowabouttablemannersofChina.②Itisimportantthat(重要的是)everyoneshouldlearntogetalongwellwithothersinanewenvironment.③Itisobviousthat(很明显)youhavemadeamistake.[写美]翻译句子④你错过了这么好的一个机会，真可惜。Itisapitythatyoumissedsuchagoodchance.维度一：品句填词1．Weshouldpayattentiontosmalldetails(细节),whichcanensureustosucceedintheend.2．Imadearequest(要求)thatallthestudentsshouldtakeanactivepartintheactivity.3．I'mgoingtomakeaspeechontheeconomy(经济)nextweek.4．Exploreyourlifeandunearth(发掘)allofthethingsthatbringyoujoy.5．Overtheyears，mygrandmotherislosinghersight(视力).6．Thesoldierstoodinfrontofthestatue(雕塑)andhisgirlfriendtookaphotoofhim.7．Wefinallyclimbedontothetopofthemountain,fromwherewecouldhaveagoodviewofthecity.8．Itisimportanttopayyourbillontime，aslatepaymentsmayaffectyourcredit．维度二：单句语法填空1．Studentsarerequestedtogo(go)toworkinthepoormountainareasaftergraduatingfromuniversity.2．Youcangetagoodviewoftheparkfromthistower.3．TongHuaismyfavouritewriter.Ican'twaittoread(read)herlatestnovel.4．Morethan8，000statuesweremade(make)inthisthirdcenturyBCEtoguardthetomboftheChineseEmperorQinshihuang.5．Pleasedorememberitismuchcolder(cold)intheSnowMountain.6．Ilovenature,soIreallywanttoseesomebeautifulsights(sight)