高考总复习英语（北师大版）写作提升1-8巧夺天工的连篇技巧

/04/4/第八节巧夺天工的连篇技巧(对应学生用书P245)有效地使用语句间的连接成分巧妙地衔接过渡，利用好“开篇、承接、转折、总结”四个方法使文章流畅自然，是考生在书面表达题目上争创高分的非常重要的条件。开篇——创造良好开端常用表达“开篇”的过渡词语(常用在段落或文章的开头)：first，firstofall，atfirst，inthefirstplace，firstly，tostartwith，recently，now，atpresent，inrecentyears，ingeneral，generallyspeaking，atpresent，lately，currently等。常用表达“开篇”的句型：Itisoftensaidthat...Astheproverbsays...Itgoeswithoutsayingthat...Itisclear/obviousthat...Manypeopleoftenask...It’softensaidthatallworkwithoutplaymakesJackadullboy.Astheproverbsays，nopains，nogains.(北京高考)承接——顺势承上又启下常用表达“承接”的过渡词语：secondly，inaddition，besides，moreover，whatismore，whatisworse，forexample，inotherwords，especially，particularly，obviously，atthesametime，nodoubt等。常用表达“承接”的句型：Itistruethat...Everybodyknowsthat...Itcanbeeasilyprovedthat...Noonecandenythat...Thereasonwhy...isthat...Thereisnodoubtthat...Totake...forexample(instance)．..Whatismoreseriousisthat...Inaddition，IwillgoonatriptoSichuan，wherethereareagreatnumberofplacesofinterest.Meanwhile，Iwillregarditasmydutytohelpkeepourenvironmentcleanandhealthy.Asaconsequence，childrenbecomesoreliantontheirparentsthattheyhavenoindependentthoughtorcreativeideas.转折——利用转折巧过渡常用表达“转折”的过渡词语：but，however，ontheotherhand，onthecontrary，inanycase，or，orelse，while，despite，inspiteof，regardlessof，instead等。常用表达“转折”的句型：Everycoinhastwosides.Butfor...Iwouldnever...Anotherexampleisthat...Takingeverythingintoconsideration...That’swhyIfeelthat...Therewillbemanychallengesahead，butIhaveconfidencethatI’lltakeontheburden.However，itisnotsoeasyforpeopletorealizetheirdreamseverytime.总结——完美结束全文常用表达“总结”的过渡词语：inaword，ingeneral，inshort，aboveall，finally，inconclusion，atlast，insummary，asaresult，onthewhole等。常用表达“总结”的句型：Somethingmustbedoneto...Itcanbesafelyconcludedfrom...that...Inmyopinion，wecandrawtheconclusionthat...Itmaybebrieflysummedupasfollows：it’shightimethatourgovernmenttooksomemeasurestoimproveourenvironment.Inmyopinion，peopleneedtolearntoaccepttherealityandkeepontrying.Ⅰ.完成句子1．随着因特网的发展，计算机在人们的生活中起着重要作用。______________________theInternet，computersplayanimportantroleinpeople’slife.2．总的来说，你练习越多，用英语写作就越熟练。__________________/Onthewhole/Ingeneral,themoreyoupractise，themoreskillfullyyoucanwriteinEnglish.3．就拿北京来说吧，它是世界上最古老的都市之一。______________________________，itisoneoftheoldestcitiesintheworld.4．也就是说，如果你想成功，必须相信自己。________________，ifyouwanttosucceed，youhavetobelieveinyourself.5．就我而言，我喜欢财富，但我更看重健康。____________________________，Ilovewealth，butIvaluehealthmore.6．按照我的观点，人们不应该在公共场所抽烟。____________________，peopleshallnotsmokeinpublicplaces.7．总之，一个好市民应该遵守交通规则。__________________________________________，agoodcitizenshouldobservetrafficregulations.8．另外，我们班还组织了各种各样的活动来丰富我们的业余时间。__________________________________________，ourclassalsoorganizeavarietyofactivitiestoenrichoursparetime.9．更糟的是，如果我们在电话上花费过多的时间，我们会失去将来需要的交际技能。____________________________，ifwespendtoomuchtimeonphones，wewilllosethecommunicationskillsweneedinthefuture.答案：1.Withthedevelopmentof2.Generallyspeaking3.TotakeBeijingforexample4.Thatistosay5.AsfarasIamconcerned6.Inmyopinion7.Inaword/Inconclusion/Inshort/Inbrief/Tosumup8.Besides/What’smore/Inaddition/Moreover/Furthermore9.Worsestill/TomakemattersworseⅡ.完成短文1．____________，Icollectedallthebooks，newspapersandotherthingsscatteredintheroomsandputtheminplace.2.____________Iwipedthedustoffallthefurniture.3.________________，Isweptandmoppedthefloors.首先，我把所有的书籍、报纸和其他的散落在屋子里的东西收集起来放好，然后我扫去所有家具上的灰尘，之后我扫地、拖地。答案：1.Firstly2.Then3.AfterthatⅢ.翻译句子1．努力学习，你就会升入重点大学。________________________________________________________________________.2．游泳不但对身体有好处，而且能培养我们的坚强意志。________________________________________________________________________.3．然而，使你最惊讶的是下述新的功能。________________________________________________________________________.4．相反，智能手机不仅占用我们宝贵的时间，而且对我们的健康造成极大的危害。________________________________________________________________________.5．多亏医生的及时治疗，他获救了。________________________________________________________________________.6．因此，我建议应该给我们更多的时间用于体育运动和睡眠。________________________________________________________________________.7．只要你不灰心，就一定会成功。________________________________________________________________________.8．如果我们忽视我们的未来，就像图画中的这个人一样，我们就会以失败告终。________________________________________________________________________.答案：1.Workhard，andyouwillbeadmittedtoakeyuniversity2.Swimmingnotonlybenefitsourhealth，butalsohelpsushaveastrongwill3.However，whatamazesyoumostisthefollowingnewfunction4.Onthecontrary，smartphonesnotonlytakeupourvaluabletime，butalsodogreatharmtoourhealth5.Thankstothedoctor’stimelytreatment，hewassaved.6．Therefore，Isuggestwebegivenmoretimeforsportsandsleep7.Aslongasyoudon’tloseheart，you’resuretosucceed8.Ifweneglectourfuture，we’llendupinfailureaswhathappenstothemaninthepictureⅣ.用方框内的过渡词完成下面的短文1．____________，onlineshoppingisbecomingmoreandmorepopularinourdailylife.2.____________，onlineshoppinghasmanyadvantages.First，onlineshoppingmakesiteasierforustobuythings.3.____________searchingacrowdedstore，wejustneedtowatchthecomputerscreenandchoosethethingswelike.4.____________，itismuchfasterforustodoshopping.Wedon’thavetospenda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