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单元主题写作八话题分析经典例题思绪点拨素材积累小试身手1/13单元主题写作八本单元以“侦探故事”为话题，经过对几起案件描述，激发学生学习兴趣，培养学生写作能力，并增强学生安全意识，有效防范违法犯罪，提升自我保护能力。话题分析2/13为了深入增强中学生安全意识，提升自我保护能力，某校开展了以“安全”为主题英语演讲比赛。请你依据以下关键点提醒写一篇演讲稿。80词左右。单元主题写作八典型例题3/13参考词汇：becareful,online,danger,call…for,gobadHowtokeepsafe?Asteenagers,weshouldalwayskeepsafetyinmind.Buthowcanwekeepsafe?Herearesomeofmysuggestions.First_________________________________________________，_____________________________________________________单元主题写作八4/13单元主题写作八思路点拨5/13短语：1．当心……________________2．报警________________3．对……有害________________4．喊救命________________5．远离________________6．最好做某事________________7．保护我们自己免受犯罪伤害________________单元主题写作八素材积累protectourselvesagainstcrimesbecarefulwith

callthepolicebebadfor/doharmtocallforhelpbeawayfromhadbetterdosth6/13句型：1．Helooks…2．Thepolicearewonderingif…3．We'renotsurewhether…4．Hehasnothingtodowiththiscase.5．Weshouldrememberto…6．We'dbetternot…7．Hegetsalongwith…8．Asstudents,weshould…单元主题写作八7/13高分模板Howtokeepsafe?Asteenagers,weshouldkeepsafetyinmind.①Buthowcanwekeepsafe?Herearesomeofmysuggestions.First,②weshouldbecarefulwhenwemakefriends,especiallyonline.③Second,ifweareindanger,wemustcallthepoliceforhelpintimesothatwecankeepourselvessafe.④Also,weoughttoeathealthilyandsafely.Eatingfoodthatgoesbadwilldoharmtoourhealth.⑤Lastbutnotleast,summeriscoming,andwemustrememberit'sdangeroustoswimintheriver.⑥Inshort,safetymustcomefirst!单元主题写作八8/13名师点评①以“howcanwekeepsafe”引入话题。②especially一词强调了要尤其注意“网上交友”，也使句子愈加顺畅。③sothat连接目标状语从句，使表示愈加准确。④lastbutnotleast表示“最终但一样主要”，为高级句型，表示了作者丰富词汇积累。⑤总结全文，号召人们注意安全，使文章首尾呼应，浑然一体。单元主题写作八9/13

[·广东]每年夏天，溺水事故频发。请你就此写一篇短文谈谈你看法。内容包含：1．我们应该怎样预防这类事故发生？(两点提议)2．假如看到有些人落水，我们应该怎样适当施救？3．呼吁同学们热爱生命，注意安全。要求：80词左右，已给开头不计入总词数。单元主题写作八小试身手10/13Almosteveryyearinsummer,manypeoplearereporteddeadfromdrowningaccidents.Howtopreventsuchsadaccidents?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________单元主题写作八11/13Onepossibleversion：Almosteveryyearinsummer,manypeoplearereporteddeadfromdrowningaccidents.Howtopreventsuchsadaccidents?Inmyopinion,first,weshouldn'tgoswimmingindangerousplacesorplacesweknowlittleabout,suchasreservoirsandrivers.Second,wehadbetternotswimwhenwefeeltiredorhungry.单元主题写作八12/13Ifweseesomeonefallintothewater,weshouldsavehiminaproperway.Forexample,wecanshoutasloudlyaswecantogetthosewithgoodswimmingsk