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书面表达Howtomakeyourwritingmoreeffective？ByJanet1samplesofstudentwork字数不够或未能传达读者任何信息。2字迹潦草难以辨认3samplesofstudentworkreadandwritefindithardfluentEnglishtowritehadtakenplaceinmyhometownbuildingsroadswidenedGreatchangesItwillbewonderfulwhenIwillbegladto4youcometoChinaifyouarefreeshowyouaround语言不地道;中文式思维;语言错误较多AgoodcompositionContentstructurelanguage5Whatisagoodwriting？Content:coverthekeypoints(内容要完整)everythingmustbetothepoint(切题)Structure:*Goodbeginningandending(好的开头结尾)*Wellorganizedandsmoothlydeveloped(结构合理,行文流畅)Language:*NoChinglish(避免中文式英文)*NoGrammaticalmistakes(没有语法错误)*appropriatevocabularyandexpressions(得体的词汇和表达)goodsentencepatterns（句式）6I.使用得体的词汇或短语1.OurschoolisatthefootofHuangyangMountain.Ourschoolissituated/locatedatthefootofHuangyangMountain.2.Ourschoolisverygood.Ourschooliswell-equipped/isequippedwithadvancedteachingfacilities.approach/drawnear3.Ourwintervacationiscoming.Ourwintervacationisapproaching/drawingnear.74.Weareveryhappyduringwinterholidays.Wehavealotoffunduringwinterholidays.5.Everyoneshoulddohishomework.Everyoneissupposedtodohishomework.6.WeallthinkMissliuisagreatteacher.（评价很高）Weallthinkhighlyofher.8II.丰富的句式：Let'sappreciatesomesentences.91.OnlyinthiswaycanwelearnEnglishwell.2.Withthenoisegoingon,Icouldn'tgoonstudying.with复合结构非谓语动词短语倒装句3.Locatedatthesouthwestcornerofourschool,thegardencoversanareaof1000squaremetres.4.Itwasnotuntilshetookoffherglassesthatherfatherrecognizeher.强调句5.InChina,ourwinterholidayslastabout20days,duringwhichtimewecelebratethebiggestfestival---theSpringfestival.定语从句10Let'simitatethesentences.11一、only倒装句Wecanexpectourhometowntakeonanewlookonlywithcombinedefforts.Onlywithcombinedefforts,canweexpectourhometowntakeonanewlook.IrealizedJanetwasaniceteacheronlyafterIleftschool．OnlyafterIleftschooldidIrealizeJanetwasaniceteacher.Wecanliveinmorecomfortableandbeautifulsurroundingsonlyinthisway.Onlyinthiswaycanweliveinmorecomfortable12andbeautifulsurroundings.二、强调句Itis/was+被强调部分+that/who+其他.Thelackofenvironmentalawarenesscausessuchbehavior.Itisthelackofenvironmentalawarenessthatcausessuchbehavior.Ididn'tknowWangkaiuntilIsawDisguiser.ItwasnotuntilIsawDisguiserthatIknewWangkai.13三、with复合结构1.Thethiefwastakenawaybythepolice.Hishandsweretied.(with+宾语+分词）Thethiefwastakenawaybythepolice,withhishandstied.2.Thewomanisbeautifulandtearsarerunningonhercheeks.(with+宾语+分词）Thewomanisbeautiful,withtearsrunningonhercheeks.14有这么多人支持你，你不用担心。Withsomanypeoplehelpingyou,youneedn'tworry.随着高考的临近，很多学生选择撕书以缓解学习的压力。Withthecollegeentranceexaminationdrawingnear,somestudentschoosetoteartheirbooksintopiecesinordertoreducestressandpressurefromtheirlearning.由于我的耳机坏了，我不能做听力练习。Withmyearphonebroken,Ican'tdothelisteningexercises.15四、非谓语动词1.Twopeoplearewalkingonthegrassandtotallyignorethenoticewhichsays,“keepoffthegrass”.Twopeoplearewalkingonthegrasstotallyignoringthenoticewhichsays,“keepoffthegrass”.2.Chenjialewalkedoutoftheclassroomandmanygirlsfollowedher.Chenjialewalkedoutoftheclassroom,followedbymanygirls.16Thekidswereinvitedtothepartyandtheywereveryexcited.Invitedtotheparty,thekidswereveryexcited.WhenIwalkedthroughthepark,Isawmanybeautifulflowers.Walkingthroughthepark,Isawmanybeautifulflowers.17五、名词性从句我的梦想是我能进入一所重点大学（akeyuniversity）。MydreamisthatIcanenterakeyuniversity.我能进入一所重点大学是我的梦想。ThatIcanenterakeyuniversityismydream.我有一个梦想我能进入一所重点大学。IhaveadreamthatIcanenterakeyuniversity.我总是梦想着我能进入一所重点大学。IalwaysdreamthatIcanenterakeyuniversity18.2.他建议我努力学习。1.HesuggestedthatIshouldstudyhard.宾语从句2.ItissuggestedtomethatIshouldstudyhard.主语从句3.HegavemeasuggestionthatIshouldstudyhard.同位语从句4.WhathesuggestedtomeisthatIshouldstudyhard.主语从句+表语从句19Let'sconclude.InversionEmphaticsentenceNon-predicateverbWithcompositestructureNounclauses20DearEditor,Asastudentreader,IamwritingtotalkabouttheEnglishtextbookspublishedbyyourhouse.TobeginwithThesebookshavemanyadvantages._________oneofthemisthatwecanfindavarietyoftopics,suchasscience,cultureandhistory.Thesetopics,Ithink,areverypopularwithusstudents.ⅢUseproperlinkingwordsAsaresult;Inaddition;Tobeginwith;However21_____________,alongwiththetextstherearewhat'smoremanybeautifulandcolorfulpictures,whichcanhelpusunderstandEnglishbetter.EventhestudentswhousedtodislikeEnglishhaveturnedouttobeinterestedinthesubject._________,someofthetextshavetoomanyHowevernewwordsandexpressionswhicharehardforThereforeus.__________,I'dliketosuggestchangingthemintoeasierones.Inmyopinion;Therefore;However;what'smore22Goodafternoon,everyone!Thetopicofmyspeechtodayis“MyAttitudetoPursuitofFashioninSchool”.Nowinourschoolthereisahotpursuitoffashion.Somestudentsliveaveryexpensivelife…_______._______,theyhopetolooksmartandspecial.ABF_______,theywanttowinothers'admirationandrespect.Inaddition,itmakesthemfeelcool._______,westudentsshouldholdtherightsenseofEDvalues.Weshouldpracticethriftinourdailylife._____,itisadvisableforustodonatesomepocketmoneytotheHopeProjectsothatthosepoorchildreninruralareascanreturntoschool.______,itistheinnerbeautyratherthanCourappearancethatmakesusrespectable.Thankyouforlistening!A.thereasonswhytheydosoareasfollowsB.firstlyC.lastbutnotleastD.what'smoreE.asfarasIamconcernedF.Secondly23增强书面表达效果的技巧1.使用得体的词汇技2.使用较丰富的句式巧3.使用恰当的连接词运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉。使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。24词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。Let'spolishthefollowingparagraph.25LastSunday,abigfirebrokeoutinabuildingnearmyhome.Thepeoplewererescuedwhenthefiremenarrived.Thefiremendependedontheirprofessionalknowledgeandquicklypreventedthefirefromspreading.Finally,thefirewasputout,peoplewereallinrelief.26ItwaslastSundaythatabigfirebrokeoutinabuildingnearmyhome.Onlywhenthefiremenarrivedwerethepeoplerescued.Dependingontheirprofessionalknowledge,thefiremenquicklypreventedthefirefromspreading.Finally,withthefireputout,peoplewereallinrelief.27PracticeLadiesandgentlemen,联合国教科文组织某考察团正在我国某乡村参观考察。假定你是接待人员,请根据下列提示以发言稿的形式简要介绍这个村的情况：1)大小：近100户人家，约500口人。2)变化：过去很穷，78年后变化很大。人们生活比以前好多了。现已旧貌换新颜。Welcometoourschool.Thisvillageisverysmall.Ithasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.Ithaschangedalotsince1978.Peopleherearericherthanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.Theschoolherewasverysmall.Nowithasbeenrebuilt.Thenewlybuiltteachingbuildinghas4storeys.Itisthemostbeautifulbuildinginthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.Theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.3)教育：原来的学校很小，现已经过改建。新建的教学楼有4层，是村里最美的建筑物。村所有学龄儿童在此免费就读。注意：1）要点齐全，前后连贯。2）词数：100-120之间。Thankyou.28书面表达：Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool!①Thisvillageisverysmall.Ithasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.②Ithaschangedalotsince1978③.Peoplehere④arericherthanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool!①Thisvillageisasmallonewith/whichhasnearly100famili