2023届高三英语专题复习2021年浙江卷读后续写：父亲要拿走我的暑期打工钱？课件

2021.6浙江卷读后续写

父亲要拿走我的暑假打工钱？1

Mydad,George,onlyhadaneighthgradeeducation.Aquietman,hedidn’tunderstandmyworldofschoolactivities.Fromage14,heworked.Andhisdad,Albert,tookthemoneymydadearnedandusedittopayfamilyexpenses.Ididn’treallyunderstandhisworldeither:Hewasalivestock(牲畜)trucker,andIthoughtthatIwouldsurpass(超过)anythinghehadaccomplishedbythetimeIwalkedacrossthestageathighschoolgraduation.Summersinthemid-’70swerespentathomeshootingbaskets,hittingabaseball,orthrowingafootball,preparingformyfutureasaquarterback(四分卫)onafootballteam.Inpoorweather,Ireadaboutsportsorpracticedmytrombone(长号).ThesummerbeforemyeighthgradeIwasoneofagroupofboysthataneighboringfarmerhiredtoworkinhisfield.Heexplainedourbasictask,thetractor(拖拉机)firedupandwewereoff,ridingdownthefieldlookingforweedstospray(喷洒)withchemicals.Afterashortway,thefarmerstoppedandpointedataweedwhichwemissed.Thenwebeganagain.Thishappenedoverandover,butwesoonlearnedtoidentifydifferentgrasseslikecockleburs,lamb’s-quarters,foxtails,andthekingofweeds,theprettypurplethistle.Itwastiringwork,butIlookedforwardtothepay,eventhoughIwasn’tsurehowmuchitwouldamountto.Athome,mydadsaid,“Ajob’sabigsteptogrowingup.I’mgladyouwillbecontributingtothehousehold.”Mydad’swordsmademerealizethatmyearningsmightnotbeminetodowithasIwished.Mylaborslastedabouttwoweeks,andthefarmersaidtheremightbemorework,butIwasn’tinterested.IdecideditwasnotfairthatIhadtocontributemymoney.

注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Thepaydayarrivedatlast.

Iunderstoodimmediatelywhatmyparentswereworriedabout._He_______________myworldofschoolactivities.MyDadMydadisa_____manandheonlyhadan_____gradeeducation.Hestartedtoworkfromage____andhismoneywasspenttopay______

_________.Hethoughtthatajob’sabigstepto_________.

HewasgladthatIcouldearnmoneyand_______________tothehousehold.根据短文内容填空。quieteighth14familydidn’tunderstandexpensesgrowingupcontributeIdidn’treallyunderstandmydadandbelievedthatIwouldsurpasshim.Ididn’tlikesportsandwantedtobeafarmerinthefuture.Iworkedinachemicalfactory

inthesummervacation,whichwastiring.IlookedforwardtousingthemoneyIearnedformyself.IfeltunfairtocontributemymoneysoIlosttheinterestinmorework.根据短文判断正误。TFFTT.5.理解材料Thepaydayarrivedatlast.HowwouldIcopewithmydepressioncausedbymydad’swords?1.

OpeningMydadandIdidn’tunderstandeachother.Ispentmysummervacationbeforetheeighthgradeworkinginmyneighbor'sfieldandlookedforwardtothepay.MyfatherpraisedmesinceIcouldworkforthefamily.Hearingthat,Ifeltunfairnotbeingabletousemyownmoneyandlosttheinterestinmorework.Iunderstoodimmediatelywhatmyparentswereworriedabout.WouldIunderstandmydadfinally?2.

Build-up3.

Climax4.

Resolution5.

Ending研读两段的给出句，想想它们给我们提供了哪些续写线索？Para1:

Thepaydayarrivedatlast.

“IdecideditwasnotfairthatIhadtocontributemymoney”mentionedinthetextsuggests“Iwasupset”.Wouldthisfeelingcontinueasthepaydayarrived?

WhathappenedinPara.1tomakeme“understandimmediatelywhatmyparentswereworriedabout”inPara.2?Para2:

Iunderstoodimmediatelywhatmyparentswereworriedabout.

Whatwasmyreactionafterlearningaboutmyparents’worries?

“Iunderstoodmydad,contributedmymoneywillingly,learnedaboutshoulderingresponsibilities”allseemgoodmoralsIgotatlast.Howcantheendingbedesignedtoachievesomeorallofthem?

Thepaydayarrivedatlast._________________________________________(虽然我口袋里一共有100美元，我还是带着沉重的心情回家了。让步状语从句和with结构).______________________________________________(我多希望用这些钱买一双自己想要很久的新运动鞋。感叹句和省略that的定语从句).Notmuchwassaidoverdinner.However,beforeIwenttobedthatnight,_______________________(然而，晚上睡觉前，我无意中听到从父母房间传来的谈话。时间状语从句和非谓语动词作后置定语).“Samcandowithoutapersonalfootballcoach.Ourbudgetisreallytightthismonth,”saidmymom.“Don’tworry.Ijustneedtodosomeextradriving.Aprofessionalcanhelphimmakegreatprogressinfootball.Youknowtheboy’sfuturedream,”saidmydad.

Iunderstoodimmediatelywhatmyparentswereworriedabout._________________(一直误会爸爸的人是我。强调句),nottheotherwayaround.Thenextmorning,IhandedDadmyhard-earnedcash.Itonlyseemedfair.Buthejusttooksomeofit.“That’lldofornowandthanksforhelpingwiththefamilyexpenses,son.Youarereallygrowingup,”hesaid.Afterthetalk,Iwentstraightbacktothefarmerandtooktheextrawork.根据括号中的提示，补出范文缺失的部分。阅读以下参考范文，并学习范文中的精彩表达。

Thepaydayarrivedatlast.ThoughIhadatotalof$100inmypocket,Istillwenthomewithaheavyheart.

HowIwishedIcouldusethemoneytobuyapairofnewsportsshoesI’dwantedforages.Notmuchwassaidoverdinner.However,beforeIwenttobedthatnight,Ioverheardaconversationcomingfrommyparents’bedroom.“Samcandowithoutapersonalfootballcoach.Ourbudgetisreallytightthismonth,”saidmymom.“Don’tworry.Ijustneedtodosomeextradriving.Aprofessionalcanhelphimmakegreatprogressinfootball.Youknowtheboy’sfuturedream,”saidmydad.Iunderstoodimmediatelywhatmyparentswereworriedabout.Itwasmewhohadmisunderstoodmydadallthetime,nottheotherwayaround.Thenextmorning,IhandedDadmyhard-earnedcash.Itonlyseemedfair.Buthejusttooksomeofit.“That’lldofornowandthanksforhelpingwiththefamilyexpenses,son.Youarereallygrowingup,”hesaid.Afterthetalk,Iwentstraightbacktothefarmerandtooktheextrawork.2021年6月浙江卷读后续写——逻辑连贯(coherent)

ThoughIhadatotalof$100

inmypocket,Istillwenthomewithaheavyheart.HowIwishedIcouldusethemoneytobuyapairofnewsportsshoesI’dwantedforages.Notmuchwassaidoverdinner.However,beforeIwenttobedthatnight,Ioverheardaconversationcomingfrommyparents’bedroom.“Samcandowithoutapersonalfootballcoach.Ourbudgetisreallytightthismonth,”saidmymom.“Don’tworry.Ijustneedtodosomeextradriving.Aprofessionalcanhelphimmakegreatprogressinfootball.Youknowtheboy’sfuturedream,”saidmydad.重复、指代、同义替换等(cohesive)WhatdidIfeelwhenIgotthepay?Whatmademeunderstandmy

parents’worries?

Thepaydayarrivedatlast.

Itwasmewhohadmisunderstoodmydadallthetime,nottheotherwayaround.Thenextmorning,IhandedDadmyhard-earnedcash.Itonlyseemedfair.Buthejusttooksomeofit.“That’lldofornowandthanksforhelpingwiththefamilyexpenses,son.Youarereallygrowingup,”

hesaid.Afterthetalk,Iwentstraightbacktothefarmerandtooktheextrawork.WhatdidIreactafterknowingmyparents’worries?I

understoodimmediatelywhatmy

parentswereworriedabout.2021年6月浙江卷读后续写——逻辑连贯(coherent)重复、指代、同义替换等(cohesive)

Thepaydayarrivedatlast.ThoughIhadatotalof$100inmypocket,Istillwenthomewithaheavyheart.HowIwishedIcouldusethemoneytobuyapairofnewsportsshoes

I’dwantedforages.Notmuchwassaidoverdinner.However,beforeIwenttobedthatnight,Ioverheardaconversation

coming

frommyparents’bedroom.“Samcandowithoutapersonalfootballcoach.Ourbudgetisreallytightthismonth,”saidmymom.“Don’tworry.Ijustneedtodosomeextradriving.Aprofessionalcanhelphimmakegreatprogressinfootball.Youknowtheboy’sfuturedream,”saidmydad.2021年6月浙江卷读后续写——精彩语言让步状语从句with结构省略that的定语从句被动语态现在分词作后置定语形容词搭配时间状语从句感叹句Iunderstoodimmediatelywhatmyparentswereworriedabout.Itwas

mewhohadmisunderstoodmydadallthetime,nottheotherwayaround.Thenextmorning,IhandedDadmy

hard-earnedcash.Itonlyseemedfair.Buthejusttooksomeofit.“That’lldofornowandthanksforhelpingwiththefamilyexpenses,son.Youarereallygrowingup,”hesaid.Afterthetalk,Iwentstraight

backtothefarmerandtooktheextrawork.强调句固定搭配合成形容词时间状语从句生动的副词2021年6月浙江卷读后续写——精彩语言总计心情沉重没有……也行取得巨大进步一直，始终目前最后想要某物很久了倒过来辛苦挣得的钱家庭支出径直走向atotalofdo