新GREIssue官方范文整理

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Aspeoplerelymoreandmoreontechnologytosolveproblems,theabilityofhumanstothinkforthemselveswillsurelydeteriorate.

Discusstheextenttowhichyouagreeordisagreewiththestatementandexplainyourreasoningforthepositionyoutake.Indevelopingandsupportingyourposition,youshouldconsiderwaysinwhichthestatementmightormightnotholdtrueandexplainhowtheseconsiderationsshapeyourposition.

EssayResponse—Score6

Thestatementlinkingtechnologynegativelywithfreethinkingplaysonrecenthumanexperienceoverthepastcentury.Surelytherehasbeennotimeinhistorywherethelivedlivesofpeoplehavechangedmoredramatically.Aquickreflectiononatypicaldayrevealshowtechnologyhasrevolutionizedtheworld.Mostpeoplecommutetoworkinanautomobilethatrunsonaninternalcombustionengine.Duringtheworkday,chancesarehighthattheemployeewillinteractwithacomputerthatprocessesinformationonsiliconbridgesthatare.09micronswide.Uponleavinghome,familymemberswillbereachedthroughwirelessnetworksthatutilizesatellitesorbitingtheearth.Eachofthesecommonoccurrencescouldhavebeeninconceivableattheturnofthe19thcentury.

Thestatementattemptstobridgethesedramaticchangestoareductionintheabilityforhumanstothinkforthemselves.Theassumptionisthatanincreasedrelianceontechnologynegatestheneedforpeopletothinkcreativelytosolvepreviousquandaries.Lookingbackattheintroduction,onecouldarguethatwithoutacar,computer,ormobilephone,thehypotheticalworkerwouldneedtofindalternatemethodsoftransport,informationprocessingandcommunication.Technologyshortcircuitsthisthinkingbymakingtheproblemsobsolete.

However,thisrelianceontechnologydoesnotnecessarilyprecludethecreativitythatmarksthehumanspecies.Thepriorexamplesrevealthattechnologyallowsforconvenience.Thecar,computerandphoneallreleaseadditionaltimeforpeopletolivemoreefficiently.Thisefficiencydoesnotprecludetheneedforhumanstothinkforthemselves.Infact,technologyfreeshumanitytonotonlytacklenewproblems,butmayitselfcreatenewissuesthatdidnotexistwithouttechnology.Forexample,theproliferationofautomobileshasintroducedaneedforfuelconservationonaglobalscale.Withincreasingenergydemandsfromemergingmarkets,globalwarmingbecomesaconcerninconceivabletothehorse-and-buggygeneration.Likewisedependenceonoilhascreatednation-statesthatarenotdependentontaxation,allowingrulingpartiestooppressminoritygroupssuchaswomen.Solutionstothesecomplexproblemsrequiretheunfetteredimaginationsofmaverickscientistsandpoliticians.

Incontrasttothestatement,wecanevenseehowtechnologyfreesthehumanimagination.Considerhowthedigitalrevolutionandtheadventoftheinternethasallowedforanunprecedentedexchangeofideas.WebMD,apopularinternetportalformedicalinformation,permitspatientstoselfresearchsymptomsforamoreinformeddoctorvisit.Thisexerciseopenspathwaysofthinkingthatwerepreviouslyclosedofftothemedicallayman.Withincreasedinterdisciplinaryinteractions,inspirationcanarrivefromthemostsurprisingcorners.JeffreySachs,oneofthearchitectsoftheUNMilleniumDevelopmentGoals,basedhisideasonemergencycaretriagetechniques.Theunlikelymarriageofeconomicsandmedicinehashealedtense,hyperinflationenvironmentsfromSouthAmericatoEasternEurope.

Thislastexampleprovidesthemosthopeinhowtechnologyactuallyprovideshopetothefutureofhumanity.Byincreasingourrelianceontechnology,impossiblegoalscannowbeachieved.Considerhowthelate20thcenturywitnessedthecompleteeliminationofsmallpox.Thisdiseasehadravagedthehumanracesinceprehistoricaldays,andyetwiththetechnologyofvaccines,freethinkinghumansdaredtoimagineaworldfreeofsmallpox.Usingtechnology,battleplansweredrawnout,andsmallpoxwassystematicallytargetedanderadicated.

Technologywillalwaysmarkthehumanexperience,fromthediscoveryoffiretotheimplementationofnanotechnology.Giventhehistoryofthehumanrace,therewillbenolimittothenumberofproblems,bothnewandold,forustotackle.ThereisnoneedtoretreattoaLudditeattitudetonewthings,butratherembraceahopefulposturetothepossibilitiesthattechnologyprovidesfornewavenuesofhumanimagination.

ReaderCommentaryforEssayResponse—Score6

Theauthorofthisessaystakesoutaclearandinsightfulpositionontheissueandfollowsthespecificinstructionsbypresentingreasonstosupportthatposition.Theessaycogentlyarguesthattechnologydoesnotdecreaseourabilitytothinkforourselves,butmerelyprovidesadditionaltimeforpeopletolivemoreefficiently.Infact,theproblemsthathavedevelopedalongsidethegrowthoftechnology(pollution,politicalunrestinoil-producingnations)actuallycallformorecreativethinking,notless.

Infurtherexamples,theessayshowshowtechnologyallowsforthelinkingofideasthatmayneverhavebeenconnectedinthepast(likemedicineandeconomicmodels),pushingpeopletothinkinnewways.Examplesarepersuasiveandfullydeveloped;reasoningislogicallysoundandwellsupported.

Ideasintheessayareconnectedlogically,witheffectivetransitionsusedbothbetweenparagraphs(HoweverorIncontrasttothestatement)andwithinparagraphs.SentencestructureisvariedandcomplexandtheessayclearlydemonstratesfacilitywiththeconventionsofstandardwrittenEnglish(i.e.,grammar,usageandmechanics),withonlyminorerrorsappearing.Thus,thisessaymeetsalltherequirementsforreceivingatopscore.

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EssayResponse—Score5

Surelymanyofushaveexpressedthefollowingsentiment,orsomevariationonit,duringourdailycommutestowork:Peoplearegettingsostupidthesedays!Surroundedaswearebystridingandstridentautomatonswithcellphonesgluedtotheirears,PDAsgrippedintheirpalms,andomniscient,omnipresentCNNgleamingintheireyeballs,itstemptingtobelievethattechnologyhasisolatedandinfantilizedus,essentallytransformingusintodependent,conformistmoronsbestequippedtosideswiponeanotherinourSUVs.

Furthermore,hangingaroundwiththeyounger,pre-commutegeneration,whomtech-savvinessseemstohaverenderedlethal,isevenlessreassuring.WithTeenPeoplestyletrendsshootingthroughtheairfromtiger-stripedPDAtozebra-stripedPDA,andwiththelateststarletgossipzippingfromjuicyBlackberrytoteeny,turbo-chargedcellphone,technologyseemstosupportyoungpeoplesworsttendenciestofollowthecrowd.Indeed,theyhaveseeminglyevolvedintointergalacticconformitypolice.Afterall,todaystech-aidedteensare,courtesyofauthentic,hands-onvideogames,literallytrainedtokill;courtesyofchatandinstanttextmessaging,theyhavetheirownlanguage;theyevenhavetinycamerastoefficientlyphotodocumentyourfashionblunders!Isthisadolescence,orpaparazziterroristtrainingcamp?

Withallthisevidence,itseasytobelievethattechtrendsandtheincorporationoftechnologicalwizardryintooureverydayliveshaveservedmostlytoenforceconformity,promotedependence,heightencomsumerismandmaterialism,andgenerallycreateaculturethatvaluesself-absorptionandpersonalentitlementovercooperationandcollaboration.However,Iarguethatwearemerelyintheinchoatestagesoflearningtolivewithtechnologywhilestilllovingoneanother.Afterall,evengiventheexamplesprovidedearlierinthisessay,itseemsclearthattechnologyhasntimpairedourthinkingandproblem-solvingcapacities.Certainlyithasincapacitatedourbehaviorandmanners;certainlyourvalueshavetakenasevereblow.However,weareinarguablymoreefficientinourbadnessthesedays.Wereeffectiveworkerbeesofineffectiveness!

IfT\technologyhassoincreasedoursensesofself-efficacythatwecanbecomeveritableagentsoftheawful,virtualCEOsofselfishness,certainlyitcanbebeneficial.Harnessedcorrectly,technologycanimproveourabilitytothinkandactforourselves.Thefirstchallengeistofigureouthowtoprovidetechnologyuserswithsomedirely-neededdirection.

ReaderCommentaryforEssayResponse—Score5

Thelanguageofthisessayclearlyillustratesbothitsstrengthsandweaknesses.Thefloweryandsometimesuncannilykeendescriptionsareoftenusedtopowerfuleffect,butatothertimesthisdescriptivelanguageresultsinerrorsinsyntax.See,forexample,theproblemsofparallelisminthesecond-to-lastsentenceofparagraph2(Afterall,todaystech-aidedteens...).

Thereisconsistentevidenceoffacilitywithsyntaxandcomplexvocabulary(Surroundedaswearebystridingandstridentautomatonswithcellphonesgluedtotheirears,PDAsgrippedintheirpalms,andomniscient,omnipresentCNNgleamingintheireyeballs,itstemptingtobelieve...).However,suchlucidproseisoftencounteredbyanover-relianceonabstractionsandtangentialreasoning.Forexample,whatdoesthefactthatvideogamesliterallytrain[teens]tokillhavetodowiththeuseordeteriorationofthinkingabilities?

Becausethisessaytakesacomplexapproachtotheissue(arguing,ineffect,thattechnologyneitherenhancesnorreducesourabilitytothinkforourselves,butcandooneortheother,dependingontheuser)andbecausetheauthormakesuseofappropriatevocabularyandsentencevariety,ascoreof5isappropriate.

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EssayResponse—Score4

Inallactuality,Ithinkitismoreprobablethatourbodieswillsurelydeterioratelongbeforeourmindsdoinanysignificantamount.Whocantsaythattechnologyhasmadeuslazier,butthatsthekeyword,lazy,notstupid.Theeverincreasingamountoftechnologythatweincorporateintoourdailylivesmakespeoplethinkandlearneveryday,possiblymorethaneverbefore.Ourabilitiestothink,learn,philosophize,etc.mayevenreachlimitsneverdreamedofbeforebyaveragepeople.Usingtechnologytosolveproblemswillcontinuetohelpusrealizeourpotentialasahumanrace.

Ifyouthinkaboutit,usingtechnologytosolvemorecomplicatingproblemsgiveshumansachancetoexpandtheirthinkingandlearning,openingupwholenewworldsformanypeople.Manyofthesepeoplearegladforthechancetoexpandtheirhorizonsbylearningmore,goingtonewplaces,andtryingnewthings.Ifitwasntfortheinventionofnewtechnologicaldevices,Iwouldntbesittingatthiscomputertryingtophilosophizeabouttechnology.Itwouldbeextremelyhardforchildreninmuchpoorercountriestolearnandthinkforthemselveswithouttheinventionoftheinternet.Thinkwhatanimpacttheprintingpress,atechnologicallysuperiormackineatthetime,hadontheabilityofthehumanracetolearnandthink.

Rightnowweareseeingagoldenageoftechnology,usingitallthetimeduringoureverydaylives.Whenwegetuptheresinstantcoffeeandthemicrowaveandallthesegreatthingsthathelpusgetreadyforourday.Butwearentallowingourmindstodeterioratebyusingthem,weareonlymakingthingseasierforourselvesandsavingtimeforotherimportantthingsinourdays.Goingofftoschoolorworkinourcarsinsteadofahorseandbuggy.Thinkofthebrainpowerandgeniusthatwasusedtocomeupwiththatsingleinventionthathaschangedthewaywemoveacrossthisglobe.

Usingtechnologytosolveourcontinuallymorecomplicatedproblemsasahumanraceisdefinatelyagoodthing.Ourabilitytothinkforourselvesisntdeteriorating,itscontinuingtogrow,movingontohigherthoughfunctionsandmoreingeniousideas.Theabilitytousewhattechnologywehaveisanexample

ReaderCommentaryforEssayResponse—Score4

Thisessaymeetsallthecriteriaofalevel-4essay.Thewriterdevelopsaclearposition(Usingtechnologytosolveourproblemswillcontinuetohelpusrealizeourpotentialasahumanrace).Thepositionisthendevelopedwithrelevantreasons(usingtechnologytosolvemorecomplicat[ed]problemsgiveshumansachancetoexpandtheirthinkingandlearningandweareseeingagoldenageoftechnology).

Point1,usingtechnology,issupportedwiththesimplebutrelevantnotionthattechnologyallowsusaccesstoinformationandabilitiestowhichwewouldnotnormallyhaveaccess.Similarly,point2,thegoldenage,issupportedbythebasicdescriptionofourtechnologicallysaturatedsocialcondition.Thoughtheoveralldevelopmentandorganizationoftheessaydoessufferfromanoccasionalmisdirection(seeparagraph3sabruptprogressionfromcoffeepotstothebenefitsoftechnologytocars),theessayasawholeflowssmoothlyandlogicallyfromoneideatothenext.

Itisusefultocomparethisessaytothelevel-3essaypresentednext.Thoughbothessaysentailsomesurface-leveldiscussionandoftenfailtoprobedeeplyintotheissue,thiswriterdoestaketheanalysisastepfurther.Inparagraph2,thedistinctionbetweenthisessayandthenextone(thelevel-3response)canmostclearlybeseen.Tosupportthenotionthatadvancesintechnologyactuallyhelpincreasethinkingability,thewriterdrawsacleverparallelbetweenthepromiseofmodern,sophisticatedtechnology(computer)andtheactualimpactofequallypromisingandpervasivetechnologiesofthepast(printingpress).

Liketheanalysis,thelanguageinthisessayclearlymeetstherequirementsforascoreof4.ThewriterdisplayssufficientcontroloflanguageandtheconventionsofstandardwrittenEnglish.Thepreponderanceofmistakesareofacosmeticnature(tryingtosolvemorecomplicatingproblems.)Thereisasentencefragment(Goingoff...)alongwithacommasplice(Ourability...isntdeteriorating,itscontinuingtogrow...)inparagraph3.However,theseerrorsareminoranddonotinterferewiththeclarityoftheideasbeingpresented.

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EssayResponse—Score3

Thereisnocurrentproofthatadvancingtechnologywilldeterioratetheabilityofhumanstothink.Onthecontrary,advancementsintechnologyhadadvancedourvastknowledgeinmanyfields,openingopportunitiesforfurtherunderstandingandachievement.Forexample,theproblemofdibilitatingillnessesanddiseasessuchasalzheimersdiseaseisslowingbeingsolvedbythetechnologicaladvancementsinstemcellresearch.Thefutureabilityofgrowingnewbraincellsandthepossibilitytoreversetheonsetofalzheimersisnowbecomingareality.Thisshowsourinitiativeashumanstobetterourhealthdemonstratesgreaterabilityofhumanstothink.

Oneaspectwheretheabilityofhumansmayinitiallybeseenasanexampleofdeterioratingmindsistheuseofinternetandcellphones.Inthepasthumanshadtoseekoutinformationinmanydifferentenviromentsandaspectsoflife.Nowhumanscansitinachairandtypeanythingintoacomputerandgetananswer.Ourrelianceonthistypeoftechnologycanbedetrimentalifnotregulatedandregularilysubstitutedforotherinformationsourcessuchashumaninteractionsandhandsonlearning.Ithinkifhumansunderstandthatweshouldnothavesucharelianceoncomputertechnology,thatweasaspecieswilladvancefurtherbyutilizingtheopportunityofcomputertechnologyaswellastheothersourcesofinformationoutsideofacomputer.Supplementingourknowledgewithinternetaccessissurelyawayfortechnologytosolveproblemswhilecontinuallyadvancingthehumanrace.

ReaderCommentaryforEssayResponse—Score3

Thisessaynevermovesbeyondasuperficialdiscussionoftheissue.Thewriterattemptstodeveloptwopoints:thatadvancementsintechnologyhaveprogressedourknowledgeinmanyfieldsandthatsupplementingratherthanrelyingontechnologyissurelyawayfortechnologytosolveproblemswhilecontinuallyadvancingthehumanrace.Eachpoint,then,isdevelopedwithrelevantbutinsufficientevidence.Indiscussingthepotentialoftechnologytoadvanceknowledgeinmanyfields(abroadsubject,rifewithpossibleexamples),thewriterusesonlyonelimitedandverybriefexamplefromaspecificfield(medicineandstem-cellresearch).

Developmentofthesecondpointishinderedbyalackofspecificityandorganization.Thewritercreateswhatmightbebestdescribedasanoutline.Thewritercitesaneedforregulation/supplementationandwarnsofthedetrimentofover-relianceupontechnology.However,theexplanationofboththeproblemandsolutionisvagueandlimited(Ourreliance...canbedetrimental.Ifhumansunderstandthatweshouldnothavesuchareliance...wewilladvancefurther).Thereisneitherexplanationofconsequencesnorclarificationofwhatismeantbysupplementing.Thissecondparagraphisaseriesofgeneralizationsthatarelooselyconnectedandlackamuch-neededgrounding.

Intheessay,therearesomeminorlanguageerrorsandafewmoreseriousflaws(e.g.,ThefutureabilityofgrowingnewbraincellsorOneaspectwheretheabilityofhumansmayinitiallybeseenasanexampleofdeterioratingminds).Despitetheaccumulationofsuchflaws,thewritersmeaningisgenerallyclear.Thus,thisessayearnsascoreof3.

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EssayResponse—Score2

Inrecentcenturies,humanshavedevelopedthetechnologyveryrapidly,andyoumayacceptsomemeritofit,andyoumayseeadistortioninsocietyoccuredbyit.Tobelazyforhumaninsomemeaningisoneofthefashionissuesinthesedays.Therearemanysymptomsandresonsofit.However,Icannotagreewiththestatementthatthetechnologymakehumanstobereluctanttothinkngthoroughly.

Ofcourse,youcanseethephenomenaofhumanlazinessalongwithdevelopedtechnologyinsomeplace.However,theywouldhappeninspecificcondition,notgeneral.Whatmakeshumantobelazeofthinkingisnotmerelytechnology,butthethetendencyofhumanthattheytreatthemasamagicstickandablackbox.Notunderstandingtheaimsandtheoryofthemcousesthedisapprovalproblems.

Themostimportantthingtousethethechnology,regardlesstheneworold,istocomprehendthefundamentalideaofthem,andtoadaptsuittechtotasksinneed.Evenifyourecognizeamethodasaall-mightyanditisextremelyover-spectoyourneeds,youcannotseetheresultyouwant.Inthisprocedure,humanshavetoconsideraslongaspossibletoacquireadequatefunctions.Therefore,humanscannotescapefromusingtheirbrain.

Inaddition,thetechnologyasitisdonotvainautomatically,theiscreatedbyhumans.Thus,themoredevelopedtechandthemoreyouwantaconvenientlife,themoreyouthinkandemmityourcreativitytobreakthroughsomebanalmethodsarcastically.

Consequently,ifyouarenotpassivetothenewtech,butoffensivetoit,youwouldnotloseyourabilitytothinkdeeply.Furthermore,youmayimprovetheabilitybyadoptingit.

ReaderCommentaryforEssayResponse—Score2

Thelanguageofthisessayiswhatmostcle