顾家北写作句翻译第1-15笔记

1：我的翻译：Peopleoftendoexercisescan（docan两个动词错误同时people法improveone’sconfidence的）improvetheirconfidence.Doexerciseregularlycanriseone’s动词do不能做主语Do改 ng其中的exercise是名Regularly是副词修 rise不及物动词无语态无宾上升（increaseinnumberamountvalueetc.）risearise不及物动词无语态无宾（问题、难题等）出现；产生于，起因于ariseraise及物动词有语态接宾提高（liftsomethingtoahigherce,position,leveletc.）募捐raisemoney上升（increaseinnumberamountleveletc.）raiseprice/profile/awareness/standards抚养同bring提出问题raise改正 ngexerciseregularlycandevelopsone’sThosepeoplewhousuallydoexerciseswillincreasestheirpeopleimproveone’sconfidence表为健康（forhealth）的相关的physicalactivities时为不可数，表movementsWill之类的情态动词后加动Usuallyregularly的形容词是regular可以说regularcustomer改正：Regularexercisecanincreaseone'sself-正确的句子：Regularexercisecanincreaseone'sself-词伙：Sthincreasesone’s关于increase：increase：在这里是及物动词increase还可以作为不及物动词，使用在小作文中（thefigureincreases）exerciseingself-confidence.词组haveconfidenceinconfidencetodoconfident是形容词感到自信：feelconfident2：教学质量对学生成绩有很大的影响Teachingqualitycanmakeahugeeffects（difference）for（to）student（可数名词奔了）’sgrades.表达不当（tostudents’academicperformance）Thequalityofeducationhasagreatinfluenceon补充：StandardofOf是表示所有关系的有限定作用，Thequalityofteaching用所有格形式最好前面加定冠词改正：Thestandardofeducationhasagreatinfluenceonstudents’academicThequalityofteachingaffectsthestudents.补充：a/the改正：Thequalityofteachingeffectsthestudent’slevelsofTeachingqualitiescanmakeahugeinfluenceonstudens’academicPerformance表示表现的意思时不可数名词表示演出的时候是可数名词asolo改正：TeachingqualitycanmakeahugeinfluenceonstudentsacademicThequalityofteachingcanmakeahugedifferencetostudents’academicQuality：表质量为不可数：thequalityoflife生活质量teachingquality形容影响：Haveanimpact/influence/effecton/makeahuge/big/major一般不说makealarge学生成绩：Academicperformance/levelsof ParentsandteachersshoulddotheirbesttolimitthetimeofwatchingTVfor补充：大作文中最好不要写try/doone’sbestthetimeofwatchingTVforchildren中式表达改正：ParentsandteachersshouldputeffortintolimitingchildrensscreenTeachersandparentsshouldeffortatreducingthetimethatchildrencostinwatching补充：effort只有名词should+doItcostssb+钱Cost改正：Teachersandparentsshouldputeffortintoreducingstudent’sscreen正确的句子：Parentsandteachersshouldmakeanefforttolimitchildren’sscreen看电视的时间：screentime（固定词伙花费：spendinngsth/spendsthonmakeaneffort：makeaneffort/makeeveryeffort/makeeffortstodosthputeffortinto ng）something付出努力4：经济的下滑（economicslowdown）导致失业率的上升Theeconomicslowdownleadtotheunemploymentrate补充：Slowdown是可数名词不奔加the表特指或者不定冠词放economicslowdown单数名词主谓不一致HasLedto+名词已经发生事情用完成时（大作文一般现在时或现在完成时Leadtoto改正：TheeconomicslowdownleadstoanincreasingunemploymentTheeconomicslowdowncausedtherisingofThen.+of+sthrising是形容词改正：TheeconomicslowdownleadstotheriseofunemploymentEconomicslowdownleadtotheriseofunemploymentSlowdown是可数名词奔了主谓不一注意元音aeiou开头的单词前面的不定冠词用改正：Aneconomicslowdownleadstoriseofunemployment正确的句子：Aneconomicslowdownhasledtoaclimbingunemploymentaclimbingunemploymentrate：上升的失业率aclimbing/anincreasingunemploymentrate5：Economicdeveloneedstotheyounglabourers.补充：劳动者labor(美式拼法)labour(英式拼法)Develo是形容词不能做主语Needneedsthneedtodo改正：EconomicgrowthneedsyoungTheeconomicdevelopmentneedyoungerworkwork通常以单数的情况出skilled/educated/flexibleetcwork技术娴熟/受过教育/灵活的劳动力改正：Thedevelopmentofeconomicneedsyoungerworkers.ThedevelopmentofeconomicneedyoungOf引导的所有格形式前后都是名词要写成thedevelopmentof改正：ThedevelopmentofeconomyneedsyoungerThedevelopmentofeconomicneedtheyounger补充：Of前后加名词成分+名词词性改正：Thedevelopmentofeconomyneedsyounger正确的句子：Acountry’seconomicdevelopmentreliesonasupplyofyounger经济发展（词伙Thedevelopmentofeconomy/Economicgrowth/Theeconomicdevelopmentofa需要：rely劳动者：labour/labor不可数不能加年轻的劳动者：youngerworkers/young劳动力：work不能加6：工作很多的人没有时间去休息Peoplewhohaslotsofworktodoleadtonotimetohave补充：People动词没有三单Lotsof和alotofHavenotimetodosthleadto改正：PeoplewithheavyworkloadsdonothavetimetoPeoplewhoisbusyinginworkinghavenotimeto补充：busywith（改正：PeoplewhoisbusywithworkdonothavetimetoPeoplewithaheavyworkloadshavenoenoughtimetoaHavenotime口语化表达最好写donothaveenough改正：Peoplewithaheavyworkloadsdonothaveenoughtimeto正确的句子：Peoplewithaheavyworkloaddonothaveadequatetimetorestand“torestandrechargebatteriestimework表示工作的时候不能加S表示作品可以加sworksofart艺术作品/Worksofli ture文学作品Workload可数名词WithheavyworkloadsorwithaheavyworkloadReduce/increaseone’sworkload语尽量不写缩写不写lotof/lots没时间写为：Donothavetime/DonothaveadequatetimetoRest：在这个句子里是动词表名词的词组是have/takea翻译7：，很多学生晚上都要自我的翻译 ,majorityofstudentshavetoselfstudyat改正 ,Alargenumberofstudentshavetodoself-study（名词）at ,thelargenumberofstudentsneedtoself-studyat补充：thelargenumberofalargenumberofNeedtodosthself-study是名词不能当动词来用改正 ,alargenumberofstudentsneedtodoself-studyat ,alargenumberofstudentshavetostudybytheirownat补充：Onone’s havetostudyontheirown/bythemselvesat改正 ,alargenumberofstudentshavetostudyontheirownat正确的句子：Alargenumberofstudentsinhavetodoself-studyatmany/anumberof/numerous许多的意思Alargeamountof/little/alittleFew/afew/many/anumberof/numerous;加可数名词复数时间前介词用法：atIntheSelf-education（n）也是表示Atschool/university表示在学校学习如果有therebeTherebeTherearelargenumberofstudentshavingtostudyontheirownatnight.（可以这么说但是太啰Atschool/university8：heritagesites我的翻译：Heritagesitesarethreatenedbythecity’s（表示...的）Becauseofthecitydevelopment,heritagesiteshaveimposenathreatonthemselves.没有自己给自己造成的说法句子逻辑不通补充：becauseofn./n.短语imposeathreathasimposedathreat改正：Becauseofthecity’sdevelopmentheritagesiteshas（have）beenthreatenedimposedathreatonthemselves.Thedevelopmentofcitythreatstoheritage补充：threatentoCity奔了最好写cities改正：ThedevelopmentofcitiesthreatensheritageHeritagesitesarethreatenbythedevelopmentof补充：Bedone=are改正：HeritagesitesarethreatenedbythedevelopmentofCitydevelopmenthaveposedathreattoheritage改正：Cities’development/Acity’sdevelopmenthasposedathreattoheritage正确的句子：Thedevelopmentofcitieshasposedathreattoheritagesites.Or：Heritagesitesareunderthreatbecauseofurbanexpansion.描述城市的发展：Thedevelopmentofcities/Citiesdevelopment/Acity’s城市扩张：Urban被：Poseathreatto/bethreatened/beunder文化遗产：heritagesites/cultural9：我的翻译：Wecannotignorethefacetoface补充：定冠词the,特指的时候用Should/couldCannotcannotfacetoface改正：Wecannotignoreface-tofaceWecannotignoreface-to-face补充：cannot表示不能够如果表达不应该还是写shouldnotdosthignoresth后加n.改正：Wecannotignore/neglectface-to-face正确的句子：Weshouldnotignoreface-to-faceface-to-faceWeshouldcommunicatefacetoface其中facetoface10：我的翻译：Somepublicservicesaredifficulttobalanceof补充：Publicservices-service在表示或者公司提供的服务时是可数名词酒店或餐馆提供的服service只能是不可数名词在某方面有：havedifficulty（不可数名词）/problems ng作形式主语：ItisdifficultforsbtodoItisdifficult/hardforpublicservicestobreak达到收支平衡点：reachbreakeven改正：Somepublicserviceshavedifficultyinbreaking正确的句子：Somepublicserviceshaveproblemsinbreaking收支平衡：breakeven动词短语Breakeven不可数名词sb/sthisdifficult/easytodosth的表达11：我们需要考虑社会和经济的环境Weshouldconsidertosocietyandeconomic补充：considerable相当大（或多）的Considerate体贴的adj.Consideration考虑n.Takeintoconsideration要考 (名词形式)protecttheMakingendsmeet量入为出改正：Weshouldconsiderthesocialandeconomic正确的句子：Wehavetoconsiderthesocialandeconomic大自然环境：theenvironment专有名词可数名词生物所处环境（如：栖息地）：environment可数名词12：我的翻译：Density（表示密度没有和nting合在一起写的词组）ntinghavethreatenedbio-补充：固定词伙：intensiveagriculture;energy-intensive;knowledge-intensive;Intense激烈的intensecompetition竞争激烈Postthreatto造成...或haveadamagingeffecton造成..不好的影响改正：Intensivefarmingposesathreattobio-diversity.Biologicaldiversityhasbeenthreatenedbyserried表示一排补充：pantn改正：BiologicaldiversityhasbeenthreatenedbyintensiveIntensiventhasposetothediversityofcreature.creature改正：Intensivefarminghasposedathreattobio-正确的句子：Intensivefarmingcanposeathreattobio-生物多样性：Bio-diversity=biodiversity：thevarietyofntsand翻译13：的教育能帮助解决学生成绩不pooracademicperformance.补充：词伙Equal公平处理treateveryoneaccess作名词不可数接近，可利用have/gain/getaccesstoAsupplyof...的供给改正：EqualeducationcanhelpthosestudentstackleeducationalTheequaleducationopportunitiescanaddressunderachievementstudentsUnderachievement本身就是问题不需要再加改正：equaleducationopportunitiescanaddressstudentsEqualaccesstoeducationcanhelpimprovestudents’academic正确的句子：Equalaccesstoeducationcanhelptackleeducational句子的机构：主语+及物动词（help）+宾语（totackle...的教育：Equaleducation或者Equalaccesstoeducation都可以但是有access更直观其中access不可数名词动词搭配have/gain/get介词搭配to及物动词表示可以获得电脑上的信息之类的contact：及物动词用法：contactsomebody/contacthavecontactwith保持联系：Keep/stayincontactwith失去联系：Losecontactwith眼神交流：eye解决：Underachievementunderachiever在工作或学习中表现不好14：我的翻译：Acceptdifferentcultural形容词cangetmore用词改正：Exposuretodifferentculturescangetmore（promote）Contactingwithdifferentculturescanencouragecreativity.Contact作为联系用词不当；及物动词不加with改正：ExposuretodifferentculturescanencourageKeetouchwithdifferentculturescanencourage补充keepintouch新方法创新，革新改正：Exposuretodifferentculturescanencourage正确的句子：ExposuretodifferentculturescanencourageexperienceExpose是的意思exposeyourselftothe人做主语：sbisexposedto这里