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Thereisadownwardtrendonthenumberofmarriages,decliningfrom2.5to2million,时态错误，trendTherewasadownwardtrendinthenumberofmarriages,decliningfrom2.5to2million(c)Thefigureuntil1998,afterthenumberofmarriagesdroppedmarkedly,reachingtheminimumin2000(2million)thetrenduntil1998,afterwhichthenumberofmarriagesdroppedmarkedly,reachingalowof2millionin2000.(c)34climbedto56，afterwhich，itdroppedtoThepercentageofthewidowedexperiencedaslightlyfall,whilethefigurefordivorcedpeopleincreasedfive-fold.FallThepercentageofthewidowedexperiencedaslightfall,whilethefigurefordivorcedpeopleincreasedfive-fold.Thenumberofdivorcesremainedconstant,althoughtherewasanincreasein1980,from1million(1970)toaround1.4million.(c)remainedconstant,heldsteady,stoodThefigurefordivorcesremainedstableat1millionduringthisperiod,althoughtherewasaslightincreasein1980,whenthedivorceratereachapeak(approximay1.4million).ReachapeakofThefigurefordivorcesremainedstableat1millionduringthisperiod,althoughtherewasaslightincreasein1980,whenthenumberofdivorcesreachedapeakofapproximay1.4million.(c)Thenumberofmarriedpeoplein1970was2.5million,twicetimesthanthatofdivorce(1million)Twicetime重复，thantwicethefigurefortwicemorethanthefigureforAndthedataofwidowsdecreasedslightly,whilethedivorcedonerosetoalmost10%in2000,five-foldthefigurein1970.data，ratio，thefigureforThree-fold，threetimes列：itrosethree-fold；itsawathree-foldincreaseAwasthreetimesthefigureforB.ThefigureformarriageswasnearlytwicethelevelinWhenmaritalstatusiscomparedintheyearof1970and2000,themarriedstatushadagreatestpresence,butthepercentagedroppedfrom70percenttojustunder60percent.】marriedstatus】Withregardtomaritalstatus,thepercentageofmarriedadultsremainedhighestdespitethedownwardtrend(70%and60%in1970and修改：respective】Withregardtomaritalstatus,thepercentageofmarriedadultsremainedhighestdespiteafallfrom70%in1970and60%in2000respectively.】Incontrast,a5%risewasrecordedintheproportionofthosewhohavenevermarried,from15%to20%,whichwasthesecondbiggestfigure.】theproportionofthosewhowerenevermarriedwasthesecondhighest】ThehighestexpenditureonclothingandfootwearwasrecordedinItaly(9%),almosttwicethefigureforSweden.（c）开头段：ermsofThechartsshowthechangesinthenumbersofmarriagesanddivorcesintheUSfrom1970to2000,andalsothechangesinthemaritalstatusofadultAmericans.(c)Thenumberofmarriageswasnearlytwicethatofdivorcesthroughouttheperiod,butitshowedadownwardtrend,dropfrom2.5millionto2millionin2000.【替换】therewasadeclinefrom2.5millionto2millioninthenumberofIncontrast,thenumberofdivorcesremainedconstantat1million,althoughtherewasarisetonearly1.5millionin1980.补充：小作文可以使用的连词：similarly,also,likewise；incontrast,ontheotherhandMarriedpeopleaccountedforthehighestproportionofAmericanadults,butthefiguredeclinedfrom70%to60%.(c)Theproportionofnevermarriedwaslower,anditrosefrom13%toTheproportionofwidowedsawadeclineto5%,whilethepercentageofdivorcedpeoplerosefourfoldfrom2%to8%.Overall,thenumberofmarriagesandtheproportionofmarriedpeopledeclinedfrom1970to2000,whiletheproportionofnevermarriedanddivorcedclimbed.静态图关键表达好：①③compareto…incomparisonThechartpresentstheinformationabouttheproportionofitemsbyfivecountriesinThechartcomparesfivecountriesintermsoftheexpenditureondifferentitemsin2002.Thetableillustrateshowmuchexpenditurewasusedindifferentsectorsbypeople。Thetableillustratestheproportionofexpenditureondifferentitemsin2002.(c)turkeyTurkeyrankedfirstintheamountoffoodconsumption(32.14%),followedcloselybyIreland(28.91%).Andthefiguresforothernationswerefarlower,rangingfrom15.7%inSwedento18.8%inSpain(c)clothingItalyaccountsforthehighestproportion,atabout9%,whichisnearlytwiceasmuchasthatofSweden.Italyhadthehighestproportionofexpenditure,atabout9%,nearlytwiceasmuchasthefigureforSweden,at5.4%.(c)对象词：10%ofexpenditureonfood1%ofmoneyonfoodThereweresmalldifferencesinotherthreecountries,wherethefigurewasabout6.5%.Therewereminordifferencesintheexpenditureinotherthreecountries,wherethefigurewasabout6.5%.(c)leisureTurkeyhadthelargestexpenditure,constituted4.35%ofthetotalTurkeyhadthelargestproportionofexpenditureonleisureandeducation,at4.35%，whileSwedenandItalyhadalowerproportion,ataround3.2%.thepercentageofconsumerexpenditureonfood/drinks/tobaccowashighestinthosefivecountries.（c）Thefood,drinkandtobaccorepresentedthelargestproportionofexpenditureinall5countriesin2002,whilethethefigureinTurkeywasthehighest.thepercentageofexpenditureonfoodwasthelargest（c）学生原句：Thefirststepisthatlimestoneandclayareputintocrusher,untilit espowder.、修改：Thefirststepistoputlimestoneandclayinthecrusher,inwhichthesematerialsarecrushedintopowder.(c)Next,thepowderismixedinthemixer,beforetransferringtotherotatingheater.Next,thepowderismixedinthemixer,beforebeingtransferredtotherotatingheater.(c)Thenextstepintheprocessisheating.Mixedpowdersareheatedinhightemperature,afterbeingsentintotherotatingheater.Thenextstepintheprocessistheheatingofmixedpowdersintherotatingheater,untilpowdersfallontheconveyorbelt.(c)Afterwards,theheatedmixtureistransportedtoaconveyorbelt,afterwhichitisgrindedintocementandsubsequentlypackedintobags.Grindground，transporttransferdeliverAfterwards,theheatedmixtureisgroundintocement,afterwhichitissubsequentlypackedintobags.(c)Gravelconstitues50%ofconcreteproductionwhileotherelementsconstitutestherest,suchassand(25%),cement(15%)andwater(10%50%Gravelconstitues50%ofthematerialsofconcreteproduction,whileothermaterialsmakeuptherest,suchassand(25%),cement(15%)andwater(10%)(c)Themainmaterialtoproducecementisgravel,constituted50%ofthemixture,whileothermaterialsneededarecement(15%),sand(25%)andConstituteThemainmaterialtoproducecementisgravel,constituting50%ofthemixture,whileothermaterialsneededarecement(15%),sand(25%)andthecementonlyconstitutes15%oftherawmaterialsofconcrete,while10%water,25%sand,and50%gravelshouldbeinputaswell.Shouldbethecementonlyconstitutes15%oftherawmaterialsofconcrete,while10%water,25%sand,and50%gravelareneeded.(c)Allthesecomponentsareputintoarotatingconcretemixer,wheretheywillfinallyturnintoconcreteaftersomechemicalin Allthesematerialsareputintoarotatingconcretemixer,wheretheyarefinallyturnedintoconcrete.(c)Overall,cementproductionconsistsoffourstages,includinggrindingmaterials,whileconcreteproductissimple,mixingallmaterialsThetwomapsdescribeshowanareawasdevelopedandwhatitislikelytochangeinthefuture.修改，主谓不一致，what，describeThetwomapsillustratehowanareadevelopedandwhatchangescanbeexpectedinthefuture.(c)或：Thetwomapsillustratehowanareadevelopedandhowitwillchangeinthefuture.(c)或Thetwomapsillustratehowanareadevelopedandhowitislikelytochangeinthefuture.(c)Therewasariveracrossthisareafromthenorthtothesouthin1968.Totheeastoftheriverlainahousingarea.修改：riverThereisariveracrossthisareafromnorthtosouth.Totheeastoftheriverlayahousingareain1968.(c)Inthenorthwestcornerofthearealaya,whichwassituatedonthewestbankoftheriver.NorthwestInthenorthwesterncornerofthearealaya,situatedonthewestbankoftheriver.(c)替换：alargecoveredthenorthwesterncorneroftheareawitharoadtothesouthlinkingthecityandshipside.（WITH）主体句第